MANAN FF:MADE 4 EACH OTHER updated part -12,13,14(page-9) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update
Waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsum update... lovely
wht will be the surprise???
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz do pm.me also.
It was suoerb
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Posted: 10 years ago
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7th PART-

Nandu-yeh tum kya kar rahe ho??wanhi ruk jao verna.. verna me

Manik s stil slnt bt hs legs der r caryin hm a stp ahead n nandu notices dat c hs reachd d wal; n manik s 2 steps away 4m hr n within seconds d gap reducd 2 1 stp n den.. den 0 we r sum inches away..even a 15mm scale's lngth wld b lngr dn our dstnce

Manik places hs hnd on bth sides on d wall wrappin my body betn hs lng hnds..nw I thnk we r sme 0.9999 inchs away 4m each oder ...i cld feel hs ht breathe n I thnk so does he..hs hot breaths wer

continusly httin my fce

"lii..ss.tt..ee..nn"said I with utmst difficulty..i ws continsly swallowin d big lump in my throat..it flt as if my larynx wld pop up in2 my mouth within a second or 2..i saw manik brngin hs fce closr 2 mi9

I cld nt resist it n e mre..i clsd my eyes..i didn't know wat wld hppn nxt..widin a couple of seconds I flt sumthng on my fce whch gve me shivers..i cld feel a streamli9 pasin strongly across my entire bdy..i thnk d lump in my throat was swellin rapidly.. m sure it l burst nw..altough I hd no guts stil slwly I opend my eyes n found dat hs index fingr n thmb wer on my fce..slwly he lukd up2 me..in my eyes..hs xpressions r simply irresistible..dey did nt allow me 2 luk n e wher bt only hm..i cld evn c d veins contractin in hs forehead

-----Nandini POV------

OH MY GOD!hs eyes der r so drk brown hs he put chocolate stuffin insde it???is dis d reason gals r crazy 4 hm????

End of POV

We had an eye lock for almst 30 secnds or mre wen suddenly he brought hs fingrs infrnt of my eyes makin it a barrier 4m my eyes meetin hs..wen I ntcd carefully dat a tiny strnd of my eye lashes was in hs fingr..

-----nandini POV----

Shitt!!!he ws jus removing my eye lash 4m my fce n I thght he s goin 2..chii..same on u nandini..hw cld u evn thnk of it...chii chii

End of POV

I tuk dat eye lash 4m hs fingrs kpt it on my ri8 plm closd my eyes n askd 4 a wsh

Meanwhile------manik's POV------

Hw cn 1 luk so beautiful????hr eyes r nt less deep dan a sea..n hr nse its so cute n specially hr lps dey r soo...

His thghts wer intruptd lstinin 2 nandini

"hogya"shoutd I aftr askin 4 my wsh...manik stil seemed lost

"i..i mst go nw mera prfrmance ka tym hogaya..bye"sayin dis mch I lft bcoz I wntd 2 evacuate myslf 4m d situason ASAP...bt b4 I lft d rum I 1nce turnd bck 2 c manik holdin d sme xpression on hs fce..hs expressions r really hrt wrenchin I must say

PRECAP-nandini"s performance...manik mesmerised
Edited by bidisha10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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7TH PART

D FRESHERS strtd..1 aftr d oder pr4rmnce ws goin on..as it ws a tlnt shw d pr4mnces wer nt nly limitd 2 singin..sum plyd instruments whle sum dncd toh oders sng

It ws navya's turn...c dncd on chickni chameli..i ws vry hppy n cheering 4 hr whle fav5 ws busy commntin...i did nt pay a heed bcoz I hd 2 focus on my pr4mnce as nxt turn ws mi9...aftr prayin aiyappa a couple of tims I wnt on 2 d stge..i ws stil nervous

Seein me on d stge mukti alia n cabir strtd passin cmmnts

FAV5 CONVERSATION

Mukti-I thnk its d ri8 tym ltz teach hr a lsson..wat say??

Alia-ya mukti u r ri8

Cabir-I also thnk so..so manic u r redy???

Manic ws stil bsy starin nandini

Cabir-manik tu thik t he na???

Manic-ya...ya I m fi9(comin out of hs trancs)

Dhruv-guys ye competison har fresher k liye bahut imp he..i don thnk we shld ruin it

Manic-ya guyz buddy s ri8

Mukti-manik ye tujhe ho kya gya he????dhruv toh pehle se hi aisa tha bt u???

Anchor-so guys lts listn 2 nandini murthy..

Manic(in mind)-nandini...nyc nme

Nandini strts singin

Tu hi tu har jaga

aaj kal kyun he...

