FF: RAJVEER AND NAINA : THE MYSTERY BEGINS updated Pg159 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
oh my my...
is this the surprise u r talking about??
it is amazing yar.
though i haven't watched full lrl. just watched it on sony pal but i hv become a great fan of this couple.
this couple plus ur writing is SONE PE SUHAGA types.
just love all the updates and waiting for raj naina meet.
superb work.
update soon.
thank u so much for pm.

and sorry for this late comment.
i was extremly busy with my sessionl exms.
sorry.
Edited by krazykaju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: krazykaju

oh my my...
is this the surprise u r talking about??
it is amazing yar.
though i haven't watched full lrl. just watched it on sony pal but i hv become a great fan of this couple.
this couple plus ur writing is SONE PE SUHAGA types.
just love all the updates and waiting for raj naina meet.
superb work.
update soon.
thank u so much for pm.

and sorry for this late comment.
i was extremly busy with my sessionl exms.
sorry.


Yes this was indeed the surprise. 😳 Thank god you liked it 😆 Don't worry read this story I hope you'll enjoy. 😊 Haan couple to awesome hai hi but my writing, can't say anything about it. 😕 Thank you again. Will update soon. No problem about the PM 😊 Late comment, doesn't matter. 😳 Read whenever you get time. Exams are more important than reading this. All the best for your exams 👍🏼
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
good, u r giving us our dose regularly..(though in small quantity) 😛 thank u..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: fym23

good, u r giving us our dose regularly..(though in small quantity) 😛 thank u..


Yeah I don't get much time to write. But I try to give at least a little update to you all, over nothing at all 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 5

Soon all the new cadets reach their room, which they are alotted. Naina is surprised to discover that she is going to share her room with Pooja. "Oye maine tera naam to pucha hi nahi" says Pooja, sitting on her bed, unpacking her bag. "Naina" replies Naina, busy in setting her wardrobe. "Ruk main na tera naam save kar leti hun phone book mein. Wo kya hai na ab itne naye log milenge, subke naam memory book mein save karna itni jaldi possible nahi hoga" "Hmm..." replies Naina, still occupied with her work.

Brigadier Chandok presses the call bell of his office, the orderly enters. "Orderly kya Captain Rajveer aa gaye?" "Nahi Sir abhi tak to nahi" "Hmm.. theek hai ek kaam karo, yahan kuch papers hain, inhe theek se file mein rakh do", saying this Brigadier Chandok leaves his cabin.

Brigadier Chandok crosses the 'Wall of Fame' amd finds Naveen Singh Ahluwalia's picture hanging there. "Orderly! Orderly!" he shouts. An orderly comes running. "Yeh photo yahan kisne lagayi?" "Mujhe nahi pata Sir" replies the orderly. Brigadier looks at him in anger. Then turning towards the wall of fame, he removes the frame containing Naveen's picture and throws it away.

Hiding behind a wall, Naina witnesses everything. But as she realizes that Brigadier Chandok will march past her, she changes her position to hide, hence the 'Wall of Fame' is not visible to her any longer. As Brigadier Chandok leaves, Naina turns to look at the fallen frame of her brother. To her surprise it was no longer there. She stands there dumbstruck. The orderly reaches at the spot of 'Wall of Fame' and starts cleaning the broken pieces of the glass. Reaching him Naina asks "Yahan jo photo frame giri thi wo kahan hai?" The orderly shakes his head, indicating that he knows nothing about it. Confused Naina leaves for her room.
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He reaches the room where on the left wall at the entrance was a name plate written clearly on it was

CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT

Unlocking the room, he gets into it and places Naveen's photo frame on the table side. "Agar logo ko tumhari kadar nahi hai, to tumhe bhi unke paas rehna nahi chahiye" says Rajveer. Then he turns to look at the mirror. "Main tumhe insaaf dilwa kar rahuna Naveen, tumhe tumhari reputation dilwa ke rahunga"

"Captain Rajveer aap aa gaye?" a voice makes him to turn back and look. As he turns back, he finds Dr. Shalini in her uniform standing with a broad smile on her face, her arms crossed. Rajveer gives her a broad smile in return. Dr. Shalini enters the room and checks him out. "Hmm... broad shoulders, fit body, dressed in white shirt and sky blue colored suit over it. Wow Captain you look mighty fine!" says Dr.Shalini.
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
nice updates dear, Huda's lines r amazing. after Capt Rajveer, he was my favorite in the show. He brought in so much lliveliness to the show. and Pooja too she is cute with her SMS language.
Thanks for bringing them back :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: RajeshwariR

nice updates dear, Huda's lines r amazing. after Capt Rajveer, he was my favorite in the show. He brought in so much lliveliness to the show. and Pooja too she is cute with her SMS language.

Thanks for bringing them back :)


Thank you 😊 well I used to like Alekh after Rajveer 😆 But Huda was someone who used to bring energy into the story by his dialogues 😊
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
thanks for the pm!!!! read all the three in one go was busy in examzzz...waiting for the next update
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Originally posted by: aaliya9872

thanks for the pm!!!! read all the three in one go was busy in examzzz...waiting for the next update


No problem about the PM 😊 Will update soon.😊

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