tum dena saath mera ....introduction

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**Tum dena saath mera ..an rn ff ** introduction

INTRODUCTION


Characters ::

Naina singh (played by priyanka bassi ): a 20 years old girl ,a very brave girl , very cute nd sweet by nature ...but she is an oraphan .

Pooja ghai (played by gahazal rai ) :: she is a simple girl nd very naughty uski life ke 2 hi maksad the apne liye apna shahruk dudna nd shadi karna but family ke pressure mai aake career banane ka sochna pada ...


Amardeep huda (played by vikas manakatla ):: a handsome boy jisko lagta hai vo har kisi ladki ko pata sakta hai

Ali baig : ( played by harshad chopra ) very intelligent nd no nonsence boy zindgi mai lhud ko sabit karna chahta hai ...


Aalekh sharma : ( played by arjun bajilani ) yeh naina ka best frnd hai dono ek hi orphanage mai pale hai ...he is very intelligent ...logo ka face nd mind dono read krke unke bare mai sab bata deta hai

Naveen shikhawat ( played by sameer sharma ): 25 years old boy kon hai kaha se aaya hai koi nhi janta but bahut rich family ko belong karta hai nd apne chote bhai se bahut pyar karta hai ...

Rajveer shikhawat : ( played by rajeev khandelwal) : 23 years old boy same iske bare mai koi nhi janta, very handsome boy ,but apne anger ko control nhi kar pata , kisi se sab se jayada pyar karta hai to apne bhai se nd ladkio ke pass jana to door unki parchai se bhi door rehta hai ...


Sherry thakur( played by hunar hali ): a 21 year old girl best frnd of raj nd naveen ..raj ki life mai bas ek yahi ladki hai jis se vo door nhi bhagta ...




So yeh to the characters baki characters story ke according introduce karti jaugi ...




AAJ IN sab ki life ka bahut imp din hai yeh log ek dusre ko nhi jante na hi ek dusre ke maksad ke bare mai par aaj insab ko ek hi jagah ek hi saath kaam kRna hai ...aur vo jagah hai DEHRADOON KI HASEEN VAADIYON MAI BASI EK MILITRY ACADMY( INDIAN MILTRY ACADMY )

In logo me se koi kuch chahta tha to koi kuch but na to koi desh bhakti ka deewana tha na kisi ko isme interest bas yeh log aa gaye yaha kyunki sabko unki kismat le aai yahan ... dehradoon mai bahut se raaz chupe huye hai army ke bhi aur kuch aise bhi jinke bare mai koi insaan nhi jaan sakta in haseen vaadio mai ek ajeeb si tanhai hai aisi tanhai mano kisi ki zindgi chin gyi ho yaha ki hawao mai ajeeb sa sunapan hai ...aur is soonepan mai shuru hogi ek aisi kahani jisko kabhi kisi ne nhi suna hoga na dekha ...


Ab yeh kahani kaha tak safal hogi ya fir shuru bhi hogi ya nhi yeh to vakt hi batayega ...



Hope u guys like this intro ...plz do comments ...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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**TUM DENA SAATH MERA ** an rn ff

PART 1

(MEETING OF
STRANGERS)


in dehradoon sham ka vakt hai nd winter season is season mai to yeh haseen vaadiyan aur bhi haseen lagti hai ...a chilling cold breez is blowing ..sun set ka time hai...

Ek taxi ek building ke saamne aakar rukti hai usme se do log bahar aate hai taxi chali gyi un dono ne us building ko dekha jiske gate pe bada bada karke likha tha ...INDIAN MILITRY ACADMY DEHRADOON ...Unme se ek ladka hai nd ek ladki dono ki eyes mai bahut sare sapne hai apni nai zindgi ko lekar ...

Boy : dekh naina yahi hai hum dono ki manzil hamari zindgi banane ka zariya jiske liye humne jee tod mehnant ki thi aaj hum uske saamne khade hai ...

Naina a beautiful girl jiski aankhon mai hazaron sapne hai apne future ko lekar strong determination hai apne country ke liye kuch karne ka ...she is standing by side of aalekh wearing army uniform...

Naina : ha aalekh sach kaha tune aaj hum yaha hai apni duty ke liye apni country ke liye hume yeh to nhi pata ki hamare ma baap kon the par us anaath aashram mai hum ek dusre ka sahara bane aur aaj bhi banege ...chal chalte hai zindgi ki nai manzil ki oar ...

