FF: RAJVEER AND NAINA : THE MYSTERY BEGINS updated Pg159 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Hey there!
I just read your Updates! Chapter 7 and Chapter 8 dono saath main padha so double treat for me!😃
Chapter7 was sooo cool! I just knew that the guy at the party had to be Rajveer!!😳 And him tripping her on purpose?! hehehe... so he is already noticing she has beautiful eyes' huh?😉 Nice!
So he wants her attention too?And is wiling to have it any means? Naina blushing and feeling embarrassed was so cute... and her getting angry after his sweet words of caution...HAHA... Love whats going on between them!!!! Awesome job!👏 I love this Raj that you are portraying.😳
Can we have more of that please? 😳😃
And Chapter 8 was really funny! Alekh was so perfectly Alekh!!! hahaha... and Yudi's dialogue immediately after that was hilarious!😆 "Dude mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha ki ye ussey aisa kya samjha raha tha ki ussey samajh nahi aarela... I mean aa raha tha?" I actually laughed out loud while reading that part!😆
Cannot wait to read more Raj Naina scenes! The romance... the falling for each other... the hesitation... Raj's attempts to just make some awesome 'eye contact'... 😳 so romantic!
Hope you update soon.

Oh and I'm not on Insta, so I can't check out your page... sorry...😊 but if you want, you could tell me here what you've been so busy in... lol 😉😆

Waiting for more lovely RN updates!😊
Cheers
R.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Thank you sooo very much for liking the story.😳 Glad my story became the reason to make you laugh. Ohh hopefully you'll get all that soon. 😳 Will update soon!
Ohh no problem about instagram 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Nice update dear, thoroughly enjoyed Chap 8 with all the funny dialogues.
Great going :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Hudda, Yudi aur Alekh bhi bahot jaruri hai, story me,entertaiment k liye(ofcourse) aaj bhi padh kar wo sab yaad aa gaye. Upar se wo pic... Really enjoyed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: RajeshwariR

Nice update dear, thoroughly enjoyed Chap 8 with all the funny dialogues.
Great going :)


Thank you 😊 glad that you enjoyed it. 😳
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: fym23

Hudda, Yudi aur Alekh bhi bahot jaruri hai, story me,entertaiment k liye(ofcourse) aaj bhi padh kar wo sab yaad aa gaye. Upar se wo pic... Really enjoyed.


Yes indeed wo log bhi important part hai story ke 😊
thank you for liking the update.😊
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 9

"Oye Naina ruk" calls Pooja from behind. Naina turns to look at her. "Kahan ja rahi hai?" asks Pooja. "Wo..." Naina tries to dodge the question. "Kahin nahi tu bata" "Arey main to Shah Rukh mera matlab Captain Rajveer se milne ja rahi thi" "Kyu?", asks Naina, looking at Pooja, eager to get some information about Rajveer. "Wo kya hai na..." as she was about to continue, Rajveer collides with Naina, which results in the falling of the books which she was carrying. "I am sorry Cadet", apologizes Captain Rajveer to Naina. Neither does Naina answer, nor does she make any eye contact with him, which frustrates Rajveer. Picking up the books from the floor quickly, she asks Pooja, "I think tujhey kuch puchna tha, to main chalti hun", saying this she leaves quickly, leaving Pooja with Captain Rajveer.

After sometime, Pooja meets Naina"Yaar mujhe to na humara uniform bohot pasand aaya. Isse pehn kar na desh bhakti ki feeling types aati hai. Hai na?" asks Pooja. As they move forth, Cadet Ali comes to them and addresses to Pooja "Ji aap Pooja ji hain?" "Han ji!" "Wo shayad aap class mein apna pen bhool gayin thein. Sneha ji ne kaha apka hai, socha ek baar puch lun aap hi Pooja ji hain ya nahi" saying this he puts forward the pen. Accepting the pen from him, Pooja smiles at him. Ali smiles back at her and turns to return back. Pooja calls him from behind "Oye sun! Tu ne Rajveer Sir ke notes copy kar liye the?" "Han ji. Kyu? Apko chahiye kya?" "Haan wo last ka thoda sa reh gaya tha" "Theek hai hum de denge", smiling at her, Ali leaves. Naina pushes Pooja by her shoulder, they both smile. Placing her elbow on Pooja's shoulder, Naina says "Waise notes to maine bhi copy kiye the, mujhse bhi maang sakti thi tu". Rolling her eyes, she brings out her copy and shows it to Naina, that her work is fully completed. They both burst out into a laugh.
"Chal ab" says Pooja, blushing. As they move forth, Pooja asks "Oye Naina, tu apni family ke barey mein kuch bata na! Meri family mein to main hun, Mummy-Papa hain aur ek chota bhai hai. Teri family mein kon hai?" "Ahmm... mere family mein main aur Ma-Baba hain", smiles Naina.

Naveen's voice over -

Naina ka sabse bada challenge yahan diye gaye mission ko pura karna nahi hoga, balki ye baat chupana hoga ki wo desh drohi Naveen Singh Ahluwalia ki behn hai.

Naina and Pooja move towards the canteen, to which the members of KMA call 'mess'.
"Oye Punjaban aa ja humare saath baith ja na", calls out Huda to Pooja, then he keeps staring at Naina.

Naina notices his expression and gives him a stern look. "Oye Phoolan tu na mujhe bewajah aise mat dekha kar, mujhe darr lagta hai".

"Oye ki ho raha hai ithey?" The words diverts Naina's attention. Turning back she finds a cute looking, aged Sardaarji standing by the enterance of the mess, holding his waist by both the sides. Naina creases her brows, thinking who it could be! Then he continues showing his index finger and indicating to all the first year students, "Main na pehle hi keh deta hun mujhey khane ki barbadi bilkul nahi pasand. Te utna lena jinna kha sako. Understand?", he asks, staring at the crowd, with wide eyes. Then laughing he says "tabhi to academy ke tough exercises kar paoge warna beemar padh jana hai tum logo ne. Kya samjhe sab?" "Suriji apko Lolita Ma'am bula rahi hain", informs an orderly. Listening to his name Naina stares at him and starts thinking about Naveen's diary where he mentioned about Suriji. She compares him with the character sketch Naveen portrayed in his diary, finding the resemblance, Naina smiles.
"Haan tu chal main aa raha hoon" answers back Suriji, blushing. "Important kaam hoga kuch, aap sub khana khao ji" says Suriji to everyone, blushing a little more, he leaves the mess.
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Mam..first tell me the episode# of this dance sequence.whenever u attached something like this mention the episode#...plzzz..aise heart attack dena achi baat nai hai
And part is as usual awesome👏👏👏..

For attaching this video I m giving u extra🤗

Jaldi btao ab..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aalina.

Mam..first tell me the episode# of this dance sequence.whenever u attached something like this mention the episode#...plzzz..aise heart attack dena achi baat nai hai

And part is as usual awesome👏👏👏..

For attaching this video I m giving u extra🤗

Jaldi btao ab..


Hahaha Well yaar episode number to nahi malum I guess fresher's party se pehle ka scene hai. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sterolinelover


Hahaha Well yaar episode number to nahi malum I guess fresher's party se pehle ka scene hai. 😊



Yupps.. Episode #36..

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