Love Hurts But Never Ends..... raj naina lrl ff

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hiii
friends its new fic of my friend amrita ...
i m posting on her behalf hope u guys like it
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love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Luv hurts bt nvr ends



Introduction




This is a story of KMA (kanchanjhanga military
academy), best miltary academy in india...
This story shows, how life of the characters of
this stry changes during the struggle in academy,
exact kahu to lyf ki struggle..
Isi zindagi ki ladai ko rangeen bnane pyar dastak
deta h, bt luv ki journey easy ni hoti.. pr true luv
kvi badlta ni.. zindagi me kvi sb Kch hasil hota h ,
to dusre hi pal sb chinn jata h.. rah jati h to
hmare dil me mohabbat us insan k liye" jise hum
chah k v ni bhula skte, sayad mar k v ni bhula
skte..



so here I present a nvr ending luv...
Three besties, captain rajveer shekawat, captain
naveen alluhwalia, captain abhimanyu.. the trio
are best friends.. can do anythng for each
other...


Faculty members of kma :-



Brigadier Chandralok..


the three captains mentioned above, rajveer,
naveen" abhimanyu. .



Maj bhargav

Dr. Ritu Misha


Dr. shalini (naveen's gf)



Cadets
Naina singh alluhwalia (naveen's sister)


Puja ghai

Alekh sharma

Amardeep huda

Ali baig

Yaduvansh shaini (yudi)


nd some new entry will be followed in the mid of
story..
sb ka character k bare me v, u will get to know"
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love hurts but never ends
Part 1

Story starts with a wonderful view of KMA surrounded by the beauty of nature, the wonderful hills enhancing the beauty of KMA...

Bt inside scenerio of KMA, the academy was in complete silence despite of the thousands cadets there...

In the office of BC
BC- sare 1st year cadet aaj report krne wale h.. aap logon ko dhyan rkhna h ki koi mess na ho..
officer- u don't worry sir hm sb dekh lenge...

Main gate KMA
Ek boy , gate keeper se behas kr rha hota h..
boy-oye tm meri bahan ko andar q nhi le jane de rhe ho??? tmhe pta ni ki tm kise rok rhe ho!!
guard-are pagal ho kya ye andar nhi ja skti hai...
huda-q nhi tm...
naveen come there nd guard narrate whole story...
nav-really??? hahahahaha cadet aap apni bhains ko andar nhi le ja skte hai...
huda-sir aap use bhains mt kho.. (in full dramatic way) behan h sir wo meri, meri jaan h..
nav-haha. . cadet aap use andar ni le ja skte hain nd andar jaiye, wrna aoko v apni behan k sath, yahi rhna hoga...
Huda- sir ji smjhiye na.. plzz sir, behan h sir..
Nav- cadet.. cadet name??
huda- Amardeep huda sir!! nam to..
Nav interrupts- ni suna h... nd aap ab andar jaiye..apni bhains, srry apni behan ko yahi chorr dijiyega...
Huda- kya sir ji..
Nav- cadet huda!! go in..
Huda- yes sir..
nd he enters the college running...
Huda inside college...
sees q girl, jo ek ladke se chilla chilla k batein kr rhi thi..

girl to a boy- kaise ldke ho yaar.. ek ldki ki madad ni kr skte.. ja ja.. kide padenge, teri kismat kvi tera sath ni degi..
Boy- arre.. chorr de na behan.. jane de mjhe..

huda- haye!! ldki to badi shondi h..
*huda goes to the girl*
Huda - hi.. mai huda...amardeeo huda...
Girl- oh.. kinna accha nam h.. bilkul mst..
Huda (flirtingly)- ohh.. tjhe accha lga...
Girl- hn.. tmhara nam v aur tm v.. bht mast..
Huda- to shondiye apna v naam bta de..
Girl- Puja ghai.. and ab to hum kafi acche frnds bn chuke h.. ryt?
Huda- bilkul.. frnd hi to, puja..
Puja- to ek kam kr.. ye sare bag pakad aur mere rum pe le chl..
Huda (sees 5 big bags) -wat??
Puja- frnd h na?, bst frnd? chl na..
Huda- mjhe.. kch kaam tha mjhe.. chlta hu..
Puj- arre. . inna thak gyi hu.. koi to ye saman pahuncha do..

Huda rushes from there nd sees a girl..
Huda- yahan to hottiee ki kami ni..
Girl- wat??
Huda- I m huda... bhul gyi??
Girl- mai tmhe ni janti..
Huda- mai v ni janta.. (comes closer) ab jaan lete h ek dusre ko..
Girl- excuse me.. I hv to go..

A girl standing behind huda sees this.. aww, she is naina :-*
naina to herslf- huda!! I hate these type of boys.. sirf flirt krna hi jante h..

Naina turns back to go.. huda uski choti khol k jane lgta h...
Naina turns- huda! ! I won't leave u..
she goes behind huda..

nd he saw a guy wearing the same colour jo huda ne phna tha..naina ko lgta h ki wo hi huda h..
Naina- hey!! tm smjhte kya ho khud ko??
Raj- mai?? wat??
Naina- itne innocently act krne ki jrurat ki..
Raj- aap kah kya rhi h??
Naina- accha.. ab to tmhe kch pta hi ni hoga na??
Raj- dekhiye miss..
Naina- kya dekhu? tm jaise ldko ko mjhe thik krna aata h..
Raj (loudly) - dekhiye mai..
Naina (screams) - ek to glti krte ho.. upar se chilla rhe ho??
Raj- chilla aap rhi h..
Naina (aur jor se) - to?? kya kr loge.. aur chilaungi..
Raj- aap kya kr lengi??
Naina slaps raj..
Raj in anger shockd. .
Naina- ye..kr skti hu..
Raj (totally angry) - u..

