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v5a1s6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1041

I have mostly been a silent reader since I accidentally landed in the world of fanfictions and then IF. I did not comment mostly because I feel that my comments are not going to add anything valuable to the very interesting discussions that these threads often see. But I really appreciate the effort you writers put in plotting the story, researching and polishing the ideas and then presenting a wonderful outcome to us readers. Thank you for this very intriguing story!

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1042

Mind blowing update
Loved it

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1043

Originally posted by: v5a1s6
I have mostly been a silent reader since I accidentally landed in the world of fanfictions and then IF. I did not comment mostly because I feel that my comments are not going to add anything valuable to the very interesting discussions that these threads often see. But I really appreciate the effort you writers put in plotting the story, researching and polishing the ideas and then presenting a wonderful outcome to us readers. Thank you for this very intriguing story!

I love it when the silent readers comment. Without taking away from the fact that I love all my readers, who leave a word, a sentence, few sentences and detailed comments, I cherish when someone who never speaks up, does it. I believe something in the story compelled you to do so and that is good news for me. Thank you !

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glitter5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1044

I am seeing future scenes of khushi give the video to shyam 🤓

Awesome update

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archmink

@archmink

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1045

I loved the adventures ride
I'd have a heart attack if had scratches or bumped that Porsche ... Khushi's need to do something for laxmi or Vijay is understandable ... But the way she ran behind him anything could have happen to her and I think that the clickes and video might be a start of the chain they would unravel about the kidnappers ...
Can't wait to read more

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Natalia

@Natalia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1046

Absolutely loved loved loved it. So glad and grateful that you are continuing this story. It is intriguing exciting and often scary. Just the right amount of emotional combination that keeps anyone on the edge.

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Greyasr

@Greyasr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1047

Too good sandhya

Yes double likes negate but many times its hard to figure out...

Anyways story was super awesome welcome back and hope to see u soon with another super update

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#1048

really really awesome chapters. So it was Shyaam who was on train and all this itime i kept thinking that was the kidnaper. Very nice development Khushi alongwith Arnav's heart u have stolen SP's heart too. not bad lol... who is this man? who wants khushi to be followed and have an eye upon her.Really love Akash-Arnav's brother bond n I somehow feel bad for their mother too. Thank god Akash is gng to do something real abt his drinking. Omg so that poot kid is now trapped in drug dealings n he might be stealing their money. that's trouble. Really like to see Arnav n Khushi being a couple.. Superb writing n the story keeps getting interesting

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Srilatha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1049

I am really very sorry for the late comment AD got so busy , everyone in the house were sick .

Part 1 Arnav , Akash and their mother 3 different people with 3 different views about the same situation in life has brought them apart and also binds them together. Akash wants to be out of his habit as he found a person , Arnav wants him to start the relationship with honesty. I hope Lavanya understands him and accepts him and encourages him to quit his habit.

Part 2 shows how committed and how much Khushi is feeling guilty and want to correct everything. The way she has answered Arnav's concern was so emotional. They become one I hope they stay together so that they can face all the problems together. Arnav for the first time stayed back during October just because of Khushi and Khushi welcomed Loved into her life just because of Arnav, they need each other.

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arshisimple

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1050

Just read the chapter 15 and it was fabulous. I am just amazed that you created such characters, characters with flaws, which make them real.

So Arnav has finally decided to deal the situation and not to run away, I guess it was high time and to some extent Khushi is the reason for this change. I was just wondering that how Arti would react to this relationship 😲. Aakash needs help and he needed to accept first and though Arnav was harsh, he needed to show him mirror and I hope Aakash can work on his addiction and of course I hope that Lavanya accepts him with his flaws and help him to be a better person!!!Arti was enigma and she was probably most vulnerable in this part or for that matter first time in this story I think !!!!

So Khushi and Arnav had played part of spy and that brought out again Khushi's guilt. In this story if someone is very complicated character then it would be Khushi in my opinion!!!!!She was 8 when this incident happened. There was no way she could be the reason for her abduction but the way she has hold on to this guilt is just very surprising and not in a good way!!! I guess Arnav was right telling her about let it go, if change is in the air then even Khushi should feel that change... As I said before,you have created awesome characters, they are very complicated and emotionally challenged.. I am so looking forward to see how story unfolds now !!!!! Thank you so much for the PM 😊