tum dena saath mera ....introduction - Page 17

Originally posted by: Milleegarg

Lovely update
After long time haan
But yaha kya-2 raaz khul rahe ravi ware wolf nd av naina ko vampire banna h
Av toh kiran knows kya honga sach mai
Jaldi se update de do av nxt

Love millee 😛

thnku so much dear nd sry fr being late m busy hogyi thi thodi c ...hehe ya ill try to update within 4-5 days ...lol( lots of love :-D )

**Tum dena sath mera (a rn ff )***

CHAPTER ..22

Sab naina aur ravi ko hall me chod k chale gye aur naina vahi rone lgi ravi comes closer to her nd console her

Ravi : naina hum abhi bhi bol rhe hai vaps chlo hamare sath kya milega tume yaha agar raj nhi mana vo vampires apko zinda nhi chodege i knw them jitna acha banne ka vo natak karte hai vo hai nhi ...aur hume pta hai raj kabhi nhi manega uske liye jo aap keh rhi ho .aur ek vampire ke saath ap human hokar relation kabhi nhi rakh paogi ...

Naina in full angar : to tum kyu aaye ho yaha per tum to raj aur uske jeso k dushman ho na fir kyu aaye ho chale jao muje akela chod kar ...jiske liye sab chod kar aai vo hi mera nhi mere jeene ka hi koi maksad nhi rha na to raj ka pyar us janam me mila na ab milega ...aur bina raj k naina hamesha adhuri thi adhuri hai aur adhuri rahegi ...tum bhi jao

Ravi : naina hum yaha sirf aapke liye aaye hai apki dosti ke liye jo apne hum jese janvar tak ko sikhai thi varna hum me aur baki sab me koi fark nhi tha ..apse req hai chod dijiye zidd apni ...


Naina still crying nd sherry comes

She : tum abhi tak yahi ho gye nhi yaha se ek bar samj nhi aata hum sambhal lege usko jao tum ya fir marna chahte ho aur konsi dosti ke liye aaye ho jaha tak muje pta hai tum to naina ko bas raj se cheenna chahte the ...

Ravi " naina hamari dost war tym me hi bni thi humari jaan ko khatra tha firbhi unhone hume bachaya insaniyat ke nate aur humne bhi naina ko apne bare me bata diya tha ki hum kon hai ...par aap kyu uski life kharab krna chahti hai ...


Yeh dono baate kr rhe the aur naina chillai...

Naina : chup ho jao tum dono

Itna bol. Kar naina bhut fastly ghar se bhar nikl gyi ...

Sherry nd ravi tries to stop her but fails ...

AFTER 4 hours ;:

RaJ is still in his room tabhi door knock hua

Raj : muje kisi se baat nhi krni jao jaha se

Sherry : raj ek bar meri baat sunlo i knw tum hurt ho but pls

Raj : sherry i said leave me alone pls

Naveen : raj hamari baat sun tu andar betha hai aur naina pta nhi kahan chli gyi hai...

Raj naina ka name sunke door opn krta hai

Raj : kya hua kahan hai naina

Sherry tells him evrythimg jo hall m hua unki bat

Raj : tum pagl ho vo 4 ghnte se vapis nhi aai aur tumne mujo batana jaruri nhi samja

Naveen : hume lga upset hai thodi der me aa jayegi but bhut der hovgyi to humne dunda usko aas pass kahi nhi mili ...

Raj : aise kaise chli gyi vo usko nhi pta kya yeh area uske lite safe nhi hai agar kisi vampire ko uske hone ka ehsaas bhi ho gya uske khoon ki smell usko kheench layegi nd uski jaan ko khatra ...nhi sherry chlo mere saath usko dudnte hai ...

Tabhi ravi firse aagya

Isse phle raj kuch bolta vo bola

Ravi : humpe gusa krne se phle hamari baat sunlo humne sab taraf naina ko dunda kahin nhi mili vo hume lgta hai she is in danger ...

Raj : sherry tumne har jagh dekha

Sherry : raj vo jungle tak gyi ek particulr place ke baad uski presence ka koi sign nhi mila hai may be ...

Raj : no aisa nhi ho skta mai usko kisi ke hath nhi lagne dunga chlo mere saath hum dundege usko

Ravi : apko hamari help ki jarurat padegi shayd

Raj : naina ki safty ka sawal hai varna mai kabhi tume saath nhi leke jata but chlo ab
...

Raj ravi & sherry teeno jungle me naina ko paglo ki tarh doond rahe the but jaise sherry ne bola ek jagh ke baad unko naina ka koi sign nhi mila na to uski saanso ki presence na insaani khoon ki koi khushbu...


A DARK PLACE NO SIGH OF SUNLIGHT ...

