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Posted: 9 years ago
V nice update
superb part
bt ab gum na hona jaldi update kr diya kero
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Superb update
But why she left army



thanks dear nd ans will be in nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 0913155

Awesome superb amazing plz cont soon thanks for pm😃



thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias

Amazing update...finally Naina realized her luv for Raj n she quit her job for Raj 😊



thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrumi

nice update dear..

war to peace sab ek update me.. you managed well..

i hope raj and naina ke life me bhi ab war khatam hoke peace aane ka waqt aaya hai..

i hope now ravi understands that he better stay away from Raj and Naina...

bas ab wo dono mil jaye.. waiting for one romantic reunion..😳

update soon..😊

PS : i am regular reader of this FF on Fb and big Fan of you and this concept..😊




thanks dear nd ill try to update soon ...btw may i knw whts ur name
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tum dena sath mera** ( a rn ff )**

CHAPTER ...20

HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI



Naina raj se milne sherry ke diye adrress par jati hai ...ye jagh koi aur nhi dehradoon ka vahi ghar tha jaha raj naina ko lekar aaya tha ek baar naina dekhti hai ki main door locked hai bahar se jaise yaha koi rehta hi na ho

Naina : sherry ne yahi adrres diya tha to ye band kyu hai kya yaha koi nhi rehta to sherry mere saath aisa kyu karegi


Fir naina kuch sochti hai aur ghar ke peeche jti hai vaha ek window khuli hui thi naina us se andar chali jti hai ...

Ghar mai charo aur andhera tha itna andhera ki kuch bhi nhi dikh raha tha aur naina ko yaha pahunchte hi shaam ho gyi thi ab to kareeb 8 baj chuke the ...

Naina dheere dhere andar jati hai usko aisa lagta hai ki vo yaha phle bhi aa chuki hai vo thoda aur andar jati hai aur dekhti hai ki living room mai ek jagh arnav baitha hai ...naina usko dekh kar darr jati hai ...

Naina : vo mai yaha ..vo mai aise aana nhi chahti thi ..mai vo

Arnav smile karta hai

Arnv : aao naina janta tha tum yaha jarur aaogi ..sherry ne bata diya tha mujko ..

Naina : vo rajvir sir ..ummm i mean raj kaha

Arnv : tumara hi intjaar kar raha hai itne dino se tumne hi aane mai der kardi ...

Naina : muje maaf kijiye maine us din aapse aise baT ki

Arnv : its ok naina koi baat nhi mujkk bura nhi lga ...jis ravi ne tume hamare khilaaf bhadkaya tha usne tume khud kr bare mai kuch nhi bataya kya ...ki vo kya hai

Naina : what mai kuch samjhi nhi ...

Arnv : vo sab raj batayega tume ..vaise naina tum ek insaan ho ek aisi insaan jisko hamara raaz pata hai ...ab tak tum zinda ho to sirf raj ki wajh se varna hamare saathi ab tak tumko maar chuke hote kyunki tum unke liye khTra bn skti ho ...

Naina : aap bharosa rakhiye mujpe aapne mere rajvir sir ko bachaya hai aapke bare mai mai kabhi kisi se kuch nhi bolugi ...

Arnv : janti ho naina sirf hum hi hai jo insano ke beech reh rhe hai kyunki humne khud pe kaabu krna sikha hai par hum jaise aur bhi bahut hai jo insano ko apna shikar samjte hai unk bas chale sabko maar de magar hamari dunia ke bhi kuch rules hai is liye vo kuch nhi kar pate par vo tumko bhi nuksan pahuncha sakte hai ...is liye aaj se raj se pooche bina koi kaam mat karna samj rhi ho na...

Naina nodes in yes

Arnv : ab jao tum raj upar hai aur ha sambhal kr jna andhera bahut hai yaha ...hume roshni ki aadat kuch kam hi hai

Naina : ji

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Aur naina upar chali gyi usko koi dar nhi tha koi khauf nhi tha ki vo vampires ke sath is ghar mai akeli hai kyunki usko bharosa tha uske raj pe ki vo usko kuch nhi hone dega ..

