I'M ALL YOUR'S (RTMC FF) COMPLETED - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Happy that U liked both..my comment as well as siggies,dii :* :)

Originally posted by: tejjo

thanks dear for ur comment

hugsss
and muahhh for beautiful siggies

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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Pakhi is back..thank God she is safe & d culprits' real face is now known to her father 😊
"Drama queen"..perfect name for her..but its said,everything is fair in love & war..so,her actions r justified 😉
Waiting for next..🤗
Hey,I didn't got d PM for Aashiqui & this one too,plz PM me whenever u update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

This was interesting!!!! Hahahaha pakhi bhi na kuch bhi krti hai...hahahaha but meera thik nhi lg rhi I mean now she k ows that ravi wants het a s his dil so what if shhe creates troubles...

thanks dear for ur lovely comment
meera ...😃 u will know about her in coming updates
love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Asyalover

omg...nice tactic of pakhi...lol such drama queen

thanks dear😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: 16lvkkk

Wow dii..dil khush kar ditta

U made all our worries regarding Pakhi vanish in thin air by this update!!
In dono maa-beti ki na mai..:/ >:(..how such a human being can stoop so low :p
At least her father got to know their true face hidden behind their pretending attitude (Y) & ultimately father-daughter duo reunion took place
Wow,Ryan would have felt so happy to see her alive & back...but what's wrong with his parents!! Can't they see with whom their son is happy,have they forgotten why he left his home earlier :p..bina baat k rula diya Pakhi ko :/
I don't like meera at all..:p..pehle shadi kr li Ryan se,although in majboori & now trying to b his wife,arey yaar Ryan doesn't want to make u his wife!!
Wow..good choice Ryan,is baar Pakhi ko le kr bhagna ghr se :D
OMG..kya dhasu idea lgaya h Pakhi ne,"I'm pregnant..!!!!" Ryan ki tarah I was in a shocked state too,now his parents have to accept her..Lolll
Waah,for d convo b/w Ryan-Pakhi.."devdas" back to "cutie pie lover" mode
Thank U so much dii,update soonish :* *hugs*

hugggsss
for ur comment
its very sweettt
well meera is mystery for now...
i'll update soon
love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Poo_2208

Pakhi is back..thank God she is safe & d culprits' real face is now known to her father 😊

"Drama queen"..perfect name for her..but its said,everything is fair in love & war..so,her actions r justified 😉
Waiting for next..🤗
Hey,I didn't got d PM for Aashiqui & this one too,plz PM me whenever u update 😊

oh im sorry dear
i forgot to pm u
sorry for that
i'll pm u next time for sure
and thanks for ur lovely comment
loved it

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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
part 14

''so she was lying she is not pregnant''meera whispered after overheard their conversation...

she quietly moved back to her room...

next morning

meera arranged the breakfast when gayatri and ravi came downstairs...ravi put his hand on her head-''gdmg beta''

meera smiled at him-''gdmg dad''

ravi-''are u done with ur packing''

meera nodded her head-''yes dad''

gayatri looked at ryan who was coming downstairs followed by pakhi...

pakhi sat on chair next to ryan and greeted everyone..ravi avoided her greetings and looked at ryan-''ryan u have to leave in the evening ''

ryan-''i don't want to go''

ravi-''im not asking u''

ryan looked at pakhi who was looking at him surprisingly...

ravi stared at pakhi-''and u can leave too for ur place''

pakhi-''im not going anywhere''

ravi-''we know u r not pregnant so u can leave''

ryan and pakhi looked at him shockingly...

now she had no other excuse to live here...she stood up from the chair quietly and moved towards the entrance...ryan too stood up and followed her-''pakhi''

ravi called him from behind-''ryan just stop ''

pakhi looked at ryan's sad face-''its ok ryan''and she walked out of the mansion...


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prakash looked at her daughter-''what happened''

pakhi-''dad his family is not accepting me''

prakash-''pakhi he is married u have to understand it...''prakash tried to made her understand but she irritably walked towards her room...

she sat on bed and called him...but his phone was switched off...this was even more irritated thing...
she threw the phone and laid on bed angrily...

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gayatri packed his stuff and looked at his sad face...-''ryan''

but he didn't looked at her...she shook him-''ryan''he stared at her-''yes mom''

gayatri sat besides him-''meera is ur wife and she deserve a happy life and a loving husband...''

ryan didn't utter a word but nodded and moved outside with his stuff...

at evening

ryan and meera entered in the hotel room which was reserved for the couple by his father...

ryan sat on bed tiredly and started to unlace his shoes...meera unpacked her stuff as well as his...after few minutes she came back from the washroom and found him sound sleep... she smiled to saw him..he was looking cute ...her lips curled into a big grin she moved towards the bed with slow steps and sat near his head...she gazed at his face lovingly...

''i love u ryan''she whispered near his ear...he shook his head made her jumped nervously but she felt relaxed as he turned his face to other side...she smiled again and caressed his messy hairs...

suddenly his phone start ringing...she quickly picked up the phone to avoid any distraction in his sleep...it was pakhi's name flashing on screen...meera looked at his sleeping face and cut the call and delete her call from the contact list too...

she put the phone on table again and sat on bed again...