Both smiles nd enters in main gate of IMA


Inside the acadmy ::::

A girl nd a boy sitting in front of an office naina aur aalekh unke pass pahunchte hai but vo unki back side pe khade hai ...

Boy : sherry veer kahan hai vo aaya kyu nhi kamse kam aaj to sahi time pe aa jata manta hu usko yaha aane mai koi interest nhi tha but mere liye to aa jata ...

Girl : relaxe navs vo aa jayega maine usko bola tha nd m sure vo apne bro ko kabhi hurt nhi karega ...

Naina : xcuse me ...

Sherry & navs dono turn hote hai nd jaise hi vo dono naina ko dekhte hai they are totaly shocked ...

Naina : ji vo kya brig mehra ka cabin yahi hai hume unse milna hai ...

But both of them stood there like a statue ...

Aalekh naveen ko hilata hai ...

Aalekh : arre hum kuch pooch rahe hai...

Sherry : ha vo yahi office hai aap kon

Naina : m lft naina singh nd yeh lft aalekh sharma aur aap

Sherry : m lft sherry thakur doc hu mai nd he is capt naveen shikhawat a psychologist nd army officer...

Naina : oh nice to meet u both

Vaha pe ek aur girl aati hai uske saath ek boy bhi hai nd she is singing a song usko ek oderly bolta hai

Oderly : madam aap gana mat gayiye mana hai

Girl : how dare u tum jante ho tum kis se baat kar rahe ho mai misha singhania ( played by priya wal) hu chal bhaag yaha se ...

Aur vo oderly bhaag gya the boy is kunal sharma ( played by hiten tejwani )

Misha bhi naina aur baki sab ke pass aakar khadi ho gyi nd again intro srarts ( m nt in mood to write their intro also its too boring yr )

Then sab ko meeting ke liye andar bula liya jaata hai

Brig mehra : hello all officers m brig mehra head of this acadmy aap sab log kuch officers hai to kuch aam civilians hum sab yaha apne desh ke liye pyar ke karan aaye hai...

Misha whispers : muje to mere dad ne dhake de ke bheja hai

Nd all smiles at this ...

Brig : aapne kuch kaha miss dobrial

Misha : no sir

Tabhi ek ladki jaldi se andar aati hai

Girl : may i come in sir sir m pooja ghai hockey player hu yaha bhi games quota se aai hu tranning ke liye

Brig : u r late

Pooja : sir vo kya hai na raste mai car kharab ho gyi mera to network hi ud gya tha tabhi ek handset ne lift di to mai range mai aa gyi ...

Brig aur baki sab ko kuch samaj nhi aaya nd sab hasne lage brig ne sab ko chup rehne ka ishara kia ..aur pooja ko andar aane ka

Brig : to mai kahan tha

Misha : sir desh bhakti pe ...

Brig giving her a killing look ...

Brig : ha to hum sab yahan 3 months ke tranning camp me aaye hai aapme se kuch officers hai kuch civilans but yaha aapko 6 months mai sab kuch sikhaya jayega ek solider kaise rehta hai kaise survive karta hai sab kuch ...is traning ke baad aap log chahe army mai rahe na rahe yaha ke rules kabhi nhi bhoolege...aap mai se kuch bahut rich families ko belong karte hai but yeh mat sochna ki yaha par aapke saath royal treatment hoga sab ke saath ek jaisa treat kiya jayega sab ko ...


Brig charo taraf dekha

Brig : aapme se kuch log nhi aaye hai ali baig aur rajveer shikhawat ...ali baig ne humko bata diya tha ki unki ammi ki tabiyat thik nhi to vo nhi aayege magar rajveer shikgawat kaha hai ...


Naveen : sir vo veer ki tabiyat thik nhi thi vo kal tak aa jayega ...

Brig : koi bahana nhi chalega aap city ki sabse rich family ko belong karte hai iska matlab yeh nhi aap punishment se bach jaoge kal usko punishment milegi ab aap log jao aur dinner kro kal se aapki tranning shuru hogi ...dismisss ...


