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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Hello dii..:)
Part 12 ki shuruat bht achhi thi dii..(Y)
Pakhi told Ryan everything about Meera..bechara Ryan,his teddy bear is in another room ;)
I too felt bad for meera.. ansh is such a cheater & lier ..he should b punished brutally..:p
Haha..what an answer .."romance"..I really love his statements <3
Aww..he would surely have fainted IF HE HAD SEEN HER..!!
Hmm..so this is (was) going to b d first date for d lovebirds..ohh..I'd even starting daydreaming..candlelight dinner in restaurant, romantic tunes/songs in bg..Ryan-Pakhi's dance..but ultimately I was singing.."chhan se Jo tute koi sapna" :'(
Finally ansh got what he deserved..wo usi layak h (y)
Misha..I hate her as much as I hate ansh..she is such a chipku chipkali..:p
I just hope Pakhi is safe..may b they have kidnapped her & put her dress as well as accessories to some other dead body..
Update soonish dii..suspense awaits us..:) :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: murataru

Wow finally u update ... Its was superb love the Ryan & pakhi ..

Meera .. I feel bad for her .. Thank god an sh pakda gaya... But what the hell ... Misha ne ky kiya pakhi ke saath ... Bichara Ryan ... Ek khushi mili nai ki dard ka pahad khada hogya ... Hope will be fine & Ryan will find her soon ... One request don't make this story like ekta ' s story .. Make sure both love bird meet soon ... Thank u for update ...
Waiting for next update ... Give it soon

thanks dear for ur lovely commemt
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: 16lvkkk

Hello dii..:)

Part 12 ki shuruat bht achhi thi dii..(Y)
Pakhi told Ryan everything about Meera..bechara Ryan,his teddy bear is in another room ;)
I too felt bad for meera.. ansh is such a cheater & lier ..he should b punished brutally..:p
Haha..what an answer .."romance"..I really love his statements <3
Aww..he would surely have fainted IF HE HAD SEEN HER..!!
Hmm..so this is (was) going to b d first date for d lovebirds..ohh..I'd even starting daydreaming..candlelight dinner in restaurant, romantic tunes/songs in bg..Ryan-Pakhi's dance..but ultimately I was singing.."chhan se Jo tute koi sapna" :'(
Finally ansh got what he deserved..wo usi layak h (y)
Misha..I hate her as much as I hate ansh..she is such a chipku chipkali..:p
I just hope Pakhi is safe..may b they have kidnapped her & put her dress as well as accessories to some other dead body..
Update soonish dii..suspense awaits us..:) :*

thanks dear for ur comment
hugsss
and muahhh for beautiful siggies
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Finally Ansh is exposed..

But where is pakhi??
I m sure she is not dead..

thanks for ur comment
Edited by tejjo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Poo_2208

Ohh no..what U did Misha..hope Pakhi is safe..feeling so bad for Ryan !

Update soon😊

thank u sweety
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

Start was so awesome...par ye end tak aate aate kya ho gya?? Ansh kaha se tapak pda!!! Huh chlo tapka bhi to pakda gya hahaha...meera ka pain I can undersrand...par Pakhi gyi kaha? MISHA??? is she Pakhi's sister???? Usine call kiya tha na??? I hope use kuch nhi hua...and she is fine...bechara Ryan...he ia missing her badly..feeling sad for him 😭

thanks dear loved ur comment😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
part 13

maneka slapped her hard on her face which results into bleeding from the corner of lips...pakhi shrieked with pain-''i'll kill u just opened my hands...

misha smirked at her-''we are looking fools...u idiot''

maneka turned her face upward-''tell me where is my money and all jewelry...''pakhi looked at her disgustedly-''i don't know''

misha snatched her hairs-''tell me where is all jewelry else i'll kill u right here''

pakhi smiled at her-''so kill me...waise bhi u killed that girl''

maneka looked at the misha questionably-''whose girl??''

misha -''mom i didn't kill anyone..when those men kidnapped her... a girl found her bracelet and her earing which had fallen somewhere on the road but ...and followed us...i just pushed her and she clashed with a car''

maneka slapped her-''u idiot...how could u do this..ok leave it...i just want my jwelery...money...make sure she don't get food and water...until she don't reply keep her here...''

pakhi looked at her questionably-''why are u so worried for those jewelry..u have already so much with u''

maneka looked at her-''just shut up''

she left with misha after locking her farm house and instruct guards to take care of her...

