MANAN FF:MADE 4 EACH OTHER updated part -12,13,14(page-9) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Superbbb 3updates in one go...yeah😛
Awsumm manik admiring nandu...beautiful aww so sweet thn she won n the rewardd she get was too good
Manbir convo...haha nice
Eagerly waiting for nxt update... continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry for late comment
awesome updates
love it
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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9th part-

RECAP-manan dance in freshers party

I gt bck in2 my senses...it ws vry difficult 4 me 2 say n e thng at dat moment bt I tried

Nandu-mmm..aa..nn..ii.

Manik-u r lukin beautiful

Said manik interwinin hs fingers wid mi9..he strtd rotatin hs thumb in n around my palm

-----manik's POV-------

C s soo beautiful...hr eyes dey speak so mch..i want 2 dive down deep in hr 1000 feet deep eyes...I cnt evn stp myslf 4m seein hr...

End of POV

we wer lst in each oders eyes wen we hrd noises around us..d music stppd n d lights wer again brightened...realising d situason I pulld my hnds bck in2 der position n movd 4m der as quickly I cld..i cld nt stp blushing..

navya-nandini tumhe toh bahut gussa aya hoga tumhe wo mnster mila as partner

nandu-yaa

oviusly I agreed wid navya bt I donn kno y I actually likd d dnce..infct I luvd it!!!

------nandini POV------

Aiyappa y m I blushin????evn y I lykd my dnce wid hm???i toh don lyk dat raksas na...den y I lyk d tym spend wid hm???uff!!!nandu stp it..stp thnkin al dese bullshit...

End of POV

NAVYA-nandini tum kahan kho gayi????

Nandu-no no nothing cme ltz go

We went around talkin wid our frndz...evry1 ws congratulatin me ..dey literally considered me lucky 4 gttin a chnce 2 kiss manik den cut an album wid fav5 n mst importantly gt a chnce 2 dnce wid dere so calld prince charming...

I donn kno y bt suddenly a smile flushed on my fce listenin 2 al dose co-incedences...I jus lukd around 2 fnd a pair of eyes following mi9...n it ws no 1 oder bt d owner of dose chocolatey eyes...ya..it ws manik...I ws surprised 2 c hm starin at me...I immediately movd my eyes away 4m manik's

------nandini's POV-----

Aiyappa y is he lukin 2 me???nw wat hppnd???is he tryin 2 tke revenge 4m 4 wat I did in d 1st day???no no it does nt seem so..no no nandini u donn kno..aftr al he s a raksas he cn do n e thng..so hnce frwrd avoid hm as mch u cn

End of POV

-----manik's POV------

Y m I alwys attractd 2wrds hr???y I feel vry nyc wen I m wid her???y I smile wen I remember d tym spend wid hr???i toh evn donn kno hr..wat s hppnin 2 me???manik..manik u r thnkin a lot bout hr...but y???i plannd 2 tke revenge against hr...bt I donn thnk I m doin so..uff!!!!nw wats dis confusion

End of pov

Guys nw manik is d narrator of d stry

Cabir-kahin pe nigahe kahin pe nishana...uhhmm

I raised my eyebrows givin a questionin luk

Cabir-nahi nahi..kuch nahi..continue

Manic-shut up cabir

Cabir-so hw ws d dnce wid ms.fresher????

"awesome"I said slowly

Cabir-kuch bola tune???

Manic-han..waise kuch khas nhi tha..it wa..as quite ok..kk

Cabir-han wo to teri aakho mein dikh raha he

"Wat??"I askd in astonishment

Cabir-yehi ki pr4mance ws ok..

Manik-yaa..wese v I ws tryin 2 tke revenge against hr..dats it

"han wo to clear dikh raha tha"said cabir chuckling

------cabir POV-----

Manik malhotra's eyes glowin dat 2oo aftr dancing wid a gal who playd suich a bad trick wid hm???hmm kuch toh baat jarur he uss ladki mein

End of POV

MANIK-OH HELO KAHAN KHO GAYA???

Cabir-nhi kuch nhi bas yahi soch raha tha ki..

"Shut up cabir" I said as I sensed dat he wld speak sumthn nonsense

I ws again lost in my thoughts wen suddenly I hrd cabir speakin up sumthng

PRECAP-mananbir coversation
Edited by bidisha10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
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10th PART-

RECAP-manbir conversation regarding nandini..nandini passes 4m dere seein her cabir strts

Manik narrator

Cabir- ohh ms fresher believe me urs ws d lst nme dat our tongue used..

