MANAN FF:MADE 4 EACH OTHER updated part -12,13,14(page-9)

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SONIAGHOSH

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

nice update

continue soon

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Absa hasna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

lovely update but too short...u penned it beautifully...i jus loved it each and every part...plsss try to update soon...waiting for next part...

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priya

@priya_sejwal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

wow...awsum updates

great strt...very interesting ff...liked it

nandu kissed manik...n his reaction haha

maniks pov in last ...lovely

beautifully written

preacp;manan convo eagerly waiting for it

thank uh for pms

update soon

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AAVANI

@vani86

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

part 2 was awesome...short one
nandu is so smart...manik ha ha ha..!!!
continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm
take care

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Bidisha mohanty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

hey frndz her i m wid the 3rd part..hpe u al lyk it..plz hit lyk and commnt 4 me to continue

MADE 4 EACH OTHER

3rd PART-

RECAP-nandini completed hr task by kissin in d mirror instead of manik's cheeks...evry1 shockd including fav5...manik realizes he s smilin

Aftr dis raggin prt I n my tiny brain both wer litraly tird so me n navya we went 2 d canteen n orderd 2 veg sandwhiches meanwhile we saw dhruv walkin 2wrds me..

dhruv-I m sory 4 watever hppnd actually wo...

"no wrry dhruv I knew dat ur grup is lyk dis only"I said intruptin hm in d middle...dhruv smiled n lft 4m dere..realisin dat we wer lte 4 class me n navya we rushd 2wrds our class...meanwhile I gt a cal 4m chachi I askd navya 2 push hrslf ahead n I wld b joinin her...

chachi-nandu beta tum thik toh ho na..aaj tumhara colz ka 1^st day he sab thik he na

Me-ys chachi I m fi9 I l tlk 2 u ltr..bye byeee byeee ...sayin dis mch I hung up...

Suddenly I flt a stng frce against me..."uffo..aiyappa "cried I evn lukin at d stng 4rce...I raised my eyes 2 c wat xactly d 4rce ws n 2 my atonishmnt I found d mst unxpctd surprise

"TUM YAHAN kk--aa--ii---ssee???"yelled I swallowin d lump in my throat..it ws none oder dan d raksas manik malhotra

Manik ws standin infrnt of me with hs legs crossd leanin against d wall...

Manik-so miss new comer wel playd..by d way lemme say u u r d 1^st 1 who dared 2 mess with me..hmm so itz time 4 u 2 pay bck wat say???said manik moving around me

"i..i donn know waaat u r sayin"said I tryin 2 put a brave face "waise v hume class k liye jaana he so lev my way"

Manik-bein smrt haan..good..bt do u kno b4 whom u r flauntin ur smartness???

----------Nandini's POV-----------

Aiyappa ab me kya karun kaise bhagun yahan se..tab to badi himmat dikha di..lekin ab..yeh sab toh mujhe chod ne nhi wale...yeh kya kardia mene fav 5 se jang ched li!!!!!!!!!!

End of POV

Manik-kya soch rahi ho??yeehhii ki kaise pay karogi???donn wry its quite easy

"Pllzz chod do mujhe I m gttin lte...plzzz"I said in mst pleasing way I cld poutin my fce

I donn kno it ws my wrds my sad fce or my lil pout bt I cld c mr.malhotra starin at me constantly wid hangin bst of hs expressions on hs fce..hs gaze ws fixed at me I cld sense a changeover in hs xpressions..

"plllzzz"said I again waving my hand infrnt of hs eyes 2 brng hm bck in2 hs senses

He shook hs head as he got out of h trances..i still continued 2 hang on my lil pout on my tiny fce

He jus movd partially hs sholders makin my way clear..i ran I ran as fst as my silly limbs wld crry me..bt I sttpd in d middle turnin bck I saw d monster smiling bt widout thinkin mre of it I screamed

"listen..thnk u"listenin 2 my wrds mr.monster bcme conscious n tried 2 drive away d curve in hs lips but b4 he cld do so I turnd bck n mvd 2wrds my class

--------------manik's POV------------

Shitt!! Again I m smiling...yeh mujhe kya ho raha he..uff!!manik manik gt a grip of urslf..dis is d gal who plyd a trick wid u infrnt of evry1 u cnt lev hr lyk dat only seein hr cute smile n d pout on hr fce...ya bt really hr fce is so mesmerisin..uff!!nt again manik stp it..dat gal mst b dealt wid manik malhotra way..hmm dats it

PRECAP-preparation 4 freshers..manik thnks bout nandini..

