~Arhi FF~#4~The Hands of Time~Chp-15~P.129~Mar 13~Link to Th-5 on P.1 - Page 35

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Posted: 9 years ago

I have enjoyed reading tea plantation, business problems, labor unions, strikes and drafting agreements. I have no idea about them before reading this update and it is very informative. You described the proceedings very effectively and engrossed the readers with your ultimate story narration abilities.

I love Aarti's royal grace and attitude. She is one strong woman with powers.

Shreya and Arnav friendship and relationship is interesting. I hope Aarti won't be very disappointed to know their breakup.

What happened to Khushi now? Is she in trouble due to her investigation? Or did she get drunk and wallowing for rejecting Arnav?


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii...I really like this story a lot..and your description of the nilgiris makes me wish I could stay there...ooh and I guess Khushi got drunk and called up Arnav...doesn't seem like her but that would explain her slurred voice...eagerly waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great to see you back in action...I had missed this story..
Loved the update...completely engaging
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi
Thank you for pm
Amazing update
I dont know anything about tea plantation but i liked the fact that you are descriptive about it in update.
I like that Arnav and Akash had Pratap for a father figure..would love to read more about his character.
So shreya...they had a relationship and she is kind of hung up on him..possessive jelouse type...ok so i cant predict if she is going to be a good friend or villian..and Aarti loves her makes this Arnav-Shreya situation intresting.
Khushi called Arnav wonder what for? Arnav's feelings for her are increasing day by day..i hope they find the common ground for their problems and help each other.
Thank you for this update.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sandhya Darling,
Here I was requesting you to give us and Khushi some lead towards Anjali or Radha and all you do is complicate the story more with this messed up Shreya's character.. 😉. Gosh...Shreya and Arthi form some team...but together they are really bad news for Arnav and Khushi...really really bad news.
Especially considering Shreya got wiff of Khushi, I cannot imagine the doom that is going to fall when Shreya lets out about the phone call in her twisted version ( which can only be half truth ), exactly what Khushi wanted to avoid when she decided to let Arnav walk off her life... now how am I to sleep peacefully ?
Is Khushi just plain drunk or is she in trouble...that is my another big worry...
All I can do now is WAITING...
WAITING...
WAITING...
WAITING...

P.S: WISH YOU AND YOUR FAMILY A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A VERY PROSPEROUS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update.
but a khushiless update.
the tea plantations are in trouble and shreyas father may be of great help. he is an experienced businesman but also an influential politician. hope he doesnt use his help to armtwist arnav for his daughters happiness. arti already adores shreya much more than needed.
i just hope that shreya turns more mature and wise than she appears and she loves arnav enough to let him go. however by the looks of it she also appears unstable considering her moodswings. all this is likely to turn messy.
khushi called arnav, hope she is well.

plz continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
What a crossroad you decided to leave us.

I just happen to see this chapter, i thought you are still tied up with moving and adjusting into the new place

Anyway, happy to see you back on the story.

I m bit at loss, cause, I don't remember much of the previous chapters. Guess, i need to refresh the previous chapters to be on the track on this story.

Let me go back the previous chapters n get back

Until then...

Happy Holidays!

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Sandhya...feels good to have u n HOT back...the story is catching up...missed Arshi together though...
Liked Shreya...felt bad for her the way she hhumiliated herself... But liked Arnav for being a good friend...

The end was a cliffhanger... Hope u update asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thoughts on chapter 11 n 12.

Oh no.

The confession did not turn out the way...

Are you really to going yo send her to somewhere else.

I love their fight.

I m sure, Arnav is going to come looking for Kushi, now after what happen between hom n his childhood friend.

Will she be there waiting for him?

Or should she leave and come back once she get her mind back

Anxiously waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very sorry for replying so late...was very occupied. Finally finished reading both chapters 11 and 12 and the short summary.
Chapter 11

Khushi is trying so hard but she still can't get rid of the guilt of losing Anjali...feels like she is looking for some closure through solving Radha's case. Both these cases are very mysterious. Something very malicious seems to be going down regarding the girls' kidnappings. Looking forward to see how Khushi will crack this one.

Again I love how the women characters are portrayed in this story. Very strong and independent. Good to see Khushi finally realized she should loosen up. The entire description of the party decor seemed so beautiful..it actually made me want to live in a place like that.

The irritating aunties are so aptly described..I have personally gone through a situation like Khushi's where the aunties shamelessly ask why I am not married, what kind of a Man I am looking for etc..Could really identify with that scenario. That is what makes your writing so interesting.

Akash and Lavanya's romance is refreshing and lighthearted. Love reading about them too.

Finally coming to the most anticipated meeting of Arnav and Khushi...their chemistry is sizzling. At least they both have accepted their feelings but theirs is again such a complicated relationship. it's understandable why Khushi is hesitant to take it further but I hope their love conquers all. Their heartbreak was so palpable.

Chapter 12

Arnav and his uncle has a very strong and sweet bond. It's sad how Arnav had to deal with everything without help from his dad. Although we have not yet read a lot about his dad. This also explains some of Aarti Raizada's characteristics. She must have gone through so much with the disappearance of a daughter and no support from the husband. It's natural to have some bitterness but I dread that the same bitterness is going to be a big obstacle for Arnav and Khushi.

Coming to Shreya...she seems like trouble. Her bipolar nature and mood swings are not normal. Not getting good vibes from her, but currently she has handled the situation well. She has caught onto the fact that there is someone else in Arnav's life. I love Arnav's character. He has dealt with everything in such a dignified manner, Anjali's kidnapping, Missing Father figure, business trouble, Aarti's stubbornness, messed up relationship with his best friend and a heartbreak. Too much to deal with but still standing strong. I hope he finds a much needed calmness and peace in life with Khushi.

Finally I hope Khushi is Okay. Such a cliffhanger! Please update soon.

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