Arshi TS - Desert Rain/ Part 2/ Pg-21/(Completed) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Alicia2012

Wow great short story please update soon

I can not wait for the next of your story and your are an amazing writer. Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Aww my devilish Queenie, you made me so happy.. Just before I was leaving to clg, I checked IF and I saw your PM.. socha ki meanie likh li uski OS, jo ban gaya TS! And I was happy and reserved here..

Oe my behen, my delecious Biryani anytime babe! Ak hi to devil behen hai the others are my devil children! 😈😉 I am an only child by the way! 😆😉

And this is the most unique concept I have ever read or felt so interested. You she nailed it with this one. And this is a master piece Queenie and I tell you this has surpassed all your previous works.. I mean it.. this was no crap as you had told.. now here you go special spanks from me for saying that and a bone crushing hug for writing this..

Thanks my behen, it's all because of your encouragement, i am very grateful for it!

A big bear rib cracking hug from me too to my devil sis too!

And Sure babe my butt is presented to you, to receive your special spanks 😆😉!

I could very well feel the yearnings of Khushi..and gosh these two are so different.. Arnav looks so understanding, so, I am very eagerly waiting for him to appear and sweep her off her feet. This is just so interesting and highly fairy tale like.. oh how will he come? I am.just so eager.. to know more.. this was really astounding Mahi <3

Thanks my biryani, for your delecious comments, love them just like i love you! 😃 will update it in or two days, won't take much time, can't keep my devil sis hanging on the cliff right? 😉

And finally.. dedication ke liye...I feel like the birthday girl, already.. and yes I am so happy that I share my birthday month with you!!! YAAY.. and I have already got a TS, not even an OS as birthday gift.. you are just so awesome girl and made me so very happy and emotional.. Aww I love you meanie <3 Advanced Wishes all four of us!!! And yes, special tango haha.. I want to do it in the special chamber of Arnav's palace.. please.. let's do it there.. and costumes arrange kar n.a... I wanna wear them baby!! And what else do we do there?! Um.. maybe find a good match for three of us.. what say? Areh are there no Arnav ki bhai?! :DV deepa sis will guide us :D hope I have very suitably filled the blanks! 😆

Aww honey I am so happy that i share the birthday month with you, you don't know how that makes me feel! Scorpions are very passionate friends, and we both share that special passionate friendship bond between us! 😳 So glad to know that you've got the same feelings as me my devil behen! 😛😉 Yep will do the tango there babe in the palace, with all gathered in our devilsih gothic birthday party! 😈😉 Gothic costumes and devil partners from hell, we will find Arnav kay bhai there, very kinky fun it will be! 😈

Aur kya? I love you, bas ❤️

Yours,

Devilish buddy and behen!

Muahh my behen lots of devilish hugs and kisses to you, 😈🤗 thanks babe aur kya 😉 yes love you too! 😛

Originally posted by: Nohealani

lovely update ..
Thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: dis_arshi

Nice one :)

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

nice start

so khushi has already been loved by her prince but had pushed him to leave

now shes taking her last steps in the desert to try to reach him n win him back

looking forward to u continuing

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Originally posted by: gowtu

Sounds awesome
Loved d start
Well written

Originally posted by: Anu567

Mahi,

A 10 on 10 for excellent effort...this story is closer to an Arabian fantasy than any I have read recently. Super. We don't see Arnav and yet we know all about him through Khushi's point of view. And poor Khushi is languishing on the desert sands. So did the idiot pack just a water bottle and set out to the desert dunes to look for him? And why on earth the dunes? Hmm...will wait for your answers...beautiful story!

Best,

Originally posted by: Wissensdurst

You seem to be on a roll Mahi.. I presume you are done with your school projects..😉.

Thanks honey good to hear from you! 😃 Yep on a roll as i am taking a much deserved break nowadays, the horror of project and studies all wrapped up! 😆😉 Gosh their horror did make me half mental though! 😆
There is no argument that you are gifted with brilliant writing skills👏👏..Hands down you win..
How Karma seems to hit back sometimes with our own words, at one point she drove him away and now she craves for him that she landed up in the very dunes she always hated in the process of getting to him.

The games of fate :D.

Aww I am so grateful honey! 😃Yeah she didn't care for his love and wishes when he was with her but after she made him leave she couldn't survive without him and felt how much she loved him. So in search for him she went to search for him among the same dunes, whom she hated very much. Actually sand dunes are also a symbolism for the man whom she loved! He was like sand, she opened her fist and he left! 😉 Thanks for sharing the views dear! I am feeling so excited to listen from you! 😳

You left us hanging in there. Continue soon..

Ah your saying that made me reminisce those days when i was notorious for it, cliff hanger stuff! 😆😉

P.S : And I am yet to read your otherworks.. Now don't blame me.. my infant needs all my attention now and since its a dark one, i decided to hold reading those but i will surely read them.
I guessed as much, no problem yaar, any time! 😉 You are right dear responsibility and duty comes first! 😳 On the other hand I am free, still single and have nothing else to do but read or write or laze around! 😆😉 But kudos to your effort dear that you still took time out of your busy schedule to comment! 😳

Give my love to your baby from his aunt! ❤️ And take care of your health too honey! 😳

P.S: I've already started a comedy SS, it's crazy fun so you won't have to fear anything for it being a dark story! But you can read it once it's completed! 😉 So in that way you won't have to wait, or regularly comment on it! 😉

Originally posted by: rn94

Nice.

Originally posted by: nanor

simply brilliant
loved it