~Arhi FF~#4~The Hands of Time~Chp-15~P.129~Mar 13~Link to Th-5 on P.1 - Page 107

Still thinking what took me so long to read the story , which comes from a promising author like urself ...

Awesome story and amazing update:). I'm glad akash found someone to love and he better straighten up to woo Lavanaya. I'm curious as who's following Khushi. Maybe Arnav's mom hired someone. Can't t wait anymore for the next update:(! Please update soon.

Sorry for being late S!
What's Vijay up to? Whom was he meeting?
Khushi trailing Vijay was super thrilling., edge of the seat feeling... At that time where was Khushi's stalker?
Arnav expressing his anger was plainly in ASR style. Made me nostalgic You bought out the terror he felt beautifully. It's the first time where a guy is forced to stay back and worry while the girl faces the danger. I liked it. Quite refreshing from the stereotyping..But I loved how she fought his anger by stating who she is and that's it- plain, clear & loud...
Arnav you are deeply involved & you care! Sigh! It's stories like these which makes me wish and yearn for this kind of depth in a relationship.
However after reading this update I was like "poor Ponnappa"

Awesome update
Anjali's kidnapping has affected so many lives

Originally posted by: Heavens_Flower

Chapter 14

What a way to start Book 2! Bravo Sandy... 👏

On one side mystery and danger and the other side a budding romance. Both handled brilliantly and both gripping int heir own way.

Will Shyam turns out to be a friend or a foe? It is going to be interesting as you unravel this mystery?

Chapter 15

Aarti's sorrow is so palpable... That was the standout part on this chapter for me. I still don't agree with the way she treats those around her and mainly Khushi and her family but your are making us see a mother through a more mellowed son's eyes. It gives better understanding of the pain she is carrying inside her.

Arnav is making ore of an effort as romance has touched his heart. He is self analyzing / realizing his choices to without only blaming his brother and father. Love can change a man and he is the proof.

A flirtatious Arnav and a unsettled Khushi. Loved it.

The moment Khsuhi ran off into the forest I expected how it is gonna end. All those adrenaline and you did not disappoint. Thank you!

OMG! Is Khush in danger? I don't want it. Let her smile once in a while.

Thrilling, romantic, and realistic. That sums up this update. Beautiful

Does this mean we are to get an update of this wonderful story sometime soon?