FF: RAJVEER AND NAINA : THE MYSTERY BEGINS updated Pg159 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update, waiting for RajNa...meeting in academy
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Originally posted by: heartbroken1

nice!

awesome!!!!!!!

great job!!!


Thank you 😊
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Thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: fym23

nice update, waiting for RajNa...meeting in academy


They'll meet soon! 😊
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Chapter 3



After two days...

"Naina dekh tera letter aya hai" shouts her mother holding an official letter written 'Kanchanjunga Military Academy' KMA on the envelope. Voice of Naina's ankletes reaches much before she enters the drawing room of her home. "Dikhao Ma", she snatches the envelope from her mother's hand. "Ma ye earring pehnana, mujhse ho nahi raha" says Naina, giving her mother the earring, without bothering to look at her mother, her whole focus is on the envelope. "Beta jaldi se tayaar ho ja Mr.Kumar ke party mein jana hai". Naina is so excited on receiving the letter from KMA, that for her, attending the party is nothing in comparison to this.

She quickly tears the top of the envelope to bring out the letter, After reading and satisfying herself that she is permitted to join KMA, she faces her mother and says "Ma mujhe na jaane ka mann nahi kar raha. Aap aur Baba chaley jao na please" "Arey aise kaise? Nahi tum bhi jaogi humare saath Naina" orders her father. "Baba please..." "Dekho Naina jab se Naveen humein chod kar gya hai tab se humara kahin bhi aana jana bilkul band ho gya hai. Kisi ke saath humara rishta hi nahi raha. Koi humare saath rishta rakhna hi nahi chahta. Bus Mr.Kumar hain jinhone humse rishta nahi toda, mujhey lagta hai ki humein iss baat ka maan rakhna chahiye". "Tere Baba bilkul theek keh rahe hain Naina" says her mother, rolling her hand on Naina's hair, as a gesture of love. "Hmm... Theek hai Ma. Waise bhi KMA join karne ke baad kahan waqt milega mujhey ye sub enjoy karne ka" says Naina.

Smiling with teary eyes, Naina's mother embraces her into a warm hug, followed by her father.
Naina returns back to her room and quickly gets ready wearing a suit of red and yellow color combination with light embroideries of flowers, she keeps her hair tied up into a simple ponytail, with no kaajal and lipstick.

As they reach the venue, the Ahluwalia family walk towards the entrance. As they were about to reach the entrance, Naina doesn't notice that there is a stone on the way, big enough to give her a good fall. Thankfully her mother reaches her to hold her on time, as she stumbles."Dhyaan se Naina. Tu theek to hai na?" asks her mother, out of concern. As she was about to answer, two guys coming from behind, riding a bike "Arey madam hum kuch madad karey kya apko sambhalne mein?" they tease Naina, lowering the speed of the bike.Naina turns and grabs the front guy, riding the bike, by his collar, "Salwaar-kameez pehni hai to iska matlab ye nahi ki ladna ya tum jaise logon ko jawaab dena nahi aata mujhe"
Her action takes the guys by surprise and hence results in the imbalance of bike, they fall down. Naina gets down, "Abhi to chor rahi hun ayenda mere saath kya kisi bhi aur ladki ke saath aisi harkat karte hue dikh gaye, to wo halat karungi ki apni shakal tak pehchaan nahi paoge aayine mein. Chalo niklo yahan se". Her mother puts her hand on Naina's shoulder "Chal beta" "Naina tu ab unke barey mein mat soch chal ander" says her father.

Getting inside, her parents, start enjoying the party. But Naina's mind is elsewhere, thinking about the life she is choosing to lead henceforth. 'Do din baad joining hai. Mujhe jald se jald saari tayaari karni hogi'. She fishes for her mobile in her bag. Scrolling down the contact list, she calls her friend Natasha. As soon as Natasha picks up the call she says "let me guess tu KMA join kar rahi hai!" Her comment takes Naina by surprise."Tujhe kaise pata chala?", her surprise was visible in her voice."Hmmm... jo ladki apni best friend ko kabhi call nahi karti, jisse apni best friend ki zarurat mehsus nahi hoti, wo achanak agar call kare to zarur koi badi baat hogi. Aur tere life mein KMA join karne se badi baat filhal to nahi hai, right?" "Right!" "Anyways congrats for the first step Naina""Bus congrats? Tu mujhse milne nahi aa rahi?" "Ahmm.. yaar wo main milna to chahti hun, par main thodi busy hun""Busy? Tu theek to hai na? Thodi upset sound kar rahi hai" "Haan! Haan main theek hun. Chal yaar I hope teri ye new journey achi ho. All the best!""Alright, thanks""Chal bye" "bye". After ending the call, she joins her parents.

Unconsciously her eyes fall on a guy, smartly dressed up in a black suit, holding a glass of drink in his hand. Seeing him, Naina starts thinking 'Kya Captain Shekhawat aise honge ya...' then she looks at the guy he is talking to 'aise?' she thinks, making face, she exhales audibly. She drifts her attention to random people. As she turns back again to look at this guy, she finds him missing. A hint of frustration and irritation crosses her face, as she fails to see him again. 'Main kabse kisi ladke ko na dekh paney ki wajah se irritate hone lagi?' she thinks. Getting irritated by her weird feeling, she rolls her eyes and decides to forget the matter.

Soon they return back, changing her dress to her night dress, she brings out her diary and writes about her experience of the party. She doesn't forget to mention about this guy and her strange behavior and feelings, she witnessed after seeing that guy.
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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nice !

great!

thanks for pm !
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Chapter 4

After two days...

Her parents go with her to drop her to Kanchanjunga Military Academy - Ambala.

