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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

14...

arnav pain... knowing khushi journey in life...

with so much happen until... now

this hurts...

JP.. is another extreme of love...

but he got his punishment... knowing the truth

of his ending ... he will never able to face khushi...

ASR braveness to face him and warn him... was so good

JP respect arnav and happy for khushi...

and her restless and stubborn mind giving in to her

heart... she did run for him... with everything she have


beautiful update






Linsie I love ur thoughts in BOLD

yes an extreme side of love and he respected Arnav for his honesty and love for Khsuhi
Palo did wht he thought was his love for Lidia,but he forgot tht love can't be snatched .

Thank you so much for ur lovely wishes and gifts😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: madhu1210

Mind blowing chapter 14..

Writing simply brilliantly. .


Arnav's pain after knowing what khushi had gone through in the past shows when you love someone whole hearted their happiness n pain is the most important to u..

Khushi is become so strong Inspite of her painful past made Arnav guilty..
Because he also hurt her..

But loved the way he went n spoke to palo. .
How did khushi's mom die?

Khushi was missing Arnav n angry on him for not meeting g / calling her. .
But heading rahim chacha's call with Adi oh my god she ran

Again her fear came alive...


The important part of this chapter is the beautiful way you have written their emotions. ..👏👏.. you are a simply stupendous writer..



Oh dear why did u stopped it here??.


Madhu tht bold up there is teh KEY of all yes Palo didn't understand that and did the damage to many lives ,but Arnav understood that long back even he hated love or marriage or anything like that.

Khsuhi is the one whose pure soul is searching for some one who she can feel for herself and that is where Arnav standing now in her life .

RED is in the chappy madhu, she died at the time of her birth
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aimer_vous

Such an emotional update👏

The way Arnav was feeling Khsuhi's pain and the way Khsuhi was feeling distress whole day,How simply they hold intensity and connection there.She is cute😆 with ll those punishments for him because she was simply missing him so much and feeling bad that he might be in danger.😊 I really felt heavy heart for this girl who went through all of this.
The last scene is very touchy,but you just stopped there.😳

Precap is very tempting😳


Thnx Aimer😊

She is , and she is the only one who can do anything with him,

😆 sorry, update was already long
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akai

Very nice update dear..

I thought somebody would kidnap Kushi and arnav will rescue her but it was unexpected.

Small fragile Kushi in the rainy night. Omg poor child. No one can't take that..

She was obeying her dad closing her mouth.

Arnav had clearly throwed his words where it will hurt that man.
Yes he is already dead. Arnav no need to do anything.

Kushi is restless and her monologue of making him cry is lol.

Now both had met.. So waiting to know what will happen next..


Thnx akai😊

blue is really good , yes ,Arnav have hurt him at the point where no one could even think of and he didn't let anyone touch Arnav either.that show how do these two have understood each other and at what level.



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pmohan89

Beautiful , Let me absorb it😊

I am speechless with this update.Is it the real one where one person went through that much?She is a true hero in my eyes and if u ask me she had won already by crossing that mile from east to west side of this barren darkness and standing right in front of her light.Her Arnavji.

Arnav's encounter with Palo is simply breathtaking and the way he said, She is always be Mrs.Khushi Singh Raizada.Really a person who doesn't except the word of marriage is hell bound to make her his after all she is Everything to him.

Now why did Arnav want to know her past that deep?Will wait for your answer.


BOLD, COMING UPDATES

pRIYA , THNX DEAR.lIFE IS REALLY A TEST ITSELF/

UR BLUE IS AWESOME👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mahrusweety

beautiful update
loved it
khushi past was heart wrenching
now arnav understand that she is way too stronger than him
waiting for next part


tHNX MAHRU DEAR😊

I think , sometimes tough life mkes you either tougher or weaker , it depends how circumstnces makes you deal with that.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: xZoyax

Mind-blowing Faiqa,

RES


Zoya and RES????

Allah Khair kare
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Posted: 9 years ago
Even i believe that if god take with one hand, he wil give with both hands.

While reading the FF, i was crying at the end of the update.

Watching killing father infront of our eyes - thought of this giving tears then how the poor girl is facing the reality from childhood.


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akurmapu

Even i believe that if god take with one hand, he wil give with both hands.

While reading the FF, i was crying at the end of the update.

Watching killing father infront of our eyes - thought of this giving tears then how the poor girl is facing the reality from childhood.



Good to see you Anjani😊

,Indeed ..it is way beyond imagination ,but when someone aapko smait laita hai then u can stand on ur feet at least.Hard to forget ,but at least u can see the world at different angle.
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update...😊
really, it was heart wrenching to read khushi's tormenting past...😔 Ya, she is way stronger & seeks solace and peace from Arnav, which he can only give... beautifully written, loved every bit of it...❤️ continue soon, waiting
And congratulations for the new thread dear 😊
Edited by christi002 - 9 years ago

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