I'M ALL YOUR'S (RTMC FF) COMPLETED - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Read all the parts..
This is awesome dear..
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Next ud kab milega ... Waiting for next one .. !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 11

pakhi tried to sleep but sleep was far away from her eyes..she turned other side of bed and remembered that intimate scene between the couples on tv which made her blush...she had never felt this type of feeling with her ex...was she really loved him?? no..no..that was just attraction...nothing else..''she greeted her teeth while remembering her past-''how duffer she was...she fell for a guy who just wanted her property..he had never loved her truly ...but in beginning he impressed her a lot with flowers,with gifts.so many new dresses...''this thought made her sad..

but ryan is not like him...he was someone special .a smile curved in her lips -''he is very special..''her thought came to a halt as he entered in the bed room with his laptop...she quickly closed her eyes...

ryan found her sleeping..he put his laptop on table and started unbuttoned his shirt...pakhi opened her on eye to look what is he doing but she gasped to saw him shirtless...his six pack abs were perfectly shaped and gave him a complete man look...he was looking so sexy with this sexy body..his abs,chest and that brad shoulders..oh my god what im thinking''she slapped herself which made him stare at her-''u r not sleeping''

she widened her eyes-''sorry''and quickly put both hands on her eyes while sitting on bed

firstly he was confused-''why??''

pakhi-''i saw ur six pack abs,chest ,shoulder,biceps everything''and she bit her lips to say such thing carelessly

ryan smiled and blushed at the same time...he went near to her...he put her hands down from eyes-''u saw everything?

she nodded helplessly-''sorry''

ryan smiled at her-''well ..sorry doesn't help u''

her eyes got widened-''what??''

ryan-''yeah...u have to do something for me''

pakhi stammered a bit-''wh...wh...what u ..what u want''

he went more closer to her made her shivered ...she gulped her breath-''what u want?

ryan move closer to her cheek...she closed her eyes nervously..he moved towards her ear-''i want coffee''

pakhi opened her eyes and looked at her surprisingly-''what??''

ryan pulled himself back-''yeah i m tired ..so i want coffee''

she pouted angrily-''coffee??''

ryan-''yeah..tumhe kya laga tha??''asked her innocently...she throw cushion on his face and walked out the room angrily

he laughed at her childish act...


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nxt day

as the sun rays fell on him he stretched his arms that collide with the persons face lying next to him...he looked at her..she was sleeping peacefully on her side but her legs are there on his...he looked at the wall of pillow between them...actually that he decided that they will sleep on the same bed but with a partition between them...he smiled at her by the thought that this partition will soon be on floor...he extended his hand on her side and caressed her cheek which disturbed her a bit..she moved to other side exposing her back to him...he smirk naughtily and trace his index finger on her neck...then on back...he made several shapes on her back which creating havoc in her stomach...she opened her eyes and turned towards him-''what are u doing??

ryan-''nothing just playing''

pakhi stare at his face...for a moment she lost her senses of sawhis handsome face..but she has to control herself...she was about to got up from the bed when he grabbed her waist and turned her towards him...

he turned over her which made her blush-''ryan what are doing??''

ryan-''why are blushing abhi to meine kuch kiya hi nhi h''that statement made her more nervous...she clutched the bed sheet in her fist as came near to her face...he gently kissed hr cheek...and caressed her eyelid with his lips.she shivered with every touch of his skin...she had never felt this type of feeling with her ex boyfriend...soon he reached to her earlobe ...he kissed it and bit it on the same place...she moan silently...she was feeling top of the world right now...his every touch made her blush even more...she gasped as he turned his lips from ear lobe to throat..he caressed her throat lovingly he put feathery kisses on her throat while his hands grabbing her waist tightly...he slid off her night dress from her shoulder which showing the strip of her inner...he slid it off and kissed her shoulder...she grabbed his shoulder tightly and hide her face in his chest...he kissed every inch of her shoulder made her shivered in his chest...he smelled her fragrance and buried himself between her shoulder and neck...


after few minutes..he raised his head to saw her..she still hided herself in his chest-''are u blushing''

she shook her head but didn't try to look in to his eyes but he sensed her smile on his skin...he kissed top of her head-'listen''

she still buried herself in his chest-''what??''