I turnd around 2 find ms fresher I mean nandini ovr dere...I hrt skipped a beat

Nandini-ya y nt???u mst b planning hw 2 mke me fal on my fce..ri8???or may be u alredy plannd wat 2 do..i vry wel kno..i ve hrd a lt mny stories hw u luv 2 bulley oders..is nt it??i kno u wld mke my lyf hel henceforth..u wld do so 2 4rce me out of d album..xactly I only don want 2 do dis album wid u al..i wld ve denied sir ri8 dere itslf bt it wld b an insult 4 sir so I did nt or else...

Cabir-bas bas bas hw much u spk at a tym

In al dis tym al I cld do is stare hr constantly.."n wat if we donn tke any revenge??"said I d 1st tym aftr nandini's long speech...c luked up2 me..dis s wen our eyes met..til den c hd nt lukd 2 me..we wer again lost in each oders eyes..d nrrow black linin n hr eyes mde hr eyes luk mre beautiful dus makin me adore dem..

Cabir-ahem..ahemm..cabir coughed

May b 2 brng us bck in2 our trances..both of us lukd away 4m each oder 4 a couple of seconds..

Cabir-so madam wat I ws sayin is..

Cabir cld nt complete hs sentence as nandini went 4m dere..oh yes c went 4m dere

Cabir-kaisi ladki he yaar bina meri baat sune hi chaligayi

I barely listened 2 cabir coz I ws busy tracin hr footsteps my eyes wer following d path c walkd upon..my eyes fllwd hr til c mde hrslf invisible..bt stil my eyes cld nt stp following hr..my eyes got interuptd coz of cabir

Cabir-chali gayi who

Manik-wat??

Cabir-nahi..wo.i mean ms fresher wo chali gayi

"ahh caaabbiirr"I shoutd

Cabir left..bt I kept pondering

----manik's POV-----

wat I jus said??nt tke revenge??bt y??c playd wid me.. I nvr thought twice b4 playin pranks against any1..den y she???c s nt n e thng diffrnt..i evn donn kno hr..c s jus lyk evry oder gal 4 me..den y dis????GGGOOODD!!!!wat s hppenin????

End of POV

4m nw on nandini is d narrator

I askd navya 2 mve fst as we wer lte n cachi wld b waitin 4 us..xactly dat day navya ws 2 sty wid me in my hme...

Navya-tum chinta mat karo hum pahaunch jaenge

Meanwile chachi calld

Nandu-han chachi we r jus comin

I signalld navya 2 go n stp an auto n I wld cme...navya wnt

Nandu-nhi chachi donn wrry we l tke an auto..ya ya chachi..bye bye bye

I cut d cal n ws keepin my phne in my bag wen I hit myslf n my foot slippd I xpected a bad fall..but I did nt.i flt some warm hnds against my bck...I lukd up 2 c manik...ys again manik...he held me 4m bck..my gown as it ws a bit deep 4m bck manik's hand wer touchin my bre back dus sendin shivers down my spine..his hnds wer in d sme position wen he straightend me hlpin me 2 stnd on my own feet...my stupid eyes again noticed his chocolatey ones...i...infct we wer lst in each oders eyes..we hrdly blinkd our eye...i hrd navya yellin my nme 4m outsde..i cme bck in2 my trances bt manik he ws stil lst I ws about 2 lev wen I realisd dat manik ws stil busy starin my eyes n hs hnds dey hd nt lft my bck..i sgnalld manik 2 remove hs hnd..he tuk a secnd 2 cme in2 hs senses..he cld nt undrstnd wat I signalld so I repeated it..he gt dat n pulld hs hnd as quickly he cld..der ws a slince infct a profound of awkwardness in d air

I guess he ws goin 2 say sumthn bt I lft I tuk big steps 2 mve away 4m d situason...i ws about 2 lev d entrance gte wen I turnd I saw manik stil standin der lukin 2wrds me..i witnssd a small smile in manik's fce as I turnd bck 2 c hm

PRECAP- nandini wid fav5 4 album...dey plan 2 play pranks wid hr...manik FEELS BAD 4 it

Edited by bidisha10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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11th PART-

PRECAP-mananbir conversation..manan eye lock

Nxt day morning

I was vry afraid as 1st tym I wld b wid fav5..i prayed aiyappa may b a zillion tyms b4 goin 2 fav5

Meanwhile in jamming room

Manik ws continuosly lukin 2wrds d door...cabir noticd dis

Cabir-manik gud ni8

"han han gud ni8"said manik stil lukin at d door

Cabir-manik mene kaha guuuddd ni8

Manik-r a bola na yaar gu...manik stoppd suddenly wen he realisd wat he ws sayin...he gve an angry luk 2 cabir