Sab jate hai mess ki taraf lunch ke liye is camp ko join karne ke liye kamse kam 25 officers honge ...sab mess mai jate hai ..naina pooja misha kabeer aalekh sab ki achi dosti ho gyi hai magar naveen aur sherry alag baithe hai kisi ke saath baat nhi kar rahe ...yeh sab ek table par baithe hai

Pooja : oye vo dono kon hai ek dum heer ranjga lag rahe hai par kisi ke network mai kyu nhi aa rahe ...

Misha : kya network

Aalekh : isko aadat hai mobike ki bhasha mai baat karne ki ...

Misha : oh acha vo dono city ki sabse rich family ko belong karte hai ...ek saal phle hi aaye hai yaha kaha se aaye koi nhi janta ...yeh dono ekdum akdu hai kusi se thik se baat nhi karte ...

Naina : aisi baat nhi hai misha ji unhone mujse to ache se baat ki ...

Misha : oh plz misha ji mat bolo aisa lagta hai mai 100saal ki hu

All laughs ...

Pooja : vaise tum bhi to rich ho fir yaha miltry acadmy mai kyu...
Misha : yr mere dad ne dhake maar ke bheja yaha mai to ni aane wale thi bola agar nhi gyi to mujko kisi buisnessman se shadi krni padegi ...nd i hate it so m here ...

Kunal : same story meri bhi hamare family wale hune army ka hissa banana chahte hai coz unko buisness mai fiada hoga misha ke dad ko army ke garments banane ka contract milega nd mere dad ko machines ka so we r here ...for our selfish purpose ...

Pooja : mai bhi yr aur tum dono naina aur aalekh

Naina : hum dono to oraphn hai koi zindgi mai nhi tha to desh ko zindgi dene ka faisla kar lia aur bas aa gaye yahan ...
Aise hi yeh log baate kar rage the ...udhar sherry aur naveen khamosh baithe the ...


Sherry : navs yeh acha nhi hua vo ladki yaha kaise kyu aai

Naveen : vo vo nhi hai sherry

Sherry : i knw but agar veer ne usko dekh lia m sure vo pagal ho jayega kaise sambgakege usko ...

Naveen : acha hua nhi aaya vo varna usko sambhalna mushkil ho jata ab kal tak kuch sochte hai ...

Sherry : hmm chalo ...


Sab ka dinnr ho gya nd sab uth kar chale gaye

Idhar sab apne apne room mai the sab ko kisi na kisi ke saath room share krna tha naina aur misha ko nd sherry nd pooja ko ...naveen nd raj ko aalekh nd kunal ko ...aur aise hi baki sab ko ...

Naina apne room mai thi usne window kholi aur ek thandi hawa ka jhonka aaya

Naina : yahan ki yeh hawaiye inme itna sunapan inta dard kyu hai ...

Misha : mujko to nhi lagta hill arrea hai yr aisa mausam normal hai ...

Naina : ha sahi bola chalo so jate hai gud night ...


Naina so rahi thi aaram se aur koi tha jo usko dekh raha tha uske bilkul pass tha achanak naina ki aankh khuli aur vo cheekhi ...

Naina :aaajhhh

Misha : kya hua naina

Naina : yahan koi tha misha mere pass mrre bilkul pass

Misha : koi nhi hai yaha naina aur agar hota to mujko dikhta na

Naina : nhi vo mere itne pass tha 1 nich door hoga bas ...

Misha aas pass dekhti hai window khuli thi

Misha : yr naina hum 2nd floor pe hai yaha se koi kaise bhagega tune sapna dekha hoga ...

Naina ko bhi lga usne sapna dekha hoga par kaise ...

Misha: ten mat le naina so ja subh humko left right bhi krni hai...


Aur fir misha aur naina so gye fir se ...

In morning ::


Sab log ima se bahar aa gaye hai aaj brig mehra ke saath ek aur tha


Brig : yeh major kumar hai yeh aap logo ko aaj mount climbing sikhayege ...

Tab tak ali bhi aa gya aur brig se bhi mil lia but raj ka koi pata nhi tha aur navs nd sherry dono hi tensed the.



Mk : to ab hum sab ek ek karke dheere se mount climb karege yeh hill bahut jyada unchi to nhi hai but itni unchi jarur hai ki agar koi gir gya to haath paav toot jayega so bahut dhyan se aaram se climb krna ...


