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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Alekh know...
Alekh knows when? How?
This isnjust too exciting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just caught up with this fic..liking the story so far..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u so much for lovely comment... sorry I nt thanked individually as I was little busy.. but plz keep on commenting so that I get how the story is ... plz read next part..








part 5:

guys u all having doubt that how alekh know about naveen but as I said alekh n naina became good friends naina trusted him nsaid him everything. .


after that they both went to their rooms.

raj sees this all n he nt listened what they r talking. .

tabhi gunny waha atha hai..
gunny:kya huva ..

raj :kuch nahi.. thum yaha kya kar rahe ho.. chalo time huva hai ...

next morning chawbe comes to meet raj ncaubay gives him naina phone no and address...raj thinksit will be better if he go n find about naina directly instead of calling..

on the other hand gunnyget that naina nt talk said her parents to nt to call her .so he checks all her documents and all but he finds something wrong in that.. as her 10th was from almoda but after that there everything changed. n he called the contact no which she goven but it was fake .. his doubt on her got doubled by this...he thought to talk to raj but he get to know that raj went outside on some work...


so gunny decided to talk naina first...

on the other side raj reached naina home n gets that she is naveen's sister... he hada tears in his eyes thinking about naveen n naina..

raj to himself:thum kaha thi naina .. mai kaha kaha nahi dhunda thumhe ithne saal se aur thum mere saamne ho.. naveen finallymuje thumhare behn mil gayi.. mai ab thujse kiya huva wada pura karoonga...


raj in hurry goes to girls hostel as he cant wait to see naina after knowing that she is naveen's behen.. vo naina jo naveenki jindagi tho .. shayad kuch hadh thak raj ki bhi..

he asks lolitha mam about naina n he get to know that capt.gunny has called naina to his cabin.

raj thinks kahi vo usko spy samjkartho...no aise nahi hosaktha.. I need to stop gunny.. he literally runs from there...

in raj room (as both gunny n raj in same room )

naina:sir apne muje bhulaya...

gunny:yes cadet singh maine bhulaya..apse kuch poochna tha.

naina:kahiye sir..

gunny:aap almoda se ho na...

naina:no sir mai nenital se hu.. (she got shocked y he asking all this.)

gunny:tho apka certificate... (he shows her the certificate. .)

naina:sir vo mai ek saal nanithal me tho tho bord ke exam vaha se hi dhi thi..

gunny:oh great tho ab ye bhi batha dijiye ki apka ye phone no wrong kaise hogay...

thabi was dharwaja kholneka awaja atha hai n that was raj who entered with full force..

he just looking at naina who was standing there in fear...

gunny:raj.. thum aise..kya huva.. sab theek tho hai na..

raj:cadet singh aap yaha.. is waqt..


gunny:ha raj vo maine hi... muje doubt hai ki yahi (he was about to sag that he has doubt that she is spy but raj stopped him saying this as he dont wanted to call her spy )

raj:cadet singh aap jaa sakthe hai...

gunny:raj.. I need to talk to her..

raj:gunny its too late.. lolita mam was waiting for her so.. let her go..

gunny:dismiss cadet singh...

gunny nt understand y raj stopped him..

naina also nt understand whats going on y gunny called her n y raj said her to go..

whole night raj was just thinking what to do now.. wheather tohis friends about naina or not...

he thinks if naina hiding her identity means it will be wrong if he say about her to his friends... sohe thought no first I meed to talk to naina later I can inform gunny abhi n nandini that we finally got themm.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

mindblowing update
loved it

thank u so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantastic
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful part
Raj know about Naina and wanting to tell his friends
Excited for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good to know that raj knows about naina now...waiting to know about the promise he made to naveen. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

Wonderful part

Raj know about Naina and wanting to tell his friends
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part

thank u so much dear... ya sure I will send pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Good to know that raj knows about naina now...waiting to know about the promise he made to naveen. ..

Continue soon

thank u so much for reading... u will get to know soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 6:

next morning raj decided to talk her so he was looking for her but he get to know that she inmaj nair drill that to his fav rifal shooting so he decided just go and see the drill..


when he goes there his eyes fell on a girl qho have determination in her eyes..that is naina.. h smila unknowingly. ..

maj.nair:oh capt..ap yaha..
raj:actually u know I love shooting. .so I tjought I will see it today.if u dont mind cani stand here till the class ends..

maj.nair: yes capt. infact I suggest u give the demo of this...
raj:oh thank u so much sir..

k guys remember the scene when raj give demo of rifal shooting. .I am nt writing tgat fully here..

maj.nair:only boys get ur rifals...

pooja:sirwhat about us sis..

