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violetgirl

@violetgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#321

dear di,

another awesome chappy!can u please pm me!i am already on the list!

cheers violetgirl😛

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Sanghamitra Roy

@Smrikta992

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Posted: 9 years ago

#322

Amazing update...
Loved it..
Thnks 4 pm..

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Deepthi

@-prodigy-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#323

Aww cliffhanger not fair sandhya :( :P
Lovely update asusual , I love something about your writing, you bring out social issues like rape giving us insight of them subtly .. And if the America hiding thing is true ,that's horrible!!

"she didn't want to be rescued and he didn't want to drown. " I loved this line in arnav thoughts.. How true is that! Khushi doesn't want come out of the guilt and arnav doesn't want to drown in that ,though he loves his sister as much as khushi does!
Waiting for the next update , take care

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#324

I'm not sure if Shreya actually wants to let go of Arnav or she just said that because Arnav refused her plan of getting in to a relationship again. Somehow I'm not feeling too good about it but I hope I'm wrong. Till the time she comes clean I'd hold back my opinion about her and would be alert where she is in picture. My not so good vibe about her may be because of the fact that she changes so quickly. She was blaming Arnav, then blaming herself, literally jumped on him, questioned if there was someone else, then accepted his thoughts in few minutes and forwarded hand of friendship once again.
And then to add to it is Aarti Raizada. Arnav's mother is too fond of Shreya and she would do everything to bring Arnav & Shreya closer. I'm just not liking where I think it's going.
Did Shreya hear Arnav taking Khushi's name? Because if she did then...
But why would Khushi be calling him this late if she was not in any trouble? There is something, something has happened.
It was good to see Arnav bonding with his Chachu and having some father figure in his life.

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#325

You left at a cliffhanger and for that I could kill you S!! :-)

The update reminded me of the tea estate strike in Kerala. I had completely forgotten about that issue...it was there for sometime in news but then later the new value for it went nil...it was a nice gesture to weave it into the story citing the importance of tea plantation woes and workers union aspect.

Prathap - loved that man...you painted him wonderfully...Even Jose Thomas...I love those character sketches...and for the first time Arati Raizada shone...such a woman with lot of potential...you played her right...loved the loving tones you gave her as a mother...other than the bitterness she keeps inside..it's nice to see this shade of hers..

Shreya - she felt familiar to me...felt real..mood swings, unrequited love, wanting to love and possessiveness...all rhymes...but her understanding towards the end of the update touched me...can't blame her...she knows him in and out and had been close to him, it was natural for her to fall for him..after Arnav Singh Raizada is hard not to fall for when he is all nice...

Oh man! I am head over heels with this man...he he...S! you rock! Missed you...

Wishing you a happy and merry christmas!

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#326

Glad the two friends cleared the air.. The problem with the tea estate is causing a lot of trouble for them.. Is khushi in some kind of problem? Loved the update

Edited by frenzyy - 9 years ago

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rizib

@rizib

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Posted: 9 years ago

#327

Shreya, I'm glad that chapter is closed once and for all. Also it made me very happy how she cleared the shock I got when he said he loved her, it's the general love, not "in love". Thank God!

Now I'm worried for Khushi. What's happened to her?