Sab log apni apni roap lekar climb karne lagte hai aur mk unko dekh raha hai ...

Tabhi naina us raat ke incident ke bare mai soch rahi thi is liye uska concentration toot gya aur uske haath se roap choot gyi nd vo chillai ...


Naina : aaahhh

Sab ne dekha ki naina hill se neeche gir rahi thi ...



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END OF PART


HOPE U ALL LIKE IT AGAR KOI MISTAKE HUI TO AUR KISI KO IS CONCEPT KE BARE MAI KOI SUGGESTION DENA HO TO PLZ
CMNT JARUR KRNA ..


LOVE CRYSTAL




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Posted: 9 years ago
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super natural powers...its very interesting plot...very nice yar...all characters are nice..naveen raj ka bada bhai hai...too good...looking forward to this fic...👏
Edited by rkchandni - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 1 is really awsm...aalekh aur naina already lft hai...aur naveen captaan hai...really nice...kaun dikha naina ko...but no raj...😭😭 plzzz rajveer ko bhi laao jaldi...aur naina ka chehra kya connection hai raj aur naina ke face ka...plzzz dont make rajveer vampire ha...plzzz i like him as human only...plzz cont soon dear awsm start...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks chandni nd yes plot is really intersting ..nd raj jaisa bhi ho acha hai nd dnt wry raj ki entry bhi jaldi hogi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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***Tum Dena Saath Mera ...an rn ff***
CHAPTER 2
( EK PAHELI )
Sab dekh kar dar gye naina hill se neeche girne wali thi tabhi ek aur mountain climb kar rahe ladke ne aakar usko pakad liya ...aur vo dono hawa mai latke huye the ...sab ne unki help ki aur unko upar kheencha ...
Aalekh bhaag ke naina ke pass aaya
Aalekh : naina tu thik to hai na
Naina : mai thik hu aalekh agar sahi vakt pe inhone mera haath nhi pakda hota to mai mar jati ..
Boy : oh dnt wry kudiye vaise bhi huda itni sohni kudi ki help na kare aisa to ho hi nhi sakta
Aalekh : kon huda
Huda : ji mai my self amardeep huda
Brig : thanks very much boy agar tum nhi hote to aaj is bahut bura ho jata ...vaise tum bhi to kal late aaye the haina..
Huda : ha sir vo kya hai na huda raaste pe kisi ki help karne lag gya tha
Brig : oh very gud u r very gud boy tumko punishment nhu milegi kal ke liye ...
Naveen : magar tum hill pe itni hight pe aa kaha se gaye...
Huda ; kaha se aa gya matlab mai konsa bhoot hu jo idhar udhar bhatkta rahunga professional tracker hu tracking ka expert hu samjha ...
Brig : vaise mr naveen tumara bhai abhi tak kyu nhi aaya
Naveen : vo aa raha hai sir
Brig : agar vo do ghante tak nhi pahuncha to usko hum yaha enter nhi hone denge ..
A voice : mai yaha hu bhaiya ...
Sab us direction mai dekhte hai a less than common look mai ek ladka khada tha ...bahut loose se kapde pehne the..check shirt nd loose pent nd ek bada sa overcoat .. ek side bag ...hairs pe lots of oil laga hua ...aankho pe bada sa chashma aur gale mai pani ki bottle thi jaise kg class ke kidds ki hoti hai ...
Naina : yeh kon hai isko kahi to dekha hai
Huda mummerrs : abe yeh joker kon hai ...
Brig : yes who r u
Boy : mera naam rajvir hai (naveen ki taraf dekhte huye ) bhaiya yahi pe aana tha na ...
Sab log yeh sun ke zor se hasne lage ...
Naveen : ha bacha yahi aana tha .
Brig usko ek disgusting si look deta hai ...
Brig : tum ho rajvir shikhawat ..tumko ko mai punishment dene wala tha par tumari halat dekh ke aisa lagta hai ki tum bas ek hi punishment kr sakte ho ...car dhone ki ab jao aur vo karo ...
Raj : magar punishment kyu mai to time pe aaya tha na ...
