FF: RAJVEER AND NAINA : THE MYSTERY BEGINS updated Pg159

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: passiflora4eva

Hey there 😊

I totally get your point. 😃
And when I said 'who does what and why' I meant whichever character you are focusing on.
Meaning mainly Our dear darlings Raj and Naina... not all the other characters yaar... 😛
Because I love the fact that your entire focus is on RN... (-^_^-) it's so perfect!
It is a pleasure reading your story and you should continue how ever you are comfortable 😊
After all, only then will you be able to give crazy readers like me an awesome story to read!
😃
Keep up your good work and update soon!
Cheers
R.

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Trust me you are free to give your opinions - negative or positive whatever. I always take it as a challenge. 😊 I always look forward to my reader's comment. I enjoy the fact that you point out whatever you feel should be there in the story. 😊 So feel free to share whatever you feel about my story. Sometimes my replies might look harsh to you but the truth is I would never be harsh, I'll just keep my point. I hope you'll never fail to understand that.😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

thats a relief..😆

Very sweet of you to clarify😃

I didn't think you were harsh at all yaar... but I must admit, I thought, for a second, that I may have offended you unknowingly... maybe its the big red font...😉😆 joking... Whatever it is, please know that I too, harbour no ill feelings...

I'm happy you put your points forward it increases the understanding between a writer and their reader.

😊 It helps a reader see things from your perspective.

Now come on don't waste time! you already get very little time to write! Give us a Lovely Update!!!😃😃😃 And make your Readers HAPPY!

Update Soon!

Cheers

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: passiflora4eva
thats a relief..😆
Very sweet of you to clarify😃

I didn't think you were harsh at all yaar... but I must admit, I thought, for a second, that I may have offended you unknowingly... maybe its the big red font...😉😆 joking... Whatever it is, please know that I too, harbour no ill feelings...
I'm happy you put your points forward it increases the understanding between a writer and their reader.
😊 It helps a reader see things from your perspective.
Now come on don't waste time! you already get very little time to write! Give us a Lovely Update!!!😃😃😃 And make your Readers HAPPY!
Update Soon!
Cheers
R.

Hahaha well I am not updating today, will update tomorrow. If you are on instagram please follow my account, might be possible you'll get a glimpse of what I am busy in 😆 My username is given in my signature 😳 And please don't get afraid of my RED FONT. It's no RED ALERT hahahaha😆😆😆

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

sorry for late comment dear..just catch up with last four parts...

Awesome that was...good going...loved it...

Thanks for pm 😊

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: -Prinky-
sorry for late comment dear..just catch up with last four parts...
Awesome that was...good going...loved it...
Thanks for pm 😊

Thank you so much 😊 Glad you liked it. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

wonderful updates...
I need a small favor .. can u plz suggest me some LRL ffs .. I read from that link... I think recent ones r nt in that so plz somebody help me

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 7

All the new cadets assemble in a classroom where they were asked to meet. Captain Rajveer was noticing each cadet, as they were entering the room, just to figure out who could it be, whom he talked to! No female cadet made him to feel that she could be the one whom he talked to. Then Naina entered, examining the room, examining everyone present there. Her eyes freezes as she sets her eyes on Captain Rajveer.

Rajveer notices her over all look. The way she was noticing everything, made it clear to him that she is the one whom he talked to. Although his instincts and judgement never turns wrong, but he didn't want to take risk, so he thought of confirming that he is correct.

On the other hand as soon as Naina's eyes fall on Rajveer, her heart skips a beat. The blood drains from her face. She keeps staring at him in utter surprise, the only thing she manages to whisper is "aap"! She remembers him being in the party, whom she unknowingly compared to Captain Shekhawat. But never had this thing come into her mind that exactly that man whom she was comparing to Captain Rajveer would turn out to be Captain Rajveer, himself. The turning of her cheeks into red is easily justifying how much his presence is affecting her, only if anyone would have cared to notice.

She remembers that she is not meant to stand at the entrance for the whole time, but to enter into the class. Coming back into her normal senses, she moves forth. She discovers that to reach her seat, she'll have to cross the so called bridge, made by the first row students and Rajveer, who is standing in front of the whiteboard. Very cautiously she crosses the bridge. Rajveer notices that she is trying to escape from making eye contact. He deliberately puts his foot forward, so that she stumbles.

And as ever Rajveer's mind wins the game. Rajveer holds her by her arms to prevent her from falling, as his main reason for doing all this wasn't to hurt her but to force her to look into his eyes. And as he holds her, she obliges him by doing as he thought she would do. Rajveer got another chance to look deeply into her beautiful eyes, the only thing that irritated him was that they were standing amidst of people, staring at them. "Sambhal kar Cadet, dhyan se chaliye warna chot lag jayegi" Naina looks at him in anger, while on the other hand Rajveer gives a smile, warning her that his attention is on her. She takes her seat, next to Pooja. Captain Rajveer begins with his class.

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever
Lovely update. .

Thank you 😊

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Aalina.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Hey.. Yar mujhe reporters ke bad LRL Phir se dekhna padega. U r writing these parts so amazinginly n so original 👏👏..each time I read Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat... my dil go mmm😆😆

Thanks for the pm

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Aalina.
Hey.. Yar mujhe reporters ke bad LRL Phir se dekhna padega. U r writing these parts so amazinginly n so original 👏👏..each time I read Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat... my dil go mmm😆😆
Thanks for the pm

Hahahaha! Alina I just love to read your comments 😆😆😆 Your comment makes me to laugh out loud! 😆

See I forgot to thank you 😉 Alright, here I go... Thank you so much sweety! 🤗

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