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Luv hurts bt nvr ends
Part-9

Naina sees alekh lost in some thoughts..
N- kya bat h? koi prblm h kya?
A- ni to.. aisa q laga tmhe??
N- qki mai yahan se cross kr rhi thi nd tmne Mjhpe dhyan hi ni diya.. kis soch me dube ho..
A- ni..koi prblm ni h..
N- bta skte ho mjhe.. u cn trst me..
A - I knw.. bt koi jruri bat ni..
N (smiles) - ok.. koi tnsn bat ho to btana..
A- actually ek bat h...
N- kya? btao. .
A- ali k bare me.. Maine use rat me faculty rum side jate dkha tha, pr jb maine usse pucha to usne kaha ki wo wahan tha hi ni... is trh jhut bolna, iska mtlb saaf h ki wo kch chupa rha h..koi nrml bat hoti to usne bta diya hota..
N- tmne alekh se is bare me bat ki?? jb tmhe yakin h ki wo jhut bol rha , to usi se pucho sacchai..kch to btayega..
A- hn.. aur mjhe uske saman me ek box mila tha jisme kch white powder sa tha, packet me nd some small bottle. .
N- ab v h wo tmhare pas?
A- ni.. ali aa gya tha.. nd puchne pr usne btaya ki wo uski med h. bt wo itna chupa kr q rkhega..
N- ho skta h ki wo sach bol rha ho, nind me hi gya hoga faculty rum, nd may be wo apne bimari k bare me kisi ko ni btana chahta hoga...nd us packets me uske med hi ho... (alekh nods) may be na, ki tm bekar me doubt kr rhe ho..
A- hn. sayad mai hi kch jyada soch rha..
N (smiles) - ryt.. ab jyada socho mt.. chill..
A- hn..chlo bad me milte h... kch kam h..

Night, naina is waiting for raj..
Our hndsm raj walks toward naina...
Naina stares at him without a blink..
N- sir... aap ne mjhe yahan q bulaya..
R- come with me..

Naina follows him, raj apne rum pahuchta h jahan abhi nd nav wait kr rhe hote h..

Abhi- naina!! to raj ji naina ko lene gye the..
R - hn .. mjhe lga she cn hlp..
Nav- hn.. ye accha kiya tmne..
Abhi- cm naina... sit..
nd they talk, ki shalini ko kaise propose kiya jaye..

Huda in naina's rum.. *dark*
Puja (under blanket) -tm fir aa gye..
H (scared try to hide)
P (stands)- tm agar dobara yahan aaye to mai cmpln kr dungi..
Huda rum k bhar jane lgta h..
Puja uska hnd pkd leti h.. - door se mt jao.. koi dkh lega..
Huda turns..
Puja (screams) - aaa.. tm... tm yahan.. mjhe lga...
Huda window k through jldi se bhag jaata h..
Puja- uff.. ye to gadha huda tha. mjhe lga mera hero hoga. . she tks her teddy.. nd apne dreams me kho jati h

Raj's rum..
Sare planning ho jate h, evry1 is leaving..
Raj- naina , wait. . mjhe tmse kch bat krni h..
N- yes sir..
R (closes the door *naina #nrvs* ) - baitho.. *naina sits* tm ali ko kaise janti ho..
Naina (stands, scared, nrvs) - ali?. hmara batchmate hi na?
R (in a serious tone)- naina mai kma aane k phle k bare me puch rha hu.. tell me tm ali ko kaise janti ho?
N *nrvs* - sirr...mai ni janti...mai kaise pehchanungi use.. I dnt knw him..
R (comes close to naina nd puts his hnd on naina's cheek softly) - cool down..
Naina closes her eyes nd takes a deep breathe..
R (vry softly, his hnd still on naina's cheek)- plzz jhut mt bolo.. tell me, kaise janti ho ali ko..agr kch prblm h to wo v btao...bt plzz don't lie.
Naina turns away from raj..
N- mai ni janti hu ali ko..
R (uska hnd pKad k use apne trf turn krta h) he leaves her hnd nd speaks sftly- naina jhut mt bolo... tell me the truth.. I trst u, mera trust mt todo.. plzz tell me, I rqst..
N (eyes with tears) - sir mai ni janti ali ko..
R (In full anger sits on bed nd cover his face with his hnd nd breathe in sigh) - dkho naina, plzz bta do.. pta to mjhe chl hi jayega.. bt tm btaogi to accha lgega mjhe..
N (nearly cries) - no sir...mai sach me ni janti ali ko.. mai kch v ni janti...
Raj gusse me khada hota h nd table ka sara saman gusse me gira deta h...he goes to naina nd kafi jor se uska hnd pakad leta h...
R (shouts) - damn it!! why don't u say the truth?? mai chahta to kisi aur ko bta skta tha.. tmhare bhai ki bta skta tha... (naina strts crying, her hnd tightly clutched by raj) pr mjhe lga tm mjhe bta degi...( he leaves her hnd, nd pushes her behind, with a force... *naina abt to fall bt khud ko sambhal leti h*) *raj still shouting* - bt no.. tm mjhe q btaogi..
Naina - crying a lot.. raj comes close to naina with full anger in his eyes.. he comes vry close to naina luking deep in naina's eyes
Naina puts her hnd on raj's chest..
R still luking in naina's eyes bt with anger..
Nd naina luking at him jst with a hope ki kb raj ka gussa shant hoga, kl jb wo ro rhi thi to raj ne use sambhala, aaj to koi chup v ni karayega.. kash fir se unhe pakad k ro pati, kash raj mjhe smjhte... kash koi sawal ni hota hmare bich...bht hurt hota h jb wahi insan rulata h jisss hume hope hoti ki wo har waqt hoga hmare pas hume chup karane ko...
R naina ka hnd hatata h - leave..
N- sir
R- leave cadet singh..
N hlds raj hnd...bt raj jaa kr gate khol deta h nd luks at naina... *naina leaves with tears in her eyes* abhi sees this.. *in corridor*

Naina goes to her rum nd cries her heart out.. remembering raj's action..

Abhi goes to raj's rum..
A- ye rum itna bikhra hua q h? nd naina ko tmne rulaya? tm kr kya rhe hi raj?
R- nthng..
A- tm naina k sath kch?
R (loudly) - tm pgl ho kya? u don't hv trst on me?
A (puts his hnd on raj's shldr) - I m srry.. wo naina ko aise rote dkh nd rum ki halat..
R- jst trst me.. sb bta dunga.. bt avi ni..
A- mjhe pta h, tm kch glt ni kroge.. (nd he leaves)

Mrng,
Naina opns her eyes.. nd sees many small papers, jo ki rum k wall pe lge hue the.. in every paper, there was cowars written in it...
Naina strts crying out loud..sb yaad kr k" maj bharagav nd use suspnd kr diya..
she shouts- mjhse ni ho payega. kch ni ho payega... (she kinds of gets mad)
Puja wakes up- naina, kya hua...
Naina crying- nahi ho payega mjhse, I m going.. mjhse ni hoga.
P holds her- naina. smbho khud ko..
(puja sees the papers) - ye sb us huda ne kiya h.. use to mai..
Naina gets up crying nd goes outside the rum.. nd runs towards naveen's rum...
N (crying a lot) - bhaiya.. bhaiya... mjhe jana h..
Nav- choti. . kya hua tjhe.. tu ro q rhi h?
Naina- mjhe ghar jana h.. plzz bhaiya.. mjhe ghar jana h..
Nav- phle tu rona bnd kr.. chup ho ja.. kya hua, tell me..
Naina (hlds nav tightly) - plzz bhaiya, I want to go home..
Nav- ok.. I m arranging...tm ghar chle jana, bt atleast btao ki hua kya h..
N- maj bhargav k class me jo v hua, mai bs nrvs ho gyi thi.. that doesn't mean that I m a coward..
Nav- kaun khta h ki tu coward h choti... ye bs strtng h, hota h.. wat so big deal..
Naina- mere rum pe kisi ne har jgh coward likh diya h. mai ni hu, mjhe yahan rhna hi ni h...mjhe jana h bs..
Nav- ok.. mai krta hu kch.