Brig chillate huye : gooo tum jaise ko mai apna pa bhi na banau vo to tumare dad army mai donation nhi de rahe hote to mai tumko yaha ghusne bhi nhi deta ...
Aur raj gya vaha se baki sab bhi aa gaye vapis ima kyunki naina ke gir jane ki wajh se traning ko rok diya gya ...
Sab aakar breakfast ke liye baithe the mess mai ...
Naina : once again thanks huda
Huda : oh bas kr kudiye tu to huda ko sharminda kar rahi hai ...
Pooja : oh god vo ladka kaisa hai i mean mujko laga naveen ka bhai hai to uske jaisa samart nd dashing hoga par
Misha :par yeh to champu nikla
Tabhi raj mess ki taraf aata hai koi seat khali nhi thi bas ek huda ke pass free thi raj apna sar jhuka ke khada tha
Raj : mai yaha baith jau huda bhaiya
Sab hasne lage
Huda : abbe oye mujko bhaiya mat bol tu to sach mai champu hai yr ...dulhan ki rarah sar jhuka ke kyu khada hai
Naina : huda baithne de usko
Naina ke bolne pe huda usko seat dene ke liye uth to gya magar huda ne usko gira diya vo gira jakar table pe ...
Tabi sab uspar hasne lage ...
Naina : stop it guys bas kro kisi ka majak udana acha nhi hota
Tabhi naveen aata hai nd huda ko zor se ek punch marta hai ...
Huda : how dare u
Huda bhi usko marne lagta hai but sherry uska haath pakad leti hai ...
Naveen : mere bhai ko haath bhi lagane ki galti mat karna haath tod dunga samjha tu ...
Naven to raj : chal raj yaha se ...
Raj ke pure face pe khana laga hua hai usko kuch dikh nhi raha tha naveen usko pakad ke le gya ...
Naina : huda bahut galat kiya tumne usko aise gira ke agar koi physically strong nhivhai iska yeh matlab to nhi uske saath aisa salook karo
Huda : par naina meri baat to sun ...
Naina uth ke chali jati hai vaha se yeh dekhne ki raj thik hai ja nhi .
Udhar naveen raj se baat kar raha tha ...
Navs : tuje lagi to nhi na
Raj ; nhi bhaiya mai thik hu
Naina aati hai aur raj ke peeche khadi hai...
Naina : m really sry mr naveen huda ne jo kiya uske liye ...
Naveen : usne jo kiya aap uske liye kyu sry bol rahi hai ...
Naina : ji vo mai
Is se phle naina kuch bolti raj vaha se utha naina ki taraf dekha bhi nhi aur bola
Raj :bhaiya mujko kisi se baat nhi karni mai apne room mai ja raha hu bye ...
Nd raj chala gya vaha se uth ke
Naina:ek baat puchu agar aap bura na maano to
Naveen : ha puchiye
Naina: aapka bhai aisa kyu hai mean aaj huda ne jo bhi kiya koi aur hota to usko maar deta aur ...
Sherry : raj kya karta hai kyu karta hai aaj tak humne samaj nhi aaya bs sab se door rehta hai kyunki log uski aisi look ka majak banate hai ...aap jyada mat socho hun chalte hai ...bye
Naveen aur sherry chale gaye aur naina vaha pe confuse khadi thi ...
Aalekh aata hai
Aalekh :tu yaha kyu khadi hai chal na
Naina: aalekh tujse baat karni hai chal mere saath ...
Aur naina aalekh ko lekar chali gyi aur huda door khada hokar inki baate sun raha tha ...
Huda : yeh ladki bhi na maine iski jaan bachai aur yeh mere saath time spent karne ki jagah us champu ke peeche bhaag rahi hai aur uske bhai ne mujko maara uska badla to yeh huda us champu se lekar rahega ...
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Evening time :::::
Sham ke7 baj rahe hai charo oor hanera hai hill areas mai itne time tak normally andhera ho hi jata hai ...
Raj akela IMA ki sunsaan ground mai baitha hai vaha huda aata hai
Huda :abe oye champu tujko kya lagta hai tu apne bhai ke saath mil ke huda ki insult karega to kya huda chup baithega ...
Raj apna chashma thik karte huye ...
Raj : par maine kya kia vo to aapne mujko maara tha
Huda : acha to tu ab huda se jaban ladayega teri to