A girl interrupts- aap cadet naina ho na??
Naina- yes..
Girl- apka rum dkh lijiye aap.. chliye..
Naina leaves..
Raj (anger)- naina!! first year cadet!!

hope u lyk it :-*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice
lets see age kya hota h
itni gadbad ho gayi ab raj nhi chodega naina ko ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow beautiful update...,naina slapped raj now thats some first meeting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Nice...aate hi thapar ow bhi raj ko 😊 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Luv hurts but nvr ends
Part 2

In grls hostl rum,
Naina-hi

Girl- tu hi meri rummate kya h.. kb se bore ho rhi thi yaar..u knw, bht thak v gyi hu..pta h itna heavy bag, khud se utha k layi hu..tu smjh skti h na, hnd ka to bs band baj gya h...upar se inni bhuk..yAr mai to sayad ab mar hi jaungi.( naina getting bore-uff yaar ab bs kro )...ghar ki v yaad aa rhi..coffee v ni mili..yahan to mobl ntwrk v ni aa rha.. pta ni kya karu..koi frnd v ni..tu v inna late se aayi. arre, mai to bhul hi gyi naam kya h tera?

Naina (uff.. nonstop bak bak)- Naina, naina naam h mera.. aur tmhara ( yaar kahin pure family ka naam to ni btayegi na)

Girl- mera naam to puja h.. bt mjhe ye naam kch khas psnd ni.. bt mai khud ki fav hu..agr tmhe v ye naam unna psnd ni to koi v swt sa naam de skti ho..I won't mind ( naina thinks-yaar ye fir shuru ho gyi) ... mjhe apna surname...

a girl intrrpts- Naina?? tmhe princi (BC) bula rhe h..

Naina ( thnk god!! wrna iski bak bak) -Ok.. I m coming

In BC 's chamber..
Naina at door(OMG!! RAJ IS ALREADY THERE)
BC- Captain Rajveer, ( naina-wat?? captain??? God!!) aap sare cadets ko attend kr lijiye, infrm them to gather in hall..

Naina-Sir, may I come? (yaar I m sure ki isne meri cmpln kr di)

BC- Yes..

Naina- Sir, jo kch v hua, wo bs ek gltfehmi ki wajah se .. mjhs ni pta tha ki ye.. I mean Mjhe lga ki...mtlb

Raj makes angry look

BC ( confusd)- Wait.. wat r u speaking?? kaun si gltfehmi..ok, leave.. tnhare room ki prblm solve ho gyi?

Naina- Yes sir ( thnk god is cptn ne kch btaya ni)BC- Bt nxt tym se, har choti baat k liye, mere paas mt aana..

Naina-Ok sir, srry. ( mind me to sirf cptn ko slap krne ki baat, ye kya kr diya maine)

BC-Go!!

Naina leaves nd is waiting outside the chamber for raj, aftr smtym raj comes

Naina-Sir , mjhe lga aap huda ho.. usne mere baal.. mtlb bs ek galtfehmi thi aur maine glti se apko...sir plzz forgive me..

Raj-I don't want to listen, go away

Naina-Sir plzz aap maaf kr dijiye.. wrna mai ni jaungi, wo bs ek mstk tha.. aap mjhe v slap kr lijiye.. bt plzz forgive me..

Raj- Ok.. leave...

Naina- Sir, aapne sach me maaf kiya h na..

Raj (in anger)- Kr diya h maine maaf, now go..

Naina-bt sir aap to avi v...mai to kah rhi hu aap v badla le lijiye, maar lijiye, bt maaf to kr dijiye

Raj (vry angry) *slaps* - Happy now?? now leave...

Naina shckd touches her cheek thinks yaar isne to sach me maar diya nd they leave...

In boys hstl
huda in rum with his rummates

huda- yaar.. tu itna chup q baitha h.. nd mum ne name kya rkha h.. ;-)

Boy-Ali naam h hmara...

huda-nd myslf dashing amardeep huda..bdw hall me gather hona h savi ko in half an hour...

Ali- han..Pta chla hume..

Naina in her rum with puja..

Naina thinking ( captain h to kya.. sachme maar diya usne... use to mai.)

Puja- Chal oye naina!! hall m gather hona h..

Naina- han!! chng kr leti hu..

Puja- han yaar.. wahi boring uniform..yaar ye uniform wala rule pta ni kisne bnaya.. mtlb Iss fashion k wrld me v, inne boring clothes..

Naina- tu bak bak bnd kr nd get ready...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update...,plz pm me
Edited by tr_eta - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
sare cadets ka aapas me intro ho gaya
update soon
i m waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Nice update...atlast Naina Ki misunderstanding dur hui...n usne Raj ko bola badla le le usse n slap her...n Raj slapped her...its going very interesting 😊

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