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Lovely update dea ...

Continue soonnn

Tnx for the pm

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Lovely update dear but it was little short.
Continue with the next part asap and yes with a longer one please.
Thanks for the pm.

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SONIAGHOSH

@SONIAGHOSH

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

awesome update

love it

i love your story please update on daily base

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Nyc update... liked it

Too good

Thank uh for pm...continue soon

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Bidisha mohanty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

hey guys her i m wid the 4th part...guys plz cmmnt oderwise my writin has gt no meaning..plzzz..n wid dis i turn a groupbie...yaaaiieee!!!!!! so i will be posting another ff on manan named as #jo_tu_mera_humdard_hai!!!!...guys dat stry will be vry diffrnt..it will be mre of a suspense story...i m sure u l enjoy...i l pm you all..bt plz read dat ff 2oo n cmmnt in bth my ff's..please n ya pretty please share it with ur frndz or suggest dem 2 buddy me so dat i cn pm dem 200...plz keep my request...

MADE 4 EACH OTHER

4^th PART-

RECAP-manik tells nandini 2 pay bck 4 playin tricks wid hm bt nandini frees hrslf sayin plz 2 manik..manik hs cmpltely seein dat

I ws pantin hevily wen I reached my class

Navya-nandini tum thik to ho na

"ya navya I m fi9"I said breathin heavily

Jus den we saw Raghav sir enterin d class...aftr introducing hmslf 2 d clss he said

Raghav sir-so students 2dy u al l b vry hppy 2 kno dat ur classes r suspended as 2morw u r hvin ur freshers so u guys cn prepre 4 it nw onwrds n 2mrw der l b a talnt shw whch l hlp us declre d mr. n ms. Fresher 4 d year 2015-16..so gud luck guys...sayin dis he lft d class

Navya-wah he competison to hum hi jitne wale hein..aise nachegne aise nachenge ki yeh colz kya pura seher jhum uthega

Nandu-al d bst navya..i hpe u win

Navya- wese nandu tum kya karne wali ho

Nandu-uuhhmm...kuch khas socha nhi..wese v me tumhare tara dance to nhi kar sakti I thnk I l sing some song

Music jamming room

Mukti-iss ladki ko to me chodne nhi wali

Cabir-oo gadadhari bheem wese tu kya karne wali he

Mukti-chup kar jker..bdw manik kahan he??

Alya-luk here's manik

Manik ws stil smiling thnkin about wat hppnd in d corridor

Cabir-ohtho pe aise baat tu dabake chali aayi..uhhmm manik malhotra smiling..kya baat he..kahin tujhe uss ladki se...

Alya-shut up cabir manik mst ve thought hw 2 tch hr a lsson m I ri8 manik?

"Hmm..haa..haan..yaa" said manik comin out of hs trancs

NIGHT

I ws thnkin wat 2 do in 2morow's freshers...

------------Nandini's POV-----------

Aiyappa me kal kua gayun freshers me...yeh moka acha he S.P.A.C.E ko mera talent dikhane ka..plz plz plz hlp me aiyappa

End of POV

Meanwhile manik in hs hme ws practicing wid hs guitar n singin

Pehli nazar kaisa jadoo kar dia

Tera pan beheka he mera jia

He strted thnkin bout nandini ...hr way of sayin srry..d lil pout on hr fce..d glw on hr fce

--------Manik's POV----------

Waise uss ladki ki smile mein kuch toh baat thi...par mein uske bare mein itna kyun soch raha hun..dont 4rgt manik 2dy morning c swipd u..manik malhotra of hs feet..u cnt let hr go so easily

End of POV

PRECAP-MANAN IN CHANGING ROOM 2GTHR..

guys plz read my 2nd ff on manan..i l b pm'in u regarding dat plz read n cmmnt...pllleeeaaassseee