Itna bol ke huda ne raj ko maarna shuru kia aur maarta hi kya raj ke mooh se khoon beh raha tha huda ne raj ko zameen par fenka
Huda :aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai aaj ke baad agar mere raaste mai aane ki koshih ki to jaan se maar dunga samjha
Aur huda vaha se gya naveen aur sherry raj ko dundte huye aaye to dekha ki vo zameen pe pada hai buri tarah se pita hua hai ...
Naveen usko uthata hai aur room me lekar jaata hai usko first aid krta hai
Sherry : naveen kya kare hum is ladke ka
Sherry to raj: jab vo tumko maar raha tha to tum chup kyu the kyu karte ho aisa raj tum jante ho hum tume aise nhi dekh sakte
Raj : agar nhi dekh sakti jo jao yaha se kisne bola mere pass rukkne ko
Naveen : raj tum pagal ho kya sherry tumara khayak rakh rahi hai aur tum
Raj : muje kisi se baat nhi karni jao yaha se ...
Naveen aur sherry ache se jante the raj se behas karne ka koi fiada nhi hai kyunki aaj tak usne kisi ki nhi suni is liye unhone vaha se jana hi sahi samjha ...
Naveen bahut tensed baitha hai bahar
Sherry : naveen kyu khud ko pareshan karte to u knw na vo aisa hi karta hai
Naveen i knw par kyu karta hai vo aur vo huda usko to mai choduga nhi usne haath kaise lagaya raj ko ...
Sherry : tume kuch karne ki jarurat nhi hai naveen raj ko hi kuch nhi karna to hum kyu ...
Naveen : sahi bol rahi ho tum vaise kuch pata hai aage kya hoga ...
Sherry : abhi tak nhi mai naina ke kareeb hi nhi ja pai par tum try krna ki naina raj se door hi rahe ...vo jitna raj ke kareeb jayegi raj apna self control loose karega
Naveen : hmm ill try yr chalo ab chalte hai ...
Vo dono jate hai par koi tha jo inki baate sun raha tha vo thi naina ...
Naina inki baat sunti hai aur aaalekh se milne jati hai
Aalekh ; kya hua naina
Naina : aalekh maine tuje bola tha na jarur kuch hai
Aalekh : kya matlab
Naina : aalekh maine naveen aur sherry ki baat suni ..yeh dono kis bare mai baat kar rahe the mai to inse phli baar kal hi mili hu to yeh aisa kyu bol rahe the ki muje raj se door rakhna kya yeh log mujko phle se jante hai ...aur vo raj sabke saamne meri taraf dekhta bhi nhi par kal raat mrre room mai kya kar raha tha ...
Aalekh : naina tujko pura yakeen hai vo raj hi tha ...
Naina : ha aalek maine usko itne kareeb se dekha tha par jaisa yeh hai vo vaisa nhi tha
Aalekh; kya matlb
Naina : vo raj bahul alag tha aalekh par ek hi pal mai meri aankhon se door ho gya aaj saamne aaya to yeh aisa roop ...mai kuch samj nhi paa rhi aalekh ...yeh raj kisi paheli ki tarah hai ...
Aalekh : naina tu kaisi baate kar rahi hi usse mile ek din nhi hua tu usko samjne ki baat kar rahi hai aur tune sach mai raj ko dekha tere kamre mai to apun uspe nazar rakhega 24 ghante kahi vo dushman ka spy to nhi jaisa humne pada tha ...
Naina : ho sakta hai par jo bhi hai yeh log mere bare mai phle se jante hai kaise vo humko pata lagana hi hoga ...
Aalekh : tu ten mat le apun kuch karega aur tu us huda se bhi door reh sala ek no ka kamina hai...apun chalta hai tu bhi aaram kar ...
Aalekh jata hai nd naina apne room mai jati hai ...
Naina room mai aati hai to dekha ki misha ne pure room ko kachre ka dabba bana ke rakha tha
Naina ; misha yeh sab kya hai
Misha : arre yr mujko koi achi si dress nhi mil rahi hai
Naina : par tu dress ka kya karegi date pe ja rhi hai kya ...
Misha : arre nhi dumbo mai usko ache se kaat ke faad ke apne dad ko bhejugi itni mehngi dress ka satyanash dekh kar vo mujko jarur vapis bula lenge ...
Naina zor se hasne lagi
Naina : misha tu pagal hai sach mai acha tujse kuch puchu batayegi
Misha : ha pooch na
Naina : tu rajvir shikhawat ko kabse janti hai i mean kya kya janti hai
Misha : kya baat hai nainu tujko us champu mai bahut interest hai ...