Naina upr jati hai nd dekhti hai raj ek room mai baitha hai raj ki back side thi naina ki taraf ..naina room mai jati hai ...

Naina : sir

Raj : ab kyu aai ho yaha ab is darinde pe bharosa ho gya tume

Naina : aisa mat boliye

Raj : maine kab bola vo to tumne hi mujko kaha tha naina ek darinda

Naina raj ke samne jati hai nd nd raj ek cough pe baitha hai


Naina dekhti hai ki raj ro raha hai nd uski eyes mai se ansu ki jagh blood nikak rha tha ...( oye ab ispe dought mT krna vampires ki eyes mai se blood h aata hai )


Naina raj ke kness ke pass jakar baith jati hai she puts her hand on on of his knee ..

Naina " rajvir sir kya aap apni naina ko maaf nhi kar sakte ..mai pagal thi jo apke pyar ko nhi samj pai ..na jane kismat ne kaisa khel khela tha hamare saath ..hamari pyar ki kahani kyu adhuri reh gyi ..us vakt mai bhi bevkoof thi apke pyar ko nhi samj pai ...sab meri galti thi agar mai itni ziddi nhi hoti thoda sa vishvas aur kiya hota aap pe to shyd hamari kahani kabhi adhuri nhi rehti apko itna intzaar nhi karna padta ...aur na hi aisi zindgi zeeni padti ..."

Isse phle ki naina kuch aur bolti raj ke uske mouth pe apna hath rakh diya ...

Raj " bas karo naina bas kro tum bevkoof nhi thi halat hi aise ho gye the ki sab hamare control se bahar tha aur shyd ek vampire ki life jeena meri destiny ...

He smiles nd say " ha vaise tum thi thodi si bevkoof ".


Naina " aur mujse bade bevkoof aap the jo mujko bata hi nhi paye ki kitna pyar karte ho mujse ...aap nhi jante kitna intzaar kiya maine apka ...fir haar kar us zindgi ko hi khatam kar diya maine ".

Naina starts crying ..raj uthta hai nd naina ko uthata hai apne pass bithata hai ...

Raj " tume sab yaad hai naina "

Naina : to aur apko kya lagta hai ki yeh life wali naina apki bato pe yakeen karegi ...22nd century mai aakar vampires ki baato pe yakeen karegi ...

Raj : kiya to tha tumne us ravi pe yakeen

Naina : aur apne kya kiya ek baar mujko samnjhane ki koshih nhi ki chale aaye chup chaap vaha se kyu sir ??

Raj smiles nd say :: vaise naina mai ab tumara sir nhi hu aur us life ko hum bahut peeche chod aaye hai my love abhi to sir mat bolo

Naina makes angry face : aap mera majak uda rahe ho

Raj pulling her both cheeks : nhi mai tumara majak nhi uda raha hu ..bs itna bol raha hu ki muje sir mat bolo ...jabse tume sab yaad aaya hai tum firse ussi sir wale track pe aa gyi ho ...phle to itnaa ache se mera naam leti thi ...abhi bhi vaise hi bulao na

Naina blushes hardly her cheeks turn into red tomatoo nd vo firse apni imagination world mai kho gyi ki kaise vo raj ko uske name se bulti thi jab usko kuch bhi yaad nhi tha aur ab uska naam lene se sharma rahi hai ...

Raj touches her cheek nd says sapno ki dunia se bahar aao meri naina aur samne deko

Naina sapno ki dunia se bahar aati hai

Naina : aap mujse naraz to nhi ho na

Raj : nain mai tumse naraz nhi hu na kabhi ho sakta hu ...

He get up from his place nd says " naina tum yaha aa to gyi ho mujko pura vishvass tha aaogi tum ...par

Naina : par kya

Raj : naina tum janti ho mai tumara phle wala rajvir nhi hu shyd sahi kaha tha tumne ek darinda hu mai ...a blood hunter ...aur tum ek insaan ..khud ko rok lunga mai kab se rok raha hu ...par muje samj nhi aa raha baki sab se tume kaise bachauga kab tak bachauga ...

