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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chinnulu

Amazing and Emotional update.

Poor Khushi had to see her dad being killed infront of her eyes is really bad. Arnav felt Khushi's pain after knowing her past and thought she is way stronger than him because she has come long way moving on and living each day of her life with the nightmares she is seeing every night is not easy to relive the dreadful night which happened infront of her eyes. Loved the convo between Arnav and JPalo. Glad atleast JPalo being mafia don did not try to kill Arnav or kdnap Khushi because he wanted her as his daughter and force his relationship on Khushi either by hook or crook. He understood Arnav and let him go. Loved where Arnav told him that he don't want to do anything because already he is dead man and Khushi is the who witnessed him killing her father.


👏 WAY TO GO, YES PALO NEITHER FORCED NOR PUSHED HIS RELATIONSHIP TO MAKE HER HIS DAUGHTER.hE LOVED LIDIA AND HER THINKS HER CHILD AS HIS...AN OBSESSIVE LOVER HE IS YES...BUT HE DIDN'T CROSS ANY LINE YET AND AFTER MEETING ARNAV , DEF HE WON'T GO FURTHER,BUT WILL KHUSHI BELIEVE IT?



Poor girl is so angry on Arnav for not talking to her or meet her for whole day, even in her anger she knows that he cannot be without seeing her even for a day. This shows how much she understands Arnav and love him. She is so worried for him she didn't wait to listen the whole conversation between Rahim chacha and Adi and ran in the drakness and rain to see him whether he is fine or not. Wondering whether these two knew that Khushi is listening to their convo and wanted to see her reaction or they were talking naturally. God fulfilled Arnav's wish for having his Khushi in his arms to care and protect her.



MANY ARE ASKING, WHY DID HE WANT TO KNOW ABOUT KHUSHI'S PAST ...coming update u will see why?
only thing because when u want to win ur love back YOU WNT TO GIVE THEM ALL TEH HAPPINESS ND HE IS TRYING THINGS HIS WYS ND DON'T FORGET HE IS ASR , HOS WAYS ARE UNUSUAL
NOW IT WILL BE HARD FOR HER FOR BELIEVING HIM ALL OF WHT HE WILL OFFER,BUT HE KNOWS WAYS HOW TO DO IT

Precap is wonderful. Though it is early for the next one but couldn't wait to see Khushi's reaction abt why Arnav went to meet the mafia don. Is she going to be angry for the stunt he pulled or will she know the actual reason.

I WON'T BE LATE, THT IS MY MISSION IN MY HEAD...ON THURSDAY NIGHT AFTER MY WORK, ACC TO NY TIME...PAKKA, I KNOW , I KEPT THE BALANCE WHEN ARNAV'S PAST HAD NO SCENE TOGETHER, HER PAST HAD NONE...JUST KIDDING.UPDATE IS ALREADY PRETTY LONG AND I DON'T DO PART 1,2 AND ALL



It was really surprising to hear that u are writing a true story of the girl u knew. I really salute for her bravery to live her life she is living now. It is not any story where we can forgot after sometime but to witness the killing infront of ur own eyes and had to live with the nightmare really needs lot of courage to face it. Hope she has someone like our Hero who is there to support, protect and take care of her. She has all our wishes to have a happy life ahead.

Thanks for the PM


INDEED IT IS PAINFUL TO SEE IN FRONT OF UR EYES ALL OF THIS AND SHE DID SURVIVE , SHE IS AN ORPHAN CHILD ,BUT SHE IS TEH LUCKY ONE WHO HAVE ALL THE PEOPLE IN HER LIFE MADE HER FEEL AND LOVE HERSELF

THNX CHINNU, 🤗

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Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Helping_angel

14 was awesome😃

Khushis past made me cry .. Can't believe it's a true story 😕
Waiting for next
Thanx for the PM


So good to see u dear😊

Sometimes life is cruel for some ppl. But they come up strongest than ever

Thnx
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Awesome update why jpolo called himself khushi father loved d meeting btw jpolo n arnav jpolo should b killed to call him as khushi's father to give her life dread, pain, fear whereas father should give protectiven beautiful life


Thnx Insaneniyu😊

red

because he loved like obsessed lover to Lidia and thinks her daughter as HIS,not other way around.There are people who u see in movies, they do exist in reality and this is a true story .That man has just died couple of yers ago.Now let me ask u do u think after knowing nd gathering info about Khsuhi and her involvement with Arnav, and being impressed by Arnav , would he let him go easily if his intentions were just to harm Arnav or Khsuhi...??


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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update
oh so much has happened - my heart goes out to khushi -
very well written chapter
thx dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

beautiful update

oh so much has happened - my heart goes out to khushi -
very well written chapter
thx dear


Thnx Priya😊

I am glad you liked it and ofcourse this is heartwreching .
I am humbled.

Once again thnx
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: farha623

finally had a chance to catch up on the last few chapters n loveee this FF.
update soon!


tHNX Farah, SO GOOD TO SEE YOU DEAR😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congratulations for new thread Didi... Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved chapter 14 👏
Khushi's past unravelled, hope this brings Arnav and Khushi together
Eager for the next part 😃


Thnx Lilly😊

I love ur positivity😊👏


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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally was able to hit like...
Aww!! Didu you're just fabulous... How could you write something so amazing, interesting and... Ahh!!! I really don't have words to express my feelings after reading this part.. Pls update soon Didu...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shreyapari

Finally was able to hit like...

Aww!! Didu you're just fabulous... How could you write something so amazing, interesting and... Ahh!!! I really don't have words to express my feelings after reading this part.. Pls update soon Didu...


Thnx Shreya , I am so glad that I have a superwoman here 🤗 who finished all so quick.

Share the secret 😊

Joke aside, thank you Shreya and don't take me serious, I am just like that.

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