LRL Raj Naina ff part 17 page 47

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

kark12

@kark12

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever
Finally got a chance to read your fic and I am loving it. ..And I am looking forward to read more. ..
I just wish to read it in more detail...
Continue soon

thank u for reading my ff..
k I will try to be little detail..

Quote

kark12

@kark12

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: m.bahety
Damn good and so thrilling from the beginning good job darling!!! Chalo ab next part jaldi post karna...waiting for it...

Thanks for the PM

Luv
Megha

thank u so .such megha... ur support made me to write more

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

kark12

@kark12

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

hi thank u for comment

part 4:

next morning they had the maj.nair drill .. being the drill incharge gunnny too present there. .

as he see all cadts he feels that these batch of cadets got great strength and attitude..

through the drill maj.nair tried to do partiallity with gIrls he tried to insult naina and pooja but gunny stoped that and make sure that both girls got same drill as all boys..

after the drill gunny wanted to know everyone so he said to wait all members there..

everyone introduced themselves. ..
for naina as she was normal he nt find anything as raj said..
he thinks may be raj thinking too much about his mission so he got doubt on naina...

gunny:so guys how all feeling here??? yaha 2 saal khathna ithna aasan nahi jithna aap soch kar aye the..

huda:nahi sir ji hame patha hai ..

gunny:good cadet huda.. mai ne suna hai ki thum flirt jyada karthe ho..

pooja:bilkul sahi kaha apne sir.. ye huda hamesha apne connection kisi aur ke call me gussaneki koshish kartha hai..

huda:nahi sir ji. ..mai jananiyonke peeche nahi jananiya mere peeche athe hai..ye panjaban mera mathlab hai ye pooja aise hi bol rahi hai.. vo kya hai na pooja mere ek lauthi behen hai jise mere bhareme dhar rehetha hai ki kahi koi ladki muje patakar na lejaye..

by listening his last line all r shocked.. he called pooja as his sister. .. gunny start laughing. .

gunny:huda ur really too much..
naina:thu tho bach gayi pooja vo tere bai bangaya..
pooja:aise ithna bhi bhura nahi hai mere bai huda..

naina n all :what...???!!!!

then a orderly come n says that there is a parcel for naina singh..
as soonas she heared her namewithout wasting a songle secong she came out of the line she standing n grabed the parcel n run from there. ..
gunny got shocked by this behavior. . he then thinks may be raj was right.. y tgis girl run like this.. he follow her n he sees that she throws that gift in dustbean..

gunny ti himself:ye kya hai.. kahi ye sach me koi spy tho nahi.. I need to find out...
he goes to collect information about her call n all he get that.. she nt talked properly to the call she get... it made him to doubt more on her..

he goes to his roomn says to raj..

gunny:raj ithink ur right..

raj:what right..
gunny:I mean about cadet.singh.. she may be spy.

raj:what!!????
gunny says whatever happened.

raj:anyway we need to find out about this .. but I dont think she is spy.. I feel she cant be.anyway I will say to chaubey to find her address ..

abhi nandini gunny and raj all wentto canteen to have dinner.. cadets are already there having dinner..

they wentand sat on opposite table to cadets..

alekh and naina was sitting exactly opposite to raj and nandini..

ali:naina ap kha kyu nahi rahi hai .. parathe ithne ache banhi hai khalijiye na..

pooja:chod ali iskatho network hamesha jaam hi rehetha haj. . patha nahi kaha khoyi huva rehethI hai hamesha..

huda:pajaban vo mere bareme soch rahi hogi.. kyu phoolan..

yudi:dude...

alekh:oye half ticket vo there bare me sapnebhi nahI sochegi...

huda:acha .. thuje kuch jyada hi patha hai phoolan ke bareme...

naina:stop it guys...

all this was listened and noticed by raj..

najna:alekh mera khana hogaya.. thu bhi jaldi kha le muje thujse kuch bath karni thi..

alekh:apun ka bhi hogaya bas.. he was about to get up but sudeenly he sees raj who was staring at themm..

alekh in low voice:naina thu chal mai bad me aatha hu..
naina:par kyu..
alekh:vo dekh vi captain hame hi gurr raha hai...
tyen naina sees towards raj ..raj turn to nandini side..
raj:nandini thumhara din kaisa tha..
nandini:it was good raj..
abhi:hamare tho ache hi honge afterall humhamara ghar kma jo lauth aye..

gunny:nt agiain bro. uthna kya attachment is kma se... jaha hum... (he was about to say hum apne dost khoye huve hai.. but stopped seeing at raj who became sad)

raj finished dinmer fast n went from there saying he has some work..

naina and alekh was sitting on a bench at ground. ... they were talking something suddenly alekh sees raj was standing behind a tree so he stop naina from saying further. .

alekh:naina hame ye sab yaha bath nahi karna chayiye..
naina:kyu kya huva..
alekh:muje lagtha hai capt.rajveer thumpar nazar rakh raha hai.. tho apun ko lagtha hai use doubt ho gaya haI.. tho ek kaam karthe hai.. jo bhi bath karna hai mai thumhare room me athi hu thab karenge..

naina:par alekh ye sab kya hai.. mai itna bhi nahi kar sakthi hu bayya ke liye..she became emotional n tears came in her eyes..

alekh putting his hand on her head n making her head to rest on his sholder .
alekh:apun kar lenge naina thu fikar math kar.. apun hai tere sath.. dono milkar naveen ko beguna sabeeth karenge..

s

Quote

kajalkalwani

@kajalkalwani

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Nive update. Waitin fr d nxt part

Quote

nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

awesome part

raj and gunny's doubt on naina

alekh supporting naina wow

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next

Quote

ginny_trish

@ginny_trish

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: kark12
thank u... I love suspense,..

i do too <3 😃 i m thoroughly enjoying the ff. u r just too good.

thank u 🤗 much :)

Quote

ginny_trish

@ginny_trish

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Nice update!! thanks for the PM. 😊 its brilliant that u have included Nandini in the story. Are u gonna show any storyline between her and Rajveer?

Love and Luck

Quote

m.bahety

@m.bahety

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Hi dear!!!! Very nice update...bas ab Raina Ki duriya kam kar do Nahi saha jaa raha ab ye...Mila do unhe

Thank you for the PM...Plz update soon...

Luv
Megha