abhi comes there md sees naina crying...
a- naina ro q rhi h??
Nav- btata hu.. naina avi tm jao...mai dkhta hu, bulaunga tmhe..
Naina wipes her tears nd goes to her rum..
Abhi- mjhe pta tha, jrur uss raj ne kch kiya h.
Nav- raj ne??
A- yes. I knw.. i'll nt leave him..
N- pgl ho. aisi koi bat ni.. nd raj kch glt kr hi ni skta, kisi k sath v ni..
A (in angr) - Maine dkha h.. nd I m nt going to leave him (goes to raj's rum furiously)

Abhi raj k rum me enter krta h...
A (loudly) - tmne kya kiya h naina k sath?
R (cnfusd) - maine??
N (cms) - abhi listn to me.. raj ne kch ni kiya h.. tm aisa kaise bol skte ho..
A (in full angr) - tm ni jante nav.. raj!! tell me kya kiya h tmne?
R (trying to calm abhi down) - luk abhi maine aisa kch ni kiya...
A (hlds raj's collar nd raj apne gusse ko cntrl krta h) - tm naina se dur hi rhna...
N (abhi ko forcefullu rum k bahar bhejta h nd closes the door)- raj. I m srry, pta ni kya ho gya ise...
R (worried) - leave it.. ye btao ki naina ko kya hua...
Nav tells him evrythng..
R- wat?? ye huda ne kiya h.. I m sure, ye usi ka kaam h.. naina kahan h??
Nav- rum pe hogi. .
R- mai aata hu..

Puja goes to huda in boys hstl..
Evry1 is murmuring- a girl in boys hstl, yahan q aayi h..
P (slaps huda )
H abt hit her bt stppd by yudi..
Y- kya hua puja?
p- apne is kamine dost se puch.. ki kya hua h..
H- yudi tu side hatt..
y (in angr) - ab kya kiya tune??
P- kl hmare rum pe aaya tha ye...
Alekh- puja tm jao yAhan se avi...boys hstlh ye... plzz undrstnd.. cllg me milna..
P- bt..
Y- hn.. puja.. jao avi.. alekh sahi kah rha..
Puja leaves...

yudi nd alekh huda ko rum k andar le jate h..
A- kya kiya h tune ab?
H (irritating) - dkh.. maine kch ni kiya... use koi misundrstndng hui h...
Y (clutchs huda's head frm behind)- hallucination to hote ni h use.. wo kah rhi h ki tm kl rat Uske rum pe gye the, mtlb gye the... kya krne??
H (cool) - hath niche rkh. aur dimag kharab na kr.. hatt yahan se, drill k liye late ho rha..
Yudi huda ko dhakka deta h..
Alekh- yudi. jane do ise..
Y- alekh tm.

Alekh - jane do..
H (winks) - kch sikh apne dost se.. hits on yudi chest.. chl milte h class me...

Naina in her rum crying nd tearing evry paper jisme coward likha hua h...
Raj comes there nd sees her...
R- naina!!
Naina luks at raj nd cntrlls her cries bt eyes still red, teary...
R- q ro rhi ho??
N- I m fyn sir..
R (with a blank exprssn , naina ko pakad k bed oe bithata h) - I knw.. bs ek bat bolna tha..
N - yes sir..
R- u r nt a coward.. aur plzz yahan se jaa kr, ye sb likhne wale ko sach prove mt kro...
N (sobbing luks at raj innocently) - sir..
R- yes..
N- aap naraj h mjhse. . mt kijiye mjhse bat.. itne acche mt bniye...
R *laughs* - don't wrry ni hu mai accha.. koi prblm ni hogi tmhe..
N says nthng...
R- maj bhargav k class k tym mjhse aa kr milna..
N- yes sir..
R- 1 more thng cadet singh.. mai apko apna smjhne lga tha.. *with a assuring smile* bt don't wrry kl nyt k bad v tm ek cadet ho nd mai tmhara teacher.. kch v ni badla..
N- taunt kr rhe h??
R- aa kr mil lna nd shalini k bare me yad h na...cm fast... (he leaves)N to herslf- sbse jyada hurt to aap kr rhe h sir mjhe.. naraj hai to bat mt kijiye na mjhse.. q kr rhe h aap meri care.. mt kijiye meri parwah..

Nav still waiting for raj in his room..
Raj comes there..
Nav- naina se Milne gye the na? kya hua??
R- wo thik ho jayegi.. don't wrry..
Nav- ek bat puchu. ye mt sochna ki mai tmpe doubt kr rha hu..
R *laughs* - kl nyt me maine naina se kch pucha tha, nd usne ni btaya reality...
Nav-ok.. wo kya bat thi? jb btana hoga, bta dena.. tb tk mere mind ko confuse hone do.. (he winks nd leaves)

Nav goes to abhi nd use smjhata h..
a- ok.. mai raj se bat kr lunga..I knw he will frgv me.. avi mjhe shalu k pas jana h..bye...

shalini opns her rum's gate... nd finds a red rose bouquet with a card "A VERY GD MRNG TO THE MOST BEAUTIFUL GIRL.. LUV U MY PRINCESS"
S (in a dreamy tone) *to herslf*- awww. luv u too naveen...
Abhi video kr rha hota h shalu ka chup kr..

nav-raj
nav- Maine boquet to ordr kr diya tha...bt ab mjhe mrkt jana hoga.. smbhl lena sb...
R- jo hukm...

Naina entrs the class..
puja-yudi-alekh together talking abt huda..
Alekh- hume raj sir ko btana chahiye..
Naina- unhe pta h..
Y- fir unhe smbhlne do.. kahin hmlog aur n fas jaye..
N- alekh!! (alekh goes to his seat)
Yudi- khud ko akele mt smjhna, we r here for u, whenvr u need..
N- thnx..
abhi entrs.. nd the class goes on..

shalini is luking for naveen bt can't find him..
Dr ritu cms there with a box wraped in a gift paper..
Ritu- naveen ko dhundh rhi h??
S (blush)- ni..bs yun hi..
Ritu (use wo bada sa box deti h)- ye apke liye h.. kisi ne bade pyar se diya h (teasingly)
S (shy, aww jst can't stp smiling)- gift wrap hatati h...

Nd there is a big framed photo of navshal.. nd a letter in it..
"I GUESS THIS WILL LOOK WONDERFUL IN OUR LOVELY ROOM, HMARE HOME SWEET HOME ME... LUV U A LOT, MY FUTURE WIFEY"

shalini covers her face with shy ..
Ritu- ohho.. koi tp bilkul red ho gya.. inna sharmana..haye..
Shalini hits ritu lovingly- stop teasing
.. pr ye naveen h kahan??
ritu (winks) - itni tadap?? mil jYega.. dhundhiye..

