~**DON**~SK,AK&KA fanfic[part 10: pg 15] - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
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JUST caught up, & must say interesting FF!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 continue soon!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Gr8 FF 👏 awesome parts 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Jus read ur ff, it sooooooooooooooo interestin... plz do cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Hello…who is that?" Kashish spoke into her receiver in a sleepy tone.

"Hello kashish…main sanjana bol rahi hoon…vo…Piyush…." Saying this sanjana broke down and cried bitterly, falling to the ground.

"Kya hua bhai ko? Sab thik to hai na…" responded kashish frantically.

"Kuch thik nahin hai kashish…piyush…PIYUSH IS DEAD!!!"

"WHAT?!..." the receiver slipped from kashish's hand as she fell on to her bed without any reaction…the ground below her had slipped…she was in a state of shock…

She remembered her childhood days, when her brother use to feed her food and remain hungry himself, where he did all he could to support her and give her education to make her future bright, he was not like a brother but like a mother, guardian, philosopher and a friend for her. The most valued possession in life had been taken away from her.

We see a man humming a song and walking slowly towards an apartment with the name kashish sinha written in front at the door. He took out a key and unlocked the door and entered the house flinging his jacket onto the big sofa and getting a can of coke from the fridge he sat on the couch and switched on the television and immediately put the sports channel on where there was a Liverpool vs. Manchester united match. As he took the first sip of his coke, another person entered the house and took the seat beside him.

"Match has not started yet right?" the girl asked the guy.

"Duffer match start ho gaya hoga to kya mein itne relax hoke baitha rehta…tum bewakoof ke bewakoof he rahogi."said the guy teasingly.

"Angad ke bach….tu kal dekh main tera kya hal karti hoon…" so the guy is angad…so if he is angad then the girl is none other then anju…

{actually since the trio a best of friends they have the keys to all of their houses with them…they are more like family…and today they were watching the match in kashish's house…angad supports Man U while the two girls support Liverpool…lol…football fanatics…)

"waise angad kashish kahan hai…" asked anju while taking a packet of chips from the drawer...

"Hmmm…good question maine bhi use nahin dekha chal kar dekhte hain ki wo so toh nahin gayi na…"

Saying this both of them left the living room and proceeded to her bedroom…where they saw a sad kashish sitting on her bed with no reaction whatsoever.

"Kash…kya hua? Tum teekh to ho na…" asked a protective angad…this led to the sudden breakdown of kashish...

"Angad Anju…Piyush bhai is dunia mein nahin rahe…he is no more…" she said this and breakdown into a bitter cry… leaving the other tow shocked on the sudden news…

"Liken yeh sab kaise hua aur tumko kisne bataya…"asked Anju. Kashish narrated the whole story to them and all of them decided to leave for Piyush's house…

AT THE HOUSE…

We see the four occupants crying…sanjana had already told them the shocking truth about Piyush working for Don which left the three in shock…kashish felt guilty as she thought that because of her that her brother had needed to work for the wrong people…By now Angad had already informed the other three about the happenings…

They quickly rushed to the given address…but only kavya and kripa entered as sujal was parking the car they had be given by the Malaysian government…

"Yeh sab kya ho gay angad?" asked a concerned kripa....but before angad could answer her query, sujal had entered the house…

"TUM? What the hell are you doing here?" asked a furious Sanju holding the collar of sujal's shirt…

"Sanju yeh tum kya kar rahi ho…chordo use…" demanded anju…

"Anju tum nahin janti yehi hai jisne mere piyush ko maara…yehi don hai…"

"WHAT!!!" was all we can hear from the rest of the people including sujal…

"Yeh Don nahin ho sakte…yeh to Indian police force ke ACP Sujal Garewal hain…it just impossible…" said kripa confidently….

"Wait a minute…I think I getting it…" said angad. "if don has the same face as sujal but sujal is most definitely not Don… that means sujal is the look-alike of Don… which makes our mission way lot easier"

"I am getting your point there…" said Kavya…

"…and guys I have the perfect plan that can solve all our problems…" said Kashish… and she narrated her plan to the others but we are not able to hear it…after the whole plan has been said to the people, everyone had a triumphant look on their faces and all joined their hands…

THE END OF PART 9

PREVIEW

The first step of their plan in action…

Hey guys I have written in a different format… so would like to know if which format do you all prefer…and I have written this part…I think to my best…and this was the last boring part as now the action will begin…so do read do comment and do cont to like this FF…

Love

Tanasha

P.S please do comment on this part and I am so sorry that I'm posting a part after so long…

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Posted: 18 years ago
#75

hey to all the readers who are commenting/reading for the first time hope you enjoy my part...

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8


Gr8 FF &nbs p; awesome parts


hope you enjoy my 9the part....

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9


Jus read ur ff, it sooooooooooooooo interestin... plz do cont soon


do keep reading...

Originally posted by: Chick1


wow i just read the whole thing and it's different!!! it's awsome!!


thanks for liking my FF

Originally posted by: jazmeen


hey tanasha gr8888888888888 part plz con soon


thanks jazz(hope u dont mind me calling you tt) do keep[ reading n commenting

Originally posted by: zeenat_786


Heyyy...
I just read your fanfic and I think it's awesome! I am very impacient so pleaaase continue soon


pata hai ki tum impatient ho likin sbar ka phal bhi bahoot meetha hota hai...lol...cont to comment

love
tanasha😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#76

hey guys loved your comments...do cont to comment...

i look forward to reading ur comments...

Originally posted by: erier101


i just caught up! Awesome ff and part!! cont soon &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp;

thx...and i like ur FFs too esp about the princess n the prince though u stopped suddenly😭

thanks

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan


great plz cont soon. & nbsp;

thanks

thx n i like urr FF too...

thnaks for ur lovely comments

Originally posted by: avantika_4ever


hey when are you going to continue

awsome part please continue soon

thx for ur comment

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818


JUST caught up, & must say interesting FF!!!!!!!!!!! continue soon!!!!!!!!

thnks and i like ur FF too...

love

tanasha😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*


2 good parts... &nbs p; ....gr8 gng...

hey i love ur FF too ho gaye hai mohobat pls do cont tt...n thx for ur comment...😛


Originally posted by: chandini1234


beautiful part tanasha... cont soon as possible!

thanks anoosha...and try writing ur FF soon...😳try to put SK in...


Originally posted by: sun_423


please continue soon...

hope u like this part surya...


Originally posted by: ambarinaaltaf


hey tan(hope u dont mind me calling with you by that name.. ) mind blowing ,awesum,wonderful part..i liked the jodi of piyush-sanjana lolzz..

me waiting to see some romantic scenes btw sujal and kashish yaar..

hey ambi[hopeu dont mind me calling u tt]...anyways i really dont mind u calling me tan...lol...anyways i personally like piyush sanju jodi too😉haha...and SK romance will come soon...u noe sabar ka phaal meetha hota hai...lol...


hey halam...do cont ur FF too n love ur comments

love

tanasha😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
hey soo good ur back...me glad you have continued the story.. 😃 ab the part was very well written.... very touching.... ab tho the gang ko patah chal hi gaya ki sujal looks like don.. super cooll... ab aayega kahani mein asli mazaa... the really adventure... well the part was very nice.. keep the good work going... 👏 ab please continue soon.. waiting for the next part eagerly.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome part... have to say angad is really smart he figured out that they r look alikes in 2 secs... loll (i guess u didnt wanna waste tme in everyone tryin to figure out that hey r look alieks loll) 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
thats awsome u came back with a bang hm interesting seems like a thriller

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