Arshi TS - Desert Rain/ Part 2/ Pg-21/(Completed)

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shreya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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So beautifully written! Loved it<3

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Zaysha_Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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loved it more than i love tea🤣 BTW i was born in november too :P and i am so sweet na🤪

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Deepa Vasudev

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http://www.poetryfoundation.org/learning/guide/238972

Afreen song..liza ray.. my fav.. the singer.. passed away.. but i love that song..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UnX5imZNBzU

Ozymandias

By Percy Bysshe Shelley

I met a traveller from an antique land,

Who said""Two vast and trunkless legs of stone

Stand in the desert. . . . Near them, on the sand,

Half sunk a shattered visage lies, whose frown,

And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command,

Tell that its sculptor well those passions read

Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,

The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed;

And on the pedestal, these words appear:

My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings;

Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!

Nothing beside remains. Round the decay

Of that colossal Wreck, boundless and bare

The lone and level sands stretch far away."

Mahi after Jane and Anu, you make me inspire to think, learn and write more on story or on comments.

i miss those ashlok days really. So many things changed in past few months.

I have been literally off from all the gadgets, lappy, moby or TV for some known reasons..
I want ved to be off from the gadget mania and be responsible. That cud happen only when Im off from it and then i can mentor him properly.

I read and re read all the chaps of Ransacked or ur current humor one .. as you know there a vast difference in ur writing from others.

Romance reloaded, metaphors unlimited, reality a bitch fully composed in each nuke and corner of ur writings.

Why can i connect more with ur ffs .. as u say Im a classy writer.. U are more than that.. u are etched writer darling.

I may not comment frequently but always love u .. in person .. in a writer.. as a frined and as a companion.

This is dedicated to me.. really i cant believe. First person to dedicate me in this Forum.. That too a peice of incomparable writing..

One qn to ask u..Do i deserve this?..

I dont know.. But u are my daughter for sure.. my sweetest one.. who can understand mamma in and out .. my moodswings or my depression or my happiness or watever..

my emotions only some can understand.. and that one lucky is u.. personally and professionally..

This dedication of urs is very sweet like u mahi..

when on call today..i hadnt read nor came acrss.. i was reading Lilys TS and happened to read..

and shokced beyond i cud feel..

The desert or natures formation has always been my inspiraton for all my wiritings.. I dont know how can i connect with any form of natural elements. May be I emote my FFS characters with Natures flow or actions thats y...

This one is beyond wrods dear..

U have made remarkable ways in writing.. in this piece..

AS u know i have not read much of books. Im hooked only with wat pad or IF or some books which u gals share.. if not nothign i have read professionally..

No writers are born. They are created by themselves. may be there are very famous authros..
Urs too can be kept among those..

This piece is one such thing,,

BROKEN MOON BY P VIJAY.. has been my crux for my FF.. Shakespeare.. .. this work can be kept among that book.
simly love it..

when i was in class 5 , i had read this PB shellys Ozymandias.. Ur writing immediatley made me think this poem only..

the kings statue broken lay on the sand dunes.. only the ode or a writing engraved remained..

Love need not be said materialistic.. it cud be said or unsaid.. love is always love..

ARnavas too is that kind..

loved it mahi..

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Uzii

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Fabolous story i just love this story as i can imagine a very hot arnav in arabian attire n romance in desert so looking forward to read how they will they meet.

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Bakergirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Beautiful!! I live in Uae; the desert is truely formidable in its stark glory! The pathos of her regret is beautifully portrayed in this chapter. Look forward to this story...

Ps, reading ur note below i noticed u too r a scorpian...me too😆

Cheers!

Kloe

Edited by Bakergirl - 9 years ago

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: aashikhan120
loved it more than i love tea🤣 BTW i was born in november too :P and i am so sweet na🤪

Arrey not more than coffee yaar? 😆😉

Oh that's so evilly nice to hear that you are a Scorpio too, yeah very sweet stings they've got! 😈😆what is your birth date and year babe? 😛

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Bakergirl
Beautiful!! I live in Uae; the desert is truely formidable in its stark glory! The pathos of her regret is beautifully portrayed in this chapter. Look forward to this story...
Ps, reading ur note below i noticed u too r a scorpian...me too😆

Cheers!
Kloe

Oh wow, it's a raid of scorpions then! 😈😆 I think Soon enough will be gathered here to make Scorpion King 4! 😆😉

You live in Uae, i envy you babe, you get to see handsome arabian and the desert everyday! 😭😆

Thanks for the comments dear, yep it's Khushi's passionate love that had dragged her to meet Arnav as she had regretted sending him away. To correct her mistake she had come to meet him and had somehow gotten lost on her way to his Bedouin camp!

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Zaysha_Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

Arrey not more than coffee yaar? 😆😉
Oh that's so evilly nice to hear that you are a Scorpio too, yeah very sweet stings they've got! 😈😆what is your birth date and year babe? 😛

mine is 2 November :D and year is 1997