I'M ALL YOUR'S (RTMC FF) COMPLETED - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Awww Ryan is sooo romantic..
Poor pakhi caught staring.
Hahaha..

She was helping meera..but use kya pta tha ki ye Ryan ki wife h..
Poor she..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Wow dii.. I loved reading this update so very much.. :)
So, Pakhi got mistaken that Ryan is in a romantic mood when he asked for coffee.. loll.. uske expressions dekhne layak rahe honge Ryan k lye ;)
Aww.. blush & smile dono ek sath, how cute, Pakhi should have seen Ryan's face at that time :)
Aha.. super duper romantic subah hui dono, Pakhi is getting to know how romantic Ryan is :D.. I felt same as Pakhi, happy & sad both..!!
Ohh.. Meera met Pakhi.. gadbad ho gyi ye to.. & she brought her to their flat.. well Ryan's anger is justified, lets see what happens next.. update soonish dii :) :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 16lvkkk

Wow dii.. I loved reading this update so very much.. :)

So, Pakhi got mistaken that Ryan is in a romantic mood when he asked for coffee.. loll.. uske expressions dekhne layak rahe honge Ryan k lye ;)
Aww.. blush & smile dono ek sath, how cute, Pakhi should have seen Ryan's face at that time :)
Aha.. super duper romantic subah hui dono, Pakhi is getting to know how romantic Ryan is :D.. I felt same as Pakhi, happy & sad both..!!
Ohh.. Meera met Pakhi.. gadbad ho gyi ye to.. & she brought her to their flat.. well Ryan's anger is justified, lets see what happens next.. update soonish dii :) :*

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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
part 12

ryan shooed her away-''just stay away from me''

meera looked at him with pleading eyes-''i know u r angry with me...and it is not ur fault...but believe me ryan i did everything because ansh threatened me to kill my family''

ryan frowned at her-''u could tell me but u had decided to ruin my and ur life''

pakhi came forward and grasped his hand-''ryan calm down...she also suffered a lot because of that guy...u should forgive her''

he looked at her surprisingly-'i can't do this''and he walked out angrily...

pakhi looked at meera's gloomy face-''he is angry right now but im sure he will be fine''

meera nodded-''hope so...''she paused for a second and again spoke nervously-''i think i should leave now''

pakhi-''but where will u go''

meera-''don't worry i will manage..and thanks for ur help''

pakhi came nearer to her-''its ok but u r not going any where right now...its very late...''meera insisted to leave but at last she agreed to stay there with them...

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pakhi entered in the room when he was engaged in his work..she sat beside him-''angry??''

he didn't reply...

she looked at his sad face and snatched his file from his hand-''im talking to u??''

he looked at her angrily-''but i don't want to talk to u''

she touched her both ears with fingers-''sorry...but ryan try to understand she needs us...that ansh brought her here in search of u and raped her every night''

ryan looked at her surprisingly-''what??''

pakhi shook her head-''yeah...we should help her..she told me everything..''

ryan felt guilty for the words he said her before...how could a man do such thing with a girl...

pakhi put her hand on his shoulder-''ryan r u ok na''he nodded-''yeah...'

she smiled at him-''ok take rest...''as she stood up he grasped her hand-''where are u going''

she looked at him-''ryan...im going to sleep''

he frowned at her-''where??''

pakhi-''in meera's room''

he loosened his grip-''ok gud night''she smiled at him-''good night''

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next morning

she placed the bowl of curry on table when he came towards the dining table...

he looked at her..who was busy in arranging his breakfast quickly..he came near to her and hugged her from behind...she jerked with his sudden touch but after after few seconds she smiled -''what are u doing''

he move nearer to her ear and whispered-''romance''she blushed to his word and turned to looked at his face-''office nhi jana''..he kissed her pink cheek-''hmmm today i don't want to go''

she freed herself-''why?''

he looked at her eyes-''today i want to go on date with u...''she smiled widely-''really''he nodded-''yeah''

suddenly meera entered in the hall and saw them hugged each other...she felt awkward to saw them together...but she was relaxed to saw him happy with that girl..meera smiled a little to saw them together...