Maj bhargav ki class strt hoti h nd naina raj se milne jati h..
N- sir aap ne bulaya tha mjhe?
R- yes cadet singh...come with me..
they r on ground.. on a table there are many types of guns, rifles..
N- sir yahan? ?
R- maine bregadire chandralok se bat ki...he granted me the prmsn to train u. aftr 1 mnth maj bhargav tmhara ek tst lenge nd agr tm wo pass kr jati ho to tmhe 1 mnth bck ni kiya jayega..
Naina smiles- thnk you sir..
Raj- tmhe dar lgta h gun k awaj se
any rsns? ya bs yun hi.. (staring jst in her eyes)
N (keeos her eyes down) - phle kvi use ni kara h thats why...
R (gives her a gun) - hold it..
Naina pakadti h.. nd raj directs ki shoot kaise kiya jate h..
R- kahi v aim kro nd trigger dabao..
N- sir...I can't aim..
R- don't u wrry.. phle dar se ti jeet jao.. bs trigger dabao..
Naina (breathing heavily with nrvsnes) - sir... (fear)
Raj comes closer to her nd hlds her hnd (with gun) frm behind nd stretch her arms..
naina luks at him.. he was so damn close.. she could hear his breath..
R whispers in her ear- dnt be afraid.. isme darne jaisi koi bat ni..
Naina jst couldn't hear anythng excpt his breath.. nd jst can't focus anywhr excpt his eyes nd moving lips..
R- trigger dabao..
Bt she acts nthng. .
Raj luks at naina jo bs raj ki taraf hi dkh rhi thi..

Song-JAB SE TERE SE SAPNO NE MERE NAINO KO CHUAA H...AAA...
JAB SE TERE SE SAPNO NE MERE NAINO KO CHUAA H...

Raj lost in her eyes tightens his grip around naina to bring her closer..

MERE MAN KA PARINDA BAWRA SA HUA H... JAB SE TERE SAPNO NE...

Both jst lost in each othr eyes.. naina jst melting in raj's arms..

BAWRAAA... BAWRAAA.. MAN BAWRAAA...

raj gaining his slf consciousnss.. moves his eyes away frm naina
..naina also feels awkward...
Raj loses the grip around naina..
R (breathes in sigh)- ummm.. cadet singh press the trigger..
Naina luks deep in raj's eye nd presses the trigger without any fear..
R (leaves naina's hnd) - gd..tm to bilkul ni dari.. (with a awkwardnss in his eye) actually mjhe avi chlna chahiye.. hmlog kl se krte h strt..
N (shy) - yes sir...sir!! wait..
R- bolo.
N- sir wo kl nyt..
R- mjhe us bare me bat ni krni.. (he leaves)

Nav-abhi
Nav - ye lo sare saman mai le aaya hu..
Abhi- ok.. don't wrry sb accha hoga. .
N- hope so . chlo ab ye sb le kr jao tm (giving him some packts)
A- ok. tmhe hlp ki jrurat hogi to btana...
Nav - sure..
ABHI abt to leave bt turns back.
A- naina thik h na??
Nav- naina to thik h..pr mai fir se wahi kahunga ki tmhe raj pe doubt ni krna chahiye tha.. hmare alawa h hi kaun uska. .
A (eyes full with guilt) - umm.. sayad mjhse bht badi glti ho gyi.. pr ab usse bat krne ki himmat ni ho rhi..
N- aaj tk hamare bich itni duriyan kvi ni aayi..aur mai itna to tjhe janta hu, tjhe maafi mangne me kvi sharm ni aayi...tu glti krta h to manta v h apni glti.. (tapping his shldr) reality to ye h ki tjhe ab v uspe doubt h...
A- sb kch jante ho to fir q bar bar bol rhe ho usse bat krne
N- qki ni chAhta mai ki hum tino k bich kisi v tarah ki misundrstng ho..
A- koi misundrstng ni h.. kl rat naina uske rum se rote hue nikli, nd jb mai rum gya to pura rum bikhra hua tha.. agr raj ki koi glti ni h, to Usne q ni btaya ki naina q ro rhi thi ya rum bikhra q tha..
N- ho skta kisi rsn se raj avi ni bta rha.. bt iska mtlb ye ni ki wo glt hi ho..
A- tmhe uspe blv krna h to kro... mai ni kr skta.. (abhi leaves)
Nav to himslf- raj ko hmse koi bat ni chupana chahiye.. bekar me abhi k mind glt baatein aa rhi h.. I hope sb jldi hi thik ho jaye..

Naina in canteen..
Puja-yudi-alekh comes there (bt wo naina ko ni dekhtw h nd dusre table pe baith jate h)
Naina goes there
Naina- mjhe bhul hi gye??
Puja- ni.. tmhe kaise bhul skte h..
Y- hn.. avi raj sir se tmhare hi bare me bat kr k aa rhe h..
Naina- mtlb?? kya?
Puji- arre. huda ki cmpln krne gye the..
N - thnx.. kitna sochte h tmlog mere bare me..
Puji- itna to krna hoga na, meri rum mate ho.. ab huda aise presan krega to prblm to mjhe hogi na. (winks) tjhe presan krna h to kare na.. bt rum pe ayega to prblm h..
Naina (making a cute sad baby face)- mtlb tu chahti h ki huda presan kare mjhe..
Puji (pinching naina's cheeks) - awww..olle olle.. na le babu...
Evry1 laughs.
N- kya bat h alekh? aaj tm itne chup chup q ho???
A- nthng.. bs yun hi (he stands) mjhe kch kaam h.. I hv to go.. (he leaves)
Naina thinks- jrur ise koi bat presan kr rhi h.. mjhe ek bar usse bat krni chahiye..
N- guys.. tmlog bat kro.. mjhe v kch kaam h..

Naina goes behind alekh..
N- alekh!! alekh wait... (she runs to reach alekh)
Naina- mai kb se tmhe bula rhi hu.. sunayi ni deta kya..
Alekh (ingonrig exprssn) - hmm..bolo..
N- kya hua? tm aise q bhv kr rhe?
A- nthng.. mjhe jana chahiye..
N- bt ... (alekh leaves, leaving a hurt naina in state of confusion)

shalini enters the sick rum nd there is a huge teddy with a card "I LUV U SHALU"
Shalini- sare gifts mil rhe h.. bt ye gift dene wala kahan chla gya...

evng (classes ovr)
naina is crossing by corridor, nav k pas ja rhi thi, nd she saw a prsn (uske pas se gujarta h) from behind... with a knife in his hnd...
Naina gets scared bt says nthng coz wo corridor me akele hoti h...
bt she follows the prnsn, chup kr..
the prsn hides behind a wall...
Nd naina sees huda coming towards her..
Naina- tum yahan??
Huda- tjhse milne ni aaya.. raj sir ne bulaya h.. (wo jane lgta h)
Naina sees ki wo prsn, knife huda ki trf aim kr k phekta h...
Naina (runs towArds huda) - huuddaaa!! (she makes him lean down nd knife kaafi upar se cross kr jata h)...
Naina- tm thik ho na..
Huda- hn.. pr tm??
Naina- I m alright.. dont wrry..
Huda- mai q worried ho jaunga tmhare liye?? tm ni bachati to kch hota ni mjhe. .
N (they both stands) - ek to maine bachaya tmhe, aur tm apna hi attitude dikha rhe..
Huda- maine kaha na tm ni v bachati to kch ni hota mjhe, ye knife kafi upar se gya h mere.. to koi ehsan ni kiya h tmne mjhpe..
Naina leaves furiously.. bt sees smthng, jahan pe wo prsn chupa hua tha.. she picks it up, shirt ka button.. she keeps that button with her...

Naina goes to nav's rum..
Nd narrates the whole stry, avi jo v hua..
Nav- tm thik ho na..
Nain- hn.. mai to thik hu...
Nav- academy k andar ye sb ho rha h. its nt safe.. Hume report krna chahiye..
Naina- hn.. ye sahi rhega.. nd yes, ye button, mjhe wahi se mila..
Nav (takes the button) - "VAN HUESSEN" may be..
Naina- wat??
Nav (smiles) - nthng, i'll hndl it.. tv tmhe kisi se kch kahne ki jrurat ni..
Naina- ok bhaiya..
Nav (hands her a dress) - filhal tum ye lo aur jaa kr shalini ko de do..
Naina (makes a sad face)- mai to unse kvi mili v ni...
Nav- arre bba.. pehchanti ho na.. jao de do. she knows u
Naina- ok..jati hu.. (teasingly) bhabhi k paas... *nav laughs* (she goes)
Nav (seeing the button) - plzz god.. aur cmplctn ni.. plzz..

