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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Wah this mega update was so damn interesting Di !

First of all Mihika arriving in Delhi . Swagat hai ji 😉

And then Abhisek also 🤣 now that is what I call fate ! 😆

Abhisek missing a chance of golden moment with Mihika until he knew he would get a long ride itself . 😉😉

And Ruhi🤣 I jus love her . I laughed so much when she took away that chance of Abhisek to have his love beside him 🤣 and Ishima and Raman talk so much ! 🤣

Baby you don know when people are jus falling in love they love to be silent 😉😉

And then Abhisek ki chain ! Now that's a funny thing why does Mihika want to keep it with her? 😕

I know , love love love ❤️ I so want Abhisek to claim that chain from her and of course in the course of claiming claim her also .

Please make the ACP take that chain from her in a very romantic and naughty way . Mihika turned naughty by telling him to take it by himself now he should turn naughty taking it by himself in that way ☺️

Ishita eavesdropping ! Now Ishita apa don act like a typical serial bahu . No interfering in your sis love life .🤓

The diary part was emotional ! I was jus so near to tears . I really feel bad for Mihika and I hope that Ashok is not into something of hurting her . If so I will call our police hero 😎 he is gonna make you cry if you try to hurt his girl . Oh I want this scene Di . A scene of Ashok , Mihika and Abhisek if you can give , a scene where Ashok will try to hurt Mihika by words or action and Abhisek will defend her . I m so imaging that scene in my head

Continue soon ! And the trailer is so interesting and today is Tuesday and where is our update ? I so m hooked to the story .

Update soon

Love

Sam

Ps please try to update a longer update when you give regular update . Cause the small update don fill you hearts nd stomach .

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..
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Loved the updates! Mihika's finally back in the city! I could literally picture the look on Abhishek's face when Ruhi came and sat in the seat next to his. 😆 Kids really ruin it at times yaar. 😆 Bechara Abhishek. 😆 And AbhiKa arguing for his chain, was that adorable! I'm keen on knowing how Abhishek will get his chain back, ACP Abhishek Singh style. 😎 And Mihika loves Abhisehk, damn it just admit it woman. 😆 Loved it! :)

P.S And as for the journal, why is she addressing it as amma? Typo?
P.P.S If there's gonna be a scene between Ashok and Mihika, please make Mihika give Ashok plenty of gaalis. 😆

😆 You are so cute!

I cannot promise about gaalis bit maybe a scene is coming soon. Wait to catch it.

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Cortana
It's always tricky when you want someone to notice you but then you don't want them to notice. The chain is definitely going to keep them together because she won't give it up and he won't give up trying to get it! Hope she gets the divorce and I hope Ishita does not but in. Also I understand why Abhishek prefers not to speak in the car, it's easier to concentrate on the driving.

Yup. The chain is defiantly going to keep them together.

Thanks for the reply arya. 😃

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome update
I hope there wouldn't be nothing serious about ashoke. Mahika has done with him and she completely deserve Abhishek.
They are attending the same wedding, interesting.
Can't wait to read more

😃

Thank you.

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: usaonly
Wow so many update in one go . Mihika back cause of the divorce case. And how lucky Anhi was in the airport too so they met again but little awkward situations and they can not talk much. Ishra give them chance to go home together but Ruhi there too. Now he want his chain back but she want to keep it atleast she can feel him stay near her.😳 At the party Abhi did not see her it is irritate her now what will be happen have to wait for the update. I have a request dear I don't know Hindi is it possible for the dialogue to give translation so I can follow the story .thank you so much for the update. Have a wonderful week ahead dear.🤗🤗

Thank you Jum for such a great reply. 😳

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
Mihika reached India where Abhishek was there surprisingly to receive her.Abhi volunteered to drop mihika.but Ruhi sat in front n in her presense Abhi cud'nt have personal talk with mihika.so funny.Abhi teased her that purposefully she is keeping his chain with her so that it'll b a reason 4 her 2 keep meeting him.ha ha.she challenged him 2 get it himself.lets see what he'll do or will he also let it b with mihika to keep seeing her daily?in her diary she mentioned that she is purposefully keeping his chain with her.cool.thru depicting mihika's feelings u showed what we abhika fans want to see on d show.Even with mihir mihika never felt this much of affection tho she isnt sure if its luv or not.she is worried if she'll b asked 2 marry mihir,actually she doesnt want that as they both had moved on.Why was ishita worried overhearing abhika's conv?Does she also want her 2 go back 2 mihir?Will ashhok trouble mihika n be an obstacle on Abhika's way with d divorce case?Here Rinky wasnt murdered,but died of cancer.that wud've been better.Instead they butchered d innocent Rinky's character by making her immoral like Shagun.
Thanks 2 u 4 updating it regularly..I request u 2 update it regularly till this ff gets over.bcz u r the only abhika writer who is giving us updates while others discontinued their works

Thanks dear. Definitely your replies are very encouraging. 😃

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Aww! Little Ruhi spoiled their romantic ride! Anyways, Abhishek will surly return for his chain!