Naina vaha bethi thi ek stone pe someone is standing infront of her nd she is crying

Naina : why raj kyu kia apne aisa aap meei baat nhi maan rahe the u knw na mai apke bina nhi reh sakti ...fir kyu

Raj : naina m pagl tha jo tumari baat nhi suni tum jo kar rahi ho vo hamare pyar ke liye to kar rahi thi but ab muje samj aa gya hai ...tum vampire banke meri ho sakti ho nd m tume vo banauga ..ab khush ...

Naina smiles : ha bhut raj sabko le aao na sherry naveen m unko bina bataye aa gyi thi vo bhi fikar kar rahe hoge

Raj : ab tum yahi ruko m aata hu thodi der me aur yeh kaam hum dono ka hai un sab ki koi jarurat nhi thik hai

Naina : thik hai raj ...


INSIDE JUNGLE ;::

raj nd sherry both r tensed coz naina ka koi sign nhi tha ...

Ravi : sherry aap to visions dekh sakti ho na to ek bar naina ke bare me dekho aap shyd kuch pta chl jaye...

Sherry : tum sahi bol rahe ho ill try ...

Sherry closed her eyes nd jo usko dikha shocking tha ...she scrams

Sherry : raj she is with u

Raj : what rubbish kya dekha tumne

Sherry : tum dono ek sath ho nd ur going to bite her to make her vampire ...

Raj : impossible aisa kabhi nhi ho sakta

Sherry : ho raha hai raj

Raj : nooo m aisa nhi karuga kabhi ...m yaha hun naina ka koi pta nhi aur tum keh rhi ho m usko vampire ...


Ravi : sherry glt nhi dekh sakti naina raj ke saath hai ...

Raj : kya bol rahe ho tum

Sherry : raj vo sahi bol raha hai tum yaha ho aur naina raj ke saath ...usko khatra hai raj she is trapped ...vo uske saath hai .

Raj : nooo m aisa nhi hone de sakta iska matlab meri naina us ke saath kabhi nhi agar usne naina ko kuch kar diya sab barbaad ho jayega ... i cnt let it be ..sherry try to find the place naina kahan hai .mai usko glt hathon me nhi jane dunga ...

Sherry : raj naina ko usne trap kr liya agar naina ko kuch ho gya i nvr forgive u ise to acha hota usko vampire tum bna dete naina uske saath mil gyi to vo dono tabahi macha denge ...

Raj ; nhi m aisa hone nhi dunga sherry ravi help me humne naina ko bachana hoga

Ravi : ha raj par kab tak bachaoge usko aap

Raj : phle ab dund lu usko fir m kahin nhi jane dunga sherry chlo mere saath ravi tum bhi sirf tum rok sakte ho usko

Ravi : i will raj naina ko bachane ke liye hum usse bhi ladege ...

AT SAME PLACE ...

RAJ : now ur mine naina only mine tum sirf meri ho ab bhut jald tum mere jesi ho jaogi aur fir hum dono is dunia pe aur tumari dunia pe raaj karege ...


END OF PART

Wooo tooo good awww sooo aweome amazing update plz con soon thanks for PM😛😆😆

Wow! super natural powers based story!!!
Rajveer is a vampire!!!
it is very interesting & something very different plot/concept on Raina!!! 👏 👍🏼 😛
Superb updates!!! 👏 😛
just loved it!!! 😛
thanks for pm Kiran!!! 😛
keep smiling keep writing!!! 😛

Originally posted by: 0913155

Wooo tooo good awww sooo aweome amazing update plz con soon thanks for PM😛😆😆

thnku

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Wow! super natural powers based story!!!
Rajveer is a vampire!!!
it is very interesting & something very different plot/concept on Raina!!! 👏 👍🏼 😛
Superb updates!!! 👏 😛
just loved it!!! 😛
thanks for pm Kiran!!! 😛
keep smiling keep writing!!! 😛

thnku so much dear m glad that u like that thnks for the cmnt

Originally posted by: Mrumi

<font color="#0000FF"><font size="3" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">loved the update..

Hope ke Rajveer Naina ko bacha lega..😊

continue soon..
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thnku dear

Tum dena sath mera **( a rn ff )**
CHAPTER 23


In forest :

Raat ho chuki thi bhut ghana andhera tha there is a deep silence in forest bs hawa ke chalne aur animles ki awaze aa rhi thi ...bhut ghana andhera tha aur upar se fog mahul bhut kharab tha aur is sunsaan jagh par naina akele bethi thi aur sari purani baate yaad kar rahi thi ...

