Arshi TS - Desert Rain/ Part 2/ Pg-21/(Completed)

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Subhashini Chowdary

@Subhashiniiiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

what Can I say about Update Mahi ..its Too classy and awesome..I am proud of My boyfriend

The poem is cryptic ..the cover photo is awesome ❤️

The story started in desert ..wait U told fairytale 😈 hmmm...Looking like sand Princess and prince story 😆 U know how much I love fairytales but u made me like Love twisted fairytales😆

Every description for emotion she feels how she lost her prince charming ,,the agony of her loss 😭 very well written👏

The prince charming not a normal romantic person..but his acts r romantic ..May be there is no one more than romantic to comparison to him.

I am very eager to know how she going to meet him in that desert

U said it TS i doubt it 😃

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archmink

@archmink

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

very nice story
I liked how you have shown glimpse of a past while she is laying on the sand waititng for her lover to come and rescue her ... its uniquely diff concept ... I liked it ...
plz pm me again when you update

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caur

@caur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Awesome TS sweetie👏👏

Loved it!

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Edited my comment here

And you better reply to that 😆

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Subhashiniii

Hehe Subashinii, I already have a bf here.. she will get angry then :D aur I can't risk it :D and no claims from my side, areh am devil ki sis which means, I am your nanadh :D aur ab things sound less complicated na?! Haha.. advance wishes to you.. and when is your bday?