Cabir-kya???aise kya dekh raha he???gud ni8 hi toh bola n wese v tera toh morning hua nhi..no???kyun ki tera sawali si raat avi tak jo chal raha he..cabir chuckled

manik--shut up cabir..tere ye borin pj's tu apne paas ri rakh

-----------------

I entered d rum..believe me my hrt ws beatin fast...i thght dat dey mst ve plannd sumthng 2 mke my entry grnd..sumthng so grnd dat my entry wld turn in2 my exit...as soon as I enterd

Mukti-ohh welcome welcome ms.fresher

Alya-ya ya come insde..we wer waitin 4 u only...said alya winkin 2 mukti

Mukti-shit alya hum logo ne ms.fresher k entry k liye kuch plan kiya???shit yaar

I ws feelin so angry 4 myslf...for winnin d competition..y did i????i questiond myslf in my mind

"Nandini"called sum1 I turnd 2 c dhruv

Dhruv-nandini com na...y r u standin der????

I plastered a fake smile listenin 2 dhruv...I closd d door n wnt inside...I saw manik...he ws nt smiling bt I don't kno y I cld sense some kind of happiness in hs fce..

-----nandini POV--------

Stp it nandu...u r again tryin 2 read hs expressions...hw does evn it mttrs 2 u he s hppy or nt????n r u crazy y l he b hppy if u cme...ya may b I can sense d happiness coz he may ve alredy plannd wat prank 2 ply wid me???n nandini yesterday only u said 2 urslf dat u l avoid hm as mch u cn..bt as soon I used d wrd yesterday evry happenings of yesterday flushed infrnt of my fce...I ws again lst

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Cabir-ms.fresher aiye na..y r u standin dere????

"nandini"I said..i ws frustrated wid dis title ms.fresher..it ws jus bcoz of dis I hd landed over hre

Cabir-ohh!!!toh aapko gusa v aata he

Manik-cabir ltz strt practisin...said monster interuptin cabir in middle

Mukti-ya manik is ri8 cabir..if we don't strt practisin den hw cn we play our pranks???isnt it manik???

Alya hd a hearty laugh rest al wer silent including manik n cabir...I did nt pay a heed I ws about 2 sit in d chair lying nxt 2 dhruv

Mukti-oh oh madam wat u wnt 2 sit in d chair???do u evn deserve it??listen sit on d floor

"Wat???"I said almost shoutin

Alya-oh yes...c pulld d chair 4m my side n signalld me 2 sit on d floor

Dhruv-wat s dis mukti???c s a member of our team..we cant do dis...

Alya-no dhruv we need 2 shw hr d plce c deserves...c said wid a full foreign accent

Dhruv-but..

Mukyi-u lev it dhruv..lt us handle it...said mukti interuptin dhruv

Cabir-guys I thnk we r wastin our tym by doin al dese..

Mukti-tu chup kar joker n u tum ab tak baithi nahi

I knew it ws worthless 2 argue so I sat down

In my mind I ws cursin myself 4 winnin d freshers n dat manik 2oo..he mst ve plannd evrythng

Manik-so guys enough of dis nw..i thnk we shld concentrate on our album..we ve a deadli9 n mr.khurana he wants us 2 do sumthng diffrnt..so dat whle music industry cn remember it 4revr.so 1st we need 2 thnk wat 2 do

Evrybdy strtd 2 thnk...I ws full of angr..4 evrythng

--------manik's POV-------

Y I m feelin bad dat c s sittin on d floor???y is it affectin me???ys mukti ws ri8...c deserves dis..no..shouted my hrt..til den I mind n my hrt had a good conflict..whle my mnd ws ok wid nandini sittin down but my hrt cld nt tke it..bt y ws my hrt supportin nandini???y???uff dis confusion

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PRECAP-manan alone in music room
Edited by bidisha10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
fab update dea...
loved it
continue soonnn
tnx fr d pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
awesome 3 parts...mind blowing...loved manan scenes a lot...
especially their p.o.v 's...u penned it so perfectly...good work dear
cabir as usual funny and cute...
dhruv was also sweet...
aliya and mukti...oho...
all together its fantastic...
continue asap
take care
thanks a lot for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
all 3 parts are awesome
love it

feel bad for nandu

I want jealous manik please nandini ka koi bachpan ka dost le ao aur iss bar jaldi post karna

continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsumm updates...threesum amazing
Nandu aww...😕
Precap nice..thank for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice awesome update

Manan feel something change inside their hearts as they started to feel better and does not want to think bad about each other

Will see what manik will do to stop his friends for hurting Nandu

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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