Naina : plz misha bata na
Misha : ya aaj se phle kabhi dekha nhi tha bas suna tha vo parties mai kam hi jata hai naveen ko to dekha hai kai baar par usko nhi aaj dekh bhi lia ...
Naina : tu mujko us ke ghar ka address de sakti hai ...
Misha : kya baat hai ek hi din mai us pe lattu yr naina uski taraf dekh aur khud ki taraf dekh aisa lagta hai jaise ...
Naina : misha ek bar plz bata na tu meri frnd hai na
Misha : ok baba batati hu ...
Misha naina ko raj ke ghar ka address deti hai udhar aalekh bhi 24 hours raj pe najar rakh raha hai ...inki daily tranning to saath mai chal hi rahi hai
Aise hi kai din aur beet gaye nd sab ke sab tranning mai ek no ke kaamchor hai to brig ne yeh faisla kia ki inki tranning 3 ki jagah 6 months ki hogi ...
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AAJ IN SAB KO YAHAN AAYE HUYE EK MAHINA HO GYA
Is ek mahine mai kuch nhi badla as ususal thaka dene wali tranning ...raj ka vahi champu look ...huda ka raj ko pareshan karna aur raj ka kuch na bolna ...naina ne bahut koshih ki ki vo raj se baat kare par raj uske pass aana to door usko dekhne ko tayar nhi tha . ...misha se raj ke ghar ka address lekar naina vaha gyi bhi magar kuch nhi mila vaha ghar mai raj ke dad raj naveen aur sherry rehte thecin sab ke ima aane ke baad raj ke dad akele ho gye hai bs vahi hsi ghar mai ...naina chori chupe raj ke room tak bhi gyi but kuch nhi mila ...
Naina thak gyi thi magar usko koi clue nhi mila raj ke bare mai jaisa raj usne apne room mai dekha tha vo bilkul bhi vaisa nhi mila uske ghar pe bhi uske aisi hi look wali pics thi jaisa vo IMA mai rehta hai ...
Raj akela rehta hai kisi se baat nhi karta naveen se bhi nhi bs roj ki tranning thak kar vapis aana aur so jana yahi inlogo ka daily routine tha ...
Par ek chiz thi jo is ek month mai nhi badli ...har roj raat naina ko yeh ehsaas hota tha ki koi uske pass hai aur vo raj hi hai par jab bhi vo aankh kholti kuch nhi milta ...
Is ek paheli ka jawab naina ko nhi mila tha ki agar raj roj ske saath uske pass hota hai to usko dikhta kyu nhi aur vo agar usko like bhi karta hai to sab ke saamne to kya akele mai bhi baat nhi karta ...
Aur idhar huda puri tarah se naina pe lattu tha vo usko pane ke liye har try kar raha tha roj uski help karta kisi na kisi kaam mai 3-4 to us ne naina ko fir se bachaya tha kabhi chot khane se to kabhi brig ki daant se ...
Par naina uske dimag mai to ek hi baat ghoomti thi sara din raj raj aur bas raj ...usne kabhi socha bhi nhi tha is itni ordenary look vale ladke ke peeche vo pagal ho jyegi
...na jane kab uske sawalo ke jawab milege usko ..
END OF PART ...
LOVE CRYSTAL
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWE's sooo beautiful start😉awesome awesome superb long amazing update😃😉plz update soon na waiting for next update plz continue soon thanks for pm😛😃😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Read all parts
Really nice yr raj ???kuch toh panga h boss
Naina alekh isme bhi bestfriend h i love it mjhe naina kalekh ke dosti bohat pasand h
Naveen shreey kya secreat h inka update soon thanks for pm
Update soon


Love arti

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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
hi
the up is really good
so Raj is a champu here wow a new twist
huda asusual a flirt
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Hey kiran
Nyc start
Sach mai tumne toh raj ko imagin se ekdum opposite kar diya
Raj ko kavi champu look pe imagin hi nai kiya
Really nyc 1 haan
Keep going
😛 😊

Luv millee 😛

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