(I use mc for nair guys)
mc:girls ko by default 5 marks diya jayega...

naina:I insiats sir..
raj:me second ...I insist..
mc:what u mean..
raj:y girls get 5 marks.. n in rule book this ia written that girls and boys should get equal priority so...

mc in anger : orderly ladkiyonkeliye bhi rifal lekhar avoo...

huda hits near to target..
ali hits far away from target .
yudi tho kisiko topi udadiya..
alekh hit the target almost..raj impressed by this.
pooja says she take default 5 marks as she nt able to hold rifal itself..
n at last naina.. she take the rifal in hand and tries to trigger it but it was no use as mc have gave junk rifal intentionaly..

mc:cadet singh agar aap chahathe hai tho u can backoff now also..
naina:no sir ...I will do it..
naina tries hard but in doing that her aholder got hurt..
naina:ouchmmm she sreamed as her sholder was hit..

raj suddenly says naina... then he rememberd that what he was doing...
she was sitting on groud in oain that pain is visible in raj eyes... he was feeling to go n help her but he cant do that...he feels bas that he is nt able to help naina...
alekh nhuda was about to go to naina but mc stopped..
mc:no cadets... juat be in ur line.. noone will help cadet singh.. its all small pains .. she ia here to become army officer aise chot athe hi rehethe hai..
after sometime he left from there. .
raj sees that naina was sitging there but she nt crying.. he know the pain in too much but she is hiding it..
as soon as mc left from there alekh n huda run to her..
huda:phoolan thu theek hai na.. phoolan..

alekh:apunko lagtha hai ise informary lejana hoga.. .naina chal yaha se..

she tries to get up but her pain was too much so she ahain sat there...

alekh:apun ko lagtha hai.. jyada dardho raha hoga.. chal ise mai lejatha hu...
he was about lift her in arm..
huda:alekh thu jakar dr.shalini ko bolde.. mai phoolan ko latha hu..he lift her in his arms n took her from there. .
raj who was seeing all this was sad.. he directly went to his room.. he punch his hand to wall it starts bleeding..

raj to himself:mai kuch nahi kar sakha uske liye... vo ithne dard me thi aur mai... nahi mai aise nahi baithsaktha.. use dard mujse nahi dekha jaatha.. but karu tho kya karu... mai use sambalna chahatha tha.. uska sard bathma chahatha tha par nahi... mai kuch nahi kar sakha.. he again started to hit his hand to wall...

suddenly abhi and nandini enteres the room..
nandini:what the hell...
she runs to him n holds his hand.
nandini:what is this raj .. ye kya kar rahe ho thum... abhi dekh ise kya huva hai.. chal infirmary chalthe hai..
raj:no I am fine..
abhi:hame kuch nahi sunna hai.. chalo ab..he dragged him to infirmary. ..

in infirmary. .

all 5 cadtes are standing outside

nandini:kya huva cadets aap sab log yaha ..sab theek tho hai na..

ali:mam vo naina..
abhi:oh vo gayal hai??? comeon cadets aise chote se ghav hothe hai training me..

pooja:hay sharuk... mera mathlab hai sirko kya huva.. inke hath tho bleed ho raha hai..
abhi took raj inside..

dr.shalini who was treating naina seea at abhi n raj..

abhi:dr.inhe bandage kar dijiye dekhiye ye kya kar liya inhone..

dr.shalini:kamla hai.. aaj do do patients aye hai bo bhi almoat same time .. capt..u sit on bet I will treat u later.. vo actually cadte singh is in pain so may I..

raj:offcourse dr. u go ahead...

abhi:hum bhahar wait karthe hai..

salini says her to try to turn hand but it was paining so she start crying. .
naina:mam bahuth dard ho raha hai ..I cant hide it anymore.. mam kuch kijiye..
shalini feels bad by seeing this.. raj was just looking at her with teary eye.
shalini:cadet ho gayi.thodi der aur... aap ithe waqth thak dard saha hai .. tho dher aur.. be brave... see cadet capt. ko bhi chot lagi hai but he nt showing it... u have to be atrong like him.. naina sees towards him.. he wipes his tears making sure noone sees it..
naina thinks. : what happened to rajveer sir abhi tho theek the aur ab ...

outside
alekh also thinking same.. capt.tho abhi theel tha aur drill batha raha tha... aise chot lagna vo bhi haath par..

huda watrying to flirt with nandinI.
huda:mam sir ko chot kaise lagi...

nandini:vo kya hai na thumhare jo rajveer hai na vo thoda pagal hai.. use jab gussa atha hai tho pailwan ki taraha apne haath ko diwar par marthe hai... u know basically ye problem sirf uska nahi.. hamare group ka hai... mere mathlab...

abhi:nandini aap kya bol rahi hai..kuch nahi cadet vo aise hi hath ko chot laga tha...

alekh was listening this..
he thinks so capt ko kiss bath par gussa aya tho jo unhone apne hath aise kar liye hai..

thabhi naina vaha par athi hai..
all goes n surrounds her.
abhi:cadets plz let her free for sometime.. she need rest..pooja aap unhe room lejayiye..

pooja:theek hai sir

alekh:ppoja thu rukh.. mai naina kesaath jatha hu..thu kuch khanekeliye lekar aa..
pooja:k..

alekh was concerned about her..



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