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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

aww sanju mere liye update tha😳 Love u🤗

and So emotional update tha yaar 😭
meri poor Asya😭
that tanu😡😡😡
Continue soon🤗

Haanji aapke liye tha.
Love uu tooo
Will do it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome chapter yaar sanju
i like it soo much
countinue soon...

thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

awesome chapter yaar sanju
i like it soo much
countinue soon...

thanks for the pm dear

Thnx paru.
Glad u liked it.
Surely will do.

Not a prob.
Love
Sanju

Happy New Year
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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER 3


"Paas toh hum apne paas aapko laake rahenge Jammy, Tanveer naam hai mera. Kaha tha na Zoya, tum iss khel mai Kachi ho, haar jaogi. Dekhliya na nateeja, tch tch tch"*I will get you close to me Jammy, anyhow afterall My name is Tanveer. I told you Zoya, you are very new in this game, will loose. Now saw the consequences.*Tanveer spoke to herself with an evil expressions.


In the Morning Zoya came to the dining table. "Good Morning Phuphi, Nazma" and then she sat down on the chair. Asad was also sitting there. Both were ignoring each other.

"Good Morning Ms.Farooqui" as soon as the words left his throat , Zoya looked up and their eyes met. She nodded and took the Sandwich from the plate and poured down the coffe when a little coffee fell on the table. She closed her eyes.

"Arey Yeh Kya Zoya, aapne coffe giradi. Aap jaanti hai na Jammy ko table par ek bhi nishaan kitna bura lagta hai."*Oh what did you do Zoya, you made poured coffee on the table. You know right that Jammy hates even an spot on table.*Tanveer came and with a Napkin cleared it. Nazma and Dilshaad groaned. Suddenly all the view of last night came in Zoya's mind. She faked smile at her and then spoke "Oh Sorry Tannu, tumhe apne Jammy ki itni fikar hai toh kal sai jaldi aakar sabko khana paros diya karna. Sahi kaha na Mr.Khan"*Oh Sorry Tannu, you have soo mucn concern for your Jammy, why don't you come from tomorrow and serve the food to everyone. I said right, right Mr.Khan*and then she went banging the food plate on the table. Dilshaad sighed and went after Zoya. Nazma gave disgusting look to Tanveer and then left to her college. Asad took his head in his palms and sighed and then got up and went to his room leaving an angry Tanveer behind.

"Lets see Zoya what happens, for how many days Jammy will stay away from me. My name is also Tanveer. I have to do something soon." She said to herself and then left to her room.



Asad after taking his laptop and other nesessary items moved out of his room when saw Zoya going in the garden. He kept his things on the couch and went behind Zoya.

"Oh God why are you doing this to me. What I had done to you. I just asked for a normal life with Mr.Khan and you made fun of my feelings." She sighed and sat on the bench.

"Just trust me once, maybe you will get all your answers." Asad hearing her said and sat beside her on the bench. Zoya looked at him surprisingly. "Mr.Khan, you here. You should go to your office." She said not meeting his gaze,and stood up to go when he stopped her by holding her hand.

She stopped and looked at him with teary eyes. He came forward and cleared her eyes. He moved more closer to her and hugged her.

She first struggled to get out but later got melt into those soulful arms. She sighed, how much she waited and cried at night to be in these soothing arms. But again those blurr images came infront of her of last night and she pushed him. "Just Go Mr.Khan. Please, don't make it difficult for me to forget you" she shouted.

"Why?" He asked all defeated in a whisper. "Because I can't see you with someone else but I did. I have to Mr.Khan. I couldn't act all ok and like before when I know that you are no more mine" she holded his collor and shouted at him while shaking him with herself.

"You don't have to. I am your, what you all saw was not the truth. And Zoya I am just yours, no have any right on me." He said holding her close with holding her wrists on his chest.

She looked at him all teary and then whispered "But people will point at you Mr.Khan because no one knows the truth. And after that you are supposed to be with Tanveer. People will ask you to Marry her Mr.Khan" and then she backed off and turned to go.

"I need an answer Zoya. Do you trust me?, beacause if you do I can fight with people. How could you expect me to Marry her when I Just Love You!" He said aloud as she was going and she stopped midway.

