Innocent Love-AK ,pt 15, p.22 - Page 9

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice update & Happy new yearrrrrrrr 2007
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
Choooooooooooooooooo Chweet!!!! 😳 I still can't stop smiling at their innocence, no wonder the title is "innocent" love.

Wonderful part, continue as soon as you can! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
awesome parts!!! they r shhhooo cute...my fav thing is that kripa cant slep unless she is cuddled in angad's arms 😳 ...cont soon 👏

and..

HAPPY NEW YEAR

07'!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
its so sweet and cute 😛 jst simmply adored it and it was kinda funny too 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was soooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!!! 😳 That was jus tooooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 I wonder wats ritten in her diary!!!!! COnt soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
That wa sso cute! _Please continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 10

kripa and angad ran into garden and fell on the ground tired of running and laughing at the same time

a: tum ithne nakhre karthi ho mujhe patha nahin tha

k: abb tho patha chela na

a: tum kudh bhol sakthi thi na, ye sab drama karne se behther rehtha tha

k: kaha subha main uthne se pehle chale jathey ho aur rath ko dher se athey ho, patha hey mujhe ki tum ek doctor ho aur tumhari own hospital ki construction chal rahi hey lekin phir bhi thoda time apne pathni ke liye bhi tho nikhal saktey tey na

angad is looking at kripa and thinking how lucky he is to have a lovely wife who cares about him and his goals

k: angad mere batey sun rahey ho ya nahin

a: hmmm.............hmmmm sun raha hun

k: acha bholo maine kya kaha

a: tumne mujeh pucha ki kya main sun raha hun

k: oh tik hey vuse pehle kya kaha maine

a: vohi ke main sun raha hun ya nahin

k: tik hey maine pucha ki kya tum sun rahey hey ho lekin vusse se pehle kya kaha

a: actually kripa oh kya hey na

k: chodo angad shayad tum kisi khayalo main ho oh sab chodo tumhe dher ho rahi hey jao jao and kripa left from their

a: pagal hey aur sab ko pagal banathi hey

ka: sab ko ya sirf tumko pagal banadhiya

a: main tho kabh ki pagal hoghaya hun

ni: acha

a: haan and turned around and saw nishant and kannan , shocked to see them

a: oh no mujhe dher ho rahi hey bye bhaiya , bye bhabhi

ni&ka: pagal

in the hospital during lunch time angad opened kripa's dairy

first page

Hi

I am kripa aur ye meri dairy hey

meri mom kehthi hey ki

kisiki dairy padna bahuth buri bath hey

have a great time

kripa

angad smiled in himself reading it

jan 1st

ajj har rooz se kuch alagh karna sochi issiliye

flashback........................

9:00 am

g: kripa beta utto , new year ke dhin bhi ithna late

k: mom please sone dhono mujhe

g: rath bar party karo aur subha uthne keliye bhole tho nahin uthi

su: gayatri sone dho vusse patha nahin rath ko kab soghayi hey

k: thank you dad, mom suna na app ne abb app jao aur mujhe sone dho

gayatri went out of the room muttering and kripa went back to sleep again

we see a person enter the house we see his , he is going to kripa' room with a jug full of ice cold water, at the same time bobby was also going to kripa's room with water jug, he saw the person and was shocked he was about to speak something, but the person sighed him to not to say anything they both went inside stood beside the bed and mouthed to 3 and

k: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, with a scary mask
both bobby and person got startled and the water fell on them itself ice cold water and now we see the person's face its josh, it took 10 seconds for them to come back to senses and kripa is laughing holding her stomach

j: kripa ki bachiiiiiiiii youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu, ajj main tujhe chodungha nahin

k: pehle pakado tho sahi saying that she ran to bathroom instantly

end of flashback...............