Naina goes to shalu..
Naina- mam..
S- oh.. naina.. come...
N- apko ye dena tha. .
S (laughs) - ek aur gift?? pr tmhare bhaiya h kahan??
Naina- tym pe mil jayenge..
Shalini (laughs) - thnx a lot.. nd kaisi ho tm?
N- mai thik hu.. nd apke bare me mjhe pta h.. ab aap gft dkh lijiye..
mai bad me aati hu.. (she leaves)
shalini sees the packet..
'" A beautiful red dress.. a card -ready rhna my princess, see you at 7, lots of luv" naina outside the rum, capturing these momnts in camera...

naina leaves from there nd sees alekh,
Naina- alekh!!
Alekh sunta h, bt ni rukta.
N (alekh ka hnd pakad leti h) - Alekh@! kya hua h?? tm bat q ni kr rhe mjhse..
Alekh- kya bat karu?? Maine to tmhe ek accha dost maana tha... pr tm.. ( he stops saying)
N- pr mai kya?? kya kiya h maine???
A- mai to tmse sb kch share krta tha.. pr tmne mjhe kch ni btaya...
(raj ye sb dur se dkh rha hota h)
N- tm kya kah rhe ho
A- itni anjan mt bno.. ali ko kaise janti ho??
N (shockd) - wat?. raj sir ne kch kaha tmse??
Al- ni... maine kaha unse..
N- mtlb??
A-maine tmhe ali k bare me btaya tha.
(((flashback- N- ho skta h ki wo sach bol rha ho, nind me hi gya hoga faculty rum, nd may be wo apne bimari k bare me kisi ko ni btana chahta hoga...nd us packets me uske med hi ho... (alekh nods) may be na, ki tm bekar me doubt kr rhe ho..
A- hn. sayad mai hi kch jyada soch rha..)))Naina- hn btaya tha...
A- maine to tmhe btaya hi ni tha ki ali ne mjhe btaya h ki use nind me chlne ki bimari h.. fir tmne ye bat kaise kahi ki wi nind me faculty rum gya hoga..
Naina (totally shockd) - wo...actually.
A - bat yahi khatm ni hoti.. mai gya tha raj sir ko sb btane, ye v ki mjhe tmpe doubt h..nd humdono ne tmhe aur ali ko bat krte v dkha h..
Naina- alekh! !
A- bolo... ab kya bolna h...
N- mai ali se bat kr rhi thi qki tm use lekr presan the.. mai bs usse puch rhi thi..
A (laughs) - yeah ryt.. aur wo nind me chlne wali bat...maine tmhe spne md btayi hogi...
N (nrvs) - ni.. maine v ali ko dkha tha rat me, puchne or usi ne btaya tha..
A- nd u want me to blv this??
N- I m nt lying.. yahi sach h..
A (Loudly)- plzz leave naina..
Raj comes there- naina sach kah rhi h..
A- kya? *naina shockd*
R- ali se koi aur mila hua h, mjhe clue mil chuka h.. jldi hi sach pta chl jayega.. tmlog jao.. nd alekh!! naina glt ni h..
Naina (smiles) *both leaves*..
n- ab to bat kroge na??
a- I m srry.. mjhe lga.
N- no need.. its ok..

Raj, naina, nav preparng for the dinner date..
R- abhi ni aaya??
A (frm behind) - aisa ho skta h kya??
R (big smile) *hugs abhi* - mjhe lga..
A- hmare bich kch ni aa skta..
Nav (to abhi in a slow voice) - thnx..
abhi- sb to prepare ho gya.. avi 1 hr h 7 bjne me..
N- abhi mere sath aana.. kch kaam h.. nd naina nd raj merw rum me aaj k pics honge sare le aana..
Naina- ok..

Raj -naina going to nav rum
N- sir
R- hn
N- thnx.. ab to aap ne v maaf kr diya h na..R- hmmm..
(they reach the rum nd strts luking for photos)
naina ka leg carpet se fas jata h nd she falls ovr raj...

The time stops for a while..
Both lost in each othr..
raj naina k eyes se hair hatata h..
naina suddenly raj se dur hoti h with a shockd exprssn..
R- naina!! (worried)
N- nthng..
Raj strts luking for photos.
Naina (goes closer to him) - sir.. do u trst me..
R (luks at naina rudely) - krne lga tha..
N- umm..
R- ab ni..
N *hurts*..
R goes behind naina nd comes closer to her nd whispers in her ear- mjhe pta h ki tmne alek h se jhut kaha h...I knw, ki tm ali ko janti ho...
pr mai tmse puchunga v ni..
N *screams* - hn janti hu.. pr aap jo kr rhe wo sahi h kya?
R (cnfusd)
Naina holds raj's hnd
Naina- apke sleeve ka button kaise tut gya? rajveer sir!!
R (shckd)- button?
Naina- don't wrry. mai v ni puchungi aap se ki q aap ne huda pe hamla kiya (she leaves in anger)
naina goes to nav..
Naina- bhaiya, sb ready h na?
Nav- Accha hua tu aa gyi.. shAlu ko le kr aao..
Naina- ok ok..jati hu..
Nav - ye raj aur abhi kahan chle gye..
Raj from behind- mai yahin hu.. nd abhi bs aa hi rha hoga..
Naina (luks angrily at raj) - mai jati hu bhaiya...
Nav- thoda jldi le kr aana.. (sees abhi) lo ye v aa gya
(naina leaves)
Nav to raj - tm dono k bich kch hua h kya?
Raj- ni.. kch v ni hua h.. aur avi shalu pe dhyan do...
Abhi- chlo lights off kro.. nd raj, chlo hmlog udhar chlte h.. yahan nav ko rhne do...
Raj- hn.. apki shalu aati hi hongi...
Raj nd abhi side me jane lgte h..
Abhi- tu kr kya rha h naina k sath? mere frnd ho bs isliye ab tk safe ho..
Raj- abhi, mai fir se wahi kahunga.. maine kch ni kiya, waqt aane pr sb bta dunga.. Avi mjhe khud sacchai ni pata..
Abhi- tm kvi.. (suddenly sees shalu coming)

Nav sees shalu.. it was the most wondrfull view for nav.. shalini walking towards nav in, nav jst couldn't stop staring at shalu...
Wo guitar play krta h, the sweet music spreading the romance in air...
Naina leaves shalu nd goes to abhi nd raj...

Shalini nd nav jst stari g at each other...

Nav sings- TU, DIL KI KHUSI, DIL KI PYAS TU...MERE TAN ME MERI SANSEIN TU...
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Shalu pe rose petals blow krte h raj nd abhi.. by using a fan...
shalini k liye jaise, this was the bst momnt..wo phulo ki barish. ..

KAMI THI JO MJHME, WAHI TO MOHABBAT HAI TU..ZINDAGI ME MERI, AADMAN KI INAYAT HAI TU...

Nav comes closer to shalinind takes her hand for dance..

Shalini sings.. dancing with nav - PHIR SE NAYI DUNIYA BANI MEHKI KALI TERE KARAN... (naina holds raj hnds - wow!! kinna prfct h na..bt realizes, nd they hv a prfct eyelock..hawa me is pyar k jadu se, ye kaise bach skte h) PHLE KAHAN AISI THI MAI, MAI HU HASI TERE KARAN...

abhi sets the projector.. nd aaj pure din k shalu k pics wahan display hote h... nav screen ki taraf Ishara krta h..