Naveen's voice over -

Kanchanjunga Military Academy. Aisi jagah jahan ek alag hi duniya basti hai. Jahan subah puja paath se nahi balki cadets ke marching or Captains ke classes se hoti hai. Yahan ke logon ka ek hi motive hai - apne desh ki rakhwali karna. Yahan ke logon ke shareer k saath saath unke iraade bhi mazbut banaye jaate hain. 'Haar' 'failure' 'can't' inn shabdon ka yahan ke logon ki zindagi mein koi jagah nahi. Yahan ke log agar darte hain to bus 'apne gussey se' aur 'desh k prati unke dilon mein jo prem ki bhawna hai' ussey. Kyunki agar iss bhawna par kisi ne ungli uthai to yahan ka koi bhi insaan iss baat ko bardasht nahi karta, jiska result aksar kafi bura hota hai.

Yahan ke log kayi saarey challenging process se guzar kar, ek tough soldier ban kar KMA se bahar nikalte hain. Discipline and hardwork, ye KMA ke rule book mein subse upar paaye jaate hain. Aur jaise ki har school aur college mein discipline maintain rakhne k liye ek Principal ki zarurat hoti hai, jissey students aur teachers neeyamit aur sahi roop se apna kaam karte rahein, ussi tarah KMA ke bhi Principal hain, jinhe ki sub Brigadier Chandok ke naam se jaante hain.

"Naina please apna khyal rakhna" says her mother with teary eyes. Wiping away her tears Naina says "Ma mere Bhaiya ki Ma itni kamzor kabse ho gayi? Isliye maine kaha tha main chali aungi khud but aap dono the ki maan hi nahi rahe the". "Kya karein beta tujhse durr hone ka mann hi nahi kar raha" says her father. "Main kahin durr nahi ja rahi Baba, trust me. Ab please aap aise mat kariye, warna Ma ko kon sambhalega?" "Theek hai beta hum tujhe aur bhavuk nahi karenge" says her father, rubbing off his own tears. Putting his hand on her head, he blesses her "Ja Naina, bhagwan karey tujhe apne maksad mein kameeyabi miley". Hugging her parents and after seeking blessings, Naina reaches just in front of the entrance of KMA, looking at the building, she reminds herself her motive of joining KMA and wishing herself 'all the best' she enters KMA.

"O Mummy ji aap na tension na lo, main apna khyaal theek se rakhunga. Aap bus apna khyaal rakhna. Ab main jaun?" says a young stout man to his mother over phone. "Arey Mummy ji main Huda hun Huda. Jab main kahin jata hun na log khud ba khud mere dost bann jate hain. Aur jananiyan, Mummy ji jananiyan to mere aagey peechey makkhi ki tarah mandrati hain. Haan! Haan! Main janta hun ki main yahan jananiyan patane nahi ek zimmedar sipahi banne aaya hun, par ab koi ek-aad jananiyon se dosti kar lun to mannu ki nuksaan hai? Batao kuch galat bola kya maine? Acha theek hai theek hai, chalta hun ab main. Aap apna khayal rakhna".

Huda turns, without realizing that Naina is coming from behind, as a result, they collide. "Dekh kar nahi chal sakte?" scolds Naina."Arey Phoolan chilla mat, agar pata hota ki tu aa rahi hai to dekh kar hi chalta" says Huda coolly, in his own style."Excuse me, mera naam Phoolan nahi hai""Mera naam bhi Shah Rukh Khan nahi hai""Shah Rukh Khan? Haye wo to kabhi mera signal pakdta hi nahi!" says a girl, joining Naina and Huda."Excuse me!" says Naina, addressing to the girl, thinking she has misheard her. "Arey Shah Rukh Khan, mere sapno ka raja. Mera matlab mere sapno ka Rahul" "Pata nahi kahan aakar fass gayi hun" whispers Naina to herself. As Naina moves forth to leave their company, the girl halts her by extending her hand, "Hi main hun Pooja. KMA mein ek soldier banne ayi hun. Par agar nahi bann payi na to mere paas Bollywood ki bhi ticket hai. Mera boyfriend hai na Rohit wo le jayega mujhe Mumbai. Agar waha bhi kuch nahi hua to..." then she stares at Naina, making a sad face, then smiling she adds "Arey kuch nahi Shah Rukh Khan ko missed call de dungi". Hearing her way of speaking, Naina laughs secretly - unable to decide the reason of her laugh - out of happiness, out of irritation, she decides to leave the decision upon the time!
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey.. First of all thanks for pm and
Re creating rajveer n naina's love story 👏👏

All d parts r awesome.. Lagta hai LRL se mujhe Phir pyar ho jayega.😳

And plzz plz mujhe raj n naina ki love story dekhni hai jo LRL mein miss kiya tha.

Update soon. N love u for re creating this.🤗
Edited by Aalina. - 9 years ago
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Thank you! No problem about the PM 😊
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Originally posted by: Aalina.

Hey.. First of all thanks for pm and

Re creating rajveer n naina's love story 👏👏

All d parts r awesome.. Lagta hai LRL se mujhe Phir pyar ho jayega.😳

And plzz plz mujhe raj n naina ki love story dekhni hai jo LRL mein miss kiya tha.

Update soon. N love u for re creating this.🤗


Hey girl, no problem about the PM 😊 Re-creating Rajveer-Naina story, that was my dream, got a platform after a long time. Glad that I am able to fulfill your dream too 😊 because we share a mutual dream 😳

I am happy that you liked all the parts, I hope I'll be able to give good updates in future too! 😊
WOW! I hope ho jaye PYAR! ❤️

Yes my main aim to create this fanfic is to bring forward the love story of Rajveer and Naina, which we didn't witness in the original show. So you'll get that for sure. 👍🏼 Will update more soon. Love you tooo... 🤗
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago

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