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San

@slippedaffairs

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey Everyone..!! I am Sanju.

I had entered IF just because of my love for DMG but as the time passed, I just grew into an IFian, rather than just being a DMGian. This is my 3rd attempt on something other than AR. I had written MehBeer OS and had also written OneShot on ArShi. And now I have decided to write on AsYa (KaBhi).

This concept was on request by an AsYa/KaBhian on her b'day as an OS but that was 6 months ago, so what I thought is to , make it a SS/FF.

Its Name is THE IMPETUOUS CORRELATION.

Its Starts when Tanveer Takes Asad to an deserted Area. And Zoya comes and found him unconscious with Tanveer.

Be Crazy and Comment and Like and Criticize.

Hope You Will Like It and Give me loads of New Readers and Friends.

Love

Sanju ^_^

Happy New Year.

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San

@slippedaffairs

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Posted: 10 years ago

INDEX

BLURB- Scroll Down

Chapter 1 - Page 6

Chapter 2 - Page 12

Chapter 3 - Page17

Chapter 4 - Page22

Chapter 5 - Page 26
Chapter 6 & Last - Page 28

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San

@slippedaffairs

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

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"MR. Khan aapki koi galti nahi , par meri hai. Aapse pyaar karna, meri zindagi ki Sabse badi galti, sabse bada gunah hai. I hate you Mr.Khan, I Hate You."*Mr.Khan you have no fault, but its mine. Loving you, is the biggest Mistake, biggest Sin of my life. I hate you Mr.Khan, I Hate You.*

"Zoyaaa...!!" Asad shouts and stumbles on ground

"Asad, I am ashamed of calling you My Son."

"Bhaijaan.!! We didn't expected you to do something like this."

"Ammi..Listen"Asad moves forward to justify him.

"Bass..!! Uss Phool si bachi pai kyaa beet rahi hai tumhe andaza hai?"*What the flower like child is going through, do you have any idea?*

"Tanveer what do you think you won?, no but you lost. You lost your dignity yourself and I promise to Allah Miyaa and Myself that I will bring back the dignity Mr.Khan had lost even at the cost of loosing him"

"Let the game begun Zoya, lets see who looses. You or Me."

Suddenly Mr. Khan comes and all what Zoya do is getting lost in him but then controlled her emotions and shot a glare on Tanveer "I have nothing to loose Tannu, I had given all what I had, to you. And the rest was lost, long time back" and a tear escaped her eyes.

"Bhaijaan Koi Kuch bhi Soche, Mai jaanta hoon aap sahi hai"*Bhaijaan whatever anyone thinks of you, I know that You are right.*

"Thank You For Being there" and then he hugged him and sobbed quietly.

"Kya Aapko yeh Nigah Qubool Hai?"

"Ji Qubool Hai" and she smiled and shyed.

"Ji Qubool.."

"Qubool Nahi hai" and she cutted him in between and all the other people do is just stare.

"I love You Zoya" and then they hugged and all what she do was whisper back"I..I love You Too Mr.Khan" but unfortunately he couldn't hear it.

Okay So Guys This was the Blurb. Hope You Like It. Do not forget to press like Tab and post you valuable comments and suggestion. Also I will be dedicating each part, so Enjoy..!!

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Amrita

@Amrita

Achiever

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Posted: 10 years ago

brilliant updates

sorry for delay😳

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome story

Excited for updates

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 30

Posted: 10 years ago

heyyaa babyyy
wowww AsYa ff...
nice starting
would luv to read more.. nd i'll pm :D
luv u

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

I love the concept

Please do continue

☺️

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OrchidsMaya

@OrchidsMaya

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

just loved it i don't have words to explain how much i liked it

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megha bansal

@megbans

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Nice concept... Do continue soon

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Aju

@ajuswa19

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

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sanju!!!!!! 😳 I LOVE U🤗...MERI JAAN KYA BANNER HAI...BANNER DEKH K HI MERI JAAN NIKAL AE...😆 AUR JALDI PART POST KAR...MAIN YEHI HOON...😉

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