tum dena saath mera ....introduction - Page 16

Created

Last reply

Replies

176

Views

27.9k

Users

21

Likes

236

Frequent Posters

1029644 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Most amazing update till date...finally they r together...n kiss was beautiful 😊 ...waiting for Ravi's identity to be revealed
Milleegarg thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Wooowww
Kya update h kinu
Amazing sacchi
Finally they r together
Naina finally raj naveen se mili
Nd wana live with then
Their romantic moment
Naina apni feelings control hi nai kar pa ri thi bt raj ko sab yaad rehta h kyu 😕
Bt naina ke confidence se mujhe uske irado pe doubt ho raha h jis tarh se vo baki vampires se milne ke liye ready ho gyi
Lets see kya karti h vo nd iske piche raj n naveen ka kya reaction hota h


Uodate soon dear

Luv millee 😛
0913155 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Dhasuuu update wooo tooo good can't wait for next update plz con soon thanks for pm😉
Crystalkiran thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
sry frnds for not updating my fic...mere exams hai so after exams ill post my story
rkchandni thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Hiii Kiran.m back lo main exam deke aai aur tum exam dene chalo gyi koi baat nhi finally I.have read it full from I left it nice vampires
Come soon all d best for ur exam

Crystalkiran thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
hlo frnds after a long time m back nd now m conti mh story hope u all like it
Crystalkiran thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Tum dena saath mera ( a rn ff )

CHAPTER 21

RECAP : abhi tak apne pada naina ke bare me jo ek anath ladki thi army join ki officer ban gyi uske dost uski dunia hai ...army join krne kr baad uski mulakat raj se hui jo kuch apna sa lga usko ..naina ko usse pyar ho gya magar raj pyar ke bavjood naina ko chod kar gayab ho jata hai ..fur bhut time baad vo milte hai aur naina ka accidnt ho jata hai ..tab naina ko uska pichla janam yaad ata hai jab vo cadet naina singh thi aur raj uske capt rajvir..apni kahani janne ke baad naina raj se aur bhi jyafa pyar krti hai ..magar tab unki life me ravi aata hai jo naina ko yeh batata hai ki raj vampire hai .naina raj se door ho jati hai thn naina aur baki sab ka transfr ho jata hai nd war tym shuru ho jta hai issi war ke dauran naina ko raj ki kami ka ehsaas hota hai aur vo after war army se resign dekar raj ki dost sherry se uska pta poockar uske pass jati hai ..vaha naina raj ke so called father jo khud vampire hai unse milti hai aur fir raj se nd sabhi misundrstndings clear karti hai thn raj nd naina ke some romantic moments hote hai ..uske baad naina ko bataya jata hai usko baki vampires se confront hona hoga but naina bhut confidence thi is sab ko lekar nd raj ko smj nhi aa rha tha kyu ... AB AAGE ...


Next day mrng se evng tak ka tym yun hi nikal gya raat ko naina ko sabhi vampire community ke samne jna tha ..

NIGHT 9 PM

Naina ko lekar naveen sherry raj sabhi us jagh pahunchte hai jaha pe unko milna tha ...but vaha kuch vampires ek human ko dekh kar outof control ho gye nd unhone naina pe attack kr dia tha naina ko bachate huye naveen nd raj dono wounded ho gye ...tab un vampires me sab ka leader vaha aata hai vo raj aur baki sab ko warn krta hai ki usko ek insaan ko lekar nhi aana chahiye tha yaha ..tab raj unko apne aur naina ke past ke bare me sab batata hai magar vo log nhi mante kyunki ek human ko vampires me rakhna impoosible tha kyunki agar vo yaha rehti to na to usko koi zinda rehne deta na yeh vampires ke liye sahi tha ..isliye yeh teh hua k rajvir ko naina ko bhoolna hoga aur uski dunia me vapis chod ke aana hoga ..varna sare vampires usko maar denge ...

AT ARMY BASE ;

Naina ke sare dost uske liye bhut pareshan the ki vo bina bataye aise resign dekar kaha chli gyi hai jab ravi ko is baat ka pta chla vo samj gya tha naina kahan gyi hai aur vo bhi usko dudne chl pada ...

VAMPIRES COMMUNITY ::

sab se apna decision bta diya but naina vaha se hilne ko tayar nhi thi ...