Nav sings- NA NA NA NA NA NA .. YE SB JHUT H... (naina leaves raj's hnd nd usse dur jati h.. raj uske piche jata h) MAI TO HU SADA SE EK PAGAL...MERA NAHIN KAAM YE.. {Raj holds naina from behind nd whispers in her ear- plzzz trust me.. naina turns- aap q glt smjhte h mjhe...
Raj- ssshhh... (puts finger on naina lips) } TUM KHUDA KI HO ROSHNI..
ZINDAGI ME MERI ASMAN KI INAYAT H TU...

Nav comes closer to shalini- tm sach itni khubsurat ho,.ya chandni raat ka kamal h???
Abhi thinks- lgta h raj naina chle gye, mjhe v inhe akele chorr dena chahiye..
shalini hits his chst gntly- ye to aap hi btayenge..
Nav kneels down- Will u marry me??? *with a ring in his hnd*
Shalini with a big big big blush..- ofcourse...
Nav use ring pehnata h.. nav kisses on shalu's hnd.. he stands, he holds shalu's waist nd brings her closer..
Nav- I love you..
Shalini- I love u evn more..

Naina removes raj's finger.
Naina *lyk a baby* - q chup rahu?.q ni trust kr skte aap mjhpe?
Raj- mai krta hu par..
Naina- ye par, but, lekin q h fir bich me? q ni bharosa h apko mere pe, bina sawal k, q ni blv kr skte aap mjhpe?
Raj (ignrng) - i shld leave..
He strts going
Naina holds her hnd nd pulls raj towards him bt balance ni kr pati nd she falls over raj..
Naina embarrassed. .
Raj - ab uthengi ni aap??
Naina (childish) - ni.. mai uth gyi to aap bhag jaiyega..
Raj- kya karu tmse bat kr k?? q ni btati mjhe, kya chupa rhi ho? kaise janti ho ali ko?
Naina- ye Itne sare sawal q h hmare bich?
Raj- qki jawab tmhare pas h.. aur janna h wo mjhe...
Naina- mai to koi sAwal ni krti..
Raj naina ko khud se hatata h..
Naina- ab ye kya?? fir ja rhe aap??
Raj- tm yahi chahti ho na, ki mai koi sawal na karu tmse..thik h, ni puchunga, jb tk khud ni btaogi.. (she holds naina's hnd) aur v bht raste h ye pta lgane k ... pr mjhe tmse hi janna h...
Raj leaves...

Naina to herslf- ye ho kya rha h mjhe..mai kya btau sir ko.. (she sits there) par sir ne v to huda pe hamla kiya phir mai q bat kr rhi unse, mai sbko bta q ni deti...sir ne mjhe kch ni btaya, fir v mai blv kr rhi hu unpe.. wo q ni kr skte mjh pr blv.. (she stands firmly). pta ni, kch v ni pta mjhe.. mrng hote hi mai cmpln kr dungi ki raj sir ne hi huda pe hamla kiya... bs. aur kch ni sochna mjhe..

Mrng..
Huda comes to naina...
Huda- kaisi h tu??
Naina- tu mjhse puch rha h?
Huda - Naina tu hi h na?
Naina- mtlb! ! ofcourse mai hi hu..
Huda- hn.. to tjhse hi puch rha..
Naina *mockingly* - haha.. vry funny..
Huda- ab bta v de..kaisi h??
Naina- dkhne me kaisi lg rhi?
Huda (flirting) - tu sach me chahti h ki mai xpln karu ki tu kaisi lg rhi h..
Naina- ufff.. hato.. I hv to go. tere faltu flirts k liye, tym ni h mere pas...
she starts going..
Huda- sun naina!
Naina Turns- ab kya?? bolo..
Huda- I m srry..
Naina (teases) - kya? kch sunai ni de rha. .
Huda - dkh jyada ho rha. kah diya na srry.. (he leaves)

naina goes to naveen..
Nav- choti, tu iss waqt yahan!!
Naina- hn.. wo..
Nav- phle tu meri bat sun..mai aur shalini aaj hi nikl rhe h?
Naina- kya mtlb nilkl rhe h,?
Nav- mtlb, shadi krni h to parents ki to thoda maska lgana hoga na..
Naina- to mere bina?
Nav- hn.. tu is waqt ni jaa skti..
Naina- hn.. ab meri kya imprtnc, ab to bhabhi mil gyi na..
Nav- smjh na choti...pta ni kitne din lgenge..
Naina- arre.. majak kr rhi thi... aap dono jaiye nd sb kch infrm krte rhiyega..
nav- pakka.. ab bta tu kya bat krne aayi thi?
Naina- I knw aap bht khus h avi, mjhe ye bat sayad avi ni kahni chahiye.. pr bina btaye mai rah v ni paungi..
Nav- btao na.. itna sochti q ho..
Naina- bhaiya, huda pe hamla rajveer sir ne kiya tha. . wo button.
Nav interrupts- mjhe pta h.. jb tmne button dikhaya, usi waqt doubt ho gya tha mjhe..
Naina- aap ne btaya q ni..
Nav- qki tm glt sense me leti use..
Naina- ye glt hi to h.
Nav- raj ko smjhna bht simple h.. wo kch v kare na, bs itna har waqt sochna ki raj glt ni ho skta... jo v krta h kisi acche rsn se krta h, bs itna mind me hmesa rkhna.. bs, fir raj ko smjhna koi muskil kaam ni.. ek bar soch k dekho, answer khud mil jayega tmhe, ki q raj ne huda pe hamla kiya...

to be continued soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...,raj-naina moments were lovely & what is going on between ali-naina & i think raj has attacked huda to make him realise his mistake nd it did happened huda told sorry to naina continue soon
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Luv hurts bt nvr ends
Part 10


alekh-puji-naina-yudi sitting in canteen..
Yudi nd puja are talking to each other *nonstop* nd alekh nd naina are jst giving each other funny looks..
Huda comes there, takes a chair nd sits there..
Alekh- tu yahan kya kr rha h?
Huda- ab..isme tjhe kya prblm h..
Naina- its ok alekh... ek baat btani thi tmhe,
Alekh-hn btao.
Naina (teasingly)- kisi ne na aaj, srry kaha tha mjhe...can u blv??
Alekh (laughs) - accha!! srry kah diya (luking at huda) kaun h wo? srry bolne wala.
Huda- limit.. limit.. itna v mt kro..
Alekh- mjhe tjhse koi prblm ni thi...naina k sath tmne jo kiya, bs us wajah se.. (puji- yudi khud me hi bzy h)
Huda interrupt- bs bs...lecture sunne ki adat ni mjhe.. in short ab sb sahi h.
Naina- guys, I hv to go.. naveen bhaiya aaj ja rhe h..
Yudi, Alekh, Huda- Wat!! Naveen bhaiya??
Naina- ooppss.. yes he Is my bro..
Alekh- aur ye bat tune hum sb se chupayi?
Naina (stands) - na.. sb se ni.. puji ko pta h na..
Alekh- teri to.. (stands to hit naina bt naina runs away, aur alekh wapas baith jata h)

Nav-raj-abhi are together in nav's rum..
Naina comes in- packing ho gyi??
Nav- hn.. bs nikl hi rha hu..
Naina- mai v chlu bahar tk?
Abhi- chlo na.. kisne roka h?? class strt hone me tym h avi..

nav-shal chle jate h..
Naina- rajveer sir!!
Raj- go to ur class.. CADET SINGH!!
(raj leaves)

Its bhargav's class..
naina stands to leave, nd sbhi class k bahar jane lgte h..
Naina- aaj sir class ni le rhe kya??
Puji- no.. aaj class ni hogi..


