MANAN FF:MADE 4 EACH OTHER updated part -12,13,14(page-9) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kab tak fight karta rahega khudse hi, let him hear what his heart says.
Happy Friendship Day dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NICE
THREE PARTS
FABULOUS LOVED IT
THANKS FOR PM
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
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12th PART-

RECAP-fav5 asks nandini 2 sit down instead of chair..manik feels bad 4 it

Manik-ouch!!!

Evry1 rushd 2 hm..

"wat hppnd manik al askd in unison"

I also wnt dere...manik lukd up n our eyes meet..i wsnt redy 4 anoder eyelock I wnt bck 2 sit on d ground.."hs frndz r dere wid hm" I slowly said 2 myslf

Manik-nthin jus dis bck pain..i thnk I shld sit down

"wat manik u l sit down r u mad"askd evry1

Manik-don wrry guys I m fi9..i browsd in goggle dat if u ve a bck pain n sit on d ground u l feel bttr

Dhruv-buddy r u sure

Manik-ya ya..i m fi9

Manik sat few metres away 4m me..i ws shockd..i needed sum1 2 pinch me hrd 2 mke me believe dat manik..manik malhotra ws sittin on d floor...I smiled lukin 2 manik...manik saw me smiling n gve a questionin luk...i turnd my fce away...(as manik sat evry1 also sat on d floor..i cld nt stp smiling)

-------manik's POV-------

C s smiling dat I m sittin on d floor???uff!!!!!god 1st of al 4 her I m sittin on d floor..4 hr???y m I sittin 4 hr???c s nt my frn...y is it botherin me so mch???n hw cn c smile lyk dat at me???bt realy c luks so cute wen c smiles...cute???manik stp it

End of POV

CABIR-manik tujhe idea milgaya kya karna he???

Manik-nahi to kyun kya hua???

Cabir-nhi tu jis tarah se smile kar raha he mujhe laga tune kuch socha hoga

Manik gve an angry luk 2 cabir...cabir chuckled..

Evry1 was tensed 4 getting no unique idea...evry1 ws suggestin sumthng bt dey wer d 1 reject it...I ws silent till den

"idea"shouted I al of a sudden makin evry1 attentive 4m der thought process

Mukti-oh tum grup me kya aa gayi abhi tum suggestions v dogi

Aliya-mukti s ri8..we r nt her 2 listn 2 ur suggestions..ok

I ws only stupid dat I thght of sharing my ideas wid dem..lt dem go in2 gutter wat s it 2 me???i saw manik starin at me..i gve hm an angry luk n turnd my fce 2 d oder side

Dhruv-r a lt hr at lst spk may b c hs sme gud ideas..coz none of us hs 1 so

Cabir-ya I thnk dhruv is ri8

Mukti-jokr tu v

Cabir-shut up mukti n listn..ya ms.fresh..i mean nandini say

I swallowed d lump twice n den strtd "hw about doin a fusion song???"I only found questionin luks so I continued"I mean u al alwys do sme rock music hw about addin sme desi touch dis tym???"

Evry1 ws silent..no1 uttered n e thng..i ws scared.."did I say n e thng wrng??"thght i

"superb"shouted monster..evry1 ws shockd including me..i noticed d smile on hs fce..seein his smile I smiled

"Uuhhunn"cabir cleared hs throat...we bth pulld bck our lips in2 der position..

Alya-manik u r alri8???

Manik gt startled.."ya ya I mean..."

Cabir-wah wah wah wah kya idea diya..lajabab..wah!!!!!!!!

Mukti-bt...

C ws interrupted by d peon...

Peon-principal sir is callin fav5..nw

Evry1 gt redy 2 go..manik ws getting up..bt evry1 denied hm 4 hs bck pain..although he frced bt hs frndz ask hm 2 sit ovr dere

Mukti-n u gal don't mve 4m hre until we cme..undrstnd???

Evry1 lft..levin me n manik al alone We bth wer silent I did nt luk 2 hm bt he only strtd

Manik-nyc idea

"mere ideas humesha ache hote hein"screamed I clenchin my teeth 2 shw my anger

"oh really???"he asked shiftin 2wrds me

"hmm"I said in d sme manner n turned my fce aside..i thght he wld say sumthng...bt he ws silent..so I lukd 2 c wat mde dat monster silent..2 my astonishment I found hm sittin nxt 2 me..my expression chngd..i cnt describe my expression...may b it ws weird..

Manik-so wat u wer sayin???askd manik comin a bit closer 2 me"waise 4m d morning I m noticing dat u r avoidin me"

"kyun tum kya shahid kapoor ho jo tumhe koi avoid na kare"said I lukin 2 hm

Manik-shahid kapoor haaan???waise u knw na I m treated as dis colz's shahid kapoor only..gals say me der

Nandu-wo dusre ladkian karte honge..i dnt lyk u nt evn ur fce..sadha coconut sa

Manik-wat??do u evn kno 2 whom r u talkin???