Leadr : kyu marna chahti ho ladki shukar kro humne tume jinda chod diya hai vrna jo hamare bare me jan jata hai vo marta hai ...

Naina : raj ke bina jee kar krugi kya mai...

Raj :naina chlo yaha se koi fiada nhi behas karne ka

Naina :aap log ek human ko nhi rakh sakte na apne saath

Leader: ha nhi rakh sakte aur agar kisi ne aisi koshih ki vo marega

Naina : insaan ko nhi rakh sakte vampire ko to rakhoge na..

All are shocked spclly raj

Leadr : tumara matlab

Naina; ha vahi matlb hai mera muje apne jaisa bna lo fir to koi mushkil nhi hogi...

Raj : shutup naina just shutup tume pta hai tum kya bol rahi ho aisa kuch nhi hoga samji tum...

Leader smiles : hume koi problem nhi naina agar tum vampire ban jao magar jiske liye kar rahiho usko to mana lo...chlo 5din ka time deta hu tume apna faisla 5 din baad batana hume aur agar raj tayar ho gya to tum vo ban paogi varna nhi ...samje to hum 5 din baad milege...

Yeh bol ke sab chle gye peeche jo khade the naveen sherry arnav nd raj sab but (statue ) bane huye the yeh sun kar...

SAB Bina kuch bole vaha se raj ke us jungle wle ghar pr aa gye jese hi andar aaye dekha samne ravi khada tha ...

Raj usko dekh k bhut guse ke a gya ek to naina ki baat ne uska dimag ghuma rakha tha ek yeh ravi ...

Raj in anger :: tum yaha kya kar rhe ho himmat kaise hui tumari yaha aane ki niklo mere ghr se ...

Ravi : hum tumare liye nhi naina ke liye aaye hai..

Naina : ravi mene tume samjya tha na raj mera sab kuch hai jao tum

Ravi ; naina aap kyu apni life kharab kar rhi ho ek vampire aur aap kabi ek ni ho sakte yeh darinde ..

Itna bola tha usne k sherry ne kheeh k ek chanta mara usko..

Sherry: kya darama lga rakha hai tmne hume darinde bolte ho khud ke bare me bataya naina ko tumne ...tum kya ho ...

Naina : sherry calm down m sab janti hu vo sab bata cuka hai mujko ki he is a warewolf...

All r shocked

Raj : naina tum jnti ho yeh baat kabse aur tumne muje bataya tak nhi ...( in full anger ) ha tum kyu bataogi aaj kal tum kaha kuch batana jaruri samjti ho muje ...

Raj Holding her tightly frm arm naina " raj u hurt me "

Raj " no u hurt me naina but ek baat meri sun lo jo tum chahti ho na vo kabhi nhi hone wala samji tum "
Nd he pushes naina on cough forcefully ...

All r shocked by his this behave ..

Raj : sun lo sab agar kisi ne iski baat mani mujse bura koi nhi hoga aur tum naina jo vaha bol ke aai ho na vo m hone nhi dunga agar zid krogi to apne is dost( ravi ) ke saath vapis chle jna samji

Nd raj chla gya apne room me naina is deeply hurt nd she starts crying ...


Ok guys enough fr today baki fir post krugi love u all

0913155 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Dhasuuu update loveddd it tooo good plz con soon thanks for PM😛
Milleegarg thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update
After long time haan
But yaha kya-2 raaz khul rahe ravi ware wolf nd av naina ko vampire banna h
Av toh kiran knows kya honga sach mai
Jaldi se update de do av nxt

Love millee 😛
Crystalkiran thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 0913155

Dhasuuu update loveddd it tooo good plz con soon thanks for PM😛



thnku dear

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

2 months ago

Tera Mera Saath Rahe ~ Gosham, Mithila FF [Completed]

This story has been inspired by the 2002 Malayalam film Nandanam, and was written at the request of Jasminerahul. It is my humble attempt to...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

1 months ago

Churake dil mera...Stealing my heart...Abhilash Hima OS

Churake dil mera...Stealing my heart... I dedicate this OS to parthz who requested me to write on AviSha. Hima went to a park and looked around....

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

7 months ago

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love) Veer Zara SS

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love)Part 1 Thank you my dearest friend Sydell for the beautiful cover page. I dedicate this SS to mili_ai who...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".