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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Hey, congrats for new thread.. Great update.. Arnav found out all of khushi's past n her painful sufferings.. J palo is not seems to be harmful for khushi n arnav, i think he loves her as his daughter.. But what he did with khushi's parents is cruel, bcoz of his cruel deed khushi suffered so much in such a young age n still struggling to come out of that horrible nights nightmare.. I think he ll try to stay away frm khushi after hearing about khushi's sufferings frm arnav.. Arnav feeling so horrible after hearing her past n for letting her down.. Khushi cares for arnav so much, she left house to see him at midnight.. Hope khushi forget past n forgive arnav for his mistake.. Precap is very lovely.. Waiting for next.. Continue.. Advance thanks for pm.. Happy navarathri.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Felt to the core .😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Great update! Loved Arnav's love and concern for Khushi! Waiting to read about the hug
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Loved chapter 14 šŸ‘
Khushi's past unravelled, hope this brings Arnav and Khushi together
Eager for the next part 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Amazing and Emotional update.
Poor Khushi had to see her dad being killed infront of her eyes is really bad. Arnav felt Khushi's pain after knowing her past and thought she is way stronger than him because she has come long way moving on and living each day of her life with the nightmares she is seeing every night is not easy to relive the dreadful night which happened infront of her eyes. Loved the convo between Arnav and JPalo. Glad atleast JPalo being mafia don did not try to kill Arnav or kdnap Khushi because he wanted her as his daughter and force his relationship on Khushi either by hook or crook. He understood Arnav and let him go. Loved where Arnav told him that he don't want to do anything because already he is dead man and Khushi is the who witnessed him killing her father.

Poor girl is so angry on Arnav for not talking to her or meet her for whole day, even in her anger she knows that he cannot be without seeing her even for a day. This shows how much she understands Arnav and love him. She is so worried for him she didn't wait to listen the whole conversation between Rahim chacha and Adi and ran in the drakness and rain to see him whether he is fine or not. Wondering whether these two knew that Khushi is listening to their convo and wanted to see her reaction or they were talking naturally. God fulfilled Arnav's wish for having his Khushi in his arms to care and protect her.

Precap is wonderful. Though it is early for the next one but couldn't wait to see Khushi's reaction abt why Arnav went to meet the mafia don. Is she going to be angry for the stunt he pulled or will she know the actual reason.

It was really surprising to hear that u are writing a true story of the girl u knew. I really salute for her bravery to live her life she is living now. It is not any story where we can forgot after sometime but to witness the killing infront of ur own eyes and had to live with the nightmare really needs lot of courage to face it. Hope she has someone like our Hero who is there to support, protect and take care of her. She has all our wishes to have a happy life ahead.

Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
14 was awesome😃
Khushis past made me cry .. Can't believe it's a true story šŸ˜•
Waiting for next
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Awesome update why jpolo called himself khushi father loved d meeting btw jpolo n arnav jpolo should b killed to call him as khushi's father to give her life dread, pain, fear whereas father should give protectiven beautiful life
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congozzz 4 d new thread🄳
amazing partšŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Firstly u r such a great writer..u have shown a real girl story soo beautifully...
I mean like seriously d real world is sometimes cruel with some people...really felt bad for khushi thinking she had to see her father die before her eyes...as arnav said khushi is way more stronger than him...nd khushi she was soo concerned for arnav dat she just wanted to see him...waiting for khushi reaction after she has heard der talk...
Loved it..
Thnxxx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Fabulous update
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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