Bhargav to a staff- dekho.. sare students kahan h??
Staff- sir sbhi hstl me h..koi v class attnd ni krna chahta..

Naina goes to raj..
Naina- sir aaj maj bhargav class q ni le rhe??
Raj- wat? ye pssbl hi ni h..
he leaves to look Into the mttr..

Maj bhrgav goes furiously to hstl..
staff tells evry1 to gather..
Bhargav screams- cadets!! kaun attend ni krna chahta meri class..
BC- mjhe pta h ye sb naina ko class se suspnd krne ki wajah se ho rha.. par aap sb yahan apne sapne pure krne aaye ho.. u r nt allowed to revolt here..
koi cadets kch v ni kahte..
Bhargav- jo meri class attnd ni krna chahte.. wo, shauk se KMA se jaa skte h.. nd u will be punshd for this act..
Huda comes in front - Sir.. dysentery ho gyi h.
sm cadets strts laughing.. bt controls..
Bhargav- sbhi ko,?
Huda- yes sir...sayad food poisoning ho gyi h, yudi k snacks khaye the hmolgo ne..
Yudi murmurs- mai hi mila??
Bhargav- aapka ye bahana..
Huda (runs away) - sir..mjhe jana padega..jane dijiye sir. :-D .. (he goes towards washrum).
A cadet- sir.. mjhe v jana hoga.. (he leaves before bhargav could say anythng)
Raj sees all this nd smiles
Bhargav to BC - sir, sabhi bahana kr rhe h.. u shld punish them..
Raj comes there- u can't prove ki ye log jhut bol rhe... may be ye sach kah rhe h..nd u can't force any1 to attnd classes when they r ill..
Bhargav luks angrily at raj nd leaves..

Raj comes to naina- ab sayad mjhe apko train krne ki jrurat ni hogi..all thnx to huda..
Naina- sir!!
Raj leaves, ignoring...
Alekh sees naina..
Alekh- huda accha ladka h..
Naina- I knw.. bt q krte h itne sawal wo? kya hamare bich k ye sawal khatm ni ho skte??
Alekh- sawal? (naina *oopps moment*) mjhe ni lgta tu huda k bare me bol rhi.. pr jiske bare me v bol rhi, ek bat yaad rakh.. sawal ki manjil jawab hi h..sawal bina jawab k kaise khatm ho skte h??
Naina smiles nd leaves without saying a word..

Night. .
Raj is sitting alone in the ground..
Naina sees him nd comes there..
Naina from behind- aaj aao akela feel kr rhe honge na? hmesa nav bhaiya yahan hote the apke sath. .
Raj - hn.. par aap yahan?
Naina- baith skti hu..
Raj- ofcourse.. *naina sits*.. (mockingly) aap yahan ali k bare me btane aayi h na..btaiye?
Naina (irritated) - sir!! q kr rhe aap aise?
Raj- wo bat btane ni aayi h? to jaa skti h aap yahan se..
Naina (stands in anger) - q kr rhe h aap mere sath aisa? bat q ni kr rhe aap, qki apko pta h aap gussa rhenge to mai kch na kch bolungi hi.. mere pyar ka fayda utha rhe na??

Raj luks at naina hearing this, naina realizes wat she said..

Naina- (nrvsly) mtlb, hmesa bat krte h aap, aur ab bat ni krenge to bura lgega na..

Raj stands, just staring at her..
Naina (gets more nrvs) - I didn't really mean it..
Raj- I know..
Naina- wo bs.. mtlb..

Raj-naina suddenly hears chaos nd sees crowd near the gate..
Raj runs towards the crowd worried. ..naina follows him

Raj sees Ki BC ko sick roome jaya ja rha h..
Raj- kya hua inhe??
Ritu- kisi ne chaku se war kiya h.. kaafi bleeding ho rhi h..
Ritu- mai bleeding stop krne ki kosis krti hu...pr inhe, hsptl le jaana hoga..

Raj turns toward naina- naina tm apne rum jao..
Naina- pr sir!!
Raj shouts- Can't u hear?? go to ur rum..
Naina seham jati h, nd she leaves with a heavy heart...

Raj goes to BC' s rum..
Raj to guard- kya hua tha..sb btao..
Guard- Pta ni kya hua, kaise hua.. rat ko jb teddy (servant) dudh le kr gya to dkha ki Sir jakhmi halat me bed pe pade hue the..
Raj- yani ki koi unpr phle hi.. god! sir chillaye to honge, kisi ne kch suna ni? tmlog the kahan..
Guard- hm dono to yahi sir k gate k pas baithe the..

Raj goes to BC's room..
Raj to himslf- yahan to sb kch nrml h..yani ki koi jhagda..kch ni hua.. (he sees the window) I guess wo idhar se hi aaya hoga.. pr jb hamla kr diya gya, fir to dard me sir ne chillaya hoga, gate ki taraf jane ki kosis to ki hogi... pr ye rum dkh k aisa kch to ni lgta...
Abhi comes to raj- mai btata hu sir q ni chillaye.. may be wo conscious ho hi na..
Raj- hn.. kisi ne behos kiya hoga unhe..
Abhi- exactly.. dinnr me milaya gya hoga..
Guard- no sir, dinner to chk kr k diya jata h unhe..
Abhi- jo v taste krta h, usne to thoda hi khaya, may be thode amnt me affect na krta ho..
Raj- mess chlte h.. wahan kch pta chl jaye..

Raj-abhi mess me interrogate krte h..

Naina in her rum.. remembering, ki kaise usne kah diya.. "mere pyar ka fayda utha rhe h aap"
Naina- pyar?? nt pssbl!! sir ne kitni jor se chillaya mjh pe.. pta ni aage kya hoga...

Aftr mess, raj goes to alekh.. nd tells him to do something.. (Abhi BC k sath hospitl jata h)

Raj, furious takes ali with him..
Ali chair pe baitha hua h.
Raj- tmne BC ko q mara?
Ali- humne kch v ni kiya..
Raj (shouts) - maine pucha. . q???
Ali- hum q marenge unhe? humne kch v ni kiya..
Raj (slaps him).- tell me why??
Ali- humne ni kiya h kch v.
Raj calls a staff- pucho isse ki isne BC pr hamla q kiya. jo krna pade kro... aur is bat ka pta kisi ko ni chla chahiye
Staff (Mayank)- yes sir..
Mayank hits ali..

Raj goes to naina's rum..
Naina is sleeping..
Raj (loudly) - Naina..
Puja aur naina dono uth jate h..
Naina (afraid) - aap is waqt yahan??
Raj uska hnd pakadta h nd drags her..
Naina- kya hua sir..
Naina ko leg me chot lg jati h.. bt raj usw khich kr le ja rha hota h.. alekh sees this. .

Raj naina ko apne rum me le kr aata h..
Raj- Tm naveen ki behan ho v ya ni??
Naina- sir! hua kya h?
Raj- jo aap aur ali chahte the..pr BC ko kch ni hoga.. he is safe..
Naina- mai ni janti ali ko..
Raj (screams) - ab to bnd kro apna ye jhut.. q kiya ye sb, ye btao?
Naina (afraid as hell) - sir mai ni janti..
Raj uske hairs (back) ko jor se pakadta h- naina... aur koi jhut ni...jst tell me the rsn..
Naina (darr se sansein tej ho gyi thi) - sir.. mai sach me ni janti ali ko..
Raj uske hairs chorrta h nd use dhakka de deta h, she falls nd got hurt..
Raj (shouts) - maine trust kiya tha tmpe.. tmhare bhai ne trst kiya tha tmpe.. aur tmne ye kiya?? q naina!!
Naina (crying, afraid) - Sir!! plzz..
Raj comes closer to naina nd bends, naina zameen pe giri hui h- tell me the reason naina!
Naina- mjhe ni pta..
Raj raises his hnd to slap, naina bht dar jati h bt raj controls his anger..
Raj- naina, mjhe ni accha lgega agar tmse koi torture kr k yahi batein puchega.. tell me, q kiya ye??