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''how are u meera??...is everything ok there??''ravi asked concernedly...

meera smiled -''yes dad everything is ok...and im fine''

''where is ryan''ravi asked again...

ryan came out from the washroom when meera gave him phone...

''how are u ryan''ravi asked smilingly...

''im fine''ryan answered rudely..when ravi sensed that-''what happened ryan''

''nothing...there is no problem dad...everything is good just like u want...ur son is here with ur daughter in law...don't worry about anything i will follow ur every command as always''ryan cut the call and threw the phone on floor which scattered into parts...

meera looked at his angry face-''ryan''

ryan looked at her face and smiled-''i think we should start''

she frowned at him-''start??...what??''

ryan-''arey u don't know...our honeymoon...come on ''

meera -''ryan what are u talking about??...''

ryan-''oh u didn't get it i will make u understand..''he moved towards her and pulled her scarf on floor and start unbutton her kurti...she clutched his hands-''what are u doing ryan are u mad??''

ryan glowered at her-''yes im mad''he shouted at her-''im doing the thing for which we are here...to consummate our marriage...didn't u want that from the starting??''

meera glared at his red face-''ryan calm down pls''

ryan-''just shut up...u knew that i love pakhi..still u didn't say no to this honeymoon..why u wanted to come here...by spending 3..4 day with u... i will start loving u???...that's impossible meera...i knew u suffered a lot...but for once think about me...mee too suffered a lot...''

he sat angrily on bed-''meera...it can't happen...i can't love u''

meera sat besides him-''ryan dad don't like pakhi...try to understand he will never accept it...or i will give u the same love''

ryan looked at her-''shut up meera...i don't believe this''

meera looked at him-''but what's wrong in this??u r my husband and loving ur husband is not a crime...''

ryan-''so u told the truth to dad''ryan growled at her when she just lowered her eyes...


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next morning

gayatri and ravi were sitting in the hall when rakhi came with their morning tea...

suddenly they heard the noise outside and they got shocked to saw ryan entered in the hall angrily followed by meera...

gayatri-''ryan what happened to u''

ryan looked at his family members-''nothing''he walked upstairs when ravi and gayatri looked at meera...

gayatri looked at ravi-''ravi my son is not happy he is very disturbed''

ravi-'everything will be fine don't worry''

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pakhi grasped his hand-''thank u for coming ryan''ryan looked at her face-''sorry i didn't pick ur call''

she smiled-''its ok...now what to do''

ryan-''pakhi i just want to go far from this place..i fed up..lets go somewhere far from this place''

pakhi-''ryan...ur family is so happy with u...i don't want to separate u from them...parents are very important...and i really know the importance''

ryan-''pakhi ..it is very difficult situation and im really very irritated with this stupid life''pakhi smiled at him-''do u love me''

he frowned at her-''suddenly so stupid question??''

pakhi-''tell me??''

ryan-''of course i do..u don't have to ask''

pakhi-''awww so cute u r''she pulled his cheeks cutely...when he frowned at her-''pakhi what are u doing''and caressed his cheeks...

pakhi hugged him-'aww my baby''

ryan looked at her weirdly-''seriously ...are u out of ur mind''pakhi grinned at his weird looks
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at evening

ravi was busy on laptop and meera was helping gayatri in kitchen...suddenly door bell rang...rakhi opened the doors and shocked to saw pakhi with a lawyer...

pakhi entered in the house and looked at ravi...she moved forward and touched his feet...ravi moved back-''what are u doing??''

gayatri and meera came out of kitchen and looked at pakhi...she got tensed to saw lawyer with her...ravi stood up from the couch and moved towards her-''what r u doing here''

mr das(lawyer)-''she is ur daughter in law and u can't separate her with her husband''

ravi and all other family members got shocked..ravi fumed with anger and slapped her hard on her face-''so its ur new tactic''

pakhi looked at him-''uncle its not a tactic...me and ryan are married''

gayatri -''look pakhi...ryan is married so pls leave him...im begging u''gayatri said almost pleading in front of her...

pakhi moved towards her-''aunty i m not lying we are married if u don't believe this then ask my friend''

shreya entered in the hall-''yes aunty they are married''

ravi-''and u are thinking that we will believe u??

mr das-''mr ravi shah this girl is not lying...the landlord of their house also said that they are husband and wife...we came here after all queries..''

ravi growled at her-''shame on u...disgusting girl''

ryan entered in the hall and shocked to saw everyone-''what happened??''

ravi -''ask ur so called wife''while glowering at pakhi

ryan shockingly looked at pakhi-''pakhi what is this??''

pakhi opened her fist and showed his the mangalsutra-''ryan remembered this mangalsutra...u tied this in my neck...right??''

ryan-''so''

mr das-''u tied this??''

ryan-''yeah...so what??''

mr das-''ok then congratulations mrs pakhi shah...if u face any problem here then call me''and he walked outside

ryan looked at pakhi-''what's that??''she grinned at him while ravi and meera growled at her...

ravi-''i have never seen a girl like u...''

pakhi-''im sorry uncle but i can do anything for ryan...''

ravi walked out angrily while meera glared at pakhi ...

