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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Interesting Part.😊
How can this Tanveer😡do like that...disgusting.
ASYA(KABHI) conversation was so Nice.😊
What will ASYA(KABHI) and Ayaan will do?Waiting for it.😊
I hope everything will be fine.😊
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
YAS
Holi crossover gonna be lit

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
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Continue Soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Haww Armaan yeh kya tha?😡
inna chottu sa update?🥱🤢
but i loved it!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shaam ko ek aur ud pakka! :) Theek hai Rihima?
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Originally posted by: --MinOch--

Shaam ko ek aur ud pakka! :) Theek hai Rihima?

ok baby 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! wonderful update dear...loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
CHAPTER 6

"Zoya aap ready ho gayi?" Nazma asked as she came in her room.

"Yes Nazma and this is so hard to tie yaar." Zoya said struggling to tie the knot of her salwar, as she always had elastic in those.

And then they heard a laugh from outside and looked at Asad who was laughing at the commotion.

Zoya gasped and turned around. "Aah! Allah Miya, do you have some shame or not Mr.Khan? I was wearing the salwar and you peeped in!"

"You should've closed the door. And I didn't peek any thing!" Asad said as he realised she had tied it already and so truned around.

"All men are the same, aap unsab ki tarah hai. Kaun Mard yeh kahega ki usne kuch dekha. Wo bhi-"

"Wo bhi kya?" He cutted her.

"Wo bhi itni beautiful, intelligent and smart ladki kai saamne!" She pointed a finger at him.

"Beautiful, intelligent and smart, please Ms.Farooqui come out of the assumptions. You are just an idiot."

Zoya's mouth fell open. "Haww, Mr.Khan how could you say like that?"

"Zoya, Asad calm down. We are getting late." Dilshaad stopped them. Both stumped their foots and moved out of the room.

"Hello Aunty!" Ridhima smilled at Dilshaad as they all reached the place.

"Oye, Tamatar. What happened to both of them?" Armaan nuged.

"Arrey what should we say, bickering all the day; both are sick and we are sick of them seeing like this." Dilshaan spoke irritatingly which made Armaan laugh.

Ridhima slapped his shoulder, "Stop laughing Armaan, this doesn't look good."

"Tch, basket you have problem in everything."

"What do you mean by everything, when did I stopped you from doing anything crazy? Actually you everytime do something crazy, so I just keep a check."

"You never do anything Ms. Basket, you are Mahaan." He joins his hands in front of her.

"That's not even a proper sentence Armaan." She pointed at him.

"Now you have problem in use of my words as well, God you are so complicated basket. Psycho Lady Doctor Teacher." He pointed at her which made her jaw fell.

"You-" she pointed at the loss of words and then continued "- Junior Hulk, what do you think of yourself?" She angrily stumped her feet.

"All women are same, hard to understand." Asad intervined and as Zoya heard she pointed as well,"All men are same, complex and have a hard time accepting truth about themselves."

And then the holi stage was made into a girls v/s boys ground with people continuously moving their heads from, Armaan - Ridhima - Asad - Zoya , feeling offended at times and then thinking about them fighting over sly remarks.

"We shouldn't had told anything to Armaan or Ridhima,they are hopeless as Asad and Zoya." Dilshaad said holding her head and Nazma and she stood there all tensed.


I believe in never leaving a work undone but I couldn't get own self to write this even when the love i got and friends I made on QH forum are all amazing.

So I am posting the summary of how I would've wanted to finish it like.

I am not saying I am closing it, I might finish it later or sooner but this summary gives it a closure or if you want it can be an open ff where anyone could write how they want it.


S U M M A R Y

Asad and Zoya soon celebrates their holi when Tanveer tries to abduct Zoya with some goons but some how Ayaan rescues her.

This was planned all way by Tanveer and when it is revealed that Asad was not really with her so she shows off some snaps to Humera, thus getting Ayaan-Humera to break up.

Ayaan is devastated and a tiff happens between Asad and him. Zoya tries to keep them unite and tells off her plan to Humera who soon understands and they decides to announce an eid party for the coming eid.

Tanveer says to Zoya to backen up when Zoya triggers her with saying that she have dignity since even during sacred festivals all she thinks is wicked.

Tanveer is showcased of her bad deeds in front of all during Eid as all what happened in the past days and the conversations that took place were recorded. Tanveer is humiliated.

All this happen in 10 to 12 consequetive chapters. After that she is jailed.


Soon after all this, Ayaan, Humera and Asad helps Zoya in finding her father since within past days they had become very close.

Humera is shocked is see the same music box as hers with Zoya and questions her. Humera remembers Tanveer saying something to them at the Juvenile and goes to her where she sees her own mother talking to her and it is revealed to her that Zoya is her step sister.

She tells Ayaan and somehow with the help of Dadi, Raziya is unveiled in front of all. And it breaks off to Zoya about Gaffur being her father and his about her being his daughter.

This all happens in some 4 to 8 episodes with some episode happily going.

Their is a lot of chaos about, if Asad will marry Zoya or Gaffur is okay with them being married but Zoya cares less and in a spur without any warning takes Asad to a community marriage hall and getting married. Cute banters take place with them confessing profusely at Ayaan - Humera wedding.

This all happens in about 5 episodes and the story wraps up with a 10 year leap with every relation to be settled up and them having a family picture as Asad and Zoya celebrates their 10th anniversary getting married with full rituals.


T H E E N D
Edited by -Wandstruck. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Cute Ending.😊
ASYA(KABHI) Conversation was so Cute.😳
Armaan and Ridhima Part was so Nice.😊
The Summary was so Nice.😊
It was so Interesting ,Everything was so clearly explained,I Likes it.😊
The Whole SS was Amazingly explained.😊
Please write like this on ASYA(KABHI) and Pm to me,I am waiting here.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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