angad was laughing by now

he turned the next page but didn't found anything after 10 pages he found again something

jan 22nd

ajj asusual sunset time ko beach ko ghayi thi main aur vaha char ladke mujhe ched rahey tey ithne main josh aya aur main bach ghaye, lekin ek bath bholo oh char ladke mere classmate rahul ke friends tey aur rahul mujhe impress karne ke liye plan banaya tha socha ki oh mujhe akhe bachayegha lekin bechara vusse kya patha ki mere bhaiya vaha ayenghey

jan 24th

ajj rahul ne bahuth himath lekhar mujhe propose karne keliye aya tha lekin vuss dhin mujhe ghar main mom ne dhantithi issiliye jab rahul ne mujhe propose kiya tho maine vusse jorrrrrrrr se thapad mara, patha nahin kya socha hogha kal vusse sorry bhol dhunghi

jan 25th

ajj rahul college ko nahin aya aur ajj hi college ki last day hey patha nahin main vusse kabhi sorry bhol pavunghi ya nahin ufff patha nahin vuske upper apna gussa kyun nikhali

phir kuch nahin likhi hi nahin ithne main someone knocked the door

angad looked from his half glass door(people inside can see the outside person, but outside can't see inside) and its kripa, angad hurriedly hides the dairy in the cabinet and

a: come in

k: hi angad

a: hi kripa tum yaha, kuch kaam tha kya

k: haan actually iss weekend ko hum sab log milkey humare farm house ko jarahey hey

a: kuch khass bath hey kya

k: oh ..........oh sab chodo mujhe shopping jana hey chalo mere sath

a: lekin pehle appointments check karne dho

k: vuski koi jarrurath nahin maine nisha se bath karli hey, aur vusse keh bhi dhiya ki aghar koi emergency hey tho tumhare cell try kare aghar anhin milla tho mere cell ko phone kare

a: you are smart kripa

k: tell me something new angad, abb chalo bhi

till weekend angad forgot about the dairy and everyday kripa and angad started to spend atleast one hour , kripa started having feelings for angad

on weekend josh and angad are playing basketball, nishant and kannan are watching them, kripa just came by

k: josh how dare , mere bina basket ball khel rahey ho

j: oh kripa hum nahin khel rahey hey , this is just practice

just then misty came their

k: chalo misty bhi yaha ayi tho match khelenghey girls vs boys

a: what tum ladkiya basket ball khelenghey, har jayenghey

mi: acha hum bhi tho dekhenghey kuan harenghey aur kuan jithenghey, come on kripa lets start the game

j: hum bhi dekhenghey

they started the game, josh was about to throw the ball in the basket but misty went and kissed him on the cheek and kripa took the ball from a shocked josh's hand and made a goal( i don't know what they call when they throw the ball in the basket )

a: josh tum ne ye kya kardhiya yaar

j: sorry yaar , next time it will not happen

they played for an hour now girls are leading by one point, by now everyone came to watch there game , kripa got the ball from josh and moving towards the basket but angad hold her by waist and made her turn towards him and both their bodies passed a small current to eachother and they both were locked in eachothers eyes, josh made a goal, everyone claps made them come back from their trance, now both girls and boys have same points, this time it was kripa's turn to surprise angad, kripa kissed him on his cheek like misty and angad froze in his position she made a goal and they won the game

j: angad kya kiya yaar thune last minute

a: oh kya hey na , he realised what happened, kripa this is cheating tumne cheat kiya hey

k: acha jo tumne kiya vuse kya kehtey hey and by the way Mr. Khanna everything is fair in love and war

j: chod abhi na hum log kaise bhi har ghaye

k: abb bholo ki girls are best

j: haan meri maa tum log hi best ho

ni: abb inne punishment bhi dheni chahiye

a: kya bhaiya pehle se hi hum log harghayie , app punishment bhol rahey ho aur app humare sath dhena chahiye

ni: pehle tum logo ladkiyo ko cheda, abb kripa aur misty tum dhono ko chance dhe raha hun phir kabhi nahin milegha

ka: inke liye achi punishment tho misty aur kripa ko shopping lekhar jana

k: haan thats a best idea

mi: inhe yehi correct punishment hey

a,j: what?????????????

a: bhabhi please, hum per dhaya karo please

na: no abb meri dhono betiyo ko tum dhono shopping lekhar jaa rahey ho and thats final

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thats for now, I tried to make it as long as possible for writting so delay

next part: angad and kripa's dinner date 😉

Thanks for all your lovely and encouraging comments

luv all

sweety

Edited by sweety223 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
heyy, i am the first one to reply..hehe
anywayz, plz continue soon
i cant wait to read the next part
i hope kripa falls in love with angad soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
Excellent part, itz soooo sweet!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
she's written abt rahul in her diary did she like him or smth but hope she falls for A soon

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