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misha-''mom at least tell me why are you so much restless for jewelry''

maneka-''misha in one of those jewelry boxes there are property papers which were signed by prakash...i was very scared so i hide those papers in one jewelry box...and that bitch steal all my jewelry...''

misha-''oh my god mom...but if dad ko pata chal gya to''

maneka-''don't worry for that...i am just worried for those papers...after so many efforts i made him to sign those papers...he was transferring all property to pakhi...what about us?? so i changed the papers...but all gone in vain...i lost the papers''

prakash entered in the room and clapped which made them shocked..misha hide herself behind her mother...

maneka-''prakash??''

prakash-''i must say perfect plan...maneka...i always trusted u over pakhi...she fight with u call ur names...but i thought that was just because she didn't accept u as a mother...but right now im happy that she never accept u as a mother...u are a curse for my family ...for my daughters...i don't believe this...i got married because pakhi needs a mother ..she need love...but u destroyed everything...u destroyed my daughter her life everything...''

maneka came to him-''im sorry prakash ''she pretends to be sorry but prakash pulled her away-''stay away from me...and leave my house...quickly''

maneka rushed to him-''don't do this to me prakash pls...where will i go??''

prakash grasped her hand and rushed towards the entrance of mansion...he pushed her out-''don't ever try to enter in my house...just get lost...''

he looked at misha angrily-''get lost''

misha walked outside of the mansion frighteningly and joined her mother...

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prakash opened the doors and curse himself the moment he saw his daughter in this condition...she was tied on chair and unconsciously chanting some names...he quickly freed her and took her to mansion...

after few hours

he caressed her face-''pakhi''

she slowly opened her eyes and smiled to saw her father-''dad''her father quickly hugged her-''im so sorry beta...im really sorry''

pakhi wiped his tears-''dad im fine..don't worry...''

he caressed her hairs which were little messy-''everything is fine now...''
pakhi looked at her father and spoke-''dad...i love u..''he kissed her forehead-''me too' and hugged her tightly...

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next morning

prakash was reading newspaper when pakhi came downstairs...he looked at her and surprised to saw her all ready to went outside-''are u going somewhere''

pakhi came towards him and hesitatingly said-''dad pls help...i have to found someone''

prakash-''really..tell me''

pakhi -''ryan shah...i want to meet him...he must be very tensed''

prakash-''and may i know whose that ryan??''

she smiled at him -''my boyfriend''and said straightly..

prakash raised his brow-''new boyfriend..what about varun''

pakhi-''dad leave it na pls help me na''

prakash -''ok wait for a second i'll find out ''she smiled and hugged him-''thank u''

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at night

ryan was sitting on couch when his mother came with food-''ryan eat something beta...''

he nodded negatively and suddenly they heard a ring on doors...meera opened the doors and shocked to saw her-'pakhi''

to heard her name he rushed to the doors and shocked to saw her alive-''are u ...i mean..''he hugged her which didn't liked by his mother and dad who was just arrived from office...

pakhi hugged him back but felt awkward to saw so many people around there...she broke the embrace and looked at his family members-''sorry i ''

ryan cut her in between-''where were u and whose that girl in hospital..your earing and''

meera smiled at him-''ryan calm down..she is fine ''

meera introduced her with everyone ...gayatri and ravi just smiled to saw her...rakhi hugged her and made her sit on couch...

ryan sat beside her and she told whole story to them...

ravi-''i know u suffered a lot but u know ryan is married so pls leave him''she said rudely which was not liked by ryan...

ryan looked at his dad-''dad what are u saying''but ravi stopped him-'im is right ryan ...relationships are for life time...we can't break them like that...meera is ur wife and she will remain ur wife''

pakhi stood up from the couch...she felt hurt and insulted...she walked straightly out from the bungalow...

ryan and meera followed her but she already gone...