Naina : muje aap pe bharosa hai janti hu aap mere sath kuch galt nhi hone doge ...

Raj : ha vo to hai yaad hai naina us din jungle mai tranning camp me jab barish ho rhi thi vaha kuch logi ne humpe attack kiya tha jiske bare mai tum pooch rhi thi ...

Naina : aur aap us sawal ka jawab diye bina hi gayab ho gye the ...

Raj : vo sab vampires the naina tumare blood ki smell unko khinch le aai thi ...hamare jaise bahut hai yaha jo insano ka roop mai ghoomte hai ...vaise to vo insaano ke beech nhi aa sakte kuch rulez hai hamari dunia ke ...par kai baar kuch bekabu ho jate hai ..human blood ke adict ho jate hai ...aur unko rokhna kisi ke bas mai nhi hota ...bas unhi ka dar hai mujko ...

Naina : aap ho na mere saath tab bhi bachaya tha firse bacha lena

Raj : unse to bacha lunga par khud se kaise bachau tume naina na to tumare pyar ke bina jee sakta hu na khoon ke bina ...

Raj : kyu is darinde se pyar kar baithi ho darr nhi lga ...

Naina : ap bhool rahe hai apke andar ke janwar se bada apka pyar hai jo muje yaha khinch kar le aaya hai ...aur mai janti hu aap ek vampire hone se mere rajvir badal thodi na jayege vo hamesha vahi ragege ...

Raj : itna bharosa hai mujpe

Naina : ha aur is baar is bharose ke beech kuchnhi aayega kuch bhi nhi mai nhi janti aapke saath yeh sab kaise hua kaise aap aise ho gye ...par mai itna janti hu aap ke andar mere rajvir sir hai aur hamesha rahege ...


Rajvir comes close to her nd hugs her as tight as possible..nd naina too na jane kab se to vo is pal ka intzaar kar rahe the ...

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Tabhi sherry aur naveen bhi vahi aa gye ussi ghar mai ...aur vo bina kuch soche raj ke room mai ghus gye ( hamare love birds oops love vampires ko disturbe krne hehe )

Naina aur raj ek dusre se chipke huye the tabhi naveen andar a gya peeche sherry bhi...

Naveen : raj vo

Tabhi vo dekhta hai raj naina dono ek dusre ki bahon mai the aur uski awaz se vo dono alag ho gye ...


Naveen : oh m sry muje pta nhi tha naina yaha hai...mai chalta hu fir aauga...

Naveen jane ke liye turn hota hai tabhi naina bolti hai...

Naina : bhaiya ..

Naveen yeh sab sun ke shocked reh gya usne turn kiya to dekha naina smile kar rhi thi

Naveen : naina tumne yeh kya bola

Naina : kyu apne bhaiya ko bhaiya hi bolugi na ...

Naveen is soo shocked
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Naveen : raj yeh naina kya bol rhi hai

Raj : usko sab yaad aa chuka hai naveen sab kuch ...

Nd raj smiles naveen is soo happy vo jake naina ko hug karta hai nd naina bhi ..(.after some emotional talk which i dnt want to write hehe )

Naveen : its miracle raj muje to ab bhi yakeen nhi ho rha ki naina ko sab yaad hai hamare us janam ke bare mai vo 100 saal purani baate yaad hai ...its impossible ...

Raj : its possible naveen pyar ek aisi takat hai jo wakt se pare hai ...insaan jitne chahe janam le le apna pyar nhi bhoolta agar vo sacha ho ...aur sacha pyar to sadio se bichde logo ko bhi ek kar deta hai ...maine tujko bola tha na mera pyar naina ko vapis aane ko majboor karega ...

Naveen : mai bahut khush hu raj sach mai ...

Naina : aur apse bhi jyada mai khush hu kyunkj maine jo khoya tha vaha mujko yaha vapis mil gya ...

