The Impetuous Correlation ||AsYa SS || Page 28 2|10 || Completed

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Hey Everyone..!! I am Sanju.

I had entered IF just because of my love for DMG but as the time passed, I just grew into an IFian, rather than just being a DMGian. This is my 3rd attempt on something other than AR. I had written MehBeer OS and had also written OneShot on ArShi. And now I have decided to write on AsYa (KaBhi).

This concept was on request by an AsYa/KaBhian on her b'day as an OS but that was 6 months ago, so what I thought is to , make it a SS/FF.

Its Name is THE IMPETUOUS CORRELATION.

Its Starts when Tanveer Takes Asad to an deserted Area. And Zoya comes and found him unconscious with Tanveer.

Be Crazy and Comment and Like and Criticize.

Hope You Will Like It and Give me loads of New Readers and Friends.

Love

Sanju ^_^

Happy New Year.




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INDEX

BLURB- Scroll Down

Chapter 1 - Page 6

Chapter 2 - Page 12

Chapter 3 - Page17

Chapter 4 - Page22

Chapter 5 - Page 26

Chapter 6 & Last - Page 28


Edited by -Wandstruck. - 8 years ago
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BLURB


"MR. Khan aapki koi galti nahi , par meri hai. Aapse pyaar karna, meri zindagi ki Sabse badi galti, sabse bada gunah hai. I hate you Mr.Khan, I Hate You."*Mr.Khan you have no fault, but its mine. Loving you, is the biggest Mistake, biggest Sin of my life. I hate you Mr.Khan, I Hate You.*

"Zoyaaa...!!" Asad shouts and stumbles on ground


"Asad, I am ashamed of calling you My Son."

"Bhaijaan.!! We didn't expected you to do something like this."

"Ammi..Listen"Asad moves forward to justify him.

"Bass..!! Uss Phool si bachi pai kyaa beet rahi hai tumhe andaza hai?"*What the flower like child is going through, do you have any idea?*


"Tanveer what do you think you won?, no but you lost. You lost your dignity yourself and I promise to Allah Miyaa and Myself that I will bring back the dignity Mr.Khan had lost even at the cost of loosing him"

"Let the game begun Zoya, lets see who looses. You or Me."

Suddenly Mr. Khan comes and all what Zoya do is getting lost in him but then controlled her emotions and shot a glare on Tanveer "I have nothing to loose Tannu, I had given all what I had, to you. And the rest was lost, long time back" and a tear escaped her eyes.


"Bhaijaan Koi Kuch bhi Soche, Mai jaanta hoon aap sahi hai"*Bhaijaan whatever anyone thinks of you, I know that You are right.*

"Thank You For Being there" and then he hugged him and sobbed quietly.


"Kya Aapko yeh Nigah Qubool Hai?"

"Ji Qubool Hai" and she smiled and shyed.

"Ji Qubool.."

"Qubool Nahi hai" and she cutted him in between and all the other people do is just stare.


"I love You Zoya" and then they hugged and all what she do was whisper back"I..I love You Too Mr.Khan" but unfortunately he couldn't hear it.


Okay So Guys This was the Blurb. Hope You Like It. Do not forget to press like Tab and post you valuable comments and suggestion. Also I will be dedicating each part, so Enjoy..!!
Edited by --MinOch-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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brilliant updates
sorry for delay😳
Edited by _Amrita_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story
Excited for updates
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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heyyaa babyyy
wowww AsYa ff...
nice starting
would luv to read more.. nd i'll pm :D
luv u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love the concept
Please do continue
☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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just loved it i don't have words to explain how much i liked it
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Nice concept... Do continue soon
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sanju!!!!!! 😳 I LOVE U🤗...MERI JAAN KYA BANNER HAI...BANNER DEKH K HI MERI JAAN NIKAL AE...😆 AUR JALDI PART POST KAR...MAIN YEHI HOON...😉

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