I'M ALL YOUR'S (RTMC FF) COMPLETED

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Posted: 9 years ago
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new promo

pakhi- u hurt me ryan go away


ryaan- pakhi just listen to me once..


pakhi packed her bags to leave the flat bt he grabbrd her waist n looked into her eyes...pls don't go
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow dii...U r continuing from where U left it..I'm so eager to read this..😊
U know dii..I cried while reading d 6th chapter when she says that she lost d bet..😭..it was so beautifully written..👏
Waiting for full part..😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was just one or two chapters of this flick I guess. Still it got me to want more and more of it .
The last chapter where Ryan confesses about him being married I guess...was so beautodully written.

Do update the full update soon. Eager to read..

😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i am so excited and eager to read ur works of RTMC again di cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dii..hme diwali treat nhi milega..update ka..?? :)
Waiting2..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you dii..😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 7
she looked at him shockingly-"what"while he was just standing in front of her with guilty face-''yes''

she pulled her steps backward n collide with chair...without sensed anything she was about to fall when he grasped her waist-''pakhi''she looked at his eyes with tears n anger filled her face-''u cheater...u cheated me...just leave me alone''n throw his hands away from her waist...he tried to pulled her hand but she hastened in the room n locked herself in it...ryan walked behind her -''pakhi just listen to me...mein tumhe sab batana chahta hu''n tapped the doors from outside ...she closed her eyes-''just back off ryan i hate u..tumne bhi varun ki hi tarah mujhe hurt kiya h''

he kept his head on door-''i'm sorry pakhi...pls listen to me once''he plead from outside n tapped the doors again...she wiped her tears n opened the cupboard angrily n packed her stuff..

after sometime she opened the doors...he looked at her n stood up from the chair...he went towards n saw her small bag-''where are u going''

without any expression she replied-''kahi bhi...but ab yaha mein nhi reh sakti''

ryan throw her bag from her hand-''tum kahi nhi jaogi jab tak hum dono ke beech me sab kuch clear nhi ho jaata''she looked at his face-''kya clear karna chahte ho ab...sab kuch to tumne bol hi diya h...ab mujhe tumhari koi baat nhi sunni''

he hold her hand-''u have to listen''

she pulled his hand back n picked up her bag--''pls ryan mujhe kuch nhi sunna'n walked away...

at night

she sat on bench of garden n looked at stars-''why always me''n cried out...her eyes filled with pain n fresh tears rolled out from her eyes she looked at sky continuously without blinking n tears rolled out on her cheeks-''i hate u ryaan''

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she opened her eyes while rubbing them by her hand..she looked here n there n found herself on bed...she sat on bed n looked at room-''mein yaha kaise aayi''

''mein lekaar aaya''ryaan came inside the room with two cup of tea..n smiled at her'''she pulled the bedsheet away n walked towards the doors angrily...he put the tea quickly on table grasped her wrist-''itna gussa''she pulled his hand away-''don't touch me ryaan''

ryan -''kaha ja rhi ho''pakhi walked out of the room n saw shreya-'hi pakhi gdmg''

pakhi shocked to saw her n tried to smile-''gdmg...''shreya looked at her pale face n looked at ryaan who was standing behind her

shreya-''what happened sab thik to h na''ryan quickly replied-''yeah everything is fine''while pakhi said -''shreya i want separate flat..can u pls manage''

shreya looked at her-''what...but kuch din pehle tumne mujhse mana kar diya tha ab wo kisi or ko mil gya h ab mein kaise arrange karun''

pakhi insisted her-''pls shreya kuch bhi karo mujhe flat chahiye''ryaan looked at shreya's face who was actually shocked to saw her sudden changed behavior -''but hua kya h ...tum dono ke beech koi fight hui h kya''

ryan-''nhi aisa kuch nhi h''pakhi looked at him angrily-''really kuch nhi hua??''ryan curled his lips-''just listen to me hum baat bhi to kar sakte h na''pakhi -''mujhe tumse koi baat nhi karni''n looked at shreya-''tum arrange kar sakti ho ya nhi''

shreya -''ha...han but thoda time lagega..lekin hua kya h''

ryan moved froward-''can u pls leave us alone pls''

shreya looked at pakhi who was really hurt by something...n her face looked pale n warpish...she didn't wanted to leave her alone like that...but perhaps things will cleared after her departure she thought n nodded-''ok''

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she sat on chair while he standing in front of her-''pakhi ''she turned her face angrily-''tumne pehle kyu nhi bataya that u are married...i have shared same bed with u...disgusting...shreya is right im mad im totally mad...mein sach me pagal hi hu''n she start crying...ryan sat in knees n wiped her tears..she looked at him-''kyu kiya tumne aisa''

he cupped her face-''i love u''she looked at his face with teary eyes-'' but i hate u''



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ryan loves Pakhi. I am sure we all wanted to hear this since the start but this will come out like this had never imagined.
now what will happen? Will Pakhi listen to what he has to say? What is the truth? And what about that girl to whom that man( I forgot hia name) was blackmailing about Ryan? Is she the wife?

I hope Pakhi undersatnds..and so does Ryan.

It was lovely reading.

update soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww ryan confessed too even i am eager to knw ryan's reasoning...thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update..👏..👍🏼..but feeling sad for Ryaan..😔
Pakhi..at least ek baar sun to lo wo kya kehna chalta h..even I wanna know ki kin situations me uski shadi hui n what r his problems..!!
Waiting for next one..plzz Dii,is baar longgg wala..😉..😃..🤗

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