Alekh comes there, nd knocks..
Raj door kholta h, alekh sees naina. .
Alekh- sir!! naina v??
Raj (takes a deep breath) - I don't know why.. jao, staff buliding me pratima hongi, call her ab wahi puchengi naina se sacchai.. (tears flow from his eyes)
Alekh- r u sure?
Raj- no.. I m nt..

Raj rum me aata h , ek paper pe kch likhta h..
Raj- Alekh! rum no. 24 me jao, ye ppr dikhana nd ali ko yahan le kr aao..
Alekh (takes the ppr) - yes sir..

Raj comes towards naina.. jo avi v waise hi zameen pe giri hui thi..
Raj sits there...nd cups naina's face with his hnd
Raj (with tears inhis eyes).- plzz naina...btao na.. q kiya aisa?
Naina (starts breathing heavily nd bht rone lgti h..)
Raj- kch ni hone dunga tmhe, plz btao.
She continues crying nd hugs raj..
Raj v use hold krta h.. nd dono ro rhe hote h, ek duje k bahon me.. jaise in aansuon se sare gile sikwe, sari galtiya, duriyan, sb dhul jayengi

Gate knock Hota h..
Naina leaves raj, still crying..
raj door kholta h.. ali-alekh..

ali sees naina nd runs toward her. .
Ali (holds naina)- tm thik ho?
Naina nods..
Ali- hmare wajah se..
Raj ali ko uthata h nd use sofa pe baithata h.. (jbrdsti)
Alekh rum bolt kr k..bed pe baith jata h..
Naina ko v sofe pe bithata h raj..

Raj- dkho ali, mjhe pta h ki tmne hi dinner me anaesthesia milaya tha... nd alekh ne chk kiya h, wo box jisme kch packets the, aaj khali h.. mjhe bs ye Janna h ki q kiya ye sb??

Naina-ali luks at each other. .
Raj- plzz naina...
Naina luks at raj.. ali undono ko dkhta h..

Ali- hum aur naina, college me mile the nd hmlog kafi acche frnd bn chuke the.. ek dusre k liye jaan v de skte the...
Naina- ali.. (ali luks at naina)
Ali- ab kch ni chup skta..
Kafi msti bhari lyf thi hmari.. party, picnic, hangouts, clubbing.. ek nyt, hm sare frnds club me the..

Flashback :-
Naina, Ali nd othr frnds are dancing in a club..
Naina- ali sayad tmhara phone vibrate kr rha..
Ali- kisi ka cll h, hum baat kr k aate h..
Aftr sometym...
Ali comes- naina!! mum ka cll tha.. wo mum nd dad shimla aa rhe h" hume airport jaana hoga..
Naina- chlo, mai v chlti hu..
Ali- ni.. tm enjoy kro..
Naina- guys I m leaving.. mai v chl rhi ali..

they both reach airport by separate car..

Ali sees his parents nd greets them...
they reach in parking..
Ali's mum- ali, aap ek kaam kariye..kaafi rat ho gyi h, sayad avi home delivery na kare to aap naina ki car se chle jaiye hotel se kch pack kara lijiyega...
Ali- ok.. ye lijiye mere keys. . nd paa thik se drive kijiyega.
Ali's dad (laughs) - accha. to ab hmare bete Hume hidayat denge..

Ali mum dad nikl jate h.. nd ali nd naina hotel jo taraf jate h..

naina-ali on way to home..
Naina (sees the car park in the mid road) - ye to tmhari car h na ali?
Ali- hn.. sayad kch prblm aa gyi hogi..
Ali stops the car nd ali-naina utar k aage jane lgte h.. bt they hbide, jaise hi wo kch goons ko dkhte h hath me gun liye..
Ali k mum nd dad ko unlogo ne pakad rkha.. bt kch bande uske mum dad ko churrate h..goons forest ki taraf bhagne lgte h nd uske piche kch aur log jate h.. bt jate jate wo shoot krte h nd ali ki mum ko goli lg jati h... at the same tym...samne se ek goli chlti h, jo ali k dad ko lgti h.. (the prsn is BC)

Ali runs towards his mum nd dad..
Ali-maaa...
Naina (shockd) -ye to kma..BC h ye to...
*BC apni car me baith k chle jate h*
Ali screams in pain.. dono ne dum tod diya tha..
Flash back ovr

Ali (crying) - hmne apna sb kch kho diya us din.. koi dard ni smjh skta hamara.. naina ne btaya ki wo BC tha..Maine socha ki mai KMA aaunga, aur us insan ko jinda ni chorrunga jisne hmse hmari duniya chinn li.. naina ko hmne bht smjhaya pr wo sb kch chorr k yahan aa gyi apne bhaiye se kah k, hmari madad k liye... aaj v inhone kch ni btaya aapko (raj) .. hmare pas to khone k liye kch v ni.. pr naina ne to hmari wajah se sb kch kho diya, koi intrst ni tha inka yahan aane me, bs apni dosti nibhane aayi h ye yahan.. bs ek meher kijiye, naina ka nam mt lijiyega is mttr me... plzzz...

Evry1 are in tears..
Raj- tmne jo kiya wo glt tha, tarika glt tha...alekh! ali ko rum le jao.. nd ali, hm sb h na tmhari family.. naina jaisi frnd h na tmhari..

Alekh leaves with ali..
Alekh- tune ek bar sacchai to btayi hoti..saamne se jaa kr maarta us BC ko..
alekh hugs ali.. nd ali cries his heart out..

Raj nd naina jst luking at each other, sayad dono ko koi wrd hi ni mil rhe the kch kahne ko..

Raj stands nd goes to naina..he wipes out her tears...
Raj - I m srry..
He kneels down nd comes closer to her, dono ko ni pta ki kya kahna chahiye, he comes closer to naina.. closer closer closer, dono k lips itne close... naina apni eyes close kr leti h, Raj also closes his eyes nd kisses her on forehead..

Raj realizes ki ye bs ek dream tha.. he is still on his bed..nd naina, on sofa..
Naina (stands) -sir, I need some sleep.. I shld go..
Raj (goes to naina) - I m srry..pr..
Naina (interrupt) - its ok.. rajveer sir... (she leaves)Naina in her crying a lot remembering raj's rude behaviour...
Raj in his rum,.remembring the same, nd hitting the punching bag in anger...
Raj screams- how cn I do this to naina??!! *he hits on wall by hnd and it starts bleeding*

dono ne ek dusre ko hurt kiya aur ab khud ko kr rhe h.. q ni smjhte ki dono ek duje se jude.. chot ek ko lgegi, to dard dusre ko v hogi hi..

Mrng,
Raj wakes up with the phone beep..
Raj - han nav bolo.
Nav- BC ko kya hua? kisne kiya hamla, kch pta lga?
Raj- hmm..mtlb ni, kch v pta ni chla..
Nav- tu thik h na?
Raj- hn..
Nav- tmhari voice itni low q sound kr rhi?
Raj- kvi teri nind kharab krunga, to pta chlega.. aur shalu ka kya hua?
Nav- aaj krunga bat, sham me btata hu.. aur ek kam kroge mera
Raj- na kahu to..
Nav- Naina se bat kara dena...maine cll kiya tha hstl bt naina lyn pe aayi ni..
Raj- ok.. kara dunga.. chlo fir bad me krte h bat...

