~Arhi FF~#4~The Hands of Time~Chp-15~P.129~Mar 13~Link to Th-5 on P.1 - Page 104

so arnav stayed back this year for khushi. akash has alcohol issues and he is trying to solve it. lets see how well he does on that issue. the scene between akash aarti and arnav was so numbing. i mean aarati is still hurting over anjali. and i understand that she handled everything after that. what i dont get is how a mother becomes so grieving that she doesnt understand she is ignoring the other two? its been 20 years. you have to let go at some point. as arnav said entire family fell after anjali disappered. so wont you as a parent try to gather the bits and pieces of whats left and move on? also the ignorant father.. aah.i really would like to read about his view on the how he got hurt over daughter and abandoned the family.. two sons who were left to deal with it on their own. especially aakash who took the fall more than anyone. his twin disappered and he thinks mother would have been less hurt had it been him instead of anjali. really wierd family.

thank you for the update. 😊

Now back to the story. For whatever the reason, my interest had waned , may be the long absence, may be the time between updates or may be my concern that Khushi was over defined to the level where I really just did not find anything like worthy in her to care about or the lack of definition of Arnav to the degree that he appeared like a one dimensional character just there to pander to Khushi and be her perfect boyfriend. I know...pretty harsh and brutal.

Now suddenly you have brought all the characters back into vivid focus or cleaned the lens thru which I am looking at the story but suddenly the story is once again intriguing. You even referenced Arnav's father. Now I am oozing sympathy for Arnav's parents, Arnav, Akash and even Khushi. They are all caught in their own separate hells and it seems like Arnav is the strongest and he actually can see beyond his own pain and may help every one fight out of their own hell into the light. He is so caring of everyone.

You also imbued the couple with a strong doze of sex appeal😆. I am back in love with the story.

arshi turned spies...that was thrilling!!!

oh n the spies ended up on the couch after theor first couples fight ☺️

eagerly waiting for the next!

Just awesome.

Looking forward to the unfolding of these mysteries and if possible , something about anjali's whereabouts (I am still keeping my fingers crossed fir her being alive somewhere around in the world)

Thanks for the pm :-)