TuHi Meri Jaan, Tuu Hi Hai Jahaan
Tuhi Meri Manzil, Tere Ishq Mai Main Kurbaan

Ishq Mai Diwangi Ki Had Sai Guzar Jaun
Tere Pyaar Mai Aaj Main Jee Kar Mar Jaun
Ishq Mai Jalte Hai Hum Raat din, Haan Yeh Mera Dil Na Mane ; Tere Bin, Tere Bin

She turned around and he came to her and cleared her eyes. "I..I trust you Mr.Khan, more that I do on myself, on anyone. How would you fight with them?" She asked him.

"We have to make out what happened and why. We need to sort out this mess. Thank You so much Zoya for trusting me. I promise you will be the only bride of mine, always and forever. Would You?, would you help in this?" He asked making her near him by holding her from waist. She looked at him and nodded and then they hugged.

This was all Asad needed. He didn't want anyone to trust him but Zoya. If she trusted him then he can prove to the world he is right. He hadn't done anything wrong that he had do something to show people, to keep their status high in those eyes. He hadn't done anything wrong to hide from those people, those poeple who themselves might have low character but can judge anyone on what they heard. Whereas Zoya found her heaven in those arms. She again felt loved and protected. That was the most safe place for her, now, and will be forever. When the two lovers were enjoying the feeling of being loved, two pair of eyes were also smiling through tears. They were of Zoya's Aapi and Dilshaad. Yes, her Aapi came to take Zoya back after seeing the reunion of the two lovers, she was confident that her Zoya is safe.


Edited by --MinOch-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

I don't know if the length of the Chapter is short than others or not but I didn't found any more words to fill in this. I don't know if this was expected or not or did every one liked how I molded it or not but in the show I didn't liked a bit how Zoya did not trust him. Trust is the most important base of a relation and so I showed. I also did this because I can not see Hero all crying and sad😆. Hope I was able to get on the expectations and if not , then tell me I'll try to be in future.

This chapter is not for one but for
all those who are reading and will be reading hopefully (Fingers Crossed).

Wish You All A Very Happy New Year.

LOVE
<3
SANJU ^_^

Edited by --MinOch-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
res
unresss

wooow
zoya tanu fi8 was so superv
amazing darling
u r rocking.
goood keep it up


awesome dearest
but a bit short try longer parts.
Rest everything fantastic
Edited by ashlesha2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arre maine Pm bhi ni kiya aur aap yaha agayi. Chaliye aapne apni 1st place leli.
Mai Bhi book kardu 2nd place Aju kai liye, Shailu kai liye aur Ayu kai liye.
Sue tu ayegi jab bhi tere liye bhi karli book.

Originally posted by: ajuswa19

AWW..MERE SANJU...I LOVE U😳😳

TUMNE PUKARA AUR MEIN CHALI AE...😆
SANJU! I LOVED THIS PART ...
N YES! TODAY I WAS STALKING U...😆
KYUNKI...KAL TUMSE ACHE SE BAAT NHI HUE..
KAISE HO AB?
TABIYAT THIK HAI NA?😳

Edited by --MinOch-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --MinOch--





This chapter is not for one but for all those who are reading and will be reading hopefully (Fingers Crossed).

Wish You All A Very Happy New Year.



Thanks sanju di🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --MinOch--

Glad U did Aju. Love U Ridhima.

LOVE U MORE ARMAAN!😉😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --MinOch--

Arre maine Pm bhi ni kiya aur aap yaha agayi. Chaliye aapne apni 1st place leli.

Mai Bhi book kardu 2nd place Aju kai liye, Shailu kai liye aur Ayu kai liye.
Sue tu ayegi jab bhi tere liye bhi karli book.

AWW..MERE SANJU...I LOVE U😳😳
TUMNE PUKARA AUR MEIN CHALI AE...😆
SANJU! I LOVED THIS PART ...
N YES! TODAY I WAS STALKING U...😆
KYUNKI...KAL TUMSE ACHE SE BAAT NHI HUE..
KAISE HO AB?
TABIYAT THIK HAI NA?😳

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