Nandu-ya I vry wel kno..suno me tumse darti nahi hun..sunna tumne

Manik-so ms.murthy u r frcin me 2 increse ur punishment

PRECAP-MANIK cmes clse 2 nandini n is about 2 kiss hr...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
😊

13th part-

RECAP-nandini ignores manik...manik asks d reson bt nandini doesn't reply..manik ays he cn increase r punishmnt

Manik narrator

Listening 2 dis statement of mi9 c stud up al of a sudden..i gt scared d way c stud up so I also stud up in astonishment..c cme near me n started

"kya karoge tum???kya karoge???bolo..nahi nhi kya karoge bolo..bolo"she said moving a step 4rwrd wid evry of her wrd..with evry tym c askd "kya karoge"c hit me in my chest wid hr tiny palm..awww..it felt so nyc bein hitted 4m her..i did hide my smile but c continued

"ab chup kyun ho???bolo na bola kya karoge tum???punishment increase karoge na???bolo kya karoge???"c continued hittin me n pushing me back..i ws 4rcd 2 move a stp bck wid hr stps 4rwrdin 2wrds me n finally I reached d wall..my eyes had protruded out by dis tym...bt c c continued widout takin any halt..c held d collar of my jacket n continued wid hr dialogue..jus 2 divert hr I turnd hr 2wrds d wall n stud infrnt of hr..bt al wnt in vein..c continued...I leaned 2wrds hr fce n put a fingr on hr lips..hr pink soft puffy lips

Nandini narrator

He put hs fingr on hs lips..may b 2 stp me..i donn kno y bt I strtd shivering...we wer so close 2 each oder..i widened my eyes wen he strtd caressin my lips...he ran his fingers thru dem..it ws difficult 4 me 2 bear his closeness..i flt shivers down my spine..wid evry passin secnd I felt weak..weak on my knees..he leaned hs fce 4rwrd 2 cme mre close...again d xchange programme of our breathes began...he bent hs neck n n cme n mre 4rwrd..i ws bein shrtbreathed...suddenly we hrd some noises..may b fav4 ws returnin bck..

I immediately pushed manik wid a grt 4rce dat he collided wid d wal...I ignored it n sat on d floor..manik ws awestruck n about 2 say sumthng wen fav4 entered...dey saw manik standin n wer tensed

"manik tu khada kyun he???baith na.."mukti said

"ya buddy sit"dhruv added

Manik cme n sat beside me dis tym

"aaahhh"he said as he sat

"kya hua manik phir se dard hora he???doc k pass chale???"cabir askd

Manik-no no I m fi9...he said lukin 2 me..may b he ws hurt dis tym bcoz of me..i saw hm lil tensed..he was stil lukin 2 me wen alya said

Alya-ab kya Karen hm???we hvent evn thght of n e thng til nw

Manik-ya wat hppnd??y did princi cal??evrythng fi9???

Mukti-yaar locha ho gya..princi said dat our days hs been reduced 2 release d album..we hve 2 do it asap...

Cabir-ya bt hw cn he do so???

Manik-bt cabir we ve no option..wat mttrs is we ve 2 thnk wat 2 do

Dhruv-guys I thnk we shld go wid nandini's plan...coz we cnt waste our tym in planning

Mukti-but..

Manik-mukti I thnk buddy is ri8...we shld go by nandini's plan

At 1st hesitant bt evry1 agreed 2 my plan

Cabir-uff!!!!guys I m tird I m goin 2 canteen I l eat sumthng den only I l cum

Evry1 joind hm n askd manik also 2 cme wid dem..manik askd dem 2 go n he wld do a cal n go...

Mukti-n u..u go nw we l cal u..n dey lft

I gt up 2 go...manik was starin 2 me..i again turnd my fce in angr n ws about 2 lev d room wen I turnd bck n said"listen apne back pr spray laga lena..relief milega"..i lft d room wid a smiling manik malhotra

------manik POV----------

Uff!!!dis gal..c s completely crazy man..bt manik wat hppnd 2 u???u wer about 2 kiss hr??r u out of ur mind???hw cn u evn thnk such???bt c s sweet..u ve 2 agree manik dat c s sweet..bt y ws c ignorin u d whle day???lev it..hw does it evn mttr 2 u???u r thnkin vry mch manik lev it...

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--------nandini POV--------

Ws he about 2 kiss me???may b dis s a part of hs pranks??may b wat nandu??he s playin pranks wid u only...aiyappa save me 4m dis monster..uff!!!!as soon as dis album l gt ovr I l nt evn c hs fce..til den keep avoidin him...

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Navya- r a nandu tum yahan??unn raksason k sath practice khatam ho gaya??

Nandu-donn kno

Navya-donn kno??

Nandu-lev it na navya

Navya-acha chalo nandu canteen chalten hein.

