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anjale

@anjale

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

wow so every ting he nos now what will happen 2 kushi if she come 2 no abt it i am worried...😕

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whitelily

@whitelily

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

awesome update 👏

written superbly

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Congo for new thread faiqa

Finally u revealed khushi [alina's ]past

I can't beleive its real life story

Seriously it's heart wrenching chapter faiqa

Rula diya 😭 exactly like arnav's crying gif

Continue soon

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Amazing update.. was so worried to see Khushi coming out of house at this time of night however can't express how relieved to see Arnav.. simply superb.. so here is Khushi's past.. Love can also be reason of destruction.. JPalo's love caused destruction and a small girl have to bear the pain of this destruction for all her life.. well hope after meeting Arnav Singh Raizada Jpalo will try to remain away from Khushi as Arnav will not let anything happen to her but will burn down the hands or eyes who even try to touch her or look at her.. loved the amazing part..

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Congrats on the new thread.

Awesome update.

Khushi's past was really cruel. But God is not cruel, so he bestowed khushi with a loving parents and now arnav who will protect her with his life. No I don't want his life is at stake. Yes I am really worried for him as he came to face the ruthless mafia people. So khushi's anxiety, her disquietude is very apparent. How she ran out in the mid of the night in search of Arnav proved how much she loves him. It's good that arnav also came home at the right time to abate her worry. Now I just hope they live togetehr happily without any enemies. But which won't be possible for a while I guess.

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Really feel bad for Khushi. It was horrible to witness such cruelty. And all this for what because one man's love was not reciprocated my her mother and she chose her father. Sometimes I feel the truth to be unknown than known. This small reason caused so much destruction. Very emotional update. Arnav and Jpalo had there reasons but it was Khushi who suffered the repurcersions.

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.anjali.

@.anjali.

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Congratulations on the new thread..!!😃😃
Amazing update..!! 😃..as always..!!😃
Mafia don😲😲OMG...good thing Lidia left him...but he killed her husband😲..
Khushis past is really soo disturbing......Poor arnav has to keep it a secret soo dat khushi doesnt get hurt..
Ahh..JPalo has to bear the sadness...whatever he did...poor khushi cannot come over it...the girl has been scarred..Loved Arnav in that part...soo brave..soo fearless...
The part of arnavs sadness...well written👏...felt for him😭😭..
And the last part👏👏👏👏...wonderful superbb..khushis thoughts..the way she ran to see him...arnav wanting to protect her...smiled seeing her...also worried for her...haaye...kya bolun👏👏👏👏👏...
And about your friend...i salute her...she has been through this...feel bad for her...But I wish her All the Best for her life...Hope she gets All the Success and happiness🤗🤗

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bellarosa

@bellarosa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

awesome

superb

interesting

felt bad for khushi

was scared for arnav , but now i think that jpalo is obssessed with khushi as his daughter , so he won't hurt her love

please continue soon Di

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Roop_P
Congratulations for the new thread 👏

THE BEST CHAPTER EVER IN MY EYES.👏

First of all you have the top gif , his winning walk with pride of his treasure , His Khsuhi who means world to him😊
Second , picture, his turning back with her questioning Look,Her tears his remembering holding her that night in her unconscious state , with all what he did after knowing how even she is breathing with this heaviness when he couldn't bear it for one day.😭
HIS TURNING FACE AND THE SUNSET is showing his redemption.Brilliant👏
Next phase is he is crying remembering her words, her letter, all the time which they spent, her submission in that kiss, and his realization that she was loving him, all this time and he was just pushing her away.He cried his heart out, let that guilt wash away.

Love the use of side mirror, his reflection and oath, you are reminding me off this scene

credit to the owner

Love her war in between mind and heart ,but unlike last time she refused to accept ,this time she couldn't reject the thoughts of him which are invading her.

Now her past, my heart really felt this tug today.She is a true survivor in my eyes.But her walk from her home to his , is so painful.How much scared she will be?I felt that whole scene in front of my eyes.So many good elements are making that scene so powerful.
lightening, drizzle,thunder, homeless people, drunk ones, and broken bottle , and I really winced when she said Ahhh,so so so real it felt and yes police officer on a horse even.👏👍🏼

His own yearning , after all of this .JUST TO HOLD HER.I loved it and the way she was feeling restless all day long , he was so desperate to be with her too.

Love the last lines.

⭐️a treasure to be cherished for eternity, ⭐️

PRECAP is making me all nostalgic , I demand next update soon, very very soon.can't wait.They are in each others' arms