Manik is awestruck listenin 2 nandini's voice...nt only he bt evry1

Manik could nt gt hs eyes of nandini...al he could ws stre at nandini thnkin of al dat hppnd 4m d tym he met hr...d trick c plyd whle givin a kiss..hr way of askin sory n awww!!!!!!!!!!dat lil pout on hr tiny fce n d changing rum scene...god hw beautiful c lukd n hr 10000 feet deep eyes...hs chain of thghts ws brkn wen he hrd clappin...nandini hd finishd singin...evry1 ws busy praisin hr

-----manik POV------

Oh my god al dis time I ws thnkin of hr only..i cld nt evn realize wen d sng gt ovr..seriusly c s so mesmerizing...hr voice s so soothing

End of POV

EVRY1 praisd my pr4mance n I ws lso vry hppy 2 shwcse my talnt...it ws d tym of results..my hrt ws beatin fst periodically as if bein a drum in mass P.T

Princi-evry1 pr4md wel..bt we r vry hppy wth sum pr4mances..so d mr.freshr of dis batch is...

N d miss freshers 4 dis batch is...any guesses

I hrd sum shoutin my nme whle sum of oders

Princi-ys u r corr8 itz nandini murthy

I ws suprisd awestruck astonsd or whatever we cal dat stuff..d ground belw me slippd as I ws on cloud9..evry1 ws clappin 4 me..

------Nandini POV --------

AIYAPPA ME JIT GAYI..YYYAAEEE...it feels so nyc eevry1 s clappin 4 me..oh my god wat am I sein???is dis true??MANIK..D MANIK MALHOTRA is clappin 4 me..d glw on hs fce as if a membr of fav5 hs won..y s he hppy???n hs eye balls dey r glistenin so hrd...nandu wat r u thnkin stndin 4m hre u r noticin evn hs eye bals..shit!!stp it yaar

End of POV

Princi-nandini u ve a vry nyc voice so we d jury we ve thght 2 gft u sumthng..oh ys so we ve thght 2 gve u a chnce 2 cut an album wid fav5

Wat!!!!!!album???fav5??me???no...aiyappa yeh kaise reward mila hume..

FAB5 conversation

Mukti-W*F!!!!!!!!yeh humlog k sath kabhi v nhi..nvr

Alia- ya mukti c cnt b dere

Manik ws still smiling hrd..he ws vry hppy seein hm cabir said

Cabir-aaj mausam bada baiman he aaj mausam

Manik-shut up cabir

Mukti-wait...I thnk dis is d opportunity 2 plot against hr

Princi-so evry1 be redy 4 2ni8's freshers prty

PRECAP-manan dance in fresher's party


Edited by bidisha10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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8th part-

Freshers party..

evry 1 s exited...d dress code of d prty s boys in black n gals in whte...d hrthrob of evry gal d MANIK MALHOTA ws wearin a black tuxedo n as usual lukin hottie!!!!!evry gal almst faintd seein manik...evry 1 ws njoyin d prty

Fav5 conversation

Mukti-manik tu hamesha kitarah sari ladkiyon ko aaj v pagal kie jaa raha he

Cabir- han han manik baba ka yehi toh pesa he..banda me bachelor tu kanya kumari..aaja hojaye thoda lucky tu lucky me..

Manik-shut up cabir

------manik POV-------

Yaar yeh miss fresher aa kyun nahi rahi he...waise v mujhe kya farak padta he c cmes or nt

End of POV

Manik strts rememberin changing rum scene n deres a smile in hs fce bt he is interuptd listenin 2 cabir

Cabir-yeh dekho aa gayi ms.freher of d year

Manik turnd bck 2 c bout wat he hrd bt b4 dat hs eyes dey strtd glistnin..oh yes!!nly hr nme mde hs eyes glistn...wen he turnd bck he stud still..he cld nt believe hs eyes..dere stud nandini wid a beautiful whte gown with mtchin whte stilettos in hr feet n whte earings twinkling in hr ears...she hd tied hr hair in a bun makin hr whte bck visible til hlf of its mid length n hr curls hanging til her shoulders...manik ws aawweestruck...

Manik-beautiful

Cabir-kuch bola tune???

Manic-han..nhi nhi..no

Princi-helo studnts hpe u r likin d prty dis s 4 al d freshers n specially 4 nandini hr success so I raise a toast 4 hr..plz evry1 njy

Navya-baap re ye kitna bada prty he..congtrz nandu

I thnkd navya 4 hr wshes wen I saw dhruv comin 2wrds me

Dhruv-congrtz nandini

Nandu-thnks dhruv

Dhruv-nandini I kno u r nt hppy 2 gt a chnce 2 cut an album wid us..

