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deepthi

@deepsdspeed

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#941

Great update as usual.. Nice to see the bonding between Arnav and Akash .. Arnav staying back and not running away.. Hope the positivity continues.. There is no big force than a positive will, will to do something..

As for lavanya, she will understand Akash and will not turn her back.. Waiting to see more of them..

Waiting for the next part.

Take care

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#942

Originally posted by: 1chilly
Waitingfor the HOT update!

Sorry sorry...running slightly behind. Give me an extra day please.

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#943

Whole family along with the house needs a change .. And lavnya is good for akash...

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jujubee

@jujubee

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#944

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Sorry sorry...running slightly behind. Give me an extra day please.

No worries, we will wait 🤗

A piping hot cuppa green tea to help your relax 😆

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bkamber

@bkamber

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#945

😊

Part 1 thoughts...Banister Slide

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😃

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thechaigirl

@thechaigirl

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#946

Hii Sandhya, m commenting after long...actually pressures of asli duniya did not let me come to IF in over a month...

basically read chap 13, 14 and 15 all in one go...lot happened while I was away.

Khushi called Arnav in times of need, and he left all for her. Solid grounds to have a relationship on. As I read that chapter I kept on thinking do they realize that in such a short time against the backdrop of their entwined pasts they have managed to have complete trust in one another. Khushi particularly feels comfortable enough to be vulnerable in front of him. That scene and their interaction at home really showed a good chemistry which goes beyond mere physical attraction.

Coming to SP Shyam P now he comes across as an intriguing character. Looks like he genuinely cares for doing his job well. Clearly he is interested in Khushi... The name Shyam makes me prejudiced 😛, but I am keeping an open mind. His entry into the story am sure will make the story more interesting.

Akash the guy deserves a break from life and most importantly from his behavior patterns which cause him such suffering. Looks like Lavanya will provide the necessary motivation for him to break the prison he/life has created for him.

Wonderful as usual Sandhya cant wait for the next update...

I apologize for not commenting regularly...its just that right now asli duniya is a chaos and seems it will be so for a few more months...will try my best though

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Huleygirl

@Huleygirl

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#947

Akash has gone through a heart break so he is insecure about Lavanya's feelings for him, so him opening up about his drinking problem is a big deal. Still he should be honest with her. Wonderful update though but still miss arshi

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Aathira

@chikkus05

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#948

finally I caught up with the story.im sry di for not commenting.u know studies need my attention about the chapters as usual awesome di. A lot of things happened.Arnav and Khushi now together in this.loved Arnav and Akash convo.and don't forget shyam and that too as a police officer I'm surprised and its look like he is really gud in his job.he is interested in Khushi mmm .and ya the whole family need a change.waiting for the second part

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Rayolight

@Rayolight

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#949

Loved the chapter!

This gets more and more gripping as it goes. I am so glad that Khushi has let her guard down finally. They are both each others lifeline - or at least starting to be - and they will realize that soon.

Besides Arnav and Khushi, you are describing the the rest of the characters beautifully...every single persons life and reaction to that one devastating event is thoroughly & scrupulously penned down.

Loving every bit of it Sandhya and waiting for the next update.

Cheers! :)

Ray