Naveen : aur yeh sab sherry ki wajh se hua naina agar vo nhi hoti to aaj mai aur raj dono nhi hote ...

THAN NAVEEN NARATES WHOLE STORY THAT HOW THEY BECAME VAMPIRES

Naina : thanks sherry

Sherry : naina thanks mat bolo muje maine yeh sab sirf apni dosti ke liye kiya tha...par navs muje ek dar hai

Naveen : kya sherry

Sherry : kya naina hum logo ke beech survive kar payegi kya vo log naina ko accpt krege ...vo nhi chahege ki koi insasn unke secrets jane jo kisi ko nho janne chahiye ..muje dar hai kahi vo naina ko kuch kar ...

Raj : aisa kabhi nhi hoga jab tak raj zinda hai naina ko kuch nhi hoga aur agar un logo ne naina ko accpt nhi kiya sab ke khilaaf ja sakta hu mai ...

Sherry : par iskaa anjaam bahut bura hoga raj

Naina : tum dono chinta mat kro aur pyar ke liye revolt krna jaruri nhi hai raj hum unhe mana lenge ...jaise aap mujpe bharosa karte ho vo bhi karege ...

Naveen : jo bhi hoga hum sab ek saath hai ...

Sherry : par naina tumne army se resign kyu kiya vo bhi kisi ko bina bataye itna bada faisala kyu liya tumne hum sab to bs temprery join krte the tumare liye hum vapis aa gye to koi sawal nhi karega par tumne kyu..

Raj : what naina tumne resign kyu kiya ...


Nain : iska jawab aap ho raj apke liye ...

Raj : mere liye

Raj : ha apke liye ...us war ke during hi muje sab yaad aa gya tha ..aur maine faisla kiya tha ki mai apko kisi keemat par nhi khone dungi ...agar mai army mai rehti aap mujse baar bar milne aate ...shyd apki identity pe koi sawal bhi uth jata ..ravi ne bahut try kiya tha apko expose krne ka ...aur yeh baat dunia ke samne nhi aani chahiye ...mai nhi chahti thi meri wajh se ap sab kisi museebat mai faso to maine resign kr diya ...

Raj : tume pata hai tum pagal ho

Naina : janti hu ek baat puchu aapse kya aap hamesha ke liye mujko apne saath rakhoge ...

Raj : yeh koi puchne ki baat hai naina rajvir ka vajood uski nain ke bina adhura hai...tum mere saath rahogi hamesha .

Naina smiles nd raj also nd they shared an eye lock ...

Naveen : ahem ahem hum bhi hai yaha

Both naina nd raj got embarresed ...( hehe vampire hoke sharmate hai )

Naina : aap muje kuch batane wale the ravi ke bare mai vo arnav ji ne kaha tha...

Sabhi ke face ud gye yeh sun ke

Naina: kya batana tha apko


Tabhi arnav aata hai

Arnv : raj kal vo sab naina ko bula rahe hai

Raj : magar kyu itni jldi kyu

Naina : mai tayar hu aap unko bol dijiye naina aayegi kal

Raj : magar nain

Naina : plz raj yeh muje handel karne dijiye ...

Raj ne naina ko ha to bol diya par vo nhi janta tha ki nain ke dimag mai kuch aisa chal rhs tha jo usko bhi hila kar rakh dene wala tha ...

Arnav chala gya shery aur naveen bhi ...aur raj ne bola naina ko ki ravi ki baat vo usko fir kabhi batayega kyunki vo dono itne din baad mile hai to yeh time sirf un dono ka hai ...

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Raj nd naina dono room mai baithe the naina bed pe baithi kuch soch rhi thi aur raj chair pe baitha tha

Raj uthke naina ke pass aata hai ..holding her both hands he says " naina tume unlogo se milne ki koi jarurat nhi hai mai hu na tumare saath jaldbazi mai ake koi faisla mat lo ".