😃

Thanks dear.

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady
Wah this mega update was so damn interesting Di !
First of all Mihika arriving in Delhi . Swagat hai ji 😉

And then Abhisek also 🤣 now that is what I call fate ! 😆
Abhisek missing a chance of golden moment with Mihika until he knew he would get a long ride itself . 😉😉
And Ruhi🤣 I jus love her . I laughed so much when she took away that chance of Abhisek to have his love beside him 🤣 and Ishima and Raman talk so much ! 🤣
Baby you don know when people are jus falling in love they love to be silent 😉😉
And then Abhisek ki chain ! Now that's a funny thing why does Mihika want to keep it with her? 😕

I know , love love love ❤️ I so want Abhisek to claim that chain from her and of course in the course of claiming claim her also .
Please make the ACP take that chain from her in a very romantic and naughty way . Mihika turned naughty by telling him to take it by himself now he should turn naughty taking it by himself in that way ☺️
Ishita eavesdropping ! Now Ishita apa don act like a typical serial bahu . No interfering in your sis love life .🤓

The diary part was emotional ! I was jus so near to tears . I really feel bad for Mihika and I hope that Ashok is not into something of hurting her . If so I will call our police hero 😎 he is gonna make you cry if you try to hurt his girl . Oh I want this scene Di . A scene of Ashok , Mihika and Abhisek if you can give , a scene where Ashok will try to hurt Mihika by words or action and Abhisek will defend her . I m so imaging that scene in my head

Continue soon ! And the trailer is so interesting and today is Tuesday and where is our update ? I so m hooked to the story .

Update soon

Love
Sam

Ps please try to update a longer update when you give regular update . Cause the small update don fill you hearts nd stomach .

Awww.. Sam! Such a cutie cute reply by you. 😃

I leave it to you to imagine and think what you want to. I will definitely try to incoperate things if they for in well with the characters and the storyline! 😳😃

Thank for such a cite reply.

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Chapter XI

Mihika was conversing with her friend. She tried her best to cover up herself into a cloak of happy expressions but she simply failed to do that because wedding and marriage was never a good prospect of her life.

She then came out of the room into the hall where the Sangeet had already started, it was a Sangeet like it ought to be. Happy family moment would be shared, smiles would be exchanged. Yet, at the end the happiness of the groom and bride depend entirely on their understanding.

Mihika looked around. See could see decorations, celebration and a lot of people. Her life was quite similar, it was decorated my relationship with her family, celebrated by the people who were in those relationships.

But something was missing, something important, she felt was lacking, which ought to be present. Was it related to her? Did she forget bringing the gift? No! It was there. Did she dress up properly? She checked herself on a mirror to confirm. Yes! She was. Then what!

That was when she saw the reflection of Abhishek walking into the hall. She was astonished, flustered and now was struggling to restore composure.

Abhishek was completely unaware of her presence until he saw her ignoring him purposely to not be noticed.

She quickly propagated through the crowd to reach an end of the hall where a few girls stood conversing. But, unlucky that she was, they moved away the minute she reached.

Mihika stood there alone without moving. She pretended to be busy in noticing the decorations and arrangement. Abhishek found her act cute. He was amazed at her ability to feign with such ease yet being caught.

He slowly went closer and said - "Someone's looking stunning!"

Mihika stopped. She then turned and answered and answered, "Yup. I love The guy over that corner of the room. He looks great in Indian wear. Doesn't he?"

Abhishek raised an eyebrow. He then asked - "So he really is your choice? I thought you would opt for someone more deserving. Someone more...'"

"Someone more what?" She asked.

"Someone more special. Who perfectly fits you like a piece of puzzle which completes the game!"

Mihika coloured. "You really need to give me an example, Sir!".

"Really?"

The music then started. And Mihika and Abhishek though a bit embarrassed in accepting each other's support got ready to perform.

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Chapter XII

It is often seen that music blends well between two people who a falling in love. It was the same for Abhishek and Mihika. The song, though was not known to both of them, though they had no such 'degrees' in dance or any formal training but their spirits helped them preform really well.

"Will you please oblige to please provide me with your hands!" He said with a charming smile.