Classes..
Jaise hi maj bhargav ki class strt hone wali thi..
Huda to naina- tu ja ab, raj sir k pas jldi.. (Naina leaves *expressionless*

Huda ek packet nikal kr uss khol deta h, nd a lots of cockroach comes out.

Cadets strts coming outside the class.. huda v wo packet le kr nikl jata h.. bhargav comes there nd sees ki class me bht sare cockroach h..
Bhargav- come to the ground cadets.. gather there, I'll be there in 10 min...

All cadets goes to ground..
Huda- plzzz.. dkho kch ho skta h kya. .
Yudi sees a pipe.. nd huda se ja kr kch kahta h..

Huda nd yudi brings a saw kind of thing nd strts cutting the pipe.. some cadets strts hitting the pipe..

Naina raj k pas ni jati h, Raj is searching for her..

At ground,
Maj bharagav arrives, nd sbhi lyn me gather ho jate h..
Huda- shit yar! thoda aur late se ni aa skta tha. .
pipe me bs thoda hi cut lga tha, nd thoda thoda paani aa rha tha bahar..but achanak pani ki force ki wajah se, sara pani bahar aane lga..
Bhargav- wat is dis..
All cadets strts running away...
Huda- yeah!! agr aise hi pani aaya fir to pura ground thodi hi Der me pani pani ho jayega.. (strts laughing)

Bhargav shouts- kisi staff ko bulao...main tank k pas ja kr bolt kro..
Huda (sad exprssn)
Abhi comes there- wahan jane me to 1 hr approx lg jayenge (winks at huda)
Huda smiles..
Abhi-cadets go in.
Bhargav- sb inhi logo ne kiya h..
Abhi leaves without replying...

Raj sees Abhi..
Raj- Abhi! Sir thik h na ab??
Abhi- hn...he is prfctly fyn...
Raj- avi aaye tm?
Abhi- hn.. BC transfer ki bat kr rha tha..
Raj- naraj ho?
Abhi- ni..
Raj hugs him. - I knw, bht naraj ho.. milte h class k bad..
Abhi nods, nd leaves

Huda comes to naina nd infrms her li bhargav ki class me unlogo ne kya kiya.. nd they all laughs..
Raj comes there nd calls for naina..
Naina comes there nd raj notices a cut at her forehead... nd agn remmbrs ki kaise usne naina ko dhakka de kr niche gira diyaa tha..

Raj- aap aaj aayi ni.
Naina- apko aisi koi training dene k liye allot ni kiya gya h.. favour mt kijiye..rajveer sir..
Raj- oh!! ek pl me sb kch badal jata h na.Naina- srry sir..Mjhe smjh ni aaya..
Raj (smiles hopelessly) - Nthng. . koi bat ni..
Naina leaves..
Raj- cadet singh!
Naina turns.
Raj- nav ne cll kiya tha. .
Naina- mai kr lungi bat sir.. (she leaves)

Bhargav goes go bc nd use cadets k bare md btata h..
BC- naina ka suspnsn cancel kro..
Bhargav- sir fir to aise, jo v bat manwani hogi , wo manwa lenge..
BC- naina ne utni badi v glti to ni ki h..
Bhargav- mai uska suspension cancel ni krunga..
BC- u hv to...dats an order..
bhargav leaves furiously.


Ali comes to raj..
Ali- sir.. ab kya hoga
Raj *smiles* - kch ni hoga.. I m going to hide it all.. (taps his shldr) BC ko jyada kch ni hua isliye, wrna saja jrur hoti..
Ali (without a wrd, sad)
Raj - go nd njoy with ur frnds..med le lena... go!! (ali leaves)

Abhi-naina
Abhi- naina! there is a gd news..
Naina- kya sir?
Abhi- nav ka cll tha.. jldi hi engagembt hogi..
Naina- oo wow!! means all set
Abhi- yes.. I m vry happy for him.. nd tmhare liye ek aur v gd news h..
Naina- wat?
Abhi- bhargav ne tmhe class attnd krne ki prnsn de di..u will get a notice soon..
Naina (joyful) - that's great..mai bta k aati hu sbko..
Naina runs, raste me raj se takra jati h.. both abt to fall bt raj wall pe hnd rkh k sambhal leta h..
Naina- I m srry sir..
Raj- mjhe bat krni h tmse..
Naina- yes sir boliye..
Raj- chlte chlte bat kare?
Naina *to ignr* - sir nav bhaiya de bat kr lijiye..kaha tha unhone (she leaves, raj sad)

Alekh-ali-yudi sitting together.. batein shatein ho rhi thi.
Huda comes there..
Alekh-baith na huda tu v..
Huda- na re.. biwi h yahan...uske sath ni baithna
Alekh- yar.. prblm solve kr lena, biwi se bat kr k..
Huda- ni yar.. mn ni.. (he leaves)

Naina enters boys hstl.. (evry1 luking suprusingly at her) she goes to huda's rum.. nd knocks
Naina (big smile on her face)- huda! !
Huda- haye!! tu yahan? Kya bat h!! mjhse milne aayi h.. (flrtingly)
Naina- chup kr (hits on his shldr)... thnx, thnx a lot.
Huda- thnx mt bol..thnx bolna ka v tarika hona chahiye..
Naina- accha.. kya h wo tarika..
Huda- meri shilpa, ruhi, anjli, aur v h.. wo sb to kiss de kr bolti thi...
Naina- teri to..
Huda (interrupt) - pr tjhse, kiss lega hi kaun..isliye tu thnx mt bol..
Naina- arre.. mai buri hu kya? koi q ni chahega..
Huda- mtlb tu chahti h ki mai..
Naina- go to hell ( she turns to leave)
Huda- meri maa. thnx q kaha btati ja..
Naina- bhargav sir ne..
Huda- ok ok..got it..
Naina- mai avi jati hu, alekh se v milna h..

Nav calls raj..
Nav- naina se bat hui thi meri.. usne btaya ki tmdono me fir se kch hua..
Raj- hmm...anjane me glti ho gyi mjhse..
Nav- sb thik hi jayega.. aur, tm, nav nd abhi kl hi aa rhe ho..
Raj- avi to..
Nav- bs bs.. academy me tu manage kr lega.. pta h mjhe..
Raj- accha thik h..
Nav- Abhi se bat ho chuki h, wo chla jayega akash ko lane.. aur tm naina k sath yahi aa jana direct. .
Raj- mai lete aata akash
Nav- wo sirf tmhara..hmara v bhai h..tu bs pahuch jana yahan. .
Raj- tmhari behan k sath jaunga to pahuch to jaunga, pr kis haal me, iski koi guarantee ni...
Nav- bs bs..meri behan ki burai ni..aur tu hi bta dena use..
Raj - ok.. i'll do it..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...,feels bad for ali & ali-naina friendship is awesome naina has not told anything about ali to anyone & love huda's plan 1st dyssentry nd 2nd water love it loved their unity now plz make raj-naina together too continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Nice update...Raj really treated Naina very badly...atlast he got to know the truth...Naina has started loving Raj...Navin's engagement is fixed...n Raj has to take Naina with him...lets see kya karti hai Naina Raj Ki halat 😉 ...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Kyaa yaar parwa hi dii raj ko thappar...kahin ye nafrat se pyaar na ho jaye...
So i am a new in forums so plz can u send me a pm whenever u update...plzzz nd aak ur frnds also to do so when de update dere fics...
Nd ya update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Plzzz continue yar nice story plzz conti
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
I loved this story like anything...plz plz plz continue writing... I have become a die hard fan of this story ... Wating for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Hey its an awesome ff...loved d storyline wit which u r working...do update soon nd pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haii di this story is so beautiful. I have just read it. Why don't u update. Come on are u OK friend.please don't stop this.update soon

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