Naina : nhi raj maine sab kuch soch ke bola hai aap bharosa rakho mujpe aur mai janti hu jab tak aap ho aap muje kuch nhi hone doge hai na ...

Raj : hmmm

Naina puts her head on hus chest nd raj holds her by her waist ...by his one arm ...nd his other arm starts playing with her hairs ...

Naina raj ki ankhon mai dekhti hai ..raj bhi usko naina ki eyes mai ek desire dikh rahi thi ...a desire for his love ...a desie which is not fullfilled from a long time ...

Naina ne apna face raj ke face ke ekdum pass kiya hua tha ...raj also understands her desire but he hesistates to fullfill it ...

Naina : raj ab to hum ek dusre ke saath hai to kyu aap mujse door ja rahe ho ...

Raj : naina its not right

Naina : nothing is wrong in love raj ...

After hearing this raj captures naina s sweet lips which are shivring coz of love or passion by his...he kisssd her upper nd loewer lip ..as he wants to taste each nd every part of her mouth ...nd naina crosses every limit of passion ...even raj feel helpless in front of her ...she is kissing raj so badly that raj s lips seems to burnt infront of her passion ...raj s hands moving on her back rubbing her back ...nd naina s hands moving under his shirt ...

Thode tims baad raj ko lga ki vo naina ko aur bardash nhi kar payega uska passion hadd se jyada bad raha tha ...nd in that sense raj wants more than just kissing ...so raj stopped the kiss nd holds for breath ...nd vo uth ke bed se door window ke pass chala gya ...

Naina is deeply hurt by his action she feels gulity by her own act that how can she do it ..vo khud ko control nhi kar pai ...nd she sobs a little ...

Raj turns nd see that naina is crying...

Raj comes near close naina nd sits near her

Raj : kya hua naina kyu ro rhi ho

Naina ne guilt ki wajh se apni ankhe nhi milai raj se aur pillow mai face chupa ke rone lagi ...raj ne naina ko uthaya ...


Raj : naina kya hua bolo

Naina sobbing : m sry mai aisa kaise kar sakti hu mai khud ko control nhi kar pai apko bura lga na

Raj : kisne kaha tumse muje bura laga ..naina tum mera pyar ho haq hai tumara mujpe ...jo chacho kar sakti ho aur isme kuch galt nhi tha ..its ur right

Naina : to aap uth ke kyu gaye

Raj : vo is liye kyunki tumri demand kuch jyada thi naina aur agar mai nhi rukta to ...naina kya hamRa pyar itna chota hai k vo ek hi raat mai khatam jo jaye ...nhi na ..to aaj tak itna intjaar kiya hai thoda aur sahi ...nd m sry muje aise behave nhi karna chahiye tha ..

Raj warps her tears nd naina hugs him tightly ...

Raj " i love u naina ".

Naina " me 2 " ..

Nd they again capures each other s lips but this time very slow nd softly ...

After some time ...

Raj : naina so jao tum tume aaram ki jaruat hai abhi

Naina : aap nhi soge ...

Raj : nhi muje neend nhi aati nain insano ko aati hai ..tum aaram se so jao mai hu yaha tunare pass ...

Naina hugs raj nd sleep nd lost into her sweet dreams ...nd raj vo bas naina ko dekh raha tha puri raat ...




END OF PART ...

AISE HI POST KR RHI HU EK BAAR PADHA BHI NHI HAI TO AGAR KUCH MISTAKE HO AUR KUCH LOOPS HO TO PLZ SRY ...


LOVE CRYSTAL

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Posted: 9 years ago
wooo...longgg update maza aa gaya padh kar
superb fantastic RN phir saath hai ...i think naina
bhi vampire bane ki soch rahi h ...god passion of
love ...so nice yr ...i hope ravi ki reentry nhi hogi
ab acha hua chala gaya...Naveen ko uski behen
mil gayi ...happy family ab jaldi se RN ki shadi
kara do yr
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing updae
loved the reunion part
want to knw abt ravi wt is it exactly
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Posted: 9 years ago
After so long a long update
It was superb

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