Nandu-lev it dhruv I donn wanna thnk bout dat n spoil my mood waise v kal se u al l mke my lyf hel..i kno dat

Dhruv ws bout 2 speak sumthng we n anchor strtd

Anchor-so guys ltz mke dis prty a bit intrstin..hw bout hittin d dnce floor???

Cabir-ys we r alwys redy 4 dat

Anchor-wait..ders a twist as u al cn c a bowl placd here..in dis bowl chits r dere evry junior hs 2 pck a chit wer d nme of a senior s wriiten n dey wld b dancing wid dem...nd in dis way seniors n juniors l get 2 kno each oder bttr...so r u redy guys????

One aftr d oder went in pickin up d chits..i jus wntd a gud prtnr...I pickd my chit n opend it

Nandu-shitt!!!!!

Anchor-wat hppnd nandini???who s ur prtnr???

Nandu-monster

Anchor-wat???

Nandu-I mean..MANIK..MANIK MALHOLTRA...I SAID RAISIN MY eyebrows in dissatisfaction

Evry gal on d floor went "AAAWWW"for nt getting d chnce 2 dnce wid der dream boy

I saw manik headin 2wrds me...I decided 2 say hm dat I m nt gonna dance with hm...he cme n stud b4 me...may b sme 2 stps away...I ws about 2 say hm wen I hrd music bein plzyd in bg

I turnd around 2 c d lights bein dimmd..den wen I saw manik I nticd hs hnd approchin mi9 4 a dnce...I donn know wat hppnd 2 me bt my silly hnd automatically movd 4rwrd dus placin my hnd on hs...

Sawali si raat ws bein plyd in bg

Widin secnds manik placd hs oder arm around my waist..wen I ws takin a glance of hs hnd around my waist manik broked silence n said

Manic-so ms.frshr

Nandu-nandini

Manik-oh yaa nandini...so u r gonna prfrm wid us..lucky haan

Nandu-lucky lyk seriously???..i kno u al mst ve plnnd evil wys 2 plot against me..i said wid utmst sadness..i kno u al l...

Manik-sshhh!!!!!!!!!

He said placin a fingr on my lip...he pulld me clser by my waist..n widin secnds I ws completely in hs arms I didn't kno hw 2 react...my hrt strtd beatin fst...n d wrst prt ws d adrenal rush...oh my god my hormons dey wer mvin soo fst makin it irresistible 4 me bearin d closeness of manik...I lukd up 2 c manik starin at me..uff!!!dose intense eyes

He slwly mvd up hs hnd 4m my waist caressein my hnd 4m my tiny fingrs til my shoulders..i cld feel d shivr inside me...d electrifyin currnt passin thru me..i ws stil lukin at hs choclatey eyes..sddenly I flt sumthng against my fce..i wntd 2 c wat exactly it ws...bt my bloody damn eyes dey wer nt redy 2 lev d chocltey path it ws vry difficult 4 me 2 pull my eyelids 2 c d frce against my fce...it ws manik's hnd..he strtd tuckin my hair behind my ears..i slwly 4rwrded my eyes 2 again luk manik..manik nw realesed hs hnd which ws lockd wid mi9 dus placin both of hs hnds on my waist n pulld me mre closer..dis tym d pull hd a grter 4rce..d dstnce betn us ws nil...he lftd hs hnd holdin a fingr of mi9 2 turn me around..i cld smell hs aroma..it ws such a wonderful smell..i donn kno y bt i wntd 2 dissolve in dat smell..i ws so mch in2 hm dat I jus lost my balance n bumped on2 hm dus placin my hnds on hs chest dats wen I ntcd d tiny black mole on d lft sde of hs upper lip...oh my god it ws soo damn hot..i ws completely lost in hm n hs pretty damn expressions dey forbade me 4m comin bck in2 my trancs...bt suddenly my conscience questiond me"nandini wats hpenin 2 u?"

huh!!finally updte s here..srry 4 bein lte bt i did compenssenate by updatin 3 parts inn a go..al u ve 2 do is enjoy n cmmnt lamba..4 pm buddy me
Edited by bidisha10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
wow..3 parts...its so beautiful...slowly manan falling for each other...
u penned dressing room scene and manan dance scene so beautifully...
really loving this story a lot...
manan p.o.v 's was also brilliant...
so nandu is gonna do an album with fab5...awesome
eagerly waiting to read more
pls continue asap
take care
thanks a lot for the pm


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update dea...
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awesome superb fantastic update

Manik is falling for Nandu hard as he also dint know why is he so much attracted to her yet every one else is trying to make her life hell I think this time manik won't let anything happen to her

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful update ,
continue soon with the next chapter as soon as possible .

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