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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

like all the banners... gif...

and the other one 2... banner...👍🏼

interesting 👏 👏

❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

14...

arnav pain... knowing khushi journey in life...

with so much happen until... now

this hurts...

JP.. is another extreme of love...

but he got his punishment... knowing the truth

of his ending ... he will never able to face khushi...

ASR braveness to face him and warn him... was so good

JP respect arnav and happy for khushi...

and her restless and stubborn mind giving in to her

heart... she did run for him... with everything she have

beautiful update

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Mind blowing chapter 14..

Writing simply brilliantly. .

Arnav's pain after knowing what khushi had gone through in the past shows when you love someone whole hearted their happiness n pain is the most important to u..

Khushi is become so strong Inspite of her painful past made Arnav guilty..

Because he also hurt her..

But loved the way he went n spoke to palo. .

How did khushi's mom die?

Khushi was missing Arnav n angry on him for not meeting g / calling her. .

But heading rahim chacha's call with Adi oh my god she ran

Again her fear came alive...

The important part of this chapter is the beautiful way you have written their emotions. ..👏👏.. you are a simply stupendous writer..

Oh dear why did u stopped it here??.

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Aimer_vous

@Aimer_vous

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Such an emotional update👏

The way Arnav was feeling Khsuhi's pain and the way Khsuhi was feeling distress whole day,How simply they hold intensity and connection there.She is cute😆 with ll those punishments for him because she was simply missing him so much and feeling bad that he might be in danger.😊 I really felt heavy heart for this girl who went through all of this.
The last scene is very touchy,but you just stopped there.😳

Precap is very tempting😳

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akai

@akai

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Very nice update dear..

I thought somebody would kidnap Kushi and arnav will rescue her but it was unexpected.

Small fragile Kushi in the rainy night. Omg poor child. No one can't take that..

She was obeying her dad closing her mouth.

Arnav had clearly throwed his words where it will hurt that man.

Yes he is already dead. Arnav no need to do anything.

Kushi is restless and her monologue of making him cry is lol.

Now both had met.. So waiting to know what will happen next..

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nagina

@jeb1

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

It was great update

Pls continue soon

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pmohan89

@pmohan89

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Beautiful , Let me absorb it😊

I am speechless with this update.Is it the real one where one person went through that much?She is a true hero in my eyes and if u ask me she had won already by crossing that mile from east to west side of this barren darkness and standing right in front of her light.Her Arnavji.

Arnav's encounter with Palo is simply breathtaking and the way he said, She is always be Mrs.Khushi Singh Raizada.Really a person who doesn't except the word of marriage is hell bound to make her his after all she is Everything to him.

Now why did Arnav want to know her past that deep?Will wait for your answer.

Edited by pmohan89 - 9 years ago