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gayatri was sitting on bed when rakhi came with a tray-''mom eat something''

gayatri-''what is happening rakhi...i don't understand''

rakhi sat besides her-''mom relax...meera ,pakhi and ryan everyone is right on their place...we can't do anything right now but can wait for a right time to sorted out things...


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ryan was sitting on the couch while meera adjusting the bed-''ryan why u said that u r married with her''

ryan frowned at her-''when i said that i married to her??..i just said that i tied mangalsutra...and i really didn't know what was happening there...and by the way what's ur problem...i tied mangalsutra in ur neck as well...''

meera-''so u r saying that she did everything right??''

ryan-''and what about u??u did everything right??...u also used tactic to separate me and pakhi...didn't u??

meera-''but im ur legal wife ryan...not a liar like her''she moved towards the bed when pakhi entered in the room and looked at meera-''excuse me''

pakhi-''will u pls get lost??''

meera-''pakhi mind ur language''

pakhi smiled at her falsely-''ok ...are u going outside or should i throw you out''

meera fumed with rage-''im not going anywhere he is my husband and this is our room''

while ryan irately made faces...and moved outside...

pakhi greeted her teeth at her and followed him...

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she sat near him-''ryan..im really sorry''

ryan looked at her-''pakhi u made the situation worst...mom and dad is so disturbed..and dad hate u even more...why u did this??''

pakhi looked at his sad face-''i knew i spoil everything ryan...but i can't live without u...trust me i did everything just for u...i just want u...and don't worry about uncle aunty i will manage everything''

ryan caressed her cheek which was showing the traces of fingers-''dad slapped u???''

pakhi grin at him-''actually i expected 3,4 slaps but he slapped just one''ryan too grin-''really u r mad..''he paused for a second-''what about ur dad??''

she lowered her eyes-''he is very angry with me''

ryan-''he should be''

pakhi-''but im too stubborn...what to do...i told him that i will never leave u''

ryan smiled at herand hugged her...

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meera looked at doors when ryan entered in the room...she felt happy and stood up from the bed-''ryan its very late where were u??''

ryan-''meera don't worry about me i can take care of my self''

meera-''ok i adjust ur bed...''suddenly pakhi entered in the room-''so sleep na why are waiting for him??''

meera-''what re u doing here this our room??''

pakhi-''he is my husband too''

ryan closed his eyes irately-''oh god not again''

gayatri heard the noises and moved to his room and saw meera and pakhi argued with each other over ryan...and ryan was sitting on couch with a hand on head

she entered in the room-''u all will live in separate rooms...''they all turned to saw gayatri standing on doors-''meera go to rakhi's room...until everything sorted out u will stay there with rakhi..and pakhi u will stay in our guest room..come i'll show u''

pakhi obediently followed her and meera walked towards rakhi's room

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next morning

ryan came inside the guest room and saw her standing in front of mirror...she turned to saw him and smiled...she came nearer-''is my skin looking dull??'

ryan raised his brow-''what??''

pakhi-''tell me na''

ryan looked at her face-''u r glowing as always''

pakhi played with her fingers-''ryan i read somewhere that kis..kissing made the skin glow even more''

ryan raised his brow-''really?/where u read this??''pakhi lowered her eyes-''i read somewhere ''

he grin and raised her face with his fingers-''ok then...lets start glowing''















Edited by tejjo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Hahahaha ye to tragedy me comedy ho gyi hai. Hahahaha
but I am not liking meera and apkhi both. Kr kya rhi hai dono? Bechara ryan...
But I like ryans and pakhis moments together.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
What a situation,Pakhi & Meera both r fussing over being with Ryan as his wife!
Ryan's actions r quite obvious!
Waiting to see how will Pakhi manage her (wud b) in-laws & of course Ryan😉
Update soon🤗😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
This long update compensated for such a long gap!! ;)
Oh no..ye meera ko eavesdropping krna zaroori tha kya :p..Gandi baat!!
Ryan's parents r so similar to Veer's..they r also forcing him to accept someone whom he doesn't love,but at least Ryan-Pakhi know about their feelings for each other :)
Yeah..we know that U love Ryan,but U also know that he doesn't loves U..she may have suffered a lot but she also took advantage of Ryan's goodness :p..now she is taking advantage of Ryan's parents' support :/
A true friend really helps U in difficult times..Shreya proved it once again (Y)
OMG..'pati', 'patni' aur 'woh' ek hi ghar me..d only difference is in their current positions..loll :v
Ryan's anger & actions r justified..whether it was in d hotel's room or in his own room!!
Love makes U do crazy things & gives U strength to fight d whole world for Ur love,if needed..Pakhi is indeed very strong mentally (Y) :*
Ryan-Pakhi moments were bilss to read amongst all d happenings :)
I'm feeling that may b Gayatri will understand Veer's situation soon ;)
Waiting for next..update soon dii :*🤗

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