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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1031

What an update. So much going on - it's a like a ride a minute. I feel for the Akash situation having experienced/ experiencing alcoholism at close hand. Alcohol is truly a legal poison and a silent killer.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#1032

As usual Fantastic chapter...Sandhya.

I think Akash is in serious problem. I hope he will take Arnav seriously in both case in Lavanya and Rehab. Your this story is about more than Arnav and Khushi...it is about everyone who is involved in Anjali's life. Your Aarti is the most complex character to understand...why I feel her character is aloof and cold towards her own relations. Arnav father is always missing from the story.

Vijay is another strange character in ARSHI's life. Khushi chance to meet Vijay at bank, his suspicious behaviour, red alerted Khushi's journalism. She is a courageous girl but I think it was a rash decision to go after Vijay without Arnav...and I can understand Arnav's fear and panic. Who is the beard person with Vijay in the woods? Too many suspense...Sandhya. Mystery is getting deeper after each update.

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#1033

I liked the first part. There are positive changes happening in Arnav's family. I like that they are finally trying to move from their past.
It looks like Vijay is doing something illegal.. May be drugs. Looks like Shyam and Khushi are going to meet often.
Serious fights resulting in some heated moments😳

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smric

@smric

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1034

great update.

so arnav stayed back this year for khushi. akash has alcohol issues and he is trying to solve it. lets see how well he does on that issue. the scene between akash aarti and arnav was so numbing. i mean aarati is still hurting over anjali. and i understand that she handled everything after that. what i dont get is how a mother becomes so grieving that she doesnt understand she is ignoring the other two? its been 20 years. you have to let go at some point. as arnav said entire family fell after anjali disappered. so wont you as a parent try to gather the bits and pieces of whats left and move on? also the ignorant father.. aah.i really would like to read about his view on the how he got hurt over daughter and abandoned the family.. two sons who were left to deal with it on their own. especially aakash who took the fall more than anyone. his twin disappered and he thinks mother would have been less hurt had it been him instead of anjali. really wierd family.

so vijay is upto something. what could a 13 year old boy get himself into to handle lot of money? the simple answer i came up with was drugs. so it could be drugs or something else.

it was a hot update. nicely written

thank you for the update. 😊

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#1035

Sandhya - Congratulations on leading the fight against plagiarism and winning. I did not follow but did read about it on Mirabell's post and now yours. That was awesome!!!

Now back to the story. For whatever the reason, my interest had waned , may be the long absence, may be the time between updates or may be my concern that Khushi was over defined to the level where I really just did not find anything like worthy in her to care about or the lack of definition of Arnav to the degree that he appeared like a one dimensional character just there to pander to Khushi and be her perfect boyfriend. I know...pretty harsh and brutal.

Now suddenly you have brought all the characters back into vivid focus or cleaned the lens thru which I am looking at the story but suddenly the story is once again intriguing. You even referenced Arnav's father. Now I am oozing sympathy for Arnav's parents, Arnav, Akash and even Khushi. They are all caught in their own separate hells and it seems like Arnav is the strongest and he actually can see beyond his own pain and may help every one fight out of their own hell into the light. He is so caring of everyone.

You also imbued the couple with a strong doze of sex appeal😆. I am back in love with the story.

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1036

awesome update.. loved it 😊
looks like the roller coaster ride for figuring out the suspense is about to begin for Khushi and we readers..
we can never be bored by the length of you updates.. are always craving for more.. 😛

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#1037

Dayummm!!! In love with your leads!!!!

A) I got to read like almost three in two updates. So thank you love you.

B) damn, I didn't except such a steaming make out session it was most welcome though

C) my god why does that thirteen year old has one lakh and why don't I

D) still waiting for mother drama

E) I love how accepting they are of their emotional baggage and honest. Why can't all people be that way.

Okay this was quick...thanks. And sorry for the lack of punctuation marks *hahah* (nervous laugh). Umm ok bye...next comment will sure look better than this.

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1038

oh wow part 2 was awesome!

arshi turned spies...that was thrilling!!!

oh n the spies ended up on the couch after theor first couples fight ☺️

eagerly waiting for the next!

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1039

Just loving this story more after each update

Just awesome.

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1040

Awesome update . This story is getting more and more mysterious and interesting with every update.

Looking forward to the unfolding of these mysteries and if possible , something about anjali's whereabouts (I am still keeping my fingers crossed fir her being alive somewhere around in the world)

Thanks for the pm :-)