Arshi TS - Desert Rain/ Part 2/ Pg-21/(Completed) - Page 4

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

Oh everyone is so young here in Arshi forum, i am the only jaded cow here! 😭😆 Mine is 6th november 1990. 😆

Originally posted by: dv19

0ct 19, 79

Originally posted by: aashikhan120

no you are 25 only :P not so old🤢

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

So what i was thinking was right, 😉 that your birthday must be coming! it's in october very near now devil momma! 😛

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

Dedication:

I dedicate this TS to my beloved IF devil Momma (dv19), my IF dare-devil girlfriend (Subhashini) and my IF devil sis (Sadh123).

Thank U Boy Freind I feeling Like dancing

I know momma either your birthday has passed or still have to come but still I wanted to dedicate it to you as a birthday gift, your own Arabian fantasy on heated sands, now you can add the heat in your thoughts too momma, make sure that the thoughts had the right temperature to burn your child. ☺️😉 Meanwhile me and Subi will work on converting your thoughts into actions! 😉 Aww Meri Naughty Boyfriend..should i need to Shy 😳 or afraid

And I know my devil girlfriend Subs and sis Sadhana, both of your birthday's are in oncoming November with me.

U Remember Yaaay

Three Scorpions to Tango! 😈😆 But still it's a birthday gift for you too in advance! 🥳😉(I wanted to write an OS but it magically converted into TS, see what did i told you that i am a total disaster at writing short stories, i think i would expire at the time i would be able to write an OS 🤣)

Subs i want to fulfill that fantasy with you, let's go to Gobi Desert for a heated tango and we will kidnap Sadhana and take her with us too, to write a memoir on us doing ... and to take our ... pics! Sadhana fill in the blanks by yourself please! 😈🤣 Poor Sadhana but sadhana Beware of me I am very Possessive over my Boyfriend

Originally posted by: dv19

Romance reloaded, metaphors unlimited, reality a bitch fully composed in each nuke and corner of ur writings. Very Effective Description about Mahi writing style👏

Why can i connect more with ur ffs .. as u say Im a classy writer.. U are more than that.. u are etched writer darling. 👏

I may not comment frequently but always love u .. in person .. in a writer.. as a frined and as a companion.

This is dedicated to me.. really i cant believe. First person to dedicate me in this Forum.. That too a peice of incomparable writing..

One qn to ask u..Do i deserve this?..

I dont know.. But u are my daughter for sure.. my sweetest one.. who can understand mamma in and out .. my moodswings or my depression or my happiness or watever..

my emotions only some can understand.. and that one lucky is u.. personally and professionally..

This dedication of urs is very sweet like u mahi..

when on call today..i hadnt read nor came acrss.. i was reading Lilys TS and happened to read..

and shokced beyond i cud feel..


The desert or natures formation has always been my inspiraton for all my wiritings.. I dont know how can i connect with any form of natural elements. May be I emote my FFS characters with Natures flow or actions thats y...

This one is beyond wrods dear..

U have made remarkable ways in writing.. in this piece..


AS u know i have not read much of books. Im hooked only with wat pad or IF or some books which u gals share.. if not nothign i have read professionally..

"No writers are born. They are created by themselves. may be there are very famous authros..
Urs too can be kept among those.. " Theses words are very Touched dear

This piece is one such thing,,

BROKEN MOON BY P VIJAY.. has been my crux for my FF.. Shakespeare.. .. this work can be kept among that book.
simly love it..


when i was in class 5 , i had read this PB shellys Ozymandias.. Ur writing immediatley made me think this poem only..

the kings statue broken lay on the sand dunes.. only the ode or a writing engraved remained..

Love need not be said materialistic.. it cud be said or unsaid.. love is always love..

ARnavas too is that kind..


loved it mahi..