Naina : bhut der ho gyi hai raj ko ab tak aa jana chahiye tha kaha chale gye

Tabhi she hears a voice

Raj : tumne yaad kiya aur mai yaha aa gya

Naina uthi aur bhaag ke raj ke gale lag gyi she felt something strange yeh uske vo raj wali feel nhi thi na jane kyu fir usko lga veham hoga uska .

Naina : apne itni der kahan laga di

Raj :vo tumare liye kuch khabe ko lene gya tha aaj ka din yeh human food kha lo fir to tum hanare jese ho jaogi na

Naina : ha vo to hai

Nd she became sad coz somewhere she loves her human life but she love raj more then herself ...

Raj : comon baby eat the food ab jldi kro hume jana hai yaha se isse phle

Naina : isse phle ??

Raj (in mind) isse phle ki vo tume dundta hua yaha aa jaye

Naina : raj bolo na

Raj : naina tum sawal bhut karti ho jldi khao hume niklna hai aaj amavas hai aur aaj hi mai tume apne jesa bna sakta hu to hume jldi niklna hoga yaha se ...tum khao m aata hu thodi der me ...

Nd he leaves

Naina : raj ko kya ho gya baby ?? Vo to muje kabhi aise naam se nhi bulate the aur unko kya meri sadness ki bilkul parwah nhi hai ...naina tu bhi na jyada soch rahi hai come on yeh vahi hai jisse tu pyar krti hai

Nd she starts having her food then raj comes nd takes her to a diff place a fort which is demolished aadha adhura tha ..

Raj : naina tum mere liye vampire banna chahti ho na

Naina : ha

Raj : to ek kaam kro maar daalo isse

Nd raj gives her a small cute puppy

Naina : kya mai yeh kese raj yeh itna cute hai m nhi maar sakti isko

Raj : really iska matlab tum mujse pyar nhi karti tum vampire banogi aise hahahahaha ek kutta nhi maar sakti aur khoon peeogi insano ka rehne do tum is layak nhi ho naina

Naina ki ankhon me aansu aa gye

N : raj aap mujpe shak kar rahe ho kma me to aap meri strength the ap mujpe vishvaas krte the aapne kaha tha i believe in cadet naina singh aur aaj aap

Raj : to aur kya kru mai konsi baate kr rhi ho tum vampire banogi tum hahahaha ek dog nhi maar sakti aur daave karti ho mujse pyar ke vampire banna chahti thi mere liye tum sirf aur sirf baate kar skti ho pyar my foot

Naina : ok fine i will yahi dekhna hai na apko to thik hai

Naina take a sword and move towards dog

Raj in mind : maro naina maro isse tumari achai khatam hogi aur vahi to mai chahta hu jese tum in janwaro ko marogi fir insaano ko tum mera sabse takatvar hatheiR ho naina ..sabse crul vampire banauga mai tume khoon ki pyasi ...


Naina ke haath kaamp rahe the but for her love she have to do this nd she did it nd after one by one she killed so many animals very badly ...its like vo puri badal gyi ho she wants to prove herself to raj ...jo naina ek cheenti tak nhi marti thi today she killed thousand of animls just sake of her love ( true love makes a human human nd sometimes wrose then human sochne samjne ki shakti ko bethta hai vo insaan jo kisi ko paglo ki tarah pyar krta ho junoon ki hadd paar ho jne par shyd aisa hi ho )

Naina khadi thi raj ke samne ankhon me koi darr koi pachtava nhi sirf aur sirf vehshipan tha uske haath blood se bhare hue the nd face pe bhi khoon lga tha

Raj : m impressed naina wow vakai sahi suna tha tumare bare me

Naina smile : ha sahi suna tumne mere bare me naina apne junnon me kuch bhi kar sakti hai aur apne rajveer ke liye kisi ko bhi maar sakti hai tuje bhi

Itna bol kar she attacks on him with same sword but us ko koi fark nhi pada

Raj : to pehchaan hi liya tumne ki mai rajvir nhi hu

Naina : ha aur ab tum nhi bachoge mujse


Isse phle naina uspe attack krti us raj ne naina ko neck se pakad liya nd he bites her ...nd naina cries in pain...


Naina : raaajjj

Nd she faints ...


Enough fr today sry fr chotu part but mere exms chl rahe hai so i hope aap log muje maroge nhi hehe ...m


Precap : ravi nd duplicte raj s fight, naina a very cruel; inhuman: a brutal vampire ...raj naina s fight nd naina s hunt ...

Superb updates!!!😛
but ye kya kiran! Yaar tumne Naina ke sath aisa kyon kiya? 😲 😕
poor Naina!!!😭 😕
precap is just amazing eagerly waiting for nex update!!! 😛
thanks for pm Kiran!!! 😛

keep smiling keep writing!!! 😛