Nandu-canteen???

Navya-chalo na hume bahot bhuk lagi he..plz plz plz

Nandu-okkk

PRECAP-manan alone in canteen
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Posted: 10 years ago
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14th part-

RECAP-manik bout 2 kiss nandini..princi says der tym hs been reduced 2 realese d album

We went 2 d canteen wer fav5 was alredy present..dey wer busy in demselves..i did nt wnt n e mre argument so me n navya we sat in a lil far place...manik turned back dat tym..may b 2 c me..no y l he c me???bt I found hm lukin in2 my eyes...I don't kno bout hs eyes bt wenevr my eyes met hs dey wer redy 2 dissolve in it...I pulld my eyelids 2 luk aside

Navya tuk a veg sandwhich n a diet coke n me only a diet coke...i saw sum serius kind of discussion goin on in fav5..aftr sumtym dhruv approached 2wrds me whle oders dey lft

Dhruv-nandini tum kal tym pe practice me aa jana

Nandu-kal???

Dhruv-haan wo aaj practice nhi ho sakti..bt kal se serius practice hone wali he..so plz b on tym

"be on tym means be on tym..undrstud???"askd manik

I don kno 4m wer he cme bt he also strted..i clenched my teeth n said"dhruv jab koi bath ek baari boli jaati toh I understand...i m nt lyk monster"

May b dhruv understud dat we cld enter in2 anoder so 2 avoid it he said

Dhruv-manik wo samaj gayi..tu chal ltz go

Navya-nandu tumne bilkul sahi kiya uss raksash k sath

Shit manik ovrhrd it...dhruv alredy lft bt manik ws stil dere..shit shit!!!!!!he cme near 2 navya n said-manik-kya bola tumne??phirse bolo??

Navya-nandu hume kuch kaam yaad aagaya hum avi aate hein...n c lft..nw manik cme n sat in navya's place

Manik-so wat did u say me..monster??hmm..u r a darin gal I mst say

I saw hm angrily n ws about 2 lev wen I noticd dat d canteen ws empty..i cld nt realize wen evry1 wnt Levin me n monster alone..i strtd walkin wen I realized dat a 4rce ws stppin me 2 mve 4rwrd..i turnd bck n saw manik holdin my hand..i ws about 2 say hm sumthng wen he pulld me hrd 2wrds hmslf n den wid a thud my bck hitted hs chest..my hrt strtd beatin fst..i slwly lukd up 2 hm

Manik-ms.nandini murthy til nw nobdy hs dared 2 lev in middle wen I speak

Nandu-nandini murthy is vry diffrnt..

Manik-really??

nandu-hmm

"so wat diffrnt r u??"said he n strtd caressin my hnd slwly...I ws again shrtbreathed..i strtd 2 swallow my saliva..i ws scared if manik wld hear my hrtbeat coz it ws so fst...so I wanted 2 mve 4m dis situation

"i..i will cme 2morow on tym..i prmse"I said makin manik malhotra stunnd on my statement

"wat???"manik screamed Levin my hnd..i turnd bck 2 hm n said"2mrw I prmse I l cme on tym"I said it in a childish way...I donn kno it ws my way of speakin or my fce bt manik's xpression changd..it ws soft wen he ws caressin my hnd bt nw it bcme mre soft n I takin advantage of d situation ran away 4m dere...

I reached my hme..changd,,freshened up n ws bout 2 strt my day's wrk wen I remembered my moments spent wid manik..automatically a smile flushed in my face..i luked in2 d mirror 2 find myself blushing

-----nandini POV--------

Aiyappa ye kya??me blush kar rahi hun..magar kyun???i toh dnt lyk dat monster at al den y m I blushin thinkin bout hm???i evn decided 2 avoid hm bt d mre I thnk 2 avoid hm I go mre closer 2 hm..wat s al dis aiyappa???

End of POV

Meanwhile------ manik pov--------

Wat s dis hppin 2 me???previusly it nvr hppnd...y m I thnkin al d tym bout dis gal???y I lyk wen c s around me???y 2dy I ws feeling pissed wen c ws avoidin me??y?y?y?ufff!!!!!!!!!

End of POV

PRECAP-nandini 2 go 2 malhotra mansion

so guys finallly updte s here...sry 4 late updte bt i ve 3 prts in a go...read n cmmnt lamba...guys i m nt gettin good response...shall i stop updatin?
Edited by bidisha10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Fab update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Nice amazing update

Manik is falling for Nandu that why he wasn't comfortable when his friends tell her to sit on the floor so he sat with her and also approved her idea as well

He cant believe that he was about to kiss her and she thinks that he is again playing with her

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Awesome update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
all 3 parts are awesome
love it
manik ne nandu ke liye floor pe betha that's nice
manan fight are cute

continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Nice update dear,
loved it a lot,
continue soon and take care dear.

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