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ryan looked at meera who was arranging his bed-''don't do this pls''

meera -''why??''


ryan-''meera listen ...i just give u my name...but not my love...i just love her..and u know that''

meera put her hand on his shoulder-''i know ryan ...don't give explanation...u give me respect thats enough for me...i don't want anything else...now go to bed its late''

he nods and went to bed...

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meera served him breakfast and gazed him lovingly...he looked handsome today...she was thinking when ravi looked at her-''meera come with me''

she followed him and went into his room...ravi gave her two tickets...meera surprisingly looked at her-''dad what is this''

ravi smiled at her-''these are tickets...for ur honeymoon..u both are going tomorrow...i just want that ryan just forget that girl and u can do this''

meera smiled at him-''dad but he loves her''

ravii-''thats what i don't want...i want that he loves you..that girl is so weird... no dressing sense...how to behave in front of elders...i don't like her''

ravi smiled at her -''i want u to become my daughter in law completely...i want that u returned as a couple''

meera nodded her head and looked at tickets...

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rakhi-''ryan pls try to understand...u r married and accept it...meera is so beautiful and understanding...even she know about ur relationship with that girl still she didn't react''

ryan looked at her sister-''i know she is good girl..but i love pakhi..thats it''

he stood up from the bed when his mother came towards him-'u r going on honey moon with meera and ur dad want this''

ryan-''what??''

he closed his eyes-''do you want me to left this house again''

gayatri-''ryan don't say like this ''

suddenly they heard a knock on door

they all went to downstairs and shocked to saw pakhi there...ravi went nearer-''what u want now??'

pakhi stammeringly spoke-''i just come here to tell ryan that im pregnant''

his eyes got widened with shock-''what???''

pakhi came nearer-''im sorry ryan but i can't hide this truth anymore...''ryan grasped her shoulder-''what are u talking pakhi..are u mad''

ravi-''just shut up and leave my house''

pakhi looked at him-''im not going anywhere...ur son ruined my life...he is father of my child...i..im not going''

she bit her lips and sat on couch sternly...she just controlled her laughter to saw ravi's face who was looking at ryan angrily...gayatri glare at ryan-''ryan i don't believe this'' ravi and gayatri went upstairs with rakhi angrily giving her disgusting looks...

meera came forward-''what are u saying pakhi''

pakhi-''this is the truth meera im pregnant..''meera felt uneasiness and she left them alone

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they were sitting on steps of terrace when he said-''when i did this will u pls tell me''

she came closer to him and curled her arm around his-''ryan i was lying..''

he looked at her weirdly-''seriously !...i can't beleive this''she hugged him tightly-''i love u''

he looked at her face-''u r such a drama queen...''and hugged her tightly-''well i can make u pregnant right now''she punched him on his chest-''just shut up''

and they embraced each other



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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was interesting!!!! Hahahaha pakhi bhi na kuch bhi krti hai...hahahaha but meera thik nhi lg rhi I mean now she k ows that ravi wants het a s his dil so what if shhe creates troubles...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
omg...nice tactic of pakhi...lol such drama queen
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Wow dii..dil khush kar ditta
U made all our worries regarding Pakhi vanish in thin air by this update!!
In dono maa-beti ki na mai..:/ >:(..how such a human being can stoop so low :p
At least her father got to know their true face hidden behind their pretending attitude (Y) & ultimately father-daughter duo reunion took place
Wow,Ryan would have felt so happy to see her alive & back...but what's wrong with his parents!! Can't they see with whom their son is happy,have they forgotten why he left his home earlier :p..bina baat k rula diya Pakhi ko :/
I don't like meera at all..:p..pehle shadi kr li Ryan se,although in majboori & now trying to b his wife,arey yaar Ryan doesn't want to make u his wife!!
Wow..good choice Ryan,is baar Pakhi ko le kr bhagna ghr se :D
OMG..kya dhasu idea lgaya h Pakhi ne,"I'm pregnant..!!!!" Ryan ki tarah I was in a shocked state too,now his parents have to accept her..Lolll
Waah,for d convo b/w Ryan-Pakhi.."devdas" back to "cutie pie lover" mode
Thank U so much dii,update soonish :* *hugs*

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