She turned. She was not going to acknowledge any romance between them. But Abhishek had other plans.

Banno... Ki mehnadi kya kehna,

Banno... Ka joda kya kehna,

Banno... Lage hai phulon ka gehna!

Mihika accompanied her friend to the stage while Abhishek acknowledged her with a wink. It was so unlike him - she felt. A man, that too an ACP, is not limited by his profession to express and celebrate love.

Banno... Ki aanken kajrari,

Banno... Lage sabse pyaari,

Banno... Pe jaaun mein vaari vaari!

Banno ki saheli,

Resham ki dori,

Chup chup ke sharmaye,

Dekhe chori chori..

It was pretty obvious who the 'saheli' was! But Mihika was not convinced by this Bollywood style of romance between them. She wanted something beyond. Something realistic!

Banno ki saheli,

Resham ki dori,

Chup chup ke sharmaye,

Dekhe chori chori..

Yeh maane ya na maane,

main toh iss pe margaya..

Yeh Ladki Hai Allah,

Hai hai reh Allah..

Yeh Ladki Hai Allah,

Hai hai reh Allah..

There was a spark. The day he had seen her. When she thought of him being an eve-teaser and took him to the police station. They had since then, been though a long journey of being strangers, friends, admirers and maybe lovers soon.

Mihika then stood up to take her stand.

Babul ki galiyaan na chad ke jaana,

Pagal dewaana isko samjhana,

Babul ki galiyaan na chad ke jaana,

Pagal dewaana isko samjhana,

She was in no hurry. A relationship needed time to develop, and she was ready to wait. Plus, they say, love is worth all the wait.

Dekho ji dekho yeh toh mere piche pad gaya,

Yeh Ladka Hai Allah,

Hai hai reh Allah..

Whenever, he tried closing us distance, she distance herself. It was this difference which somewhere was entertaining and irritating at the same time. Distance helped them weave fantasies for one another but then when it hindered their wish of fulfilling them, it was irritating.

The mood was set. Everyone in the hall was pleased, many even acknowledged their spirits with cheers of joy. And old ladies of humble lineage got excited that they might witness to see them married in a month or two. Thoughts of old age can be endearing!

Lab kahe na kahe,

Bolti hai nazar,

Pyaar nahi chupta,

Yaar chupane se..

She could try to hide her feeling under unending covers but they would come out some day for other. He was in no haste but awaited to see the day of their union.

Roop ghoonghat mein ho,

Toh suhaana lage,

Baat nahi banti,

Yaar batane se..

She could open her feelings to him at this very point. Her past was the biggest hindrance here. Her known history with Mihir and the marriage with Ashok had already done enough damage to her dignity. She needed time, time to get stable again.

Yeh dil ki battein dil hi jaane,

Ya jaane khuda..

Yeh Ladki Hai Allah,

Hai hai reh Allah..

Yeh Ladka Hai Allah,

Hai hai reh Allah..

They came closer in a particular step which involved rounds. Mihika looked into his eyes, but he was busy with something else. And the second they split, the felt empty in neck and the very next second brought to her the revelation of his smart theft of his chain from her neck in those few seconds. His smirk celebrated his victory in the challenge.

Maangne se kabhi,

Haath milta nahi,

Jodiyaan banti hain,

Pehle se sabki..

He could not do much to influence. Heart and God are the ones who decide the fate of couples. If they were meant to be, they will happen ultimately.

Leke baarat ghar,

Tere aaunga mein,

Meri nahi yeh toh,

Marzi hai rab ki..

God never let two people meet, if they are destined to split. Relationship at heart are made to last forever. He teased her with the chain and celebrated after seeing her frown over it.

Are jaa re,

Yun jooti mooti baatein,

Na banaa..

Yeh Ladki Hai Allah,

Hai hai reh Allah..

Yeh Ladka Hai Allah,

Hai hai reh Allah..

Mihika came closer. She steered into his eyes again but this time to get the chain back. Abhishek, way to immersed in addressing her eyes, could hardly guess when she took the chain away.

Banno ki saheli,

Resham ki dori,

Chup chup ke sharmaye,

Dekhe chori chori..

Yeh maane ya na maane,

main toh iss pe margaya..

Yeh Ladki Hai Allah,

Hai hai reh Allah..

Yeh Ladka Hai Allah,

Hai hai reh Allah..

Mihika took the chance to sneak away front the crowd and this could not go unnoticed by Abhishek. Their thoughts, actions, fates, all had clashed now. And to stay away from each other was tough yet fun.

He followed quietly so that she couldn't notice.

[P.S. - please check the video of the song on YouTube to get a better idea!]

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago