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Posted: 9 years ago
This is again a wonderful update . This is what I love about your stories, one is your Arnav is very thorough gentleman and honest despite that he is THE ASR ( and has those characters of ASR), whether it is DND or HOT, also your story show strong family bond, depth and flaws of other members of family/characters.
So here Arnav is a good brother and gradually we will find more details of Arnav's mom and why she is like that. What to say about Khushi and Arnav, both have fallen for each other and will find out what is in future for them. I know their path is not smootth but they both are honest and independant and seems to be levelheaded and hopefully will come out of their past, shackles binding them etc.

Also I am hoping against much hope that somewhere Anjali is alive and we will be able to see her
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sandhya, I would like to know more about Arnav's dad..what kind of a person he is..why did he abandon his family..Arnav's mother also looks like a good person with a tough exterior..

Akash is doing a big mistake by hiding his alcohol problems from Lavanya..

looking forward to part 2 :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Sandhya, this update made me think a lot about human relationships and how we always try to find happiness which is not with us and forget about what we have.

Aarti did the same mistake. Agreed disappearance of a child is no less painful than losing a child but what about the children who are left behind, solely depending on her emotionally.

Now the distances between Aarti and her sons are so wide that it would take lot of effort on both sides to cross that distance.

Arnav atleast was a stronger person, he found ways to deal with all the ugly situations even be running away from it. But Akash was the weaker one. And being Anjali's twin further worsened the situation for him. Everything of him probably reminded Aarti of Anjali including his birthday.

After Anjali's abduction, has Akash ever celebrated his birthday? Has anyone ever wished him?
Probably No.

And he always looked for love. My guess is him falling in love easily either with Payal or Lavanya is the proof for that. He needs acceptance. He needs someone to take care of him, assure him of their love for him. And when he does not find love, he looks for some kind of relief in alcohol.

One can only feel sad for him. There is only a limit to what Arnav can help him too.

Arnav did try to build and boost his morale, but always being in the shadow of either Arnav or the ugly truth of Anjali's twin did not build his confidence in any way.

He needs help in many ways not just rehab.

The question is can and will Lavanya agree to be the anchor of his life boat? It is not a crime to be weak and to seek help. Not everyone are born strong in this world. And if Lavanya genuinely feels Akash is a nice guy, good at heart, I hope she extends that arm towards him.

She is a strong person and her strength would help pull Akash out of the abyss he is in now.

Coming to Arnav, feeling that he is like his father, running away from situations, I want to ask him this question, is running away wrong?

And he was only running away because even after trying he could not find solutions to the problems at home. Solutions to problems is a collective work and apparently he cannot be the entire family to do all the work.

Atleast now, even if it is due to Khushi, he is staying back. Lets see if something good comes out of it.

Now Sandhya, his images of Khushi being naughty and playful, was that his imagination or did they spend the night together???😳🤔

For now I will not comment on Arnav's father until I know his POV. Let me wait for his appearance in the story.

Sandhya, what I love about your writing is, you do not explicitly tell us how a character is and what are his or her strengths and weaknesses are. But you give instances in their lives which makes us think about them, look at them like real people and try to put ourselves in their shoes and understand them better.

Thank you for this wonderful update. Now eagerly waiting for Part 2.
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Posted: 9 years ago
so Aakash s in some serious trouble...i hope he will take Arnav's advice seriously in both case La n rehab.he shuld b honest with her for sure...and Arti i m nt in like wit da lady as of nw..may be dere s something why she s dis way... Arnav's staying bk really pleased dem it seems...nw waiting for da next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update! to be honest I loved this update more than the previous one where arshi got together. you had earlier given an insight into the aftereffects of the tragedy that struck years ago, this chapter makes the picture a little more clearer. arnav has been running away from the pleasant memories of yesteryears which now have become just a brutal reminder of what could have been. he has tried to do the best of his capability to keep the family and business together but at the end of the day he is also a human with his flaws so can't blame him.
akash is that serious about lavanya that he openly confesses to arnav, hope lavanya too reciprocates his feelings. the joy and the enthusiasm when he knew that his brother would be there with him this year on his birthday was too overwhelming and glad that arnav felt that too. to think about this akash birthday would only be a painful loss for the family, hope he spends some well deserved moments this year with lavanya.
coming to arti she has withdrawn herself into a shell so much that she is now scared to express her love to her own children! I can't imagine a fate worse than this for any mother let alone a woman who has already lost her one child and has been abandoned by her husband. like arnav said where the hell is his father? did he hurt his wife, blamed her for the loss of their daughter? though nothing is clear about him, but the image he forms for the time being is of a weak man who left his grieving family to themselves running away from his responsibilities instead of being the strong pillar of support.
if the twins birthday is coming, khushis birthday is also around. what would be her state of mind that day? does arnav know this? wonder akash reaction when he knows about arnav and khushi, now that he told his feelings to arnav but his brother didn't show the same honesty to him.
khushis return has surely started changing things for the better
can't wait for part 2 plz continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
What a wonderfully written chapter ...
Arnavs lightheartedness was so catching ... specially sliding down the staircase railing 😆
Khushi's coming into his life has been like a ray of sunshine ...

Thank God for brothers and sisters ... at least they stand by you in times of need
and call a spade a spade 😆 ...
Hopefully Arnavs bluntness will help Aakash tide over this difficult time ...

Thanks Sandhya ... am so so happy that IF has come up with a solution to most of
our problems ... and hopefully we should not encounter these problems again in future ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gripping story, beautifully written. Enjoying it immensely. Thanks.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Glad that your fight against plagiarism got the much needed attention .
Coming to the story, very well written. A tragedy in a house can bring on different reactions from each member. Some could become elusive while some become a strong pillar holding the rest of the household. Curious to know about Arnav's dad.
Hope Akash will find the strength to fight his addiction with the help of Arnav and eventually win Lav.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great Chapter. It was nice to see the positive interactions between Aarti, Aakash and Arnav.
Looking forward to the next part. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Sandhya,
I started rereading this story just now. I don't know how I. Issued that you had started updating again. But I'm really glad I caught up with story again. And it's awesome.
Apart from painstakingly developing the characters with great detail, you've also explored many many social problems that may really exist in a place like Nilgiris. apart from the touristy Ooty and Coonoor, there's really so much more to the Nilgiris. All those problems, be it labour unions, missing girls, opium trading, all look plausible. What amazes me is the amount of research that you have done to make them authentic. Instead of just casually brushing through them, you have written them out in great detail. This is what gives this story an extra dimension and makes it so much more than just a story. I am just loving this.
It's now piqued my curiosity about who is this guy who wants to know about every detail of Khushis life. It's still probably too early to guess if Shyam will turn negative or not. Will he turn into a stalker or will he join hands with Arnav to ensure Khushis safety? Will Khushis interest in the old files help him put the kidnapping cases back on the investigative track? Are the kidnapping of young girls and the marijuana crop cultivation and Khushis stalker all inter connected? I think yes and solving the case may be the ultimate feather in Shyams cap.
Yet, through all these developments, the romance of Khushi and Arnav is coming along beautifully. Their budding feelings for each other seems to have given a new purpose and direction to their lives and will help them heal.
Awesome writing Sandhya and hoping to stay on with you on the rest of this wonderful journey.

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