''i have to go office''he said while caressing her hairs with fingers...finally she raised her eyes but didn't dare to meet with his...-''ok''he looked at her pink face which was glowing even more

she got up from the bed and adjust herself while he was gazing at her lovingly...she slid her dress on shoulder slowly looking at the skin of her shoulder...he too got from the bed and went nearer to her...she lowered her eyes quickly-''ryan''

ryan grabbed her waist and pulled towards him...his warm breath caressed her face which gave her goosebumps...-''ryan''she said nervously

he didn't care and claimed her lips...he gently caressed her lips...she clutched his shirt tightly..without breaking his kiss he entwined his fingers with hers...she smiled between the kiss..she had never found this love before...she wanted it from the childhood..today she is feeling happy..content and a complete person...he made her complete..she just wanted his love nothing else...''he broke the kiss when he saw a tear rolled out on her cheek-''pakhi''

she wiped out quickly..he cupped her face-''what happened ...why are u crying''he asked worriedly as he looked up into his eyes...her eyes were full of tears-''ryan ..tum mujhe kabhi chodkar to nhi jaoge na''

he hugged her tightly-''are u mad...i will never leave u ''he embrace her tightly while she smiled through tears-''i love u''

he kissed her head-''i love u too''

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meera rushed off towards the road when she saw two men following her...

she ran away from the hotel when ansh had stayed with her..somehow she escaped from there..but how would she escaped from his men...she rushed hurriedly towards the crowded market...those two men were followed her but she disappeared suddenly in the market..they looked here and there

meera looked behind to made sure..as if they were still following her when she crushed with someone...

meera looked at the beautiful girl in front of her...pakhi was confused to saw that girl...sshe was gasping badly.-''are ok im sorry''

meera-''its ok ''she looked behind again

pakhi looked at her confusingly-''are u sure u r fine''

meera-''actually two goons following me pls help me out pls''she almost plead in front of her

pakhi-''ok ok don't worry come with me''meera thanked her and followed her

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''are u fine now''pakhi asked by giving her glass of water''meera gulped it quickly-''yeah im ok...thank u so much''

pakhi smiled at her-''don't worry..everything will be fine...but why are they after u''


meer relaxed herself-''actually his boss wanting me..he is monster...he had spoiled my whole life''she cried bitterly pakhi consoled her-''he is ur husband??''meera followed her gaze to her mangalsutra

meera-''no he is not my husband..he is a man who tortured me every night...i don't know how will i survive??

pakhi felt her pain-''n where is ur husband''

meera-''i don't know''

pakhi-''what??''

meera -''he leave me on wedding night''

pakhi-''oh my god...''pakhi was very worried for her-''don't worry just relax''she made her lay on bed for some rest...

at evening

as the bell rand pakhi rushed towards the doors...she opened the gate and he quickly embrace her tightly-''i missed u so much''

she too hugged him tightly-''me too''

soon they broke their hug while he kissed her forehead-''im hungry''

she smiled-''ok freshen up ''

ryan grinned at her as he walked towards the bedroom..he froze on that place-''meera''

pakho confusingly followed his gaze..ryan angrily looked at pakhi-''ye yaha kya kar rhi h''

pakhi didn't understand anything then she recalled the name meera..his wife..her eyes got widened-''ryan she was in problem so i''

ryan-''throw her out of the house right now''

pakhi looked at meera..she was also surprised to saw him..and happy at the same time...

suddenly pakhi felt a pain in her heart as meera rushed towards him and hugged him tightly


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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
oh ho paakhi ne apne hi ped pe kulahdi maar di...nice updt...thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Awww Ryan is sooo romantic..
Poor pakhi caught staring.
Hahaha..

She was helping meera..but use kya pta tha ki ye Ryan ki wife h..
Poor she..
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
oh my god! what a part. ao romantic I was all smiles through out. Ryan is so romantic..never thougjt that he would be. He is a dream. And their moments together... oh my good... ao beautifully written...Love you for this!!! :-*
but yr ye pakhi ko abhi ana tha? bechari pakhi...aur ryan ka bhi frustration ndega ab...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
wow thats gr8t... pakhi & ryan both r amezing...
ryan is cute & romantic :)
they both seem like husband wife .. last wala evening scen is exactly husband wife lag rahe the...
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.! hmmm now again problem
meera ko problem se nikalne ke chalar me khud hi
problem creat karli... ab ryan & meera face to face .. bichari pakhi ..:(
ryan will surely do something ...update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asyalover

oh ho paakhi ne apne hi ped pe kulahdi maar di...nice updt...thanks 4 pm

😳
thanks dear for ur comment

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: murataru

wow thats gr8t... pakhi & ryan both r amezing...
ryan is cute & romantic :)
they both seem like husband wife .. last wala evening scen is exactly husband wife lag rahe the...
.
.
.
.! hmmm now again problem
meera ko problem se nikalne ke chalar me khud hi
problem creat karli... ab ryan & meera face to face .. bichari pakhi ..:(
ryan will surely do something ...update soon

😃 thanks u for ur lovely comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

oh my god! what a part. ao romantic I was all smiles through out. Ryan is so romantic..never thougjt that he would be. He is a dream. And their moments together... oh my good... ao beautifully written...Love you for this!!! :-*

but yr ye pakhi ko abhi ana tha? bechari pakhi...aur ryan ka bhi frustration ndega ab...

thank u dear for ur comment

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