pakhi broke the embrace and surprised to saw meera behind them...ryan too followed her gaze and looked at meera...they both felt embarrassed and moved few steps away from each other...

soon meera joined them in breakfast after finishing his breakfast he looked at her-''are u fine''

meera felt happy from inside after so many days...he spoke to her so kindly..she nodded and smiled too

ryan stood up from the chair and walked out towards the doors...pakhi followed him-''where are u going''

ryan-''i have some work...i'll come after some time..be ready''he winked at her and gave her a quick peck on her soft lips
she blushed for a moment but then said quickly-''come soon''
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misha was chilling out with her friends when she saw pakhi with a girl on a shop..she was looking at the dress delightedly...

mish smiled at her friends-''actually i have some work...u should go a head i'll join u soon''her friend left her alone...

misha made some calls and followed pakhi and meera ...

pakhi-''howz it..will he like it''

meera smiled at her-''he will like it for sure...''pakhi smiled at her brightly-''really...ok then i'll keep it...''

meera-''i think u should buy matching earings and footwear too''

pakhi-''yeah...come on''then they went nearby market for her other stuff

misha followed them till their flat and smiled wickedly-''oh my sweet sister...u r dead now''

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she wore her knee length dress and matching earings...she blushed to saw her reflection in mirror...she was going on date with him very first time

her cheeks turned pink again at the thought..she should look perfect today...and meera had helped her so much...she turned to saw meera behind her-''meera why are u standing there come na''

meera sat near her-''u r looking very pretty...he will faint today''

both giggled together but soon pakhi's smiled faded to saw her smile-''meera...u r really a sweet heart...ryan is ur husband and still u r helping me for a date with ur husband''

meera grasped her palm-''he is my husband just for world...he never loved me...i just want him happy..and u r the one who makes him happy''

pakhi hugged her tightly-''u r the best meera''meera too smiled at her

she broke the embrace and said -''ok make haste..ryan must be waiting there for u''

pakhi bite her tongue-'yeah...ok bye''she bid gudbye to her and rushed out hastily


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at night

ryan returned to flat angrily and shout-''pakhi''

to heard his voice meera came out from the room and frowned to saw him angry-''ryan what happened why are u so angry''

ryan-'where is pakhi...i was waiting for her...she is so careless''

meera -'what??pakhi waha nhi phuchi''

he nodded negatively-''no''

meera-''but she left in the evening for the place u had texted.''

ryan frowned at her-''what??'

this time he sounded worried-''where is she?''

he called her again but her phone was switched off..he throw the phone angrily...and moved towards the doors...as he opened the doors..he stunned to saw ansh with his men...

ansh smiled at him-''hi ryan how r u''

ryan fumed with anger-''what are u doing here''

ansh-''actually im searching for her''he pointed towards meera ..who was standing behind ryan stunned and numb same as ryan...

he continue again-''my men saw her in the market and found her address but i didn't know that u r also there...my work became so easy now''

ryan avoid his nonsense and tried to move but his men came forward and obstruct his way...

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ansh laughed wickedly to saw him helpless...he was tied on a chair...and two men holding meera on the other side of room...

a small table was placed between the ryan and ansh...on table there were papers...

ansh--''ryan think about your sister at least come on sign it''

ryan turned his face to other side ...ansh smiled again-''ohk so u have decided...fine...if anything will happened with ur sister...u r responsible for that...''

ryan looked at him angrily-''i will kill u...if u touched my sister''

ansh-''ok then sign the papers...''

finally ryan agreed and one of his man freed his hands...

she took the papers and about to signed when a hand came forward and stopped him...he moved his gaze to upward and stunned to saw his sister-''di''

ansh stood up quickly and moved near to rakhi-''rakhi u r here /''

rakhi slapped him hard on his face-''u cheater...u spoiled our lives...and now blackmailing my brother..u r so mean ansh..i can't believe this that u could do this''

ansh grasped her hairs fiercely..ryan tried to punched him but his men grasped him...

ansh-''so tumhe sab pata chal gaya ...no worry ...brother and sister can die together right''

he took out his gun and pointed towards rakhi-''ryan sign the papers quickly or else u find ur sister dead''

ryan helplessly took the papers and signed them...

ryan took the papers in his pocket and about to shoot rakhi when they heard some foot steps..they turned to saw ryan's father with some cops...to saw cops ansh and his man tried to ran but cops followed them and

they arrested ansh and freed ryan and meera from his grip...

