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At one point I thought Shreya was bipolar .. the way she kept switching from one emotion to another was kind of weird.but after reading the whole part ,I kind of understood as to from where she is coming ..She was trying to hold on to something which was not hers in the first place.. Did Arnav break up with her immediately after they shared intimacy?

Really very nice update
Enjoyed reading it
I like the easy comrade between the uncle and the nephew ... Pratap is truly really amezing and feeling in the gap of an elder and friend and an absent father ... Finding him thru everything ...
I can totally see mrs.riazada in shreya... No wonder they both get along with each other very easily and like each ither but this spells bad news together

Looking forward to read about khushi's call ... She sounded like drunk ...

Fabulous update !! You are a TERRIFIC writer !! Even though there was hardly any arshi scenes in this update yet I was hooked from the start to the finish !! The way you write, your descriptions of settings, people, emotions is par excellence !! Even the most mundane of things sound great when you write it !! 🤗 Love your writing !! Good that Arnav clearly told shreya off when she tried to come on to him !! Also, really liked the fact that Arnav realized that khushi was pushing him away for his sake !! Wonder if Arnav understands that the way he is thinking about khushi is because he loves her !! The ending was a cliffhanger and can't wait for the next update !! Now the million dollar question remains is why is khushi calling Arnav and if she is actually in trouble and seeing held from Arnav !!

Poor shreya...hope she has truly got the message and se gets someone who loves her back. She needs to calm down a bit as her emotions are all over the place. Arnavs mum may be disappointed but hope arnav tells her about him.and shreya too.

I really like Arnav's character. He was strong enough to walk away from Khushi and strong enough to not give into Shreya who appears to be even more messed up than Khushi. Arnav also has to contend with his own mother who resembles a block of ice that appears ready to thaw for Shreya.

As much as i lived reading it now i want to know why the cliffhanger .
Plz think about your readers before doing that plz
I am not so good with the words so i really dont know any other way to say this that i simply loved it .i totally enjoyed it even with no khushi n arshi in it .u surely know how to wound up readers around your story .
plz update sooer this time its a humble request .

Awesome update !! Love it , it's getting more and more interesting . Eagerly waiting to read more .

Just caught up with the story!

The chapter was filler, what I felt. But just the mundane stuff could be so impeccably presented, that's incredible way of story telling. Loved the chapter. But what with leaving us hanging on the suspense... R u trying to pull fifty shades of grey here, where lady is drunk and calls the hero in her inebriated self??? Wow! I would love to have the story being told the other way round!!! 😉😉