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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 1

Families that are committed, nurturing and encouraging can weather any storm. Unfortunately this is not the case for Aarti Raizada's family... A devastating incident tore this family apart, never to be the same again. A mother so wrapped up in her own loss and heartache, she neglected her two children who were in dire need of her love, affection and reassurance; a weakling of a husband/father who abandoned his family when his care and support was required the most; a young boy shocked by the abduction of his twin sister, hurting and confused; and an adolescent son/brother unable to openly mourn the tragic disappearance of his little sister as he is forced to don the mantle of a nurturer, making up for absentee parents who were too immersed in their own grief to think about the anguish of their other two children.

Today I felt sorry for Aarti Raizada. Not only was she shattered by the traumatic disappearance of her little girl Anjali, she was also deserted by a cowardly husband in her time of need, left alone to lament the irreparable loss of her child. As such it is not at all surprising that she has assumed this cold, distant facade for her self-protection and survival. She does love her sons very much as is evident from her near hysterical reaction to Akash's tumble down the stairs; but she is loath to openly show her emotions for fear of hurt and rejection.

Akash vulnerable, troubled youngest son drinks himself into a stupor in order to annihilate his inner demons, consequently becoming an alcoholic. He idolizes his older brother Arnav; hopefully he will pay heed to his brother's sound advice of getting his act together, enrolling in a detox program and coming clean with his girlfriend Lavanya regarding his alcoholism. I am confident with the soothing balm of Lavanya's love and encouragement Akash will soon emerge from this quagmire of despondency and hopelessness.

Arnav nurturer, provider, protector of this dysfunctional family is a man hiding aching wounds of his own. His yearly trips in the last quarter of the year are his way of escaping from the troubling memories associated with this time of the year - the fun-filled birthday celebrations of his twin siblings Anjali/Akash; joyous Navratri and Diwali festivities and the exuberant ringing in of the new year... all blissfully happy family times which vaporized in a flash with the heartbreaking abduction of Anjali.

Now that Arnav's monochromatic and lackluster life has been infused with the vivid, lively colors of Khushi's love, vivacity and gaiety, he is prepared to face the nightmares from his past and allow his painful weeping wounds to close up and heal.

Sandhya, you have skillfully articulated the insecurities, self-doubts, sorrow and pain that trouble this family; and the masks worn by them to conceal these afflictions.

This family has suffered enough, it is now time for them to heal and become whole again. Arnav/Akash are indeed very fortunate to have Khushi/Lavanya, two strong, spirited women in their lives; women who will go the extra mile for the happiness and well-being of their men. It is Aarti I am concerned about, who will help her with her healing process? She needs help and soon!!

Edited by jujubee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This chapter is all about change.
After so many years when Arnav try to run away from this place, he changes course and decide to stay. This is big change in his life. And definitely Khushi is behind all this. He is more calm and peaceful and more focused. And after years he realised that he was wrong for not taking care of his family.
Akash too looked as a changed man in this update. But it's true that he should give up his habit of drinking. Can understand its difficult to give up but now that he is in love with lavanya,he should try hard. And I agree with Arnav that he should be completely true with lavanya, if she is interested, she will accept him with all his shortcomings. At least he wants to move on in his life. Which is good.
I felt so sad for arti in this. She has suffered a lot in this. She lost her child and then her husband too distanced himself. She has to be strong for everyone here. And in all this she becomes too hard, too cold. Beautifully written about her sorrow in this. Her hurt and helpless to help her child can be felt.
Amazing sandhya. This was wonderful.
Thanks for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sandhya, as usual a fabulous update.
Today was a busy day and just read the update now.

I have a lot to say. Will write my two cents tomorrow.

Just wanted to let you know that I loved the update and it is making me think a lot about each character in the story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely bonding between the brothers!
Sandhya, I love how you bring about the nuances in the family relationships; Akash snapping at his mother, his mother backing away though she was highly concerned with his injuries, her trying to mask dejection by working with the plants..

I think I have told you before, I understand Aarti's pain; she would have healed may be to certain extent had her husband with her; how could he leave a grieving wife and two young kids? And an aging mother?

Arnav's introspection comparing himself to his father makes sense; there are only few people in the world who admit they are not right all the time and Arnav is one of them;

No wonder everybody his happy that he canceled his trip :)

Cheers
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was a beautiful update. Arnav's mom is truly an enigma and would love to read more about her someday! Just loved the bonding between the brothers..made me miss my siblings!.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello sandhya
In earlier chapter, I was wondering how come no is bothered about Akki's condition, so now it is clear.
My respect for Arnav increased tenfold dear, Akash is truly blessed with the best brother,but what about their mom, she is still a mystery,hope her character will come into light, though u have given her intro, as to why she is like that.
Felt sorry for Arnav, as he was expecting something from his mother,
Over all a touching chapter dear,
As always loved it.
Thank u do much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice update. loved the way Arnav took care of his brother and showed him the right path wrt Lavanya.glad to see things r getting better with Arnav and his mom, which he really wants it to happen. Arnav feeling guilty about not being there for Akash's Bday all these years and he changed his mind for Khushi was so realistic..absolutely enjoyed the conversation between the brothers, u write so well as if its happening right in front of us.
Waiting for ArShi in the next part, I am waiting to see if Arnav will let her know about his staying back In Connoor for her ( I think he wont as hes too nice to do that) so need to see if Khushi realises it by herself or thru someone or she doesnt get to know about it at all. hope to see lots of lovey dovey happening between the 2 love birds who have fallen recently in love😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome...loving the pace of the story...n eagerly waiting for arshi scene...😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was a super update . Arnav as a brothet is dong his duty. Anjalis disappearance has effected the whole family. All r hurt hope all their injuries will be healed. A good conversatipn between the siblings. Happy to see that Akash is willing tp go for rehab. Waiting for second part.

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