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ravi hugged his son and daughter...

ryan looked at his sister-''di..are u fine''
rakhi cried out and hugged him tightly-'' im sorry ryan...im really sorry''he consoled his sister and wiped her tears-''di pls don't cry everything is fine now''

ravi hugged meera-''are u ok meera''she nodded smilingly...

ryan looked at them questionably-''but dad..di how u reached here''

ravi-''meera called us yesterday night that u are here..so we took first flight and landed here''he hugged his son again-''ryan ur mother is waiting there...come ''

as they moved ryan stopped them-''i can't dad..i have to find out pakhi''

ravi-''pakhi??''

meera looked at ravi and rakhi questioning eyes-''ryan loves her..she is missing since evening''

ravi was looking at meera surprisingly-''what??but u r his wife na''

ryan looked at his father-''dad i love her''ravi still gazing at meera who smiled at him-''don't worry im fine..she is very nice girl...and she love him too''

ravi was not convinced but for her sake he agreed to found that girl

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police-''what is her name?''

ryan-''pakhi she is missing since evening pls do something''

police man-''don't worry we will find her..u have any photo of her''

ryan gave him her photo through his phone...

police man looked at her photo carefully-''what is this in her wrist''

ryan looked at photo-''her bracelet''

policeman-'we found the same bracelet with a body''

to heard the word he got numb-''body''

police man-''yeah this evening we found a body near a blue moon restaurant''

he stunned to saw his word..that was the same place he called her..his eyes become moist-''no this can't happen''

police man-''come with me''

meera put her hand on his shoulder-''come ryan''

he moved with slow steps and saw her earing and bracelet placed on a table...tears rolled out from his eyes...how could she left him like that..she can't do this...many thought were creating havoc inside his body...his mind was not working...

meera-''this is pakhi's earing ryan..she bought it with dress''

he was still numb...when he didn't respond she shook him..but he didn't reply...

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ravi entered the room and looked at his son whose eyes were filled with tears...ravi put his hand on his head-''ryan we have to go''

rakhi came forward and caressed his face-''ryan eat something''

he nodded negatively

after sometime ravi and rakhi left him alone

meera felt his pain in his eyes...he was missing her badly..she looked at him through window..he was looking at her picture when a tear dropped on his mobile screen...

he wiped it quickly and switched off the phone...










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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Start was so awesome...par ye end tak aate aate kya ho gya?? Ansh kaha se tapak pda!!! Huh chlo tapka bhi to pakda gya hahaha...meera ka pain I can undersrand...par Pakhi gyi kaha? MISHA??? is she Pakhi's sister???? Usine call kiya tha na??? I hope use kuch nhi hua...and she is fine...bechara Ryan...he ia missing her badly..feeling sad for him 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
omg.poor ryan...that stupid misha i wonder what she has done to pakhi!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

Start was so awesome...par ye end tak aate aate kya ho gya?? Ansh kaha se tapak pda!!! Huh chlo tapka bhi to pakda gya hahaha...meera ka pain I can undersrand...par Pakhi gyi kaha? MISHA??? is she Pakhi's sister???? Usine call kiya tha na??? I hope use kuch nhi hua...and she is fine...bechara Ryan...he ia missing her badly..feeling sad for him 😭

thanks dear for ur lovely comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Wow finally u update ... Its was superb love the Ryan & pakhi ..
Meera .. I feel bad for her .. Thank god an sh pakda gaya... But what the hell ... Misha ne ky kiya pakhi ke saath ... Bichara Ryan ... Ek khushi mili nai ki dard ka pahad khada hogya ... Hope will be fine & Ryan will find her soon ... One request don't make this story like ekta ' s story .. Make sure both love bird meet soon ... Thank u for update ...
Waiting for next update ... Give it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Ohh no..what U did Misha..hope Pakhi is safe..feeling so bad for Ryan !
Update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Finally Ansh is exposed..

But where is pakhi??
I m sure she is not dead..

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