Innocent Love-AK ,pt 15, p.22 - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww, SWEET part!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 šŸ‘ PLEASE continue soon!!!!!!! 😃 and i hope Kripa falls in love with Angad soon!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
fab part!!! aww that was cute 😳 ...i wonder whatll happen at the dinner date šŸ˜‰ continue soon šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
she's slippin, now she neeeds to fall!! in love with angad...



awesome partz.. just caught up..


continue sooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
great part 😊
it was soooo cute and sweet
hope angad continues reading the diary and finds out about her life
hope kripa realises she loves angad soon
the last part was great when kripa and misty challange angad and josh and they win by kissing their husbands
amazing as usual
cant wait 2 read the next part
continue soon
šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95

Thanks for your lovely comments , they are really encouraging

Sorry for the delay as i didn't got any idea of how angad would propose to kripa lolzšŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

Part 11

days passed by kripa and angad getting close to each other knowing each other , kripa's feeling for angad was growing day by day, angad thought kripa's present is important for him so he never opened the dairy again

one day as daily habbit angad and kripa went to beach in the evening, it's pleasent evening with a nice slow breeze, waves are so calm on top of that it was a full moon day

angad and kripa sat on a rock, kripa had her arms linked with angad and her head on his shoulder, both are looking at the ways and in between stealing glances without knowing the other.

angad thinking" i think this is the right time mujhe kripa se apni dil ki bathna chahiye" out loud "kripa" both looked at each other at the same time they were so close that their both lips got brushed to each other slightly, their eyes looked slowly they kissed each other which turned into a passionate one, they got interupted due to rain they both turned opposite due to embarasment

angad and kripa walked back towards the car the drive went silent with their minds talking

in their mind

a: ye maine kya kardhiya, kripa kya soch rahi hoghi, bhina uski mann ki bath jane, oh god yeh kya hoghaya hey

k: angad ajj mujhe patha chala ke main tumse pyaar karne laghi hun, ithne dhin main ek confusion main thi ki tumhari liye jo feelings tey oh pyaar hey ya kuch aur hey lekin ajj mujhe patha chala ki main tumse pyaar karne laghi kudh se bhi jayadha, angad tum mujhse pyaar karo ya naa kaaro but I LOVE YOU so much

kripa was blushing thinking about angad, they both reached home, got changed they both don't want to face each other withmixd feelings in them, atlast while sleeping as kripa has a habbit of sleeping while hugging angad but today she was feeling different they both were laying on each corner but both are not able to sleep they where not able resist themselves both turned towards each other and at the same time said"I LOVE YOU kripa/angad"

they both laughed, came close to each other and hugged tightly slowly angad brushed his lips with kripa, their kiss turned into a kiss with love, passion, everything it was their night.

next day morning we see angad and kripa under the sheets, everything near the bed scattered, kripa was sleeping on angad's bare chest and angad holding kripa so securly as if someone will come snatch her away from him.

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thats for today

sorry for the short part , I will try to write one more part in this week

once again thanks for your comments

luv

sweety

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome part.... yayyyyyyyyyy they luv each other... awesome 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
awesome part!!!!!! wohooooo!!! yay!!! they love each other nd confessed and basically are together!!!!! loved it!! continue soon šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww, that was CUTE!!!!!!! 😳 😳 continue soon!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
Awwww... sooo cute, awesome part, continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
thats so cute cant wait till u cont god kripas lucky who wudnt want to wake up with angad šŸ˜›

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