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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats Faiqa on the new thread and all the best for many more to come.
First thing first. Kudos to the living soul whose real life story we are witnessing. To me she is a warrior and the real life HERO if she really had to through even 50% of what you have written 👏 👏 and I am glad that she allowed you to reiterate her story and make a FF out of it. This shows that she is truly out of her misery and her phobia👍🏼 😃

It was one update and to know that someone has lived it in real time makes it even worth it. I will like to know if you did justice to the real story from the person's perspective. 😕 To me this was brilliant. My heart went for Alina that witnessed the shooting. My heart went for Arnav who had to live it through in the story. My heart even went to JPalo. I know although he is the culprit I can somehow not curse him. He was in love and Love is blind. He for sure loved her enough to let Arnav go. Was all this done to test Arnav or was he just concerned about Alina is still a question? Nevertheless I am glad that the scary past is out and to my surprise we see Khushi who is ready to embrace darkness, rain and all in order to meet Arnav👏

The details that you bring is a pleasure to read and then the edits mind blowing. ⭐️
Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
congrats on new thread Di
please continue soon
big hug 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulation on new thread.👏
Take your time and give us rocking update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 14... PAGE 1...POST 2 ...has been updated

I hope ,you will forgive me for being one extra day late...I know I deserve all chappals and tomatoes.

PLEASE! Forgive me




CHAPTER 13 ... PAGE 1...POST 7 for those who didn't read yet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I updated my comment on front page

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4487184&PID=127670285&#p127670285
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