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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#621

Oh ...i came to comment on earlier part😛 bt yaha toh mujhe teaser mil gaya..for next..now i will comment for both after i have this part...

finally...dey met...heheheh!!!!!! u know dis special sequence makes me remember a song ...raghupati raghav raja ram...from k2h2...were...sharukh comes..for his daughter..
after hearing her one sneeze ... nd den he sees ...kajol..nd dat song...😳😳😳😳
nd it seems like..heretoo... puri kaynat mili hui hai..in dono ko milane may...
payal ..anjali ..aman ..uski swargwasi..bua..😛 all...heheheh!!!!!

i am sure ...ek heart break toh dikhega...may b asr...first thing ..dat will pop in his mind for sure is ...
she has a son...nd she is married to shyam..nikhil is shyam ka son ...
nd may b he will be ...😡
nd khushi..usko toh..time lagega na..digest this truth...dat nikhil ka chahita uncle is his dad..in actual..
so pakka she gona hide in her shell or sure act dat ...like..Mujhe koi farak nahi padta...
hope ..arnav ka super active brain..whch is nowadays ..less active...acts nd join d dots...

waiitn
waiitn
wiatin..
ll comment for last chapter wit ur next one 😳😳

ab am wiaitn ...hope u give d updat dis weekend...thaki main ekaant main bina kisi disturbance of work pad saku..🤔

waiitn

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Arunima

@barsha_dash

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#622

What a teaser!!! I am floored.🤣
I am not going to guess anything since I know that you will again surprise me with a new twist and my heart will break💔
Okay just kidding😆
Ermmm... a rain sequence coming, a long eye lock while getting drenched in the downpour
Well couldn't help guessing😃
Can we get an update on 6th? Pls Pls Pretty pls
*asking with a puppy face and batting eyelashes*⭐️

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#623

amazingly awesome. ...loved it...teaser is damn interesting. ...plzzz update sooon..

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#624

love the whole story..read all in one go!

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#625

The most awaited meet is finally here!!! So excited. I can see Khushi denying, not confirming or refusing to answer any of Arnav doubts or questions. Update soon please.

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

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Posted: 10 years ago

#626

sorry for the late comment. Enjoying the story a lot. Your write beautifully.

The teaser is tempting and making me anxious to know whats going to happen next.

Will Arnav figure it out? Will Khushi hide it from him? Will Arnav think its Shyam's kid?

My guess is he is shocked to know Khushi has a kid. He will not realize it's his kid for some time.

But eventually he will figure it out but I feel Khushi will deny it and after much hesitation will accept the truth.

Anxiously waiting for the real update.

Thanks for the PM.

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Mojgan

@mojgan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#627

Ma belle Shalini!

Let me breathe! I need to breathe, I badly need to breathe hahahahaha

That was awesome and I felt as if I was there around and looking at the scene. You wonderfully described their so much awaited meeting :)

Let's see what will happen:

1- We know Khushi is starving and stressed out to reach her beloved son. Definitely, she is going to faint and guess who holds her immediately?

2- He keeps staring at her, lots of questions come to his mind. He gets jealous too because his Harvard brain is kind of functioning late in such situations. But no worries, he will find out the truth little by little.

3- The two little monsters will join them and the spell will be broken.

4- I feel like seeing them to have diner all together while Arnav is waiting a face-a-face moment with Khushi. She has to answer many questions tonight.

5- No way out for Khushi. No running away this time...

6- Why I hear Rabba ve since I started writing about my thoughts?

7- They are going to be under the same tent hahahahahah

8- You didn't mention that song for nothing. There is a gathering tonight planned by the organizers. The parents will be asked to go on the stage and to dance together hahahahahaha Arshi's dance will be awesome :)

9- I hope and I hope and I hope that we will have an update before my departure on Sunday afternoon :)

10- Muah

PS. The most beautiful sentence in your teaser:

The aroma of lavender, eucalyptus and an array of exotic desert flowers perfumed the air, while the peaceful quiet of the resort soothed her soul.

Edited by mojgan - 10 years ago

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Mojgan

@mojgan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#628

Did you mention anything about the next update?

Ok. Let me get over with that and ask my question :) When will be your next update cherie? 😉

PS. No pressure of course :)

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Nikita

@nia07

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#629

The teaser has me my heart in mouth and it'll be going back to its place after the update only.

What I always imagined after The mumma-Annav uncle face off was Khushi taking Nikhil away who's not letting Arnav's hand go,I'm an overdramatic girl. but he has already left Arshi alone so maybe Khushi gonna faint from starvation and then avoidind Arnav and acting formal in front of kids.

As for Arnav he will go crazy with anger,jealousy and what not.

Whatever happens I don't want his equation with Nikhil to change.

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#630

Originally posted by: sweetfairy007
Hi Shalini,

Thank you very much for such a nice teaser.You know ,I was anxiously waiting for Arnav and Khushi meeting in your Chapter No.14 itself .I felt very bad and disappointed when you didnt show their meeting in Chapter 14.But now I am so happy...finally they met as Nikhil's mom and uncle.
Now

I am putting specs and getting cool breezy spot so that I can have a feeling of a writer.I am going to write what is the next part so that I will get a dedication from a talented writer...shalini...

OK...🤢

Both of them will get wet in the strong desert rain.Immediately a car will come rashly behind Khushi .Arnav will pull her out of the car's way by safely enveloping her in his arms .By the sound of a thunder thier trance will brake.Khushi will behave as if nothing happened.She will try to hide her shocked heart.She will look for her son and his pyari Di.She will find both of them playing in rain but wearing raincoats.She will move to them avoiding Arnav.Arnav will be seeing Nikhil in a new angle.

He will see Nikhil as son of her husband Shyam and he thinks that Khushi want to keep her son with her and that is the reason she is not agreeing for Divorse.

Later ...very later...Ashu will explain to her Maamu that Nikhil is exact replica of her maamu In a joking funny way.But this makes Arnav to connect the dots of his life...

Dont kill me...... I am already dead🤢

Sweety dear...I apologize for disappointing you the last time but in my defense, I had drafted, edited & posted the last chapter in a span of 2 hours (the fastest ever) and then had rushed to pack up for my trip...

but having said that, I intend to make up for that in the coming update 😆

You do surprise me when you put on the specs and got into the writer's mode...And I loved your line of thought...! Take care!