MANAN FF:MADE 4 EACH OTHER updated part -12,13,14(page-9) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Lovely update dea. ..
But chotu sa tha nxt we wnt longer update
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
A very good update dear,loved it .
So fresher party is ahead ,hope it will make my lovebirds more closer towards eachother .
Do continue soon and thanks for the pm .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
awesome part
loved it
eagerly waiting for the freshers party
continue soon take care
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Very well written
It's very nice
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

5TH PART-

RECAP-Freshers preparation

Navya-nandu tum apne performance k liye tayyar ho

Nandu-han navya ready to hun par hume bohot darr lag raha he

Navya-darr??tum daro mat tum ache se perform karogi

Nandu-thnk u navya

Volunteer-jo sab freshers me part le rahe hein go to d changing room n chnge coz u ve only 1hr

Nandu-navya mein chalti hun...I ve 2 chnge..meet u in audi..bye(leaves)

Mukti n alia pass 4m dere sein navya dey stp

Mukti-oh my god alia tujhe pata he aaj S.P.A.C.E mein rainbow aaya he

Alia-rainbow????

Mukti-han tune dekha nahi...c itz dere in d corridor itslf

Alia n mukti cant stp laughin lukin at navya's chatakdar matakdar wala attire

Navya is about 2 run bt dey surround hr

Alia-hey wer r u goin???atlst say ur nme???

Navya-nn...aa.vvyyaa

Mukti-pura naam

Navya-navya naveli

Mukti-nyc nme..waise tumhari savior kahan he???jara use v toh dekhe

Navya-wo chnge karne gyi he

Alia-oh!c z also pr4min nyc..so 2dy we l ve enough fun..wat say mukti???

Mukti-yaa y nt???

Changing room

Nandu(to hrslf)-y m I so nervous..navya s so confidnt n c I m shiverin

Manik ws passin 4m der..hearin som1's voice he wnt 2wrds d chngin room 2 c if evrythng ws corrct

Nandu-aiyappa evrythng l b fi9 na??

Meanwhile manik enters d changing room n stnds near d chngin room..he s amazed 2 c nandini in d chngin room

Nandini sees manik stndin bhnd hr in d mirror s screems loudly n turns back facin manik

Nandu-tt..uu..mm???tum yahan kya kar rahe ho??tumhe pata he na kisike changing room me gusna is nt ri8??

Manik keeps starin nandini continuously..he does nt evn blink hs eye

Nandu-aa..ii..ssee kya dekh rahe ho hme??hame pata he tum yahan hum se badla lene k liye aaye ho...dekho tum aapna badla baad me le lena humara pr4mance he..sun rahe ho tum???

Manik is stil numb..he doesn't say n e thng..he mvd a stp 4rwrd den 2 den 3 step by step he strtd mvin 4rwrd 2rwrds nandini

Nandu-dekho tum aage mat badho verna mein chilaungi

Manik stil doesn't say n e thng n keeps movin 4rwrd..n nandini a step bckwrd

PRECAP-surprise
Edited by bidisha10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
That was soo chotu ,
but it was nice dear .
Please update asap cause can't wait to read the surprise .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
cute and small update
loving this story a lot
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm

Edited by aavani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
sorry